Dance, Dance
| Published on Creepypasta.com | December 2008 |
|---|---|
| Length | 299 words · about 1 minute to read |
| Story level | Micro |
| Reader rating | 7.6/10 from 338 votes |
| Category | Deaths, Murders, and Disappearances |
There was a girl who had an illness and was bed-ridden for the majority of her life. She was recently diagnosed to die within the next couple of months so her parents decided to spend as much time with her as they could before her time came. They decided that the best thing was to go camping at a local site for a little bit since the daughter was stuck in the hospital for so long.
On their way there, the girl was quiet as usual and laid in the back while the parents talked amongst themselves. When they finally reached their destination, they pitched the tent, unpacked everything and started a campfire. The mother was constantly filming the area and her daughter while the father went out for more firewood. It was getting dark when he came back, but he suddenly heard the mother scream so he rushed over to discover that his daughter was standing on her feet and was doing a wild, erratic ‘dance’ before she suddenly dropped dead.
After all the funeral processions and grieving subsided, the parents wanted to see the video the mother recorded on that very night. They put the tape in the player and began to watch. At first it just showed the mother looking at the scenery and random animals that passed by in the distance, but as the time frame skipped, it jumped to when she was inside the tent with the daughter as she stood up and began to jerk around.. But there was something wrong. It first was in the corner of their eyes but as they replayed the scene, their horror became more and more real.
The entire time the daughter was ‘dancing’, there was a ghastly white hand latched onto the top of her head.
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Wow, God’s a dick.
This blew, fail
this fucking suckedd.. fail
idea*
it’s not so much the hand that scares me but just the idia of a bad quality shaky video of a girl doing an odd wild dance before dropping dead in some campsite
So…many…things…wrong…with…this… I’m not even sure where to start.
Dance, Dance! We’re falling apart to half time~
8D
(But then who was hand!?)
All i could think about was FallOutBoy :[ Killjoy.
Meh.
brix were shat mainly because I started to picture that video in my mind
Very well written.
The dancing part made me laugh, but found out what the real reason she danced.
Only a toy to the hand.
I read this on my iPod, and it just isn’t as scary while I have fall out boy singing dance dance through my head phones. Epic coincidence the song came on when I read this though, my iPod had shuffel playing 900 songs randomly.
maybe on her neck would have been better
idunno
OOOH SHHHHIIII-
Awesome pasta!
THEN WHO WAS PUPPET MASTER?
Pretty common Korean story
Nice translation
that was gay but hangon who was hand?
nice pasta short and sassy
oh and voodoo much?
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Wow.. I like this story also.. It is kinda creepy though because you know the girl was possessed or something.. Man, if i had a daughter and she did that… I’ll totally get a shaman person right away… Freaken creepy shit..
I’ve been awake all night reading pastas in complete darkness. Now at 6 A.M. this story had made me turn on the television in fear! Love it.
the more I think about it, the more it creeps me out
loved this one!
i’m just glad le hand did’nt go further down her body
!!!WHO WAS MOM!!!
Not scary >_<. Just… weird, I think.
o dats where dat went. lol.
sillee hand.
i wanna dance before i die XD
The ending made me jump, although I’d have jumped regardless of what made her dance. Demonic/ghostly possession would have done the same for me, especially if it was caught on camera.
Handsex with little girls again, I’m going to get divorced >:(
Dammit, who was the damn hand? Seriously.
That ruined it for me. There’s no depth. There’s no reason.
There’s vague, but then there’s leaving out all of the important details.
Scary but funny.
Holy fuck that’s scary.
O.O That’s so fucking scary ohmygodd.