Dance, Dance
| Published on Creepypasta.com | December 2008 |
|---|---|
| Length | 299 words · about 1 minute to read |
| Story level | Micro |
| Reader rating | 7.6/10 from 338 votes |
| Category | Deaths, Murders, and Disappearances |
There was a girl who had an illness and was bed-ridden for the majority of her life. She was recently diagnosed to die within the next couple of months so her parents decided to spend as much time with her as they could before her time came. They decided that the best thing was to go camping at a local site for a little bit since the daughter was stuck in the hospital for so long.
On their way there, the girl was quiet as usual and laid in the back while the parents talked amongst themselves. When they finally reached their destination, they pitched the tent, unpacked everything and started a campfire. The mother was constantly filming the area and her daughter while the father went out for more firewood. It was getting dark when he came back, but he suddenly heard the mother scream so he rushed over to discover that his daughter was standing on her feet and was doing a wild, erratic ‘dance’ before she suddenly dropped dead.
After all the funeral processions and grieving subsided, the parents wanted to see the video the mother recorded on that very night. They put the tape in the player and began to watch. At first it just showed the mother looking at the scenery and random animals that passed by in the distance, but as the time frame skipped, it jumped to when she was inside the tent with the daughter as she stood up and began to jerk around.. But there was something wrong. It first was in the corner of their eyes but as they replayed the scene, their horror became more and more real.
The entire time the daughter was ‘dancing’, there was a ghastly white hand latched onto the top of her head.
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A++ would look behind myself again
This is the creepiest pasta I’ve read yet, including the one with the man peeking through the keyhole and the one with the eye on the post-it note.
I say that it was the Grim Reaper yanking da soul outta from her.
one of the few pastas to make me shiver, well done
this had a nice twist to it. kudos
@ Dru thanks. I’ve never hear of that song before.
It was a very creepy pasta.
lmao not creepy scary or anythin lmao i laughed at this the most pathetic “scary” story ive heard oooh i white hand???? lmao hehehehe
short and sweet i say. i loved glover.
@ Llama
Fall Out Boy has a song titled “Dance, Dance”
Dance, Dance
We’re falling apart to half time
Dance, Dance
And these are the lives you’d love to lead
Dance, this is the way they’d love
If they knew how misery loved me
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jvz0bvYmnto
So that’s why lots of us started giggling as soon as we read the title, though the Pasta it’s self is pretty scary.
@ Anon:
I think you probably are.
MASTER OF PUPPETS I’M PULLING YOUR STRINGS
TWISTING YOUR MIND AND CRUSHING YOUR DREAMS
Is it bad thats the first thing that popped into my head reading this pasta? In all honesty, it was one of those ending that scares the **** out of you.
What fall out boy song has anything to do with this, anyway? Not a huge music fan.
I was.
This wasn’t really that great, I think the more entertaining part of it was that you know everybody started singing Fall Out Boy songs right after they read the title
that aint really scary if it happens to you or family members.
@Us / #6
ROFL, exactly what I was thinking.
I like this pasta, too bad it’s only 10pm here. D:
Jesus Lars, get your lawsuits right
Correction.
60: Copyright infringement on you. Not 71.
52, 71, copyright infringement!
I’ll see you both in court, mmhmm.
52, that’s totally what I thought of too.
Am I the only who, after reading the title, immediately thought of Dance Dance Revolution?
I bet it was Wayne Brady
WEE WEE
Jack could have done that.
I didnt like this one. It seemed to plain and a bit random
So she is dead already and white hand is like “Ooga booga booga mommy!”
Lol, what a jackass.
I came
that made me put my hand on my head for the next few seconds after reading the story.
HOLY SHIT. The ending made me almost scream. Its that kind of ending that makes you shit bricks.
Good pasta.
BUT I STILL WONDER WHO WAS HAND?
Honestly, I couldn’t get Fall Out Boy out of my head when I read the title. But, it was a nice story.
I only wanted a little puppet of my own, I didn’t know i’d kill her, Jeez!