The Story of Her Holding an Orange: Part Three
This story is part 3 of 6 in the The Story of Her Holding an Orange series.
Anyone who hasn’t read my story should do so before looking in this thread. My first story had some updates to it too. My second story is my girlfriend’s account of the events.
Hey guys, I promised pictures and updates, so here we go. I will also respond to some questions. So first’s things first, let me bring you up to speed:
- We have not had any encounters with Rose since last night’s “break-in.”
- Police called this morning to check on us and told us to stay careful and call should anything happen.
- I talked to my mother on Skype and it was, well, disappointing. She only knew Rose as a normal person. She actually doesn’t even remember Rose asking about me much. She never got the hint that Rose may be a crazy cunt. My parents are now really worried. Not sure if they think I’m going crazy or they are legitimately afraid for my well-being.
- Lila hasn’t gotten a hold of her mom at this point (her mom is in England).
- We’ve been talking a lot. We decided that it must be some cult in action since neither of us are believers in the spiritual side. It is hard to explain how Rose would know us both before we met each other.
- I got tons of PMs asking me about how we met. That’s a good question, an I forgot to include that part in my story. Basically, last summer, I was out with my best friend in a club. Club closes at 1:00am and then everyone gets in front of it and sort of chills for a while. We were standing outside when this older man came up to us. He started openly hitting on me (in a homosexual way). I am far from a homophobe but this man was persistent. Then I heard Lila’s voice: “Hey baby, what are you doing?” I turned around and saw her sitting at the nearby bench with two of her girlfriends. I realized she was talking to me. The look on her face told me everything. She was saving me from the man. I said “excuse me, my girlfriend is waiting” and walked away and sat with Lila. He came after me. Lila and I had an immediate chemistry. Man didn’t believe us that we were together and kept asking questions about us, but Lila and I played off each other so well that he finally decided we were telling the truth and left. We kissed that night. She was visiting that town for only two days, but promised to come back and see me. And she did two weeks later. We’ve been together since.
I realize that some may suggest that the man was part of the cult and tried to “force” us onto each other, but it still took free will from both of us to do what we did, so I doubt the possibility of that conspiracy.
- Lila is in a bad mental shape right now. She is terrified and jumps on every little noise. I don’t know how to help. I am scared myself, but am trying to appear strong for her.
- Some of you have suggested that this story is fake. I will say this: I am fully aware of how incredible this all sounds and this is exactly why I posted it here. Many of you helped with advice and kind words and I thank you guys. Others that don’t believe me, you can view the story as a piece of shitty fiction. I never said it’d be good, just true.
- If you guys feel that the story of my baptism may have something to do with this, I will find time to write it, although I have to note, you are an inpatient bunch. Please realize that we are going through a lot right now. Thanks.
Some updates regarding the pictures I am posting here:
8 So, I snapped a few pics before the police came. Also, after they left (and left the orange), I noticed something engraved/written on the peel. I took a photo of that too. Bottom word I was able to decipher: It says “OTVORI” which means “open” in my language. Top word I cant tell what it is.
- I don’t know what to do with the orange. I still have it. Will throw it out soon.
Enough bullshiting.
If anyone can make any sense out of this, I’d appreciate any help at this point. Polaroid picture is at the police station, but the cop I know told me that if nothing happens within few days, I’d be able to at least come and make a copy of it if I really wanted to.
That’s all for now.
Edit: I blurred out part of the last image to protect my privacy, it was revealing my name. Kind Redditor discovered it and messaged me.
So, here’s another update: (also, do I update on these posts or create new ones?)
I told my mother what’s going on and she asked to see the picture. She recognized it. The woman in the picture is her friend from when I was a child and the kid in the picture is her son. She doesn’t know where the pic came from, or that it was ever taken for that matter. My mom said she spoke to my grandma who still lives in Bosnia and my grandma seems to know something. I will have to call her tomorrow. Later on, I will upload the desktop pic that was put on my lap top. Still in search of original files and/or hidden folders.
Credit To – Milos Bogetic
NOTE: This is the third in a series of several popular Reddit posts documenting some seriously creepy experiences. We are publishing them here with express permission of Milos Bogetic aka inaaace, the original poster. The story is in multiple parts, and will be published completely over the next few days – much like what I did with the ‘Bedtime’ series earlier this year. After the stories have all gone up, I’ll edit each post with links to the other parts.
The OP has finished the book that he promised during his successful kickstarter project.
You can find the paperback and Kindle e-book versions here: The Story of Her Holding an Orange by Milos Bogetic – full disclosure: our referral link is included.
I know that this will not be new material for all of you, but for those of you who – like myself – don’t use Reddit, I wanted to post it so that you guys could enjoy it as much as I did after having it brought to my attention. Thanks again to Milos for letting me post it, and enjoy!
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Notice the creepy head cocked to the right, grin, and stare of the old woman in the pic of the laptop
HE SHOULD HIRE A PRIEST OR SOMETHING CUZ THERES A POSSABILITY THAT ROSE COULD BE A DEMON… AND MAYBE HE SHOULD OPEN ALL THE DOORS IN THE HOUSE… OR MAYBE ROSE WANTS HIM TO UN PEEL THE OTHER ORANGE SLICES? HE SHOULD ASK HIS MOM WHAT INFO ROSE GAVE HER ABOUT HERSELF…OR MAYBE HE SHOULD CALL GHOST HUNTERS TO MAKE AN EPISODE…
So the word above Open I can barely make out but it looks like it says “Hajde.” I can’t make out the letter before the ‘H’, but “Hajde” but that roughly translates out to “Come on” or “Come”.
OMG that orange lady pasta scared the pants off me
The words on the top, I examined it a bit. The words look like P O U J 9 E. I thought what could 9 look similar too as a letter and I came up with D. So I googled “Poujde” Results came up with “poujade” Which is a roman catholic politition. Don’t know if that has to do with anything.
ok there is an logical answer and an nonlogical answer.
logical:she is a master locksmith and a master actor who is pulling a prank on you and she is like a psycic or something.
nonlogical:she is from another dimension or a demon an ancester of both you and your gf had made mad by trespassing or stealing srom it and so the demon cursed his future family and yall are unlucky enough to be that family
More Answers: She stalks you 24:7 with hidden cameras and hacked a G.P.S. that your parents put in your arm as an infant. (Or Maybe she just is the deranged god of oranges)
Shank if needed.
( I am a professional shanker)
Ok, you have several options
1. Purchase a firearm
2. Put a ton of oranges in your house to see what happens
3 the opposite of oranges are lemons, so purchase lemons and exparament.
4. If all else fails move.
5. If that fails live with roommates.
6. The most desparate measure would to be to contact a studio and make a show of this. Called “The Hunt Of Rose”
1.finaly a good idea
2.suicide
3.trolling rose
4.he already did that, read other parts
5.he does live with roommates
6.best show ever!
If Rose was the one placed her orange onto your gf when she was a baby, then we have something else. Time flies and she is still that young after what, 20 years?
There are various points you need to take into consideration:
– The oranges, why oranges?
– The child voice, why child?
– The relation with you gf, is it a coincidence? This is the hardest part.
– The picture, why that picture?
From you story I can only think of one theory that Rose was someone who related to that woman and her kid in your photo. She maybe the mother, or aunt that’s very close to that kid and somehow the kid died. She holds the grudge or becomes crazy after the incident, then she decides to follow you.
However, that wouldn’t explain your gf’s story. It was too long ago, that mysterious kid was still fine at that time, and why Rose took her time all the way to India?
Make your story into a bullet points timeline, I think you’ll find something worth to take a look at.
This shouldn’t related to ghosts, nor she would like to harm you. If she did she would do that a long time ago, she went into your gf’s room, went into your room, be alone with you both unnoticed and yet all she did was offering you the oranges.
This is creepy but not life-threatening. I’d suggest you to calm down and even have a talk with her. But never lock your room, you now knew she can break in anways. Always have a way to escape just in case, bring something with you all the time like a short staff to defend yourself.
She has a story and for now means no physical harm, but she is indeed a maniac. She’s not a ghost, but she indeed possesses an ability to move in stealth.
Hope this helps. I believe in your story because I experienced something similar, but it’s much shorter and it was a mad man who lost his child, I looked like him so he stalked me.
The only problem here is your gf’s story, I repeat. It was too long ago.
Great set of stories, can’t wait for part 4. Keep up the good work!
You are so rude. Not only did I look after you ever since you were a child, I also looked after the woman who you would come to love and saw to it that you two got together. Then when I offer you an orange as a sign of friendship you yell at me and run from me. Fuck you, bro.
screw you rose that is not looking after somebody like that and dude call me over when she is at your house grab some ducktape tape her mouth shut sit her in a chair ducktape her to the chair take a picture of her face also learn to shoot a gun just in case shes kinda creepry and hall and she has to get up close ansd stuff but you can go up and whack her or shoot her in the knee cap you wont get charged i mean she stalking and breaking and entiring and you guys are under a lot of stress
Aww, it’s okay, Rose. People only fear what they don’t understand. Try giving them apples, that may work. People like apples.
Personally i don’t believe this, but if it is true buy a camera that you can quickly record with and film her without her knowing the next time you encounter her, then show it to the police and also put it on youtube so we can see her :P
That is creepy as f***. And these people above saying to get a picture of Rose, don’t you get that when they see her, they’re too scared or creeped out to even think to get a damn camera. And…if she’s managed to do all this (breaking in and stuff),then don’t you think that somehow she’ll find a way to erase the photo of her before the author posts it? I’m 13 (14 in July), and I’m surprised that you (above me) didn’t think up that. I’m pretty sure the majority of this site are all older than me. Common sense. And Author, maybe if Rose isn’t part of a cult, then try getting some supernatural expert or something, if she is actually supernatural, and not just sneaky as hell.
Trust me, I agree and you’re not alone in that age area. I’m almost 12 and I go on here so much. A lot of stories do sound like they’re fake, and this one is a little tricky, saying I haven’t read the rest. He should be able to read the peel if some people on here can. (Not to be rude or criticize or anything.) If he got a supernatural expert, he would need to have her in the area and have evidence of her being though. Even if you had your camera or phone with you, you would be scared or creeped out of your mind to snap a damn picture of her anyway. I agree with you totally.
Im 12 almost 13 and at terrifying times you forget the simplest of things, you can barley decide if you are going to run or you are going to kick some ass
scareh stuff
I agree
If you do at all decide to post a photo of her, please give us a warning …. she sounds freaking scary
I am actually curious now about how this story will wrap up. Still skeptic.
the other word looks like POUJ and the other 2 letters I can’t make out
In old time they burned witches. To clean Their soul.
Just burn the fucking orange. Maybe it’ll Work?
my wife is cheating on me again
That was random
Thats random
Maybe you should try to find a place where people can see you well enough to see the orange woman as well
This might sound drastic but i think you should learn how to shoot a gun.Just a pistol or something,maybe a beretta
this is like.. it makes me want to shit my pants and scream for mom.
i do believe in like, spirits and non-natural stuff, and this is sooooo scary, i seriously regret reading this..
but try to take a pic of her, like.. with a hidden camera or something, put it on you, and record 24/7 to see if she’ll turn up..
have you ever thought maybe just maybe this might be an epic prank pulled by both of your parents? but than again who goes to that length to prank someone? if you want a safe place to go
I’d suggest moving in with a ghetto family. Ain’t shit gone scare them if anything once they see that hoe they gone pop a cap in dat ass.
I agree
Loved it. I think the fact that it really sounds believable makes it all the better.
This, so far has been an interesting read. While I have to admit I don’t thoroughly believe in supernatural types of situations, I’ve seen a lot that can convince me that this can happen to someone (and if it really is happening to you, I’m very sorry and hope you both can get past it unharmed and well)
Rose seems to have some kind of connection between your and your girlfriend’s family (running to you two). Obviously she’s not just some deadbeat stalker, and saying she’s from this strange cult would/could be an understatement. If she dates back to your GF’s childhood years (and I’m estimating that she’s close to the 24-28-ish?) Rose has to be a different kind of entity than we’re thinking. I hesitate to say “ghost”, because I know there is so much more out there than the simple “ghost” description.
Nonetheless, I’m baffled and short on words when it comes to actually telling you what I might think of it and how you may “take care of her” for I’ve heard of these things before (not similar in pattern and situation, but more of the supernatural thread), but never how it’s been taken care of.
I desperately hope your grandmother can tell you more of this (and maybe how to solve it?) and I hope I can read more of it when you have the time to update and there is something worth updating.
As for your girlfriend; stay strong for both of you, but remember that while it’s noble, you’re human as well, and being scared is normal. If needed, talk it out with her (unless she’s too scared to. Don’t be persistent in that case) and remind her that you two should be there for each other.
Hope to read/hear more of you soon and be strong, brah.
“The OP is currently working on turning this series into a book after his successful kickstarter project.” Use your brain and don’t be sorry, brah.
This is clearly either a specter or a fantom
I would just have a calm conversation with her and ask what she wants. what if his girlfriends helping Rose?
Hiya, I’m pretty sure that the word above open says ‘shall’ or ‘soon’ It is hard to recognize the letters, but by what I CAN roughly recognize, this is what I can translate. You are welcome to email me, just reply if you want my email address.
if I was being stalked by a creepy lady with oranges, you better believe she would have left me alone. if she didn’t, well…I have 5 or 6 knives in my room.
me too
I know what to do! If dat creepy woman shows up, Approach her and say “Hey let’s take a picture!” And you take a picture of her and post it. Or better. Sprint right to her face and give her a Falcon Punch.
or take the orange and walk away to see what happens
He did
He did? When?
What if she randomly disappears after he asks for a picture though?
*LOLOLOL!* That, my friend, would be the funniet thing ever if I’d done that :D
good idea
Here is a question: Out of encounters you have had with “Rose”, Has she aged?
oh… good idea…
I wish more information or experiences were provided. Not sure what the word above OTVORI is either, but it looks Greek.
Says it means “open”.
Croatian.
After examining the barely legible word above ovtori, I can tell you it’s not Greek.
He said in the actual story it means open.
It’s Slovak!
He said in the story that Ovtori means open. T_T
OTVORI means open. There is another word above it, that is the one in question.
Your right people read the story through not half way seriously.
I know right
Perst!
Filipino ka no?
I think the top word says “roosse” but I don’t know what that means in your language..
either that, or roojoe
I think this guy can be bulgerian because i am bulgerian too and in my langweig(sorry for shit spelling)otvori means open just like his langweige
He’s obviously Bosnian, it says so.
he said hes from bosnia
Maybe the top word is in Indian or something since his girlfriends from India maybe he should check it out on Google translate
mybe get a tranq or pepper spray
it looks like roojpe
OMG I think it says Rose
I don’t think it’s rose, I’m not sure, ‘ rose open ‘ .. it may be meaning that rose is always open to be joined? I can’t figure it out, i don’t know his language ..
look rose up on white pages
hmmm….”rose” and “roosse” ??
to me it looks like Rose is otvori
If it does say that, it might not be foreign. It could be a slurred-out form of her name, Rose.
That is a plausible answer to it, but makes no sense (no offense intended). If this is a true encryption, the 5th character could be a natural sign (such as in music), the first 4 being “door”, and the last being an “E” (for the first line). So it comes out like this “Door natural-e open” (last line included). If you refer back to the story, he said that Rose had said he’d accept the orange sometime. So it could possibly be saying that the doorway into that group (or whatever you want to call it) will open on its own and take him in. Just a thought, not necessarily correct, but hopefully you’ll at least *consider* my opinion.
i think the first word is posao and it means It’s not our job to judge what anyone enters the heart of the temple. and its in croatian
If you read it, it’s actually first.
The orange peel has these words engraved RAD 392 otvori. if the last word is OPEN then it means for you to open a particular verse from a specific text ie book.