My Girlfriend’s Eyes
| Published on Creepypasta.com | May 2008 |
|---|---|
| Length | 130 words · about 1 minute to read |
| Story level | Micro |
| Reader rating | 7.1/10 from 575 votes |
| Category | Artifacts and Objects |
It was her eyes that first attracted me to her. I didn’t believe in love, but the
first time I gazed into her beautiful green eyes I knew she was the one.
I loved seeing myself reflected in those eyes, looking deep into her soul and
knowing I was a part of it. It’s kinda stupid, but I even wrote poetry about them. I
don’t remember much, but I told her “There’s so much life within your eyes, and so
much love”.
Oh God, I loved the way the light danced within them. I just couldn’t imagine not
being able to stare dreamily into them.
Now if I could just find a box that was half as beautiful as her eyes, I could stop
carrying them round in my pocket.
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Eye see what you did there.
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I loved my ex girlfriend/fiancé, she beautiful eyes. For the pain she put me through, I would rip them out and hold onto them for a bit. I could still gaze into those beautiful eyes and at the same time, cause her immeasurable pain as she did to me.
Lol wut?
She must’ve dumped him, or he got sick of her. He only loved her eyes.
Ewwwwww. Why would he do that!?! He must be retarded. >:3
You pressed enter
too many times.
it made it
hard to
read
Oh god. XD
The giggles. So many goddamn giggles. Make it stop. Please.
Great pasta! ^_^
I read this and I lold so hard .XD
Am I the only one who fapped to this?
Nope.
I mean…what?
“A better last line:
I think I’ll keep them”
Yep, that makes it 10x better
As soon as I read the title and the first few lines, I knew what was going to happen. Still, it was creepy and in some way morbid.
@emogirl, She probably dumped him.
had a good idea and start. But the ending crashed and burned. 3/10
THEN WHERE WAS WOCKET?
HELLO? I ain’t dead just blind, he got me lyke Uma thurman got Darryl Hannah in Kill bill. to bad he was great in the sack cuz then Id kill him….what a man
Ew how psycho….
still, great pasta !!!!
@emogirl: Because he’s FUCKING INSANE?
I like this pasta. I’m a fan of the “lolpastas”.
but WHO WAS POCKET?
It freaked me out.
> Ummmm… If he loved her so much why’d he kill her?
> That’s kind of retarted.
He didn’t love her, he loved her eyes. So he kept them.
That’s how crazy minds work.
Shaking his hand must be fun.
Edgar allen poe wrote a similar short story in which he took his beloved’s teeth.
Similar concept.
*snorts* HA! I read the ending to my boyfriend and he was like “…… what?”
Same reaction I had >_< Kinda funny.
You’d think that someone would notice two balls poking in his pocket? Oh wait, gay; balls touching.
at 33: i would be worried before i read this if someone said that to me
Teeheehee…
Hmmm… When I used to deliver catalogues, I sometimes had a chat with one of the guys on my route who once said to me at the end of one conversation “Eyes are the window to the soul, and yours speak volumes”.
I think I’m a little worried.
I lol’d
Clean, plasticize, mount in modified eyeglass frames facing inwards. No more problems.