My Girlfriend’s Eyes
| Published on Creepypasta.com | May 2008 |
|---|---|
| Length | 130 words · about 1 minute to read |
| Story level | Micro |
| Reader rating | 7.1/10 from 575 votes |
| Category | Artifacts and Objects |
It was her eyes that first attracted me to her. I didn’t believe in love, but the
first time I gazed into her beautiful green eyes I knew she was the one.
I loved seeing myself reflected in those eyes, looking deep into her soul and
knowing I was a part of it. It’s kinda stupid, but I even wrote poetry about them. I
don’t remember much, but I told her “There’s so much life within your eyes, and so
much love”.
Oh God, I loved the way the light danced within them. I just couldn’t imagine not
being able to stare dreamily into them.
Now if I could just find a box that was half as beautiful as her eyes, I could stop
carrying them round in my pocket.
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This actually gave me a much needed laugh =)
That escalated quickly.
The title caught my attention, but essentially gave away the entire story. Very predictable, too short, cliché, and underdone.
It would’ve been more interesting to me if you had shown how he removed her eyes/the murder scene, maybe more on her character. Because I feel nothing. Not scared, and I have no feelings towards the characters. It was honestly boring.
Also, I think you should’ve had him keep them in a jar of formaldehyde. As others are saying, eyes do decompose rather quickly, and formaldehyde would keep them preserved. Much more believable than carrying them around in his pocket. I mean, decomposing aside, wouldn’t they get lint stuck to them? Couldn’t he squish them? Drop them? Or am I not meant to question these things? Sorry if I sound harsh, but I feel you could’ve done a lot more with this.
lol funny story
This wasnt scary but it was DEFINITELY messed up! Dark.
Damn… Glad I don’t have her eyes…
a definite “lol, what?!” story. i would definatly not sit down or sleep on your side or something bro XD
what?! lol dude i would probably keep those in a box at meh house or something XD
I thought this was gonna be a lovey-dovey story and thought,” why is tho on creepy pasta?” then read the ending and said,” oh that’s why”
You people and your “facts”…lol
when i read the last line it freaked me out. this one was better then other storys i’ve heard