My Girlfriend’s Eyes
| Published on Creepypasta.com | May 2008 |
|---|---|
| Length | 130 words · about 1 minute to read |
| Story level | Micro |
| Reader rating | 7.1/10 from 575 votes |
| Category | Artifacts and Objects |
It was her eyes that first attracted me to her. I didn’t believe in love, but the
first time I gazed into her beautiful green eyes I knew she was the one.
I loved seeing myself reflected in those eyes, looking deep into her soul and
knowing I was a part of it. It’s kinda stupid, but I even wrote poetry about them. I
don’t remember much, but I told her “There’s so much life within your eyes, and so
much love”.
Oh God, I loved the way the light danced within them. I just couldn’t imagine not
being able to stare dreamily into them.
Now if I could just find a box that was half as beautiful as her eyes, I could stop
carrying them round in my pocket.
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Jeez people, stop being so overly realistic abotu things and enjoy the story :B
you have her eyes in youre pants for compensate youre little eggs? >:D
@farthestfromshame
… BUT WHO WAS JAR?
muahahaha me too shortys
my bf has gorgeous eyes maybe i should keep his :P
hey zombie i’ve been blind by love
B-)
LOL so twisted
oww whatever i liked this, so what if they descompose like that guy cares in that precise moment, is like his mind is kinda psyched out, he has what he loves the most of her girl. And i dont think is retarded… more like obsessive.
Like it…
By the way my bf allways says the same thing of my eyes… i think ill buy a gun or something =]
So a guy would carry boobs in his pocket?
It was a great idea, but may I suggest you rewrite it with it ending as, “Now if I could just find a box that was half as beautiful as her eyes, I could stop
keeping them in jar of alcohol”
…perhaps not, but I enjoy your writing nonetheless, PHONE.
I really thought he was going to fuck her in the eye.
im scared people always tell how nice my eyes are Q.Q
he siad he did it for the lulz
well, tis safe to say his girlfriend didn’t SEE THAT COMING…[i fail at humor…forgive me]
I had a hunch this was one of those eye gouge and keep stories just by the title :( The ending could be a little stronger but creepy overall.
What’s weird is, *I* have green eyes, and a male friend of mine is almost always talking about them and how they “reflect my soul.”
Oh shit D:
:P don’t worry ^.^ he might not take them out lol
formaldehyde!
Also, he could have “plasicized” them, like the the human exhibits in Body Works (Worlds?).
Another one of those “… haha lol” ones.
Ehh, it could have been better.
Skull JOOOOOKE!
DO HO HO HO HO
hmmm, I guess love IS blind…
Good initial idea. Could have been executed much better though, with a meatier plot…
A better last line:
I think I’ll keep them
Ummmm… If he loved her so much why’d he kill her?
That’s kind of retarted.
He wasn’t necessarily In love with her he was in love with her eyes. Well obsessed is probably a better word.
Not really even that funny, quite stupid if i do say so my self.
Not even a suprise i knew from the beginning that he would have the eyes with him, No climax.
lol redman.
Let me just grab my wallet… nope those are eyes… here we are!
It’s a fun creepypasta.
However, like other commenters, may I assume that maybe he somehow treated them with formaldehyde or some other cadaver-preserving chemical?
p.s.I ought to try something like that. Maybe I’ll put fake/glass eyes in my pocket just to scare the sh*t out of them with a story similar to this.
Lol, perfect prank!
Cute, kind of funny, but not scary. It is a neat concept, but eyes decompose extremely quickly and are very messy when they do.
lulz
eyes in my pocket
be shame if you sat down
Quite stupid.
Eyes decompose quite quickly, faster than most other parts.
Indeed