One More For The Orphan
| Published on Creepypasta.com | May 2008 |
|---|---|
| Length | 528 words · about 2 minutes to read |
| Story level | Short |
| Reader rating | 8.5/10 from 584 votes |
| Category | Deaths, Murders, and Disappearances |
In a small orphanage in a small village in Russia, there is a young boy. His hair is jet black, and messy, and he tattered jeans and an old dingy grey shirt.
Nothing is known of him. For 10 years, he sat in the bed in his room, never moving, never blinking, never eating or sleeping. In the 10 years, he has not seemed to age at all, continuing to look like a 7 year old boy. The only thing that proved he was alive is the slow rise and fall of his chest as he breathes, and the refusal to take his eyes off anyone who enters the room alone.
A lone psychiatrist came over in an attempt to find out why the boy had done nothing in 10 years. He entered the room, and shut the door behind him.
30 minutes later, the orphanage’s nurse came to check on the 2 of them. Opening the door, she saw the child, still sitting, still not moving, eyes fixed on her. However, something seemed different. He appeared a slight amount larger, not by much, but enough to make him look like a late 8 or early 9 year old. The psychiatrist was no longer in the room. The door was the only exit, as the room had no windows, vents, or anything, and it was, in fact, in the exact center of the orphanage.
He continued to sit, only seen occasionally by the lady who came in to check on him, and she never closed the door upon entry.
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A week or so later, 2 law enforcement personnel entered the orphanage, demanding to speak to the boy about the disappearance of the psychiatrist. The 2 of them entered, closing the door behind him, as the head of the orphanage stood outside the door.
30 minutes passed, and not a sound came from the room. The Head eased the door open. The boy was still on the bed, but the officers where no longer there. The boy was know quite noticeably bigger, about the size of a 15 year old. His skin was darker than usual, and he looked angrier than ever. But one thing remained the same: His cold, unforgiving eyes that stared at whoever entered.
Eventually, the law organized a large group of 10 officers to speak to the boy. They entered the room, and left the door open, until one of the younger orphans ran up and shut it, apparently in a daze.
The head quickly ran to re-open the door, and upon doing so froze him in horror. A low rumbling noise came from the room….
“…..One….more….”
If you return to that orphanage, you will see it still continues to run. The orphans live in good care, health, and education. However, there is one room, that you sill see is boarded up, and far from enterable. If you ask what is behind it, you will be removed forcefully from the orphanage.
However, when no one’s looking, if you place you’re ear to the door, you will hear a low ominous growling sound, and if you listen for a bit, you will hear….
“…..One…..more….”
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he was gonna transform into john cena
which is the other one, could you please tell me the title?
Please, does anyone know who wrote this? I’m trying to make a video game out of it and I need to contact the owner!
so you could just parade some usless people into the room and force him to age until he is dust?
But who would tell him to leave? I knew a couple of people that I’d happily send in thier with the eviction notice? Xx
why 14?
The story is OK i just wish it was a tid longer and mor detiled. i spelled that wrong, didnt i?
Gah that first sentence.. Could have been phrased better, for instance “In Russia, there is a young boy living in a small village orphanage.” It’s good when writing to avoid sentences that pan out like “in a ___ in a ___ in ___”, throws most readers off. This one did get off to a rough start, swapping from past to present tense from sentence to sentence (sometimes mid-sentence) BUT
SERIOUS BRIX SHAT
PLZ ADD A SEQUEL
Lovely pasta. I’m kind of interested in finding out what eating one more would do. Dear pasta-maker, would you mind stepping into my room and telling me?
What was really creepy was after I read this under the story was ad for adopting a child.
Lol FTS!
Is this story true?
He’s the gremlin lady from Hotel Transylvania.
“when all of a sudden, Havok tripped and fell into a small hole. the end”
YES
However, when no one’s looking, if you place you’re ear to the door, you will hear a low ominous growling sound, and if you listen for a bit, you will hear….
“…..i ….am.…BATMAN.…”
I may have peed a little reading this. Luckily I was taking a bath while doing so. Looks like I’m taking a shower now.
Did I just read a Creepypasta about a boy eating people to grow?
Great story! Period!
three things
1.WHO WAS ORPHAN!
2.KRATOS VS KID
3IF know ones looking
listen to the door
my…..little…pony….my..little…pony.