One More For The Orphan
| Published on Creepypasta.com | May 2008 |
|---|---|
| Length | 528 words · about 2 minutes to read |
| Story level | Short |
| Reader rating | 8.5/10 from 584 votes |
| Category | Deaths, Murders, and Disappearances |
In a small orphanage in a small village in Russia, there is a young boy. His hair is jet black, and messy, and he tattered jeans and an old dingy grey shirt.
Nothing is known of him. For 10 years, he sat in the bed in his room, never moving, never blinking, never eating or sleeping. In the 10 years, he has not seemed to age at all, continuing to look like a 7 year old boy. The only thing that proved he was alive is the slow rise and fall of his chest as he breathes, and the refusal to take his eyes off anyone who enters the room alone.
A lone psychiatrist came over in an attempt to find out why the boy had done nothing in 10 years. He entered the room, and shut the door behind him.
30 minutes later, the orphanage’s nurse came to check on the 2 of them. Opening the door, she saw the child, still sitting, still not moving, eyes fixed on her. However, something seemed different. He appeared a slight amount larger, not by much, but enough to make him look like a late 8 or early 9 year old. The psychiatrist was no longer in the room. The door was the only exit, as the room had no windows, vents, or anything, and it was, in fact, in the exact center of the orphanage.
He continued to sit, only seen occasionally by the lady who came in to check on him, and she never closed the door upon entry.
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A week or so later, 2 law enforcement personnel entered the orphanage, demanding to speak to the boy about the disappearance of the psychiatrist. The 2 of them entered, closing the door behind him, as the head of the orphanage stood outside the door.
30 minutes passed, and not a sound came from the room. The Head eased the door open. The boy was still on the bed, but the officers where no longer there. The boy was know quite noticeably bigger, about the size of a 15 year old. His skin was darker than usual, and he looked angrier than ever. But one thing remained the same: His cold, unforgiving eyes that stared at whoever entered.
Eventually, the law organized a large group of 10 officers to speak to the boy. They entered the room, and left the door open, until one of the younger orphans ran up and shut it, apparently in a daze.
The head quickly ran to re-open the door, and upon doing so froze him in horror. A low rumbling noise came from the room….
“…..One….more….”
If you return to that orphanage, you will see it still continues to run. The orphans live in good care, health, and education. However, there is one room, that you sill see is boarded up, and far from enterable. If you ask what is behind it, you will be removed forcefully from the orphanage.
However, when no one’s looking, if you place you’re ear to the door, you will hear a low ominous growling sound, and if you listen for a bit, you will hear….
“…..One…..more….”
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ill make three comments find them all and ill give you bacon
it being known that he hadn’t aged for 10 years kind of ruined it since that would gather the attention of many
Maybe he’s never had a snickers. “You’re not you when you’re hungry.”
lolz so harry potter eats people? he was seriously the first person i thought of when i read the part of his description of jet black, messy hair lol
Ths duznt even mke sense. I dnt care 4 any of the stories I’ve read so far.ther not scary at all.
…Of course this is in Russia. Of course.
Dammit.
This was genuinely scary…Right up until I visualized the boy turning around and swallowing them all whole. Cartoon style.
Nomnomnom, bitches.
Isn’t worth a comment…
Pffft. The boy is obviously a mermaid.
Ouuuu A Russian Orphan that eats humans to gain age?
Creepy Pasta indeed, Will be asking for seconds
Yummy Pasta
shotgun is enough to solve this problem
Damien must die.
That is all.
omen reference i presume.
@Havok
KKK Coward!
steps to solve this problem:
1) Remove boards and open door.
2) Toss in molotov cocktail.
3) Wait until unholy demon screams of agony stop.
4) Prepare demon orphan steaks for dinner.
HUNGER GETS WHAT HUNGER WANTS
>=♭
a) Why not kill the boy?
b) Evacuate everyone from the building and destroy it
c) Remove the boy from the room?
d) How the fuck did he get there?
i know weird right
*Opens Door, Shoots Orphan in Face* Problem solved.
One….More….
However, when no one’s looking, if you place you’re ear to the door, you will hear a low ominous growling sound, and if you listen for a bit, you will hear….
“…..I….WAS….PHONE….”
Maybe one more and he’s free from demon puberty?
Guys, I don’t think he ate them. I think he just absorbed them. Binded with their very souls, adding a couple more years to his age each time.
@Woot
You haz just winnd 3 intarnetz
kill it with fire
@ Havok he was mad because he didnt come and eat u. he eats racisist ignorant stupid fuckers like u. that wasnt my comment but he made me mad. any way, It was voldemort and he ate Prof. Dumbledore!!
HA, another one about a creepy orphan kid….old pasta :/
Bricks hath been shat
So he’s already claimed 13 victims so far… I’m guessing that if the Orphan gets one more victim, it’ll become a Superdemon?
@ Darkest
How exactly would you get the boards off, and hold the gun in such a way to be a threat at the same time?
ODUDEODUDEODUDE.
ILU SO MUCH FOR THEEES.
…it’s awesome.
IN SOVIET RUSSIA KID EATS YOOOOOOOU.
i couldnt heelp it.
BUT WHO WAS ORPHAN?
post damn u post