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Wake Up?

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It has been reported that some victims of rape, during the act, would retreat into a fantasy world from which they could not WAKE UP. In this catatonic state, the victim lived in a world just like their normal one, except they weren’t being raped. The only way that they realized they needed to WAKE UP was a note they found in their fantasy world. It would tell them about their condition, and tell them to WAKE UP. Even then, it would often take months until they were ready to discard their fantasy world and PLEASE WAKE UP

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182 thoughts on “Wake Up?”

  1. If someone tried to rape me they would already be dead…

    Anyways, I rate this 3/10 and I will make no comment about why I chose this rating…It is inappropriate.

    Sincerely,
    Grim Gamer

  2. What was the name of the story of a guy who was in a accident, a letter tells him to remember because his family is crying for him, twords the end if he didnt wake up and remember all of the details he would never wake up. i forget what the story was called, can anyone help me out?

  3. no-one knows where this is from, do they? this actually stems from herobrine, a creepypasta in minecraft. the first hoax was when a guy was livestreaming, then faked a crash. a wall of random symbols would appear, but if you removed all of the text that wasn’t actual letters, this is what you would be left with.

    1. Not likely.

      This was posted on OCTOBER 21, 2008, and most likely originated before its posting here.

      Minecraft wasn’t released until the following year. More likely that the guy you’re talking about was just a fan of this pasta.

  4. Read about “catatonia” if this pasta chocks you. The state described here is often hard to get into though. It’s easier if you eat nothing and lay in your bed on the same side for a day or so straight, not sleeping a wink. I’ve gone (slightly) catatonic once, trying to escape vivid memories. I was able to leave my little sanctuary, but if I hadn’t – electroshocking would probably have been the only effective way to break me.

  5. This isn’t convincing because if this is a replica of the world I’VE seen and just a figment of my imagination and I just decided to take a random vacation to China it would just be a blank hole in the world and I don’t think your brain can just spawn random people you’ve never seen in your life. One more thing… Rape literally who the fuck is going to go in a fuckin coma because there getting raped. If your getting raped you just suck it up and deal with it like what kind of idiot falls asleep while getting raped come on.

  6. Proudly Insane

    Not sure if this was copied from Herobrine or the other way around…

    Either way, why would I want to wake up if I’m actually being raped?

  7. I see what you did there. Clever, great concept, excellent delivery, but I would have chosen something different, like being in a coma from a traumatic accident, being strangled and that’s the only way to survive, or fighting a lobotomy.

    Rape victims don’t do that. Trust me. There’s nothing that can take you out of the moment. No peace, no solace, and no freedom. That, in and of itself, is creepypasta.

  8. I like this one, but this one is definitely so old it’s already been on the ED article of creepypastas for over an year now. It’s still awesome.

    Also, the reading really needs more energy on the WAKE UP parts, especially the last one. The guy is monotonic…

  9. This pasta is terrifying and makes me want to go get a titanium chastity belt to protect my junk. Also, I’m going to carry a couple of the brix that I’ve just shat in my purse to use as a weapon just in case.

  10. I read a much better version of this about horrendous torture, and the “wake ups” were more subtle, not IN BLOCK CAPITALS WHICH KIND OF DETRACTS FROM THE STORY I FIND.

  11. I’ve read this before, but it wasn’t about rape – it was about torture and that subtle difference make it more effective.

  12. The orginal version of this pasta i read involved a coma patient. And it was a lot better.
    Saying this about rape is just unbelievable, people don’t retreat into a fantasy world during rape , THEY GET RAPED. That’s why the girl is screaming no, or sobbing, and not smiling and talking about the unicorns.
    The premises of this pasta is awesome. The execution is fail

  13. As I am quite tired, it took me a minute to get this story. Subject matter made me deeply uncomfortable, so yeah it got under my skin….

  14. oooohhh, that was clever. I like the whole “what if your reality is actually a figment of your imagination” thing. there’s so much to play with in that premise

  15. Saw this pasta before going to bed last night. Woke up and turned on the radio. “This can be a sweet dream or a beautiful nightmare. Either way I don’t wanna wake up.” Needless to say, bricks were shat.

  16. Quite clever but the “rape” part killed it and made it stupid. Delete that part and try again. Guaranteed you’ll end up with the clever pasta i was referring to earlier.

  17. I really think for this one to really scare the shit out of you, a friend needs to read it to you. My friend said it to me and my heart suddenly dropped. It just felt so personal, and I felt like I just woke up… :p weird as flonkk

  18. I also saw this as an image. I also saw a replica featuring the same idea but suggesting I was in some form of coma. Well done.

  19. Lol… first time I saw this was as an image…. instead of being caps, the WAKE UP text was faded out. I shat brix then, as I just did now.

    Though, if I am being raped, I don’t think I want to WAKE UP

  20. God, this is just awful, I mean this site is okay but some of the things that end up here are just terrible. What the hell is the point of this? It’s not creepy, it makes no sense with this stupid ‘Rape victims retreat into a fantasy world’ statement pulled from nowhere and it just seems petty and exploitive to use rape in such a stupid context with your horrid little “You’re being raped! Whattatwist!” Gag.

  21. Anonymousity x 2

    ‘this one horrifies me, especially because, near my house, the words “WAKE UP” are stencilled on a white wall three times.”

    OH SH-

  22. this one horrifies me, especially because, near my house, the words “WAKE UP” are stencilled on a white wall three times.

  23. i am a heron. i haev a long neck and i pick fish out of the water w/ my beak. if you dont repost this comment on 10 other pages i will fly into your kitchen tonight and make a mess of your pots and pans

  24. Holy shit. This creepy pasta kicked so much more ass for me since I was raped when I was a kid!

    …wait…

    No bullshit by the way.

  25. Lol @ Mr. Welldone, That’s exactly what a rapist would say =P

    I liked this one, short and simple It really says Is the world really as you see it? or are you just covering up something nasty without even realizing it? and at the same time hiding as a simple statement of a fact apparently unrelated to the reader… It’s believable, and the fact that it says rape may get people thinking ‘well its obviously not about me!’ but it could definately be any horrible even that drasticly changes your life or your perception of yourself. excelent pasta.

  26. also @47 — who was phone doesn’t fucking write these, mkay? nor does any one person. it’s a collective of other folks’ work.

    and in any case, if you think it’s that bad, then don’t read.
    it’s that simple.

  27. fkfsdkhjsfd.
    this one gave me the creeps a bit.
    well-written mindfuck = amazing!! :)

    also, @25, you were not the only one nerding out at the end of this. because that totally came to mind for me too. xD

  28. It has been reported that some victims of rape, during the act, would retreat into a fantasy world from which they could not STOP WRITING SHITTY PASTA. In this catatonic state, the victim lived in a world just like their normal one, except they weren’t being raped. The only way that they realized they needed to STOP WRITING SHITTY PASTA was a note they found in… fantasy world. It would tell them about their condition, and tell them to WAKE UP. Even then, it would often take months until they were ready to discard their fantasy world and PLEASE WAKE UP

  29. Dude… I come by every once in a while…
    I had a dream last night about being raped by some demon stud repeatedly and woke up sick and not going to work.

    So I start my browser, do my stuff, log on creepypasta.com…

    And I see this one…
    DUDE!!

  30. The Person Formerly Known as 'Noneya'

    All I have to say is that you cant rape the willing.

    ;D

    Seriously though, nice pasta. Simple, but just creepy enough.

  31. Ohhhh…I’ve read this somewhere before, and I never got it until now.

    Remember kids, it’s not rape, it’s just surprisebuttschmex!

  32. Neat, one actually based in reality. Yeah, this actually does happen to rape victims, as well as victims of other trauma. It’s a self defense mechanism.

    I’m not quite sure how accurate the description of the fantasy world and the “Wake Up” are, but it does make for a very interesting premise. Perhaps it would be possible to piggyback another pasta off of this idea?

  33. Why would my fantasy world be filled with so much murder, hate, racism, and rape (irony)? Wouldn’t people imagine themselves a world where they were the President or their wife was Jessica Alba?

  34. It’s not suggesting so much that you’re being raped right now as much as it’s suggesting that you’re living in a reality you created for yourself and you need to WAKE UP so you can actually deal with it.

  35. reminds me of the episode of Futurama called ‘The Sting’ where Leela falls into a coma and Fry is constantly telling her to wake up, in all the dreams she has

  36. Decent, but just too unbelievable

    reminds me of UCB, where at the end of all the episodes, you find out none of it was real, and some austronaut was being raped the whole time.

    I love that series.

  37. Wow, took me until the very edn to get it. Awesome, except I’m pretty sure I wasn’t raped….Maybe another tramautic event can replace the rape?

  38. Wow.

    I really liked this one alot. I showed my friend and she liked it too.

    No snarky comments from REKKUSU on this one!

  39. who is MisterVercetti?

    hey i just logged onto the computer n sez the name i just used here was mr vercetti.

    i didn’t use that name!!!!\

    who did?

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