Super Mario: The Haunted Save
| Published on Creepypasta.com | August 2012 |
|---|---|
| Length | 556 words · about 3 minutes to read |
| Story level | Short |
| Reader rating | 4.5/10 from 4,937 votes |
| Category | Artifacts and Objects |
I was bored. I was super duper bored. It was January 4th, and my new years resolution was to finish ALL my video games by today. Now that I have done that, I had no new things to play. All of the sudden, I got an e-mail on my phone. I opened it.
The e-mail had no words in the “from” bar at the top. The subject was “Get old bootleg SNES cartridges! Only in today’s e-auction!” Intrigued at the sound of new video games, I went to the e-auction.
The first few games I had no clue what they were, so I sort of got bored watching the screen. I was about to close the site, when I saw the text saying “Bootleg Super Mario World” pop up. I decided to get it, and won.
2 weeks later, I got the Super Mario World cartridge in the mail. I was, once again intrigued when I saw most of the label was torn off of the cartridge. The only letters not torn off were: U, E, R, M, R, and D. I immediately put all the letters together and tried to think of something. After a while, I came up with one word: MURDER.
Obviously, I still put in the cartridge, something I still regret to this day. Not that I can feel depressed anymore. After all, doesn’t the word on the cartridge say it all? I was going to stop here, but I suppose I can tell you how my fate came to be.
After I put the cartridge in, the game started. Everything looked normal, except that the hills and the clouds had a slight redish tinge to them. I opened the file selection, and there was a save file on the game already. The name of the file was…
SAVE FILE 1!
I bet you weren’t expecting that.
Anyways, I loaded the file, and went to the level with the first yoshi in it. I was walking, and as you may expect, I have played super mario world some form or another, and I know that this wasn’t here. There was A small red hill, with a very dark red pipe on the top. The first thing somebody would think would be “Something in a video game can’t hurt me. It’s just a video game!” Those people can keep believing that.
At that time, I believed that too. so I went down the pipe. I thought it would be some bootleg-glitch secret. But something was wrong when I was falling for around 30 seconds. When I hit the ground, Bowser was there watching me. I was seriously freaked, so I lunged for the power button. all of the sudden, text popped up on the screen saing “You wouldn’t want to do that, would you?” and the power button was deactivated.
Mario and Bowser were on screen, glaring straight at me. More text popped up saying “You want a suprise? Here!” And bowser pulled out a portal gun. (LOL :P) He blasted the floor under me and then he blasted above the lava. You can probably figure out what happened next.
To this day, I am a boo, guarding Bowser Castle. My home is in the 9th room. If any explorer finds my diary, share my story with the world.
-Bowser Castle Boo #453
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…… terrible
1/10 does not arouse
Stupid CrappyPasta.
“Then Bowser pulled out a Portal Gun and blasted my floor to the lava and I died” O RLY?!?!!??!?!
That makes no sense 110
:=)
It was pretty funny
Good concept, poor execution. 3/10
Reminds me of Ben Drowned
This is just plain bad
It’s a sorta good creepypasta it has its ups and downs
this was shite
I mean it was funny and don’t you relies his trying too be funny he put a lol there
Not a very good pasta at all. I was constantly thinking how stupid the character must have been. Who would go to a site that was in an email that sounds like spam, buy a bootleg game. Then, when it arrives the letters spell murder, it doesn’t matter, start up a save already on there which even if nothing supernatural happened it could still have spoilers. Then down the pipe is bowser who pulls out a portal gun, which brings me to the question of why the hell you covered your floor with lunar sediment, and weren’t even sitting on a couch or anything. I know this wasn’t meant to be taken seriously but some aspects still have to make sense for a good creepypasta.
It real. You idiots. He obviously wrote this from his bowser castle rental windows laptop!
This was a funny pasta. The scary thing about this pasta is the comments that are giving a serious critique like this isn’t a parodypasta. Holy crap wow I am cringing. There are people seriously going “WTF, A PORTAL GUN!? THAT’S NOT SCARY! HOW CLICHE -999/10. WHAT A LOUSY STORY EVEN THOUGH THE JOKE OF THIS PASTA IS THAT IT’S A LOUSY STORY”
Someone found the diary and wrote it on creepypasta… Although it may not be that good, its not supposed to be real
Very cliche. Portal gun? Wow.. Just wow.. 1/10
Sorry “questions” the buttons r just really close together on my phone.
How in the world did bowser get a portal gun, y did Mario not try 2 stop him, how did bowser shoot the gun at the narrator, and how is he now a boo? This should seriously be in crappypasta! It was just 2 rushed and left 2 many quedtions unanswered and not in a good way
One word. SHITTY
Do any of you understand the point of parodypasta? I agree it’s not a great one, but the point is not to be scary. That’s not a real complaint.
Eh…Not really entertaining.
What did I just read?
EXPLAIN YOUR SHIT. At first it was pretty good. An average pasta with an okay-ish amount of creepiness. But when you got down to the Bowser part, people are gonna think you just ran out of ideas. I honestly hope you purposely made this stupid, otherwise (V)_(-,,,-)_(V) that’s just sad. Story, by the power invested in pizza, you are hereby punished with BANISHMENT to the CRAPPYPASTA REAM!!!
Actually I’ve played a similar game, it was a moded version of super Mario. I thought that this was about that game.
really
1/10 because i couldn’t score anything lower
WHY THIS SUCKS FUCKING DICK
1.IF BOWSWER IS EVIL AND HE SHOOTS A PORTAL UNDER YOUR FEET DON’T JUST FUCKING STAND THERE YOU DUMBASS
2.a portal gun? A FUCKING PORTAL GUN?!?!?! YOU COULDVE DONE BETTER LIKE “bowswer puts his whole entire hand through the tv and grabbed me and was squeezing me and i couldn’t breathe”
3.are you fucking kidding me?you litterally just go through the pipe cause DERP DERP DERP DERP IM A BIG DUMBASS WHO HAS TO CHECK OUT THAT RED PIPE DERP DERP DERP DERP
4.bowswer and mario stared and the screen that is pretty creepy but they didn’t have like bloody flesh showing or anything just that they stared at the screen
5.WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU STANDING THERE FOR?! TAKE THE CONTROLLER AND SMASH THE SYSTEM ALREADY DON’T JUST STAND AND WATCH
6.how does a boo write a diary even though A BOO IS A GHOST!
Please slap yourself.
This wasn’t as interesting like any other sort of.
But I’m not going to judge it because of a “portal gun”. I think he said that for the purpose of it being unexpected as the joke. Though, if I had to judge properly as a parody pasta. He should of removed the “LOL :P” thing and make it better with it.
But judging it as it’s own style, especially for a parody thing is honestly unfair.
Hell, you can even make just a creepy pasta with a portal gun and bowser thing, and actually make it look good as a creepy thing with explaining, if it wasn’t a parody though.
Other than that, there might of been too much cliches like the M-U-R-D-E-R thing maybe. Not sure.
The ending, was kind of a simple humor about the boo.
Over all, as a pasta that’s meant to be silly or funny, I might rate it 6-10.
It’s a parody pasta
Of course it’s not going to be good.
Im not really going to complain about this.Its a nice joke. Hey, i kinda needed a laugh today. Cuz I was super duper bored (lol :) )