Super Mario: The Haunted Save
| Published on Creepypasta.com | August 2012 |
|---|---|
| Length | 556 words · about 3 minutes to read |
| Story level | Short |
| Reader rating | 4.5/10 from 4,937 votes |
| Category | Artifacts and Objects |
I was bored. I was super duper bored. It was January 4th, and my new years resolution was to finish ALL my video games by today. Now that I have done that, I had no new things to play. All of the sudden, I got an e-mail on my phone. I opened it.
The e-mail had no words in the “from” bar at the top. The subject was “Get old bootleg SNES cartridges! Only in today’s e-auction!” Intrigued at the sound of new video games, I went to the e-auction.
The first few games I had no clue what they were, so I sort of got bored watching the screen. I was about to close the site, when I saw the text saying “Bootleg Super Mario World” pop up. I decided to get it, and won.
2 weeks later, I got the Super Mario World cartridge in the mail. I was, once again intrigued when I saw most of the label was torn off of the cartridge. The only letters not torn off were: U, E, R, M, R, and D. I immediately put all the letters together and tried to think of something. After a while, I came up with one word: MURDER.
Obviously, I still put in the cartridge, something I still regret to this day. Not that I can feel depressed anymore. After all, doesn’t the word on the cartridge say it all? I was going to stop here, but I suppose I can tell you how my fate came to be.
After I put the cartridge in, the game started. Everything looked normal, except that the hills and the clouds had a slight redish tinge to them. I opened the file selection, and there was a save file on the game already. The name of the file was…
SAVE FILE 1!
I bet you weren’t expecting that.
Anyways, I loaded the file, and went to the level with the first yoshi in it. I was walking, and as you may expect, I have played super mario world some form or another, and I know that this wasn’t here. There was A small red hill, with a very dark red pipe on the top. The first thing somebody would think would be “Something in a video game can’t hurt me. It’s just a video game!” Those people can keep believing that.
At that time, I believed that too. so I went down the pipe. I thought it would be some bootleg-glitch secret. But something was wrong when I was falling for around 30 seconds. When I hit the ground, Bowser was there watching me. I was seriously freaked, so I lunged for the power button. all of the sudden, text popped up on the screen saing “You wouldn’t want to do that, would you?” and the power button was deactivated.
Mario and Bowser were on screen, glaring straight at me. More text popped up saying “You want a suprise? Here!” And bowser pulled out a portal gun. (LOL :P) He blasted the floor under me and then he blasted above the lava. You can probably figure out what happened next.
To this day, I am a boo, guarding Bowser Castle. My home is in the 9th room. If any explorer finds my diary, share my story with the world.
-Bowser Castle Boo #453
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he obviously could have done a better job with making the creepy pasta.this belongs in crappy pasta.net!
oh,suuure.im sure mario pulled out a magical banana phone too!i mean,come on.bowser pulling out a portalgun?thats just retarded.if i could give it negatives,id give it -10/10!
Does anybody here even know what a trollpasta is?
Talk about a ripoff…
This was REALLY cliche. When it came to the part where he said the cartridge sticker was scratched off with only those letters, and he rearranged them and they spelled MURDER, I was like: “Of COURSE they would spell MURDER.” (that was clever, though). I don’t know if it’s supposed to be scary or scary…
its worse then the worst crappypasta!
i agree.my thoughts:TOMAHAWK CHOOOOP!!!*destroys PC*
The only way I made it through this, was by telling myself “it’s a parodypasta” over and over.
But even as a parody this was just awful. Not very funny, and a bit stupid. There was a bit of potential, as I feel a parodypasta requires cliche elements in order to work, but this was just… no.
W T F.
the fact that there was a lack of detail and quite a bit of humor just made this sad. Portal gun… really? and then (lol :P) what the what?
W.T.F.?
The beginning was okay but once you got to the spelling out murder part it was like you just gave up on it.
Awful. Seriously bad.
Was there any effort put into this at all? Using things like “(LOL :P)” in the middle of a story is really unacceptable. I voted this 1/10. Please never attempt to write again… it really isn’t your forte.
weres the game
well,these arent ALL real.some are,because i have seen the satanic message on sonic CD,i have seen sonic.exe and ben drowned.but THIS!?!?!?no.a portal gun.that game,mario was from like 1990s or something.portal came in probably 2010 or 2009 idk but seriously.this was the begining of $#!tty pasta.worst creepy pasta ever
I don’t like it, nothing good about it at all -.-
This was probably ment to be a joke.
But still kinda nice
it wasn’t really real. it kinda sucked but i say 49 out of 100
That was the most anti-climatic ending ever…
I really hope that this was made before crappypasta and you are just being funny…
I actually thought this was real until it said “bowser pulled out a portal gun Ii was like ”WTF” XD
You know, I expected more out of this. You were doing alright, up until you obviously got bored and ruined it. I mean really, a portal gun? That was just pathetic.
youre absolutely right!
i mean portal guns cant possibly be in mario.
your right, and then this —> (lol :P) was he even trying?!
theres not really anything good about this creepy pasta,and i am in a room,nothing to do,bored outa my mind,and this doesnt even interest me!
1 LAST thing.when he said,”SAVE FILE 1!
betcha werent expecting that.”actually,yeah.we were kinda expecting that
cool fucker
This was terrible 0.5/10
one question, if you are in a mario cartirage how did you go on creepypasta and write this story?
1 out of 10
It was funny; not worth my time, but it was funny
To be honest I thought it was ok with kind of a bland ending. (I did laugh at the “save file 1” part to be honest :P) Anyways I don’t think it deserves bashing. The funny thing though is the way all the comments are overlooking that it’s parodypasta and are all getting so angered at the simple story. I laughed at that. So in a way you kind of won without winning. Good job! :D
ooooh, i’m so scared. i may never play SMW again… NOT!
Fuuck. Im out of knifes to stick in your back. And my special knife for creepy pastas that suck is missing.
FUUUUUUUUUUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK”
Ooo dragon ball. MY GOKU, GOHAN, VEGETA, AND TRUNKS, AND KRILLIN, AND NOT CHICHI. FUCK THA HATERZ.
Why isn’t this on CrappyPasta?
Sorry but your pasta gave me food poisoning. P.S. Try again
and why a PORTAL GUN. nintendo and valve don’t mix. i should know too
When the systelian spectre and the jvk mod pastas are finished, this guy has the balls to write the haunted save!