One More For The Orphan
| Published on Creepypasta.com | May 2008 |
|---|---|
| Length | 528 words · about 2 minutes to read |
| Story level | Short |
| Reader rating | 8.5/10 from 584 votes |
| Category | Deaths, Murders, and Disappearances |
In a small orphanage in a small village in Russia, there is a young boy. His hair is jet black, and messy, and he tattered jeans and an old dingy grey shirt.
Nothing is known of him. For 10 years, he sat in the bed in his room, never moving, never blinking, never eating or sleeping. In the 10 years, he has not seemed to age at all, continuing to look like a 7 year old boy. The only thing that proved he was alive is the slow rise and fall of his chest as he breathes, and the refusal to take his eyes off anyone who enters the room alone.
A lone psychiatrist came over in an attempt to find out why the boy had done nothing in 10 years. He entered the room, and shut the door behind him.
30 minutes later, the orphanage’s nurse came to check on the 2 of them. Opening the door, she saw the child, still sitting, still not moving, eyes fixed on her. However, something seemed different. He appeared a slight amount larger, not by much, but enough to make him look like a late 8 or early 9 year old. The psychiatrist was no longer in the room. The door was the only exit, as the room had no windows, vents, or anything, and it was, in fact, in the exact center of the orphanage.
He continued to sit, only seen occasionally by the lady who came in to check on him, and she never closed the door upon entry.
Also read: A Christmas Feast
A week or so later, 2 law enforcement personnel entered the orphanage, demanding to speak to the boy about the disappearance of the psychiatrist. The 2 of them entered, closing the door behind him, as the head of the orphanage stood outside the door.
30 minutes passed, and not a sound came from the room. The Head eased the door open. The boy was still on the bed, but the officers where no longer there. The boy was know quite noticeably bigger, about the size of a 15 year old. His skin was darker than usual, and he looked angrier than ever. But one thing remained the same: His cold, unforgiving eyes that stared at whoever entered.
Eventually, the law organized a large group of 10 officers to speak to the boy. They entered the room, and left the door open, until one of the younger orphans ran up and shut it, apparently in a daze.
The head quickly ran to re-open the door, and upon doing so froze him in horror. A low rumbling noise came from the room….
“…..One….more….”
If you return to that orphanage, you will see it still continues to run. The orphans live in good care, health, and education. However, there is one room, that you sill see is boarded up, and far from enterable. If you ask what is behind it, you will be removed forcefully from the orphanage.
However, when no one’s looking, if you place you’re ear to the door, you will hear a low ominous growling sound, and if you listen for a bit, you will hear….
“…..One…..more….”
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hi ur all retawded hehehehehe i feel pretty so very pretty. FACK U BIG BOI
this is okay
it’s not very scary but…
bricks were still shat
OM NOM NOM
SEND MOAR COPS
He eats ’em up?
Nice.
OMG ITS VOLDEMORT!!!
BUT WHAT DID HE EAT?!?!?!`1`1
but, THEN WHO WAS HUNGER?
inigo,i think hes got its use correct,im not sure though,ill ahve to check some time,i nthe meantime ,while i wait,i msut get ready,fore a date
he gangbangs them to dead? and eat them? XD
However, when no one’s looking, if you place you’re ear to the door, you will hear a low ominous growling sound, and if you listen for a bit, you will hear….
“……Im…a….barbie…..girl…in…my…barbie….world….”
To #19:
You keep using that word. I do not think it means what you think it means.
A little orphan boy? In Russia? Wearing JEANS?! Inconceivable!
*cough*
That point aside, I liked this story too. It seemed original, to say the least.
hello, my name is not inigo Montoya, and you did not kill my father, but prepare to die anyway. that is what inigo will say in the sequel
hehe, i can just see the kid turnng and eating the people with one gulp…
So, he started off young, and then got older every time he ate people. Creepy.
I want to go there with a gun, rip off those boards, shooting anyone who tries to stop me, and thow someone in and close the door. Then open it, and know I have unleashed something upon the world.
D:
to emogirl.
he’ll upload a wiki page about who was phone.
@emogirl
He stops time if he gets one more
WHAT IS HE? WHAT IS HE?
Some sort of werewolf?
Werewolves doesn’t grow older when eats people so it would be more like a sort of reverse queen of succubes
a demon! He absorbs the life force of others to become stronger. read the name and be ashamed.
Cannabull? Cannibal? OH SH-
What the hell happens if he gets one more person, dammit?
You should go in there and ask him. Just make sure the door doesn’t close behind you.
Not scary whats so ever,
just a stupid cannabull.
Stupid to say the least.
One of my least favorites.
Judge it after you learn to spell cannibal and it’s not a cannibal since he goes so long without anything then grows after consumption I’d say he’s some sort of demonic being be a bit creative before posting stupid comments
If you don’t like it, then why bother commenting on it? By the way, leaving hateful comments on a story, especially in a poem form that isn’t even very good, is “Stupid to say the least.”
-Herobrine
Always watching…
“….I’m the Juggernaut, bitch…..”
wut
Of course by then the orphanage kicked him out for being too old.
Not as good as the other one, but still very nice.
9/10.
This is my third favorite story, and Havok has just won an internet.
If you return to that orphanage, you will see it still continues to run. The orphans live in good care, health, and education. However, there is one room, that you sill see is boarded up, and far from enterable. If you ask what is behind it, you will be removed forcefully from the orphanage.
However, when no one’s looking, if you place you’re ear to the door, you will hear a low ominous growling sound, and if you listen for a bit, you will hear….
“…..I’m the Juggernaut, bitch….”
f**king lol
When no ones is looking, if you place your ear to the door, you will hear a low ominous growling sound…
Smartmouth options
and you will call SPCA.
orrrrr
and then, “Damn, how long is this going to take.”
Really good. I really liked it.
Although I imagine he’s no longer the little boy that he once was. He should probably move out and get a job.
VERY well written, my favorite so far.
I shat bricks. Thank you for that opportunity!
Out of all of them, this is my favorite creepypasta :)