Noises
| Written by | LiamD |
|---|---|
| Published on Creepypasta.com | October 2012 |
| Length | 210 words · about 1 minute to read |
| Story level | Micro |
| Reader rating | 8.0/10 from 487 votes |
| Category | Deaths, Murders, and Disappearances |
She was holding his hand tightly when he heard a noise come from off in the shadows. Beyond the ring cast from the solitary light above he could see only darkness. She must have sensed his sudden distress as she placed her hand against his chest.
Again a noise, it sounded closer this time, they weren’t alone in this park. Her heart was racing now to match his. He didn’t speak as to hear better and gave her a look, her eyes were wide open now, she must have heard it too.
The noise came again, something was moving in the bushes. The glint of eyes caught the light for just a second, he turned to meet her stare, she must have seen it too. Doom came over her in a wave, she tried to break away, to run, but he held her close. The noise of rustling leaves and movement came again as it came into the light.
The cat stopped and studied them for a second before it re-entering the darkness. He sighed with relief and tightened his grip on her throat as he slid the knife from her chest. Her grip slackened and he smiled as he watched the life extinguish from her eyes.
Credit To: LiamD
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Now THAT was a crazy awesome pasta!
talk about a sick twist….
BUT WHO WAS DARKNESSS
This has happened to me before…were you spying on me?
Oh thank god, I thought the cat was the killer. Thank god it was just the boy.
Well… that escalated quickly
Wut.
PLOT TWIST!
i wish people would stop saying wut and who was. :) ik the comment section is supposed to be specialtarded but srsly.
*insert fart joke*
This wasn’t very good.
Interesting kinda confusing though
Wutttt
It’s weird that so many people say this is completely unpredictable. There are so many other stories like it on this site where the murderer, very specifically a murderer too, is scared of somehthing unknown whilst committing his or her crime. I remember one just the other day where two people kidnapped a man for ransom and when his family wouldn’t pay, they bashed his head in. It hard to ask for something original please?
Didnt see that coming. Very nice
What a twist i was confuse at the end. It was kind of predictable. GREAT PASTA (=
Very nice ending i like the twist at the end. Even though it was confusing at some point. This is a great pasta.
Very nice ending i love the twist at the end. Perfect pasta even though it was very confusing at some point which i hate that.
I actually had a feeling that would be the ending from the first line in the second paragraph. ‘m not saying it was predictable, but that I happened to guess right.
is it wrong that i actually thought the ending was funny? Also first
Very nice! Awesome twist at the end, reminding me of another recent pasta nom, nom, nom
Oh my God! Great twist! This is in my opinion exactly the kind of story Pasta needs. Perfect, short, well written, and with a devastating twist. Loved it. 10.
I thought they were doing it in the beginning it was very confusing I hate it
I thought they were doing it in the beginning it was very confusing I hate it
What a twist!
(I hate it) sorry. :P
I cannot deny that I love the idea of a scary murderer, being scared and paranoid as the victim is. I also enjoy shorter pasta’s that mislead me like R.L. Stine did to me, soooo many times in the past. 8/10
:o
not…expecting that.
What da hell…????!
Must admit, this one made me smile. Nice twist.