Super Mario: The Haunted Save
| Published on Creepypasta.com | August 2012 |
|---|---|
| Length | 556 words · about 3 minutes to read |
| Story level | Short |
| Reader rating | 4.5/10 from 4,937 votes |
| Category | Artifacts and Objects |
I was bored. I was super duper bored. It was January 4th, and my new years resolution was to finish ALL my video games by today. Now that I have done that, I had no new things to play. All of the sudden, I got an e-mail on my phone. I opened it.
The e-mail had no words in the “from” bar at the top. The subject was “Get old bootleg SNES cartridges! Only in today’s e-auction!” Intrigued at the sound of new video games, I went to the e-auction.
The first few games I had no clue what they were, so I sort of got bored watching the screen. I was about to close the site, when I saw the text saying “Bootleg Super Mario World” pop up. I decided to get it, and won.
2 weeks later, I got the Super Mario World cartridge in the mail. I was, once again intrigued when I saw most of the label was torn off of the cartridge. The only letters not torn off were: U, E, R, M, R, and D. I immediately put all the letters together and tried to think of something. After a while, I came up with one word: MURDER.
Obviously, I still put in the cartridge, something I still regret to this day. Not that I can feel depressed anymore. After all, doesn’t the word on the cartridge say it all? I was going to stop here, but I suppose I can tell you how my fate came to be.
After I put the cartridge in, the game started. Everything looked normal, except that the hills and the clouds had a slight redish tinge to them. I opened the file selection, and there was a save file on the game already. The name of the file was…
SAVE FILE 1!
I bet you weren’t expecting that.
Anyways, I loaded the file, and went to the level with the first yoshi in it. I was walking, and as you may expect, I have played super mario world some form or another, and I know that this wasn’t here. There was A small red hill, with a very dark red pipe on the top. The first thing somebody would think would be “Something in a video game can’t hurt me. It’s just a video game!” Those people can keep believing that.
At that time, I believed that too. so I went down the pipe. I thought it would be some bootleg-glitch secret. But something was wrong when I was falling for around 30 seconds. When I hit the ground, Bowser was there watching me. I was seriously freaked, so I lunged for the power button. all of the sudden, text popped up on the screen saing “You wouldn’t want to do that, would you?” and the power button was deactivated.
Mario and Bowser were on screen, glaring straight at me. More text popped up saying “You want a suprise? Here!” And bowser pulled out a portal gun. (LOL :P) He blasted the floor under me and then he blasted above the lava. You can probably figure out what happened next.
To this day, I am a boo, guarding Bowser Castle. My home is in the 9th room. If any explorer finds my diary, share my story with the world.
-Bowser Castle Boo #453
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First of all I liked it….
alittle. It was good. I’ve seen better. I’ve seen worst.
This one made me laugh. It was a little bit overly trollish and I think it could have been subtler and still pretty funny.
you needed to add creppy crap after creepy crap and at the end did you turn into a boo or some thing..
PS:WHO WAS MY A SPICY MEATBALLA!
I didnt like this story but you can do better i now you can i trust you
You wouldn’t want to do that, would you?
sounds a lot like “You shouldn’t have done that” Majoras Mask, Ben Drowned. O.o
To say this in the best way I can, this was bad. The idea was interesting but the way it was executed failed entirely. This should never have been accepted. We don’t want shit pasta, we want Creepy Pasta.
Epic comment at the end.
“We don’t want shit pasta, we want Creepy Pasta”
hahaha
Only DR EVIL has a portal gun!
Seriously though… how the fuck can you use “LOL” in a creepy pasta
DR EVIL will zap this with a portal gun!
What a horribly written story! I’m going to give this a serious comment about how not scary and stupid this is because I’m too stupid to see this pasta is a joke
Oh my god.
First thing.
This pasta tasted terrible.
What did you do? Make it out of Paula Dean’s hair?
Just because she’s a chef doesn’t mean she is made of food.
It’s frozen.
Unoriginal.
The meatballs arn’t even real meat.
Why is the sauce blue?!
You just went full retard. don’t EVER go full retard.
all of the sudden? really?
Lmfao @ pasta noobs who can’t fathom the idea of trollpasta. I suppose they also think the longer the pasta, the better it is. ;P Now I’m gonna go look at the comments on "WHO WAS PHONE?!" to see how many people took it seriously, too.
Spoilers: The WWP comment section will make you mourn the apparently dead concept of ‘sense of humour’.
Actually, almost any parodypasta – even though they’re all marked as such – get a ridiculous amount of comments taking them incredibly seriously. It absolutely baffles me.
I think this was actually a good trollpasta. :D
This story is complete crap
This was pretty terrible, but the portal reference threw me off guard so, good on ya! 1 out of 10 (cuz of the portal reference.)
Anyone who has to put (LOL) or any other abbreviation like this in a story deserves to have their hands cut off. Horrid story, super rushed, even as a parody it just plain blew goats. 0/10 See me after class.
I Agree With Disaace. You Could Have Worked On It A Little More, Even Though The LOL and Emotcon Could Have Been Omitted Entirely.
No.
Had serious potential until the portal gun. Weak.
I didn’t enjoy this at all.
I found this strangely cute :s
this made me laugh my ass off XD I love how everyone is taking the story seriously, critiquing it, etc. Man, people need to take the panties wedged in their derrieres.
its a copy of Ben drowned.
I’m sorry to inform you but story was not well executed. it needed more plot than what it had. and one more thing if your gonna have Bowser kill you by bringing you into the game at least you could have him use something from the game series he’s apart of, for example a magic flute or a warp pipe.
in my opinion it had very little suspense you need to build up to the grand finish more. do you know that jaws theme song the real version starts out peacefully quiet because the composer every time his concerts were held after a meal which made everyone end up falling asleep during the concerts he composed jaws to lure them to sleep to his quiet melody then once the were all asleep he had his entire orchestra play the theme song to jaws to shock his audience awake that’s what suspense is about
The end didnt make sence but the plot was a good idea. I dont like to be mean but this story was REALLY rushed. Take some time to revise your stories people. You could end up changing every word.
i fucking hate you (but love the whole portal thing)
I hate you. That is all I have to say.
Nice parodypasta, okay beginning…body’s pretty good…
AND THEN A PORTAL GUN POPPED OUT OF NOWHERE
at first, shit creeped me out big time. ever since my early childhood i’ve had this bizarre recurring nightmare about this wario world game that couldn’t be shut off with a power button, or even when the tv is unplugged and all this weird shit happens in the game.
but then i kept reading. smh u suk
It made me laugh my ass off so much! I was absolutely terrified all night and now I’m laughing. I love you ok
how the fuck is this funny is it the part where bowser pulls out a portal gun
This made me laugh so hard.
This story is not creepy…-_- it makes me feel like i want to play mario games.