Willow Men
There’s a local legend where I come from. They’re simply referred to as the willow men.
There’s hardly a need for the law enforcement in this town. The willow men take care of all that. Every single step taken, every word spoken, every drop of blood spilt.. The willow men know about it before anyone else. Believe me, anyone that has invoked the wrath of the willow men has gone missing without a trace.
That’s why when I realized what I had done it was too late. The willow men were coming.
She just wouldn’t shut the hell up. No matter what I said and what I would do she was just hysterical. She kept pacing about the house screaming. She said she found this and that and knew I was cheating on her. She’d ask me who it was and I told her she was crazy. I guess I wore that excuse out. After a while, I couldn’t take her damn voice anymore. I’d walk room to room and she’d follow me. When we got to the kitchen I had my fill.
I reached for the first knife I could find and jammed it into her throat. The face of anger and sorrow melted into one of despair and disbelief. The crimson fluid ran freely all over her blouse and she dropped to her knees, scrambling around on the floor. She clawed at the tile and made gurgling noises which only served to infuriate me. I grabbed an iron skillet that had been pre-heating on the stove and took a swing at her head. A wet crack followed the impact and while I didn’t need to keep going I did.
I lost count of the number of times I hit her but I had a good deal of blood on me. What was left of her head was being held together by thin particles of bone and blood continued to rush out. I dropped the skillet to the floor with a loud clang. I wish remorse could have followed so I would’ve felt a least a bit human but it didn’t. I was just happy to be rid of her. With a grunt I picked her body up off the floor and hoisted it unto my shoulder. Her face hung next to me, dead eyes staring with conviction. I could only chuckle. As soon as I got outside, I dropped the ragged heap onto the ground and went to find a shovel. That’s when I knew they were watching.
I could hear the whispers from the woods and in the corners of my eyes I could see them staring intently at my every move. Whenever I would look up to the woods I would find only gnarled trees staring back at me. I knew they were there. It was dusk by the time she was good and buried. I was drenched in sweat and it had made the blood stains on my clothes expand and turn orange. I looked back up to the woods and I saw them peering from behind the trees. Long, gnarled faces with hollow eyes and gaunt figures. I could only half see the faces as they chose to hide behind their precious trees but they were there. Watching, whispering…
“What are you staring for, bastards?! You heard her! I had to do it,” I yelled at them.
Was I expecting a response? I don’t know. They just continued to watch me from behind the trees. I spit on the ground and threw the shovel down. They would come for me under cover of darkness and I wasn’t going without a fight. I stole away into the house and prepared. I pushed couches and dressers in front of doorways. I nailed wooden boards haphazardly to cover all the windows. As the sun crept underneath the horizon a great trepidation settled in the pit of my stomach. Was it honestly nerves? I hated to think it was such a powerful fear that I would start breaking into an ice cold sweat. I loaded up my shotgun and reached for a bottle of whiskey. I forced down a mouthful and then another and slammed the rest of the bottle against the wall in frustration.
One door I left open. It was the back door that stared out to the woods. I put a chair down in front of it and sat, shotgun in my lap. They were still staring at me. The willow men. We stayed staring at one another for three days. Eventually, exhaustion began to get the best of me and I started to nod off. I tried desperately to keep my eyes open. For a foolish second I propped my head up with the shotgun so that it wouldn’t fall. I snapped back to reason and lifted my head high. Last thing I wanted to do was shoot myself. Had I known what was coming I probably should have.
I pushed myself to stay up for a few more hours. The day came and went and it was the dead of night before I knew it. They persisted behind the trees. I began to rationalize that if I closed my eyes for a second, I could have enough time to open them while the willow men were coming at me so I could take a few down. Smiling I did just that. Of course, its’ difficult to tell how long you were asleep. Could be a second, could be for days. I opened my eyes again and found I was still sitting in my chair with my shotgun in my lap. I snapped up when I saw that the willow men were no longer behind the trees. I flipped out and held the shotgun up, darting around barrel first. I took a few steps outside and tried to control my heavy breaths. I shook damn near uncontrollably and found it impossible to keep the gun steady.
I began to calm down when I didn’t see anything outside and began to return to my post when I stopped dead in my tracks. I felt tears well in my eyes and something began to push up and out of my throat. The willow men were peering from around the doorway and the sides of the house. I froze staring at their gnarled up faces and branch-like hands. I had to do something. I pulled the gun up and fired off a round. It managed to take out part of the door frame but it missed any of them altogether. I popped open the shotgun and madly grasped for a fresh shell in my pocket. I successfully reloaded it and lifted the gun back up.
The willow men continued to look at me from where they had been. I took careful aim this time and fired once more. Another shot hit the doorframe this time although closer to the willow men. I fumbled for a third round and as I did, I saw a large shadow cover me. Looking up, the willow men were upon me. I screamed and closed the barrel down on my thumb effectively severing it. Immediately after that, I lost all consciousness and collapsed.
When I awoke, it was ice cold. My vision began to return to me slowly and I could feel that I was being dragged. My heart sank when I looked around. Darkness stretched as far as the eye could see and I knew I was in the deepest part of the woods. Where my thumb had once been was black and swollen and had managed to numb up to my forearm. My ankles were in severe pain too but I didn’t know why. When I looked, I saw that they had been clearly snapped and the willow men were dragging me by my feet. I began to scream as loudly as possible for someone, anyone.
All I did was cause more willow men to appear and watch me from behind the strangest willow trees I’d ever seen. Their trunks were small and looked just like leather. The earth around them was red and moist yet where I was being dragged was dry, rugged land. I looked up to the canopy and wish I hadn’t. Skinless corpses hung down, blood dripping freely to feed what I now knew were flesh-bound trees. My screams were swallowed by the dark and my throat gave out, hoarse from the strain. In the silence, I heard a faint moaning.
I looked around to see if there was someone else here. Maybe some poor bastard who suffered my same fate. To my horror, I discovered the source of the moans. The bodies hanging on the branches of the trees were all still alive. Soon, I too would have my flesh torn asunder and be damned to hang up there and feed the hungry willow trees. There was nothing I could but accept my fate. The willow men had me.
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Credited to Vel.
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I can honestly say that I fucking LOVE this pasta.
Tim Burton and Eli Roth should get together and turn this into a cinematic orgasm.
Cool Story Bro
BUT THEN WHO WAS WILLOW
There’s one major thing that ruined this story for me….
It mentioned that they’d wait for ‘cover of darkness’ to attack… and so he stayed awake for three days
Question: Why not sleep during the day, then be rested and actually able to deal with the tree folk when night rolls around?
To fight something that’s nocturnal, why not BECOME nocturnal?
that was really kewl
great pasta dude, i think you should carry on with the story. i want to now more.
its not bad, not bad at all; i just have a few comments
1 can they really be just a local legend if they are seemingly relied upon for law enforcement
2 three days is a LONG ass time to be awake staring at some tree people
3 the violence in the murder was a bit over the top i felt
4 i feel like part of the scary factor in these stories (for me at least) is empathy for the main character and the idea that it could happen to you; the fact that the main character killed his wife, especially like that, makes him not someone you feel sorry for, or someone you can relate to
Thanks you bastard
>:[
This one freaked me the eff out!!!
You have managed to create suspense and terror. 9/10
woah scary stuff!
This would make a great movie!
wow, that was rough! awesome! i don’t exactly get the willow men part all that well but the part at the end where the willow men ate the still alive people, wow, scary. I’d hate to have cops like that in our town.
Dirjel obviously knows what he’s talking about…. Damn grammatical errors. Especially on the internet? God forbid!
LOLOLOL
The know-it-all commenter is more predictable than anything i’ve read on here.
I thought it was great. :)
@ ?! : dont u see? the big tree IS the willow lady. She’s the boss.
good past gooood.^^ nice visual images at the end, yesh.
Those who said this was anything like the Village are dumbfucks. The only resemblance is that there are things in the woods.
This story was actually well written. Those who bitch about grammatical errors and don’t point them out make themselves look bad.
The guy in this story was the dumbest guy ever for every reason- he did not do a single intelligent thing the entire time.
I also agree with WHARRGARBL. The creepiest things are things that happen to average folk.
However, I gave this story a four out of five. Why? Because it was described brilliantly. I did feel terror for this guy. He was so stupid, but when the willow men were watching him, watching him screw up, toying with him even, I got that sinking feeling in my gut. I knew something absolutely awful was going to happen to him- and it did. The concept was good, the details were good, the overall execution was average.
It was a good old gruesome folktale.
LOVED IT :D
ooo weird. it got alot better at the end. good shit
See, to me, what makes a pasta creepy is the “oh shit that could happen to your average guy like me” factor.
There’s absolutely none of that here because the guy had it coming to him, and so it’s a story about justice being served, and not some random guy getting singled out for supernatural horror.
my mom makes better pasta
quite good, i agree with media guys final word. Pretty good, only real flaw is inconsistancy
Wow, I really like this one!
Besides a few spots that seemed ill-fitting, it was actually a pretty entertaining pasta. The death at the beginning seemed to have very little motivation, though. It was different than the last handful of pastas I read, even though it’s pretty much a typical overly-gory supernatural demise sorta story.
And so what if he dies at the end and would be unable to write it? Then you wouldn’t be reading the story! That’s not the point!
it was pretty good, some people dont like this sort of thing, i kinda did, nice work.
its pretty okay i guess.. i actuually like it, i find it interesting. It reminds me of the movie by M. Knight Shamalan, “The Village”. But i didnt find this all too creepy. it needs a little more suspense, i mean it’s only long because of the describing-what-happened parts but it was moving by quite quickly. i am slightly dissapointed but it was good.
Awww…. It had potential :|
What a dumb protagonist. “Burn the forest down and pretend that it was nothing but a campfire gone horribly awry? No thanks, I’d prefer to sit here with a shotgun for four days to and then miss like a spaz when it actually came time to kill me some forest freaks.”
Awesome.
Love it!
So why didn’t the guy just drive away from his town?