• http://misterwelldone.wordpress.com Mr. Welldone

    Hello.

    Perhaps this is not a tale of the unnatural, yet it is wondrous nonetheless.

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    • WonkyTARDIS

      Funny for you to say that, Welldone. You’re the one here most likely to have opened that door.

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  • http://deleted Maran Doll

    OH SHIT.

    Remind me never to do this.

    Ohgod this creeped me the FUCK out for some reason. Ahhhh.

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    • Endoplasmic Reticulum

      I guess it might have been creepy for me exept for the fact that how does a door open for three hours strait without closing?

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      • Nebraska Jones

        Read the last sentence again.

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        • Pastamasta

          Straight * fuck it’s not even a hard word to spell

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  • YAHWEH

    Hehe, creepy stuff.

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  • http://www.youtube.com/user/P4INKiller P4INKiller

    I would indeed like to try this.

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  • Xantherian

    Well, this is certainly going to keep me up tonight.

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  • Z

    Creepy, and wonderfully done. Excellent.

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  • Ben

    This is creepy if you think “person a in bed, person b sneaking in” but the first thing I thought of was that the dude sleep walks.

    Doh.

    IN the right context though, nice n creepy. I was half expecting him to hear random tortuous screams though.

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    • rose

      Ya but wouldn’t there be floor boards creeking? Sheets rustling as he gets up? The padding of feet to the door? Maybe a key sign like he stops snoring or some type of movement? I mean that record player is very sensitive.

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      • Anonymous

        sounds like paranormal activity

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  • Dr.Creepy

    WHO WAS DOOR??

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  • Sigma

    Secret rape man rapes with the stealth of a puma.

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    • Nebraska Jones

      “Secret rape man”
      I don’t think that’s a thing.

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      • Amy

        I certainly hope not! :(

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  • Shuriken

    This one scared the shit out of me and I don’t know why… Just unexpected I guess. I was expecting demon screams or something…

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  • Miss Betterdone

    This one was perfect. Just…perfect.

    My heart literally skipped a beat when I read it.

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  • Ma Cherie

    Yeeeeaah.

    Right now, I’m glad I have a habit of locking the doors >.>

    I lol’d at Sigma’s comment.

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  • entropyblues

    I really enjoyed this. I like anything horrific that’s expressed by banal details; the ultra-specific time of the door opening makes it feel all the more real.

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  • Devon

    I did this once, recording myself sleeping. The creepiest thing I got was a few voices that I didn’t recognize. Scared the crap outta me.

    Tasty pasta. If someone entered my room in the middle of the night without me knowing, I would move immediately.

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  • Comment Leaver

    oooooh. Nice one.

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  • The!1one!!!1!one

    shit……. never read these late at night in the dark.

    *switches on all lights in the house and drinks coffee*

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  • TMM

    Nice and simple.

    Scared the hell out of me.

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  • Anonymous

    Lol he sleep walks

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  • The Joker

    Very nice

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  • Anonymous

    Not scary; mostly because I live in a place so windy that doors opening and closing at night are common place during the summer because the windows are open

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  • GwaGwa

    gee… your mom walks into your room in the middle of the night.
    creepy…

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  • N.E.

    Damn, for some reason, this creeped me out more than it should have… O.o

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  • No one

    wow, this one actually scared me. the only other pasta to have this effect on me was white with red.

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  • Anonymous

    @#21: The pasta clearly states he lives alone.

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  • Anonymous

    The wind could have blew the door open somewhat. If you said “the sound of the door opening and
    the creaking of footsteps with a faint sound of one unzipping their pants. Within 10 seconds he began to hear struggling noises as the bed began to pound against his bedroom wall.

    LOL

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