A Warning
I’m doing this for you. And for Mike, too, I guess, though I don’t think there’s much I can do to help him at this point.
I suppose I should provide some background information first. I’m a sophomore in a fairly good university in Boston – no, not MIT or Harvard, but still one that’s a bit of a chore to get into. My freshman year, I had the option to live in honors housing and decided to roll with it; after all, at least the people would be interesting. Whatever arcane algorithm they use to process roommate requests took in my preferences and spat out the name of my future roommate: Mike, just another random honors kid from St. Louis. The two of us got along fine for most of freshman year – my enjoyment of Miley Cyrus notwithstanding-and so we decided to room together sophomore year as well.
Now, Mike had always been a pretty obsessive guy. He tended to bounce around in his interests; one week, he would devour entire series of anime, only to later start watching random online episodes of Mystery Science Theater 3000, and then begin working his way through the archives of the hottest new webcomic. And, of course, like any real obsessive, he would keep me posted on his latest craze. I humored him; what else are roommates for?
One day earlier this week, he started telling me random scary stories. You know, those random things you find on message boards-I think his main source ended up being some site called “creepypasta” (I never understood why pasta could be creepy, but whatever). I’d hear about a med student eating an arm, or someone being autopsied alive, or some random youtube video that will drive you insane. We usually had a good laugh about them.
The third day of this obsession, however, things got weird. He threw a few more stories my way before hitting the sack, but something seemed a little off. His voice had a sharp edge to it. As the hour got later, his banter got more and more inane, as though he were talking just to stave off having to go to sleep. Eventually, I pointedly got into my bed and rolled over, effectively ending any further chance at conversation. I wish I hadn’t.
I sleep like a log, and that night was no exception. I don’t think I even came close to waking. Usually I can’t remember any of my dreams, but the nightmare I had that night has been clear in my mind for days now. I dreamt I was trapped in a fog so dense I couldn’t see my hand in front of my face. The damp air sent chills down my spine. I could hear muffled screams in the distance. There didn’t seem to be any words, just guttural shrieks of pain. Instantly (don’t ask me how), I recognized the screams as Mike’s. I tried my best to run to him, but my feet just slid through the fog; I couldn’t get any real traction on the ground, if there indeed was any ground. The screams got further away and more indistinct, though I could still tell they were Mike’s. Eventually, they faded to nothing and I woke up.
And every last trace of Mike was gone from the room.
Everything. His laptop, his sheets, the “Official Zombie Survival” guide poster on the wall, the heap of trash he let accumulate on his half of the windowsill-everything. A thick layer of dust coated his entire side of the room. Absolutely nothing on my side of the room had been touched-nor had any of his stuff in the bathroom, the kitchen, or the living room of our suite. Only in the bedroom had anything been taken.
I couldn’t believe it. I prayed it was a dream. I pinched my elbow until the skin was red, until my fingernails drew blood. When I didn’t wake up, I dialed campus security, who quickly brought in the Boston Police Department. I was immediately kicked out of the room so they could go over everything with a fine-toothed comb.
I think I must have been in shock. I felt completely numb, like nothing around me really mattered. I’d left my laptop out in our suite’s common room, so I used that to distract myself-or to try to, at any rate. When I popped open the laptop, however, a word document stared at me. Its text was the following:
‘I know this is stupid. I can’t help but think how much I’ll regret this in the morning, but for some reason I’m genuinely scared and I feel like this is the only way I can tell someone why. So here goes: earlier, I was scouring the ‘net for short horror stories-you know, rituals, tales of scary places, and the like. I came across this…warning, I guess it was. I won’t say what, and I won’t say where, for fear of you finding it yourself. Suffice it to say it sent chills down my spine, something not much has managed to do. Still, as has become my habit, I just clicked on the next hyperlink, going ever farther down the rabbit hole.
The warning stayed with me, though. In the back of my head, just nibbling away, waiting until I would focus on something else to rear its ugly head. This was irrational, I knew; my mind was just playing tricks on me. Some ancestral fear had been played upon, some age-old nightmare that was just that-a nightmare, no more and no less. But that didn’t make the fear go away. Only when I looked at the clock to see how long I had until you got back that it dawned on me I had passed the time alloted me by the warning to stop what was coming (any vagueness is out of concern for you, I promise).
And then the real anxiety kicked in. My palms started to sweat, and my eyes refused to stay closed for more than a second at a time. All my hairs stood on end, and I could feel my heart rate start to increase. Instantly, I knew that the warning had been real. And I had failed to heed it. My time was limited.
It was about then that you got back from the TV station. I was so glad to see someone else, I can’t imagine how I sounded. Finally, someone to fight off the dark with, a companion against the now terrifying night. But clearly you weren’t interested; your yawns were a dead giveaway. You headed to bed, and I (to stave off sleep a little longer) decided to write you this. Do me a favor – if I’m wrong, forget this ever happened. If I’m right…warn them.’
So that’s what I’m doing. I’m warning you. Just be careful. Next time you go on an archive binge at creepypasta, or start checking the horror thread of your favorite discussion board, or even just try googling “creepy stories,” if you feel a chill run down your spine at some warning you’ve never read before you might want to heed it. If you decide not to, however – if you just click on your merry way-please tell Mike I’m sorry I couldn’t get to him in the fog.
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It was way too vague for my taste, more detailed would have made a better read.
were is the scaryness nothing but him disappearing scary
Everyone else is saying this pasta isn’t good…?! This is one of the best ones I’ve ever read. (Only shortly behind Suicide Squidward, Suicide Mouse, and You shouldn’t have done that o.o) The ending scared the hell out of me, and I really love the way you left it vague. I do wish I knew what the warning was though o:
Amazing pasta is amazing. 10/10 <3
Referencing creepypasta on a creepypasta site kind of makes the whole thing lose its effect.
I really liked it, this is my first pasta, but I like the idea of reading and before you realize that what you\’re reading is actually a warning telling you not to read warnings on the website you\’re reading the warning, i still have chills.
I really liked it, this is my first pasta, but I like the idea of reading and before you realize that what you’re reading is actually a warning telling you not to read warnings on the website you’re reading the warning, i still have chills.
“I came across this…warning, I guess it was. I won’t say what, and I won’t say where, for fear of you finding it yourself. Suffice it to say it sent chills down my spine, something not much has managed to do. Still, as has become my habit, I just clicked on the next hyperlink, going ever farther down the rabbit hole.”
Oh my god! The same thing happened to me, and now I shall be stuck reading TVTropes until the end of time.
Ha, Mike kinda sounds like ME: I always bounce around with my fandoms (or obsessions, whatever you want to call them). I just started reading creepypastas, loving them all the way.
This story, however, could have used a bit more OOMPH. Maybe a longer period depicting Mike’s fixation on creepypastas or even just a bit of dialogue between the narrator and Mike on the last night.
It’s alright, but not great.
!JACKIE!
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY :D
Sucked.
A LOT.
can someone explain the ending?
i feel stupid. will someone please explain the ending?
Good idea, but not very well executed. A disappointingly bland pasta.
4/10
i got that spine-chill tons of times already, and whatt ya ‘know!
im here posting this 3 days after reading the same “warning” 3 times XD
And noone will see Uboa’s real form, sorry Uboa.
Uboa: AAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaあああああああああああああああ
A decent pasta, kinda got me at the end with the “Shivers down the back” thing. Maybe coulda used some more detail at the end though…I give it 6.5/10. There have been some real good ones out there, but I’m afraid this one isn’t a classic.
For some reason I was REALLY into this and it freaked me out beyond belief…
Meh.
This was pretty “meh,” BUT…
I’ve fallen behind on my creepypasta reading, and this one is the last one on the RSS.
Awesome. Now, I’m gonna’ go backwards ’til I’m caught up :D
I feel like I might have enjoyed it if the ending wasn’t evident halfway into it.
And I went on a creepypasta binge for a while because of paranoia from a few other stories on here, but I’ve gotten over them. I suppose if I had read this a few weeks ago I would’ve been scared.
The idea of adding realistic elements, like creepy pasta and different college boy personalities was good.
The story wasn\’t TOO bad, but it wasn\’t great either.
I\’m honestly very confused by it.
I don\’t know, maybe I just got distracted and missed something,
but the end didn\’t make sense at all, and most of it was just
strange.
pasta was suddle but creepy..
good to not every story needs to be brick shitting scary
7/10
Ok… that was pretty lame. He just disappeared? Just like that? For reading shit? Come on. I would have gone a looooong time ago lol
Fine writing; well done :D
Feels more like sauce. Something that isn’t tasty unless combined with the right pasta
So, I think it’s good, but really depends on what you have recently read to have any sort of impact
Not impressive in the least.
Could have been better… It was a great concept.
I guess this one kind of creeps me out, though, because right now I\\\’m on a huge creepypasta binge… Being paranoid doesn\\\’t exactly help. Heh.
Pasta can in fact, be creepy. If cooked by the wrong person.
good concept. strange/poor execution