Scary Paranormal Stories & Short Horror Microfiction

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There is a doorway, one that can be any door, at any time. This door leads nowhere, yet there lies a realm of twisted reality to the opener. This door exists for everyone – some never encounter it in their lives, others unknowingly open it and step through. The problem is you can’t tell if the door is open to you, until years after you step through it. You’ll see them, and they’ll finally see you.

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  • CallofKtulu

    Yaya

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  • First poster

    PERTAMAX!

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  • The Person Frmerly Known as ‘Noneya’

    LOLWUT?

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  • http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=267338230 Rahhhh!

    Aha weird

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  • Mador Maero

    LOLWUT

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  • Mookster

    eh?

    and here I was praying it would be a parody of the ‘scary door’ parody off Futurama

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  • Disturbed

    haha i hope i never open that door.

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  • Cyarm

    BUT WHO WAS THEM?

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    • GummiBear4402

      More like WHAT WAS DOORWAY?

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  • Aguythathatesrap

    I dont understand, is PHONE talking about our usual doors?

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  • Aguythathatesrap

    Well, since this story is so vague, I’ll have to assume that it is talking about squirrels. Yes, I see squirrels and they see me… why is my name set to aguythathatesrap?

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  • jhhn

    lol im typing this on my ps3 ftw!!!!!!!!!!

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  • ktcv

    I dont get it…

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  • http://creepypasta.com Somone is here now

    But then WHO WAS THEM?

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  • Someone

    Then WHO WAS DOOR?!

    Haha, sorry, I couldn’t resist :]

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  • http://YoungAndCynical.wordpress.com Vince

    Oh Someone, you silly bastard.

    Nice pasta, back to basics I see.

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  • http://myspace.com/stuffed-animal-murder-scene@hotmail.com Abbey

    It like it.. >:)

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  • Anonymousity x 2

    Stop declaring that you’re the first poster or anything. It sickens me. Not like you get a prize from Phone anyway.

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  • Anonymousity x 2

    And I lol’d at this pasta.

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  • Anonymous

    John Dies At The End anyone?

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  • anon

    This sounds like it could be used as a teaser for John Dies At The End.

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  • Gorgonoth

    Very nice, this is similar to other works you’ve put in here with the unknowns. This story would have been a bit more unnerving if “they” had been referenced before the end of the story, or even if “they”, the unknown beings, could have been inferred from subtle hints. As it is, it focuses on the door, and not any entities that are behind it.

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  • greenshorts

    *rolls eyes*

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  • lolol

    Ohhhhh boy, another “Supernatural situation that you don’t know about untill it’s too late.” It’s just like that one about you being the one of 100,000 people missing where you’re the only one on the planet or where they tell you about that type of demon where you knowing of their existance makes them able to “get” you. It’s a pretty good concept that you’ve got here, but it might cause a night or two of “what if” hypotherical situations running around my head causing me to lose a medium amount of sleep. If you want an impression that lasts, specify what kind of door it is. I can garentee that more people will be freked out at the thought that they might enter another dimention the next time they open their bedroom door than being trapped in years of ignorant bliss.

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  • Snowden

    I’ve read this one so many times, but no matter how many times I read it it still sucks. “You’ll see them, and they’ll finally see you.” I know that a certain amount of ambiguity is creepy, but that was just stupid. This almost sounds like the climax of some sci-fi drama. There’s a much better version of this story where it talks about how the person that steps through the door never figures out that they’ve left, but the people that they left behind miss them. That last line is much scarier than this shit.

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  • SchizoAuthoress

    @24 – Doesn’t this site have that version, too? I could have sworn it was posted sometime earlier. (Or maybe I’m thinking of WAKE UP…I think “everyone misses you” in that pasta as well.)

    As for the pasta itself, I think it’s pretty much average. They can’t all be super scary. Nice effort, though.

    I’m glad we’ve gone back to shorter pastas…not that I dislike the long ones, but it’s nice to get some variety.

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