• Neobara

    It\\\’s 5 in the morning and i\\\’m sitting in a quiet halfway home for elderly schizophrenic people (where i work the night shift). This story is awesomely creepy because the little impish creature isn\\\’t an outright murderer so it\\\’s all the more eerie. 5 stars!

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    Rating: +117 (from 145 votes)
    • Kakarrot13

      Five stars out of ten?! :3

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      Rating: +7 (from 69 votes)
      • Anonymous

        no 5 out of 5

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        Rating: +32 (from 48 votes)
        • Anonymous

          When the furby thing said “I hope to take you there someday” or something like that, and the place is a graveyard, did it mean it wanted to kill him someday? Like not just take him there on a lovely stroll? Or is that just my interpretation of that line?

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        • Anonymous

          no he was trying to get the boy killed by jumping out the window or juggling knives and would take the corpse there.

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          Rating: +24 (from 36 votes)
        • Anonymous

          30+

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        • Anonymous

          8 out of 10

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        • http://itsfaythethedoctor.weebly.com TheLonelyGirlInTheCorner

          dude it deserves 10 out of 10 its a really good story

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    • Blue

      you should hear Cry read this… its completely terrifying

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      Rating: +43 (from 47 votes)
      • DrDJFoshizzleDawg

        Cry is awesome and makes every story he reads creepy

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        Rating: +25 (from 29 votes)
        • Anonymous

          Who’s Cry?

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          Rating: +1 (from 53 votes)
        • http://www.amazing Lauryn

          cry is so cool when he did this video it was so lol and if anyone gets a chance to go look at it and he also does others and i need some duck tape

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          Rating: +7 (from 19 votes)
        • Anonymous

          cry is caioticmokai on YouTube. Most people call him cry,he plays games with pewdiepie

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          Rating: -7 (from 35 votes)
        • http://creppypasta Someone

          He’s pewdewpies best freind

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          Rating: -3 (from 33 votes)
        • Hai

          Alot of people aren’t describing cry well. Cry is a youtube gamer and from time to time he reads stuff, mostly creepy pastas. He is best friends with pewdiepie which is also a youtube gamer. His youtube name is chaoticmonki so you can go subscribe to him. He has a really nice voice so that’s why many people like to hear the stories he reads. :)

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      • Angel

        This is soooo good!!

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        Rating: +3 (from 5 votes)
        • Bobfish

          I imagined him as a miniature demonic fregley

          You know from diary of a wimpy kid

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          Rating: +5 (from 17 votes)
      • Anonymous

        I frikkin Luv cry❤

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      • Anonymous

        And his sexy and scary voice makes it all even more creepier

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    • Mr. widemouth

      He’s the only one who didn’t want to be my friend…

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      Rating: +30 (from 42 votes)
      • Forever Alone Five Year Old

        Why didn’t you come visit me when I lived in that house :'(

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        Rating: +12 (from 18 votes)
      • Anonymous

        …. *pokerface* well… you tried to kill him… what did you expect?

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        Rating: +7 (from 11 votes)
      • Anonymous

        Aw Widemouth ill be your friend ;)
        ~ Jess, Jeff’s Daughter

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        Rating: -7 (from 19 votes)
    • k good

      Lol currently sitting on a Geri psych unit at 5am I also work nights. Coincidence? I think not.

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    • Bobfish

      I Wonder what Happens to miniature demonic dolls
      In a microwave Set on Full Power…

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      Rating: +4 (from 12 votes)
    • http://Gmail Brandon watts

      Dilly!!!!!!! Oh my Dilly

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      Rating: +1 (from 3 votes)
    • SilverKitsune

      OMG i love creepypasta. My user name is the name of the creepypasta I made. Tell me if u want me to create a story!

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      • Nicola Marie Jackson

        Yep! Xx

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  • Seras

    Hm, i actually quite liked this one. It’s like those imaginary friends some have as a child. Only it wasn’t imagination this time. I like the fact that it’s not just blood and gore ike many of those crappy pastas up here. It’s subtle and still scary as hellXD

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    • Anonymous

      It is almost like Toby from Paranormal Activity

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      Rating: +30 (from 50 votes)
      • Anonymous

        Gotta love Toby.

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        Rating: +38 (from 58 votes)
        • Anonymous

          Gotta love toby

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          Rating: -40 (from 58 votes)
        • Anonymous

          Gotta love Toby.

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          Rating: -26 (from 38 votes)
        • Anonymous

          love toby, you must :-)

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          Rating: -10 (from 38 votes)
        • Anonymous

          Gotta love toby

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      • anon

        Toby pulled my hair!!

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        • John

          Toby bit my finger!

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      • Anonymous

        C-C-C-COMBO BREAKER!!!

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        Rating: +10 (from 20 votes)
    • OhHaiDere

      love toby, aye

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      • Pooop

        Wasnt it robby

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        Rating: +7 (from 27 votes)
        • Fireblaze

          No It’s bobby.

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          Rating: +10 (from 22 votes)
        • Anonymous

          Lol gotta love bobby

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          Rating: +25 (from 33 votes)
        • Beastoking

          Uh, if you mean the Paranormal Activivity ghost, it is Toby

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          Rating: +2 (from 16 votes)
        • AliLa

          Gotta love em all!

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          Rating: +28 (from 30 votes)
        • butts

          wtf all comments are random

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        • Anonymous

          TOBEMON!

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          Rating: +46 (from 52 votes)
  • Gibby

    I liked it. It felt like one of those “doll comes to life” stories, but creepier. The ending was my favorite part. I hope to read more of your work on here.

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    • http://instagram.com/fatcakes2123 TheForgotten1

      I totally agree :D

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  • G-O

    An interesting tale of a paranormal psychopathic furby-thing. I shudder to think what Mr Widemouth hand in plan for the protagonist, and whatever he did to all the others…

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    Rating: +46 (from 52 votes)
  • http://www.facebook.com/#!/profile.php?id=100000854383320 Mike Mihalopoulos

    Very well-written. The surprise ending was a tad bit cliche, but I still enjoyed reading it.

    8.5/10

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  • KatieBug

    Ooh. I like it!! Few spelling and grammar mistakes. Really tasty pasta. (: Great job. Kinda vague-ish and weird. But, I like it.

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  • KatieBug

    Ooh. I like it!! Few spelling and grammar mistakes. Really tasty pasta. (: Great job. Kinda vague-ish and weird. But, I like it.

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  • Anonymous

    First!
    I used to have dreams about little creatures like that when I was younger…guess that would explain my fascination with furby destruction as a teen. Setting them on fire, feeding them blackcats, taking potshots with my daisy. All in preparation >:3

    In any case, decent pasta. Needs salt, but would prolly nom again.

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    • http://www.creepypasta.com Mr. Widemouth

      You dreamed of ME?

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      • Anonymous

        ROFL

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    • http://www.creepypasta.com Mr. Widemouth

      So you dreamed about creatures like me when you was little?

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  • Xothic

    Pretty creepy, but was it some little rat thing? I dont know if the author was clear enough.

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    • DJ DALLY DEE

      Well that’s the whole point of the story, it’s up to you to decide. When a storyteller blatantly tells you exactly what the monster looks like, it’s either hit or miss. Either he creates something that you think is extremely terrifying, or he makes something completely rediculous to you. The real monsters are the ones that are in your mind, and by letting you shape up the creatures in your mind’s eye, the storyteller creates a monster that is terrifying for everyone, because we all visualize him in a way that is most terrifying for each of us.

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      • Craver

        I drew my interpretation of Mr. Widemouth. He has a wide mouth.

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        Rating: +80 (from 80 votes)
        • http://freewebarcade.com Panda

          If I saw that thing I’d slap it and shove a bazooka down its throat, and then id throw it out the window and put spikes under my bed…or something sharp.

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        • Anonymous

          He’d probably just kill you with it

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        • Kimiharu

          you don’t say? *perfect are-you-fucking-kidding-me face*

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      • kate

        i kind of pictured him like an evil hobbes from calvin and hobbes for some reason haha.

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      • shannon

        i imagine mr widemouth wearing a black tuxedo and a red shirt. i suppose the creature from the anime soul eater.

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        Rating: +29 (from 29 votes)
        • marie

          That was exactly what I was thinking!!!

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      • Zach

        I imagined it being a miz between a firby and jeff the killer

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        • Anonymous

          Same here Mane

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        • SlenderJeff

          Same here Mane

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        • anonymous

          Small black arms and legs, long black triangular ears, little black button eyes, and a wide mouth full of long white jagged teeth.

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        • TheBomb.com

          Jeff the Killer would probably burn Mr. Widemouth and keep him as a pet.

          “You’re mine now”

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          Rating: +6 (from 6 votes)
      • Anon

        I imagined him as cat, kind of a big-eyed, sandy-colored, tiny bodied, evil version of the Cheshire Cat.

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        • Anonymous

          I imagined he looked like the rake for some reason.

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          Rating: +5 (from 5 votes)
    • http://thed0ct0risn.wordpress.com Dr. Malpractice

      Pretty realistic for a child not to recognize what something like Mr. Widemouth actually is. After so many years, too, you would probably forget a lot. He could look like anything between a Furby and an imp with mange. My guess tends more toward the latter. I imagine that Mr. Widemouth would have looked extremely unnerving to an adult.

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  • lulzfish

    This was okay, but it seems too much like a comedy, and it ended with the protagonist surviving easily.

    “Here, jump out this window”
    “nah”
    “Here, juggle these knives”
    “nope”
    “wtf you’re leaving?”
    “lolololol”

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    • Random troll guy

      I totally agree with you when i read this i realise how big of a troll mr.widemouth is
      mr widemouth:Jump out the window and imagine there is a trampoline under the window
      meh:Yea i’m five but i’m not a dumbass!!!
      mr widemouth:juggle with these knives
      meh:AND BLEED TO DEATH???NO thank you
      mr widemouth:The soap…PICK IT UP

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      • Mr Widemouth

        Lol

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        • Cesar

          Nice mane I almost thought the story was real LOL.

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      • me

        WTF DONT PICK UP THE SOAP!!!! And he did it and lost his verginity to a deformed furby :P

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        Rating: +3 (from 23 votes)
      • Ben

        o god mr. widemouth XD

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      • Anyal

        Heh. Awesome.

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    • Darien

      haha thats pretty true all n all tho the story was creepy yet fascnating

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  • Eric

    That was pretty scary. Hello my first comment here and my the first comment on this pasta! I would give this an 8/10. I liked how it was ambiguous if it was real or not.

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  • http://www.dylanangladamusic.com/ Dylan A.

    Bravo! A decent creepypasta, complete with decent spelling, grammar, AND punctuation. This one creeped me the f*ck out.

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    Rating: +30 (from 32 votes)
  • Gar

    Good story, but you should take out the reference to energy drinks. I’m fairly sure those didn’t exist 20 years ago (when you were 5, according to the story).

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  • Mreeeeee

    I really liked this one. It was actually pretty creepy. 5/5 GJ!

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  • Tom

    Energy drinks have been around since the 1900s, Gar, perhaps even earlier.

    If you want to argue that only the modern incarnation of energy drinks (ie soda-style) count, Jolt Cola launched in 1985. So there’s one famous brand of energy drink that’s 25 years old. Durr hurr.

    I love when people nitpick stories with stuff that isn’t even remotely true/valid. It seems to happen an awful lot on this website.

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    • Angel

      Thank you kind sir

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  • No name

    It sounds like a Gremlin, though I imagine a Furby crossed with Dig ‘Em Frog.

    Anyway, great story and great ending. It’s amazing how a lot of our childhood memories seem creepier now than they were at the time.

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    • Bugg

      I imagined a Dobby like creature… no clue why lol

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      • Kenzie

        Same. Dobby-like, only smaller and reddish-brown.

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        Rating: +7 (from 7 votes)
        • Anonymous

          I have always feared furbys and clowns, so my interpretation of Mr Widemouth was a cross between a brown spotted Furby and a clown with scary makeup and a Jeff the Killer smile, Jesus, I hate my imagination.

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        • anticrunch

          mine was sort of the nice furry gremlin crossed with the evil leprechaun from those movies

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      • Anonymous

        Wow so did i! :D or like that creepy thing off the Hobbit that sorta looks like Dobby XD

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        Rating: +3 (from 3 votes)
        • Herobrine

          The goblin that is down in Gollum’s cave? the one that fell with Bilbo?

          BTW, the anonymous with the Furby/Clown/Jeff the Killer is me, at least,it was, before I had a name.

          -Herobrine

          Always watching…

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    • BC

      Wait, if our creepy thoughts are worse as grown-ups, then i dread the day i turn into an adult.

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    • RiathLaz

      I imagined a murderous mogwai. Lol

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  • Jude

    That was a nice story. It reminds me of old folk tales where mischevous goblins or leprechauns or whatever try to trick gullible people into doing stupid or dangerous things. Not exactly scary but entertaining still.

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    • Alexendra Olafson

      Hey Jude! (Beatles refference)

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      Rating: +12 (from 18 votes)
  • JesusLOL

    Though it’s a refreshing change from most of the shit on this site, there are some flaws that distract from the story. Though unique in a way, Furby wasn’t unique enough to stand out; the only reason he isn’t going to be immediately forgotten like a thousand other creepy diminutive distorted paranormal bad guys is the writer’s ability, not any unique trait of his own.

    Without getting all nitpicky about details, the author’s prose was unrefined in some places, lazy in others. (The main character reflecting on the “clear as glass” memories of Widemouth is a good example. That works for a single memory or two, but loses credibility when talking about series of recurring and mostly mundane visits over two weeks.)

    Still, great pasta.

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    • Mr.Widemouth

      Thats Mr.Widemouth to you wise guy

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      • Kimiharu

        shut it Furby-boy.

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  • Heather

    lulzfish your comment made me laugh. 8]
    this was good pasta, will eat again in the future.

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    • Anonymous

      Where’s the picture

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  • Svenly

    “Ecstatic” not “exstatic”. Not bad. The first sentence didn’t really make any sense to me, but I’m probably reading it wrong.

    8/10

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    Rating: +2 (from 8 votes)
  • Dragonair

    Really, really, really, really awesome. Sometimes I wish the site would update more often, then we get truly CREEPY stories like this and I’m satisfied to wait. <3

    8.5/10

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    Rating: +7 (from 7 votes)
  • Flash37

    “bustling metropolis of New Vineyard, Maine, population 643.”
    Wait… It’s near Maine.
    6+4=10.
    10+3=13
    Well gee, this place is set up for disaster. Fires and floods and all that.

    I liked this. When I saw the title I was like “OHHHH NOOOO OH THIS IS GONNA BE GOOD” And it was x3
    So I was like making up theories during the story, that Mr. Widemouth was like a good part of the boy’s imagination trying to show him that you could have fun when you’re sick or he was dreaming or something BUT THEN HE TURNED OUT TO BE A MURDEROUS DEMON WITH A STEAK KNIFE WHICH WAS AWESOME.

    The comparison to a Furby totally threw me off though. I was imagining him more like Stewie Griffin with the head, and his mouth stretching it. I prefer him that way but whatever ;;
    9/10

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    Rating: +9 (from 15 votes)
    • Kenzie

      Maine. It always rains, or snows, or catches on fire. No wonder it’s a popular place for horror stories.

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    • Czikkan

      Don’t bring up characters from things completely devoid of creativity on a site like this. Cool? Cool. Sweet talking to you.

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      Rating: -13 (from 15 votes)
      • cill bosby

        Yeah, at first I imagined him as this creepy weird thing, then he said how he reminded him of a furby and then i imagined him as a furby and no matter how hard i tried not to, he still looked like a furby in my mind.

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        Rating: +9 (from 9 votes)
  • DannyV

    I enjoyed this one alot, the only part I disliked was the creatures name (of coarse I understand this was probly to make the child trust it more) maybe it would be good if it was a little darker or something, I dunno. But I did enjoy this one and I would love to see you make one with a bit more detail or plot, I think it\’d be great

    keep in mind, I\’m new ro creepy pasta
    DannyV.

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  • Anonymous

    Awww Mr.Widemouth just wanted to have some fun :(

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    • Mr. Widemouth

      Will you come play with me? It’s really lonely in this butcher’s shop!

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      Rating: +18 (from 24 votes)
      • Me

        I’ll play with you Mr.Widemouth! :D

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        Rating: +7 (from 9 votes)
      • stef

        lol

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    • me

      Shut the fuck up Mr.Duchemouth ha ha ha. Bicht pleise i aint afraid of a deformed retarded furby

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      Rating: -11 (from 21 votes)
      • AutoCorrect

        Bitch not Vichy and please not pleise a little grammar please.

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        • widemouth

          maybe you should meet me in person, then we will see if your afraid, if I where you, BE VERY AFRAID!!

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      • Kimiharu

        Oh really? Perhaps you should be afraid of your lack in grammar/spelling skills.

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        Rating: +4 (from 4 votes)
  • Truan

    Wasn’t too bad, very well written. I was a bit disappointed by the ending though. Here’s this creature that’s obviously trying to kill the protagonist and the end of the path is a reveal that he’s killed other kids? Not much of an impact. I thought it was going to be a downhill drop or more of a mass/hidden grave. Seemed a bit unnecessary to show him the path in the first place, because it only seems to set up a cliche ending.
    But still, this is better than most other crap I’ve read on this site in the past few weeks

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    • A

      Not much of an impact? Really?
      You find out he’s killed a bunch of kids and the boy could of been killed, yeah that’s freaky! Duh.

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      Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
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