Call Me Tomorrow, Okay?
Still no messages on my phone.
I guess he wasn’t going to call me back after all. I can’t really blame him, maybe I came on a bit too fast yesterday.
I had noticed him long before he noticed me. His shiny black hair and unnatural blue eyes. I wasn’t the only one watching him, that’s for sure. His movements were elegant in a boyish way. And his smile…his smile.
I would die for that smile.
Still no messages…
I thought about calling him, maybe apologize for going too fast yesterday. I’m a coward, I know, but I just couldn’t bring myself to dial his number.
Besides he’d promised he’d contact me when he’s ready.
So I’ll wait. I’m patient.
I know, I’ll just casually stroll past his house. Just to see if he’s home. Maybe he’s out, that would explain why he couldn’t call me yet.
He only lives half an hour away anyway. Maybe he’s shy and is scared to call me. Silly boy. I’ll go to him and tell him that he doesn’t have to be scared. That I don’t mind if he needs time.
He lives pretty secluded in a farm on the outskirts of town. I can hear the sheep in the stables as I approach. My heart skips when I see there’s lights burning inside. He must be there, he told me yesterday his parents would be gone for the weekend. They left him to look after the sheep for those days. Poor baby, that must be hard work. He was probably just too busy to call me. I’ll have to stay here until his parents come back and help him take care of all those sheep.
I knock on the door, but he doesn’t answer. Maybe he fell asleep. The thought of his beautiful face even more softened by sleep makes me smile. I try the door, it’s unlocked. There’s hardly any crime around here, so I guess locking the door is not needed. I try to be as quiet as possible as I sneak through the house. I want to surprise him. I cringe at every creak the stairs make as I climb them.
Finally I’ve reached the bedroom and I carefully open the door.
There he is, lying in bed as I thought. Quietly I switch on the nightlight on his desk so I can see his face.
His blue eyes are open, staring into space and his whole face is one bloody mess. His cheeks have been carved, the skin mostly removed and hanging loose on the sides of his face. He’s missing his fingernails, they are laid out on the bed carefully arranged. On his bare chest words are carved.
I look at him, my hands covering my mouth.
He’s still the same as I left him yesterday. He must have been so tired that he slept all day. How cute!
I softly kiss his forehead, making sure I don’t wake him. Then I write another message below the one on his chest, letting him know I’m here when he needs me.
I leave the room, heading back outside. I think it’s time for the sheep to go to sleep.
And tomorrow I’ll introduce myself to his parents. I’m sure they’ll love me too.
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Credited to Boudica.
THEN WHO WAS FINGERNAILS??
Hello.
This is beautiful.
I am moved.
Nice job.
This was epic pasta
OMNOMNOMNOMNONOMNOMNOMNOM
This was really good. Like Wow kinda good.
The twist sure got me. “Madness”, indeed.
Let me hanging on the details, but my hyperactive imagination will help m–
Oh. Oh… damn it, I won’t sleep easily tonight… O_O
This was amazing
That’s all I have to say
So the guy who went to the house is the murderer who killed a guy and left him there and plans to kill his parents?
HELP!
THEN WHAT WAS WRITTEN ON CHEST?
a truly welldone pasta
Who was psychopathic stalker/girlfriend??!!
that was awesome yeah
;’bjzpfidhn’az rhie[
Oh what a cute little stor….oh.
Oh crap.
Holy mother of god…
its…AWESOME!
This one was cute, I liked it.
i really, really liked that one a lot.
Veryyyyyy nice. I <3 this.
That was a delicious pasta.
Thanks Boudica.
Whoa… just whoa.
Makes you think twice about inviting strange girls into your house.
How cute!
Oh god…
OH GOD!
*vomits*
I lieked this one very much.
I very much liked it,
However, I do not think someone in her mindset would refer to his face as a bloody MESS.
It seems she would say something more like it was a gorgeous mass of ruin, or something to that caliber?
(I’m no writer, it just seems that’s more her person.)
Otherwise, awesome pasta!
F@#$ing madness.
OMYGODZILOVEDIT!!! -spazzez-
I do love a good dip into the realms of madness.
Oh God, read this in the forums.
Amazing
Oh yeah, I remember when that. I still smile when I think about it.
When that HAPPENED, I meant to say. Silly me!
this was so good and it was also quite funny in a macabre way
good job
THEN WHO WAS NARRATOR?
@ Anon E Mouse. You are absolutely right., but I couldn’t think of another way to say it without giving away the ending too much.
I’m glad my story is appreciated.
predictable.
Read it twice. Even better the second time.
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JVP Feb 6th 2009
F@#$ing madness.
MADNESS?
@Anon E Mouse Just to get things straight, I’m not contradicting you, just voicing my opinion; But I kinda looked at her as seeing his face as a ‘mess’ as a mother sees a smudge on her child’s face.
Nicely Done.
absolutely brilliant. Major ‘false sense of security’ alert and then BAM
Dear God………Wow.
Cute, really.
In a psychotic sort of way.
Meh, saw it coming.
How cute!
lmao.
Wasn’t as good as some.
That said, a good pasta.
XD this was nice… it was so beautifull and yet so inspiring…. so yeah good pasta good sauce… only prob… I need MOAR!!!!!!!
Glad this is on the site. Really, good show.
I liked it, yes indeedy.
But, who was taking care of the sheep?
Fantastic.
wow, this one was really good. Creepy from the beginning straight through to the end.
This pasta was win
Deliciously written.
Madness? Or SPARTA?!
Love it :]
That was crazy awesome.
Predictable, and similar to the recent news story.
Gah! -eyetwitch-
I FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF’d.
Awesome! Kind of saw it coming though. :/ Even so, great pasta!
HAHAHA MADE MY DAY!
Lovely pasta. Make moar! D:
I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Must Have more soon!^_^
It wasn’t terribly creepy, just predictable. It kinda reminded me of Twilight, though.
Nice- comepletely insane- but nice all the same.
Fabulous.
Awesome Story =D
wow,
i loved this.
this is the best one ive read in a long time.
That’s the kind of chick I wanna marry. lol
Awww, I love a happy ending.
mmm, good pasta.
scary weird *weeps for the man*
wait WHAT?
Lol I did a double take at “bloody mess”.
Good pasta!
I expected it, but it was still a nice story. I lol’d at the Twilight comment, perhaps the series wouldn’t be so fucking stupid if the chick went apeshit and it ended like this.
Ooh actually wasnt expecting that.
I like it..
then the last few sentences I was like ‘Yerr okay.. we know shes crazy you can shutup now..’
Hahah ;D
TWUU LUVVV? : O
I like this one a lot. I expected the ending, but it was well written and creative.
But…If she thought he was so gorgeous, why the hell did she carve his face up? Why not leave him looking as he did in life, in order to admire him some more? If I was going to go psycho on a guy I liked, that’s what I’d do…
Best pasta I’ve read in a while. I expected the ending, but it somehow shocked me at the same time. Andit reminds me of Twilight as well. If only that crappy book had ended like this (and had been shorter) it would’ve been worth reading.
But, yeah, great pasta. Very well-written.
How DARE he not call her back!!
xD
Well done! I’m just a little disturbed now :3
This story… is delicious.
<3 it
This was wonderful. Very nice.
Mon Dieu! Excellent until the finish. Thank you for that glorious pasta.
That was excellent pasta!
it gives Ideas…
8D
THEN WHO WAS SHEEP
For some reason, I can’t help but think the narrator is a guy. . .
Madness?
THIS.
IS.
PASTA!!!!
okay who wrote a story about me? I was Narrator.
Very nice, it reminds me of a song i used to listen to and a mixture of other things.
OMNOMNOMNOMNOM.
That was delicious!
I with the majority. Great pasta!
Wow, as I was reading it I was thinking, “ok where is the twist coming?” then it hit me, I thought that was it but then you pulled out a sledgehammer and smashed it. Well done. I demand more from you.
I thought the narrorator was a woman, it might be male but I don’t know. A woman narrorator would make it chill your spine.
nice
damn.
I almost vomited.
: |
Thank god I haven’t eaten much, or the image of…never mind, just thinking about typing that makes bile rise in my throat. Unfortunately, I’m not joking. DD: I seriously almost spewed on my boyfriend’s keyboard DDD:
I’m glad she didn’t react this badly when I broke up with her
I had to reread the “how cute” part like WTF insane much? amiright??
poor parents i feel bad for them hahaha Dx
like it read it before on /x/ love the ending
but so true this way he can’t fight or scream hes just a body a dead mutilated body
ooh, i like.
Oooh. I really like this piece. Thanks for posting it. ^_^
I shat bricks of awesome.
I always like the groustque ones
He’s just as she left him. Fucking chills.
Nice! Good job at scariness.
THEN WHO WAS BARN?
mhm…’scratched another message…’ OMFG im afraid of my farm now…… lol awesome job man
but… but… WHO WAS CHEST CARVINGS?
: ] I liked this one. If I was her I would take a sheep and ride it home.
I think i’m gonna be sick. But that’s a good thing!!!
wow this is amazing! a true masterpiece
this just proves my theory that women are the most insane creatures on the face of this god forsaken planet…. women and pltypi
Epic! beautiful….. simple, but beatiful.
WHAT A TWIST!
Who wouldn’t call her back?
was the narrator a she???
interesting.. I was getting really into it too, till I thought she was shocked. But then, when I pictured her squel, I knew too soon she had killed him.
It is a very beautiful and capturing piece. One doesnt know about there obsession until they finally realise they’ve killed the one person they ‘love’
keep up the brilant work love
~Ji-Ji
The crazy bitch reminds me of someone i knew…. Of course without the whole cutting me up and being a homicidal maniac thing.
Maybe.
i like the way the author leaves it ambiguous as to what gender the killer is…psycho trap, anyone?
Its times like these when Im glad Im butt ugly so I know this wont happen to me.
Wow, this was written very sweetly.
Kinda expected half-way through, but done very well.
WITNESS
Oh my goodness… this was delicious Pasta! The end was crazy… that chick is psycho.
what a psycho lady, that’s why do not date anyone who don’t know. lolz, a really good pasta, I was like tsk tsk men never call LOLZ.
That is some TASTY pasta.
That Kiinda Creeped Me Out…………..ii Really Diidnt Expect iit
THEN WHO WAS SHEEP
*Le Sigh*
This is exactly why Dreams and Madness is my favorite section..
AWESOME STORY! acttually loved it more than that pale face story….that girl seems like my kind person..lol! jk!! so your telling me she carved into his chest and took out is finger nails??????……….i feel so bad :[…….no one was watching the sheep!!
I don’t usually comment on pastas, but this is the best one I’ve read by FAR.
Good job.
NO U
NO U
Fun fun I was like “huh?” in the beginning but now I’m like “ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh”
That sure was some great pasta! But I was wondering…what was written on the boy’s chest?
Weird. I find phsyco girls cute and funny. Is this weird?
Ooh, I love that this was the first thing I read on this site. Authentic Italian pasta. (Sorry if that sounds goofy; I was just basing my rating on what others have said. ^^;)
cute.
very yummy pasta. I liked it!
TEHN WHO WAS CHEST?
TEHN WHO WAS CHEST
very, very nice. wtf.com likes it very much.
Very nice. All there is to say.
I expected that the guy was going to be dead at the end, but I didn’t expect that it would be because the narrator had killed him. Very nice.
ha, great twist! i was expecting him dead from the start but thought the chest words would be like ‘don’t turn around’ or something equally generic. well written, really creepy.
D’aaaaawww.
This story is just adorable. I love it.
Very good pasta, although am i the only one who thought that it was still quite predictable?
I gots pasta sauce all over my face, don’t I?
Such disturbing pasta O.O
Beautiful. The best story on the entire site. Amazing ending.
I thought it was going to be another vampire pasta where it makes the narrator look like the victim but twists at the end revealing that the narrator IS the vampire.
Guess i was sort of half right
This was beautifully written. I may be in love too.
What took away from it for me was that i guessed she was the “creepy” person. Reading too much twisted pasta is indeed bad for you =p
Wow. Very good!
<33Delicuous.
delicious.
I love this one. It gives me chills.
OMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOM
Beautiful. I’ve been browsing through here for about 4 hours now and this is by far my favorite pasta yet.
I thought it was cool
Omg this was soo sweet, she really cares about him =’)
Thats what i call love she’s even going to help his sheep
LUV IT!!!
muahahaha,, ‘the parents will love me too’
i really like the twist ‘just as I left him last night’
its AWESOME!
Suprise ending = great pasta
Yummmmm Delish
FFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUU–
Then who was sheep?
Absolutley amazing. My favorite pasta on here so far.
Perfect.
she’s mad. madly inlove | ♥
great pasta umm tasty
Wait…. I don’t get it.
Wait.
WAIT.
OH JESUS CHRIST IN HEAVEN WAIT….
*dies*
5/5.
One word. WOW.
My original thought was that she was going to kill him inside the house. Wasn’t expecting that twist at all.
Great pasta.
It was just like..oh hey nice story, girl sees mysterious mama’s boy….Then we have the slap in the face. Judging from the seemingly bland girl-meets-boy thing in the beginning, I thought that mr. mysterious blue-eyes would pull something creepy. Interesting twist.
creepypasta: turning all straight men gay
Superb. The writer even manages to capture prefectly the mindset of a mentally unbalanced person. Usually these stories lack a realistic ring to them with regards to actual insanity. From the perspective of someone who was declared clinically insane thirty years ago, it rings very true. Well done.
Fear the Darkness
-Nex
Beautifully written.
But thank god I’m a girl cause that chick was craaaaazyyyyy~.
friggin awesome!!! totally didnt expect the ending! epically written x)
Wh-what.
The creepy thing about this is, I’ve read about a character I dearly love that looks about like this, save the blue eyes. I wtf’d. D:
Awwwww twruuuuuuuuue wuuuuuv :3
Oh. OH. Oh my.
@-@
…I love this.
gtf off the internet.
i imagine alex evans being the boy who got carved. awesome story.
What a cute story.
Wait,
No,
no way,
no wa-
AWWW!!!!!
Great pasta xDD
The most delicious pasta I\’ve eaten in a while.
This… This was awesome.
That was… wow. You are an amazing writer and I think that pasta just made my day. Cooked to perfection.
Um… if he’s dead why is this person calling him?
O.o wasn’t expecting that ending!
Awesomeness!!!
xD
O.o wasn\’t expecting that ending!
Awesomeness!!!
xD
I’m guessing she asked him out, he said no, she went batshit on him and killed him, then went to visit him the next day, either way nice job, 8/10