Scary Paranormal Stories & Short Horror Microfiction

Creepypasta

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Still no messages on my phone.

I guess he wasn’t going to call me back after all. I can’t really blame him, maybe I came on a bit too fast yesterday.
I had noticed him long before he noticed me. His shiny black hair and unnatural blue eyes. I wasn’t the only one watching him, that’s for sure. His movements were elegant in a boyish way. And his smile…his smile.
I would die for that smile.
Still no messages…
I thought about calling him, maybe apologize for going too fast yesterday. I’m a coward, I know, but I just couldn’t bring myself to dial his number.
Besides he’d promised he’d contact me when he’s ready.

So I’ll wait. I’m patient.

I know, I’ll just casually stroll past his house. Just to see if he’s home. Maybe he’s out, that would explain why he couldn’t call me yet.
He only lives half an hour away anyway. Maybe he’s shy and is scared to call me. Silly boy. I’ll go to him and tell him that he doesn’t have to be scared. That I don’t mind if he needs time.

He lives pretty secluded in a farm on the outskirts of town. I can hear the sheep in the stables as I approach. My heart skips when I see there’s lights burning inside. He must be there, he told me yesterday his parents would be gone for the weekend. They left him to look after the sheep for those days. Poor baby, that must be hard work. He was probably just too busy to call me. I’ll have to stay here until his parents come back and help him take care of all those sheep.

I knock on the door, but he doesn’t answer. Maybe he fell asleep. The thought of his beautiful face even more softened by sleep makes me smile. I try the door, it’s unlocked. There’s hardly any crime around here, so I guess locking the door is not needed. I try to be as quiet as possible as I sneak through the house. I want to surprise him. I cringe at every creak the stairs make as I climb them.
Finally I’ve reached the bedroom and I carefully open the door.

There he is, lying in bed as I thought. Quietly I switch on the nightlight on his desk so I can see his face.
His blue eyes are open, staring into space and his whole face is one bloody mess. His cheeks have been carved, the skin mostly removed and hanging loose on the sides of his face. He’s missing his fingernails, they are laid out on the bed carefully arranged. On his bare chest words are carved.

I look at him, my hands covering my mouth.
He’s still the same as I left him yesterday. He must have been so tired that he slept all day. How cute!
I softly kiss his forehead, making sure I don’t wake him. Then I write another message below the one on his chest, letting him know I’m here when he needs me.
I leave the room, heading back outside. I think it’s time for the sheep to go to sleep.
And tomorrow I’ll introduce myself to his parents. I’m sure they’ll love me too.


Credited to Boudica.

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  • Anonymous

    THEN WHO WAS FINGERNAILS??

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    Rating: -16 (from 114 votes)
    • He Who Shall Most Honorably Be Named

      you’re an idiot…

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      Rating: +52 (from 66 votes)
    • Fingernails

      I was fingernails all along!

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      Rating: +13 (from 23 votes)
  • http://misterwelldone.wordpress.com Mr. Welldone

    Hello.

    This is beautiful.

    I am moved.

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    Rating: +85 (from 91 votes)
  • Blaze.

    Nice job.

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    Rating: +4 (from 6 votes)
  • MooMoon

    This was epic pasta
    OMNOMNOMNOMNONOMNOMNOMNOM

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    Rating: +25 (from 31 votes)
  • Spaz

    This was really good. Like Wow kinda good.

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    Rating: +7 (from 9 votes)
  • http://blog.guedesav.blog.br Creepy Mole

    The twist sure got me. “Madness”, indeed.

    Let me hanging on the details, but my hyperactive imagination will help m–

    Oh. Oh… damn it, I won’t sleep easily tonight… O_O

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    Rating: +28 (from 32 votes)
  • Tezmara

    This was amazing
    That’s all I have to say

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    Rating: +7 (from 13 votes)
  • Aguythathatesrap

    So the guy who went to the house is the murderer who killed a guy and left him there and plans to kill his parents?

    HELP!

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    Rating: -4 (from 24 votes)
  • Wrenlet

    THEN WHAT WAS WRITTEN ON CHEST?

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    • Nothing

      “Call me when you are good and ready.”

      That’s what was written on his chest.

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      Rating: +3 (from 5 votes)
  • Anonymous

    a truly welldone pasta

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    Rating: +1 (from 5 votes)
  • the Person Formerly known as ‘Noneya’

    Who was psychopathic stalker/girlfriend??!!

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    Rating: -9 (from 21 votes)
    • Overly Attached Girlfriend

      I don’t understand why they never call me back. I truly do love them so.

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      Rating: +30 (from 36 votes)
      • Glittergirl

        You, My friend, Have just won the interweb.

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        Rating: -1 (from 1 vote)
  • http://www.creepypasta.com alisa

    that was awesome yeah

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    Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
  • http://www.creepypasta.com alisa

    ;’bjzpfidhn’az rhie[

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    Rating: -9 (from 15 votes)
  • Caedus

    Oh what a cute little stor….oh.

    Oh crap.

    Holy mother of god…

    its…AWESOME!

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    Rating: +29 (from 31 votes)
  • Liquid

    This one was cute, I liked it.

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    Rating: +6 (from 6 votes)
  • katie

    i really, really liked that one a lot.

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    Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
  • Comment Leaver

    Veryyyyyy nice. I <3 this.

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    Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
  • BonerFruit

    That was a delicious pasta.
    :D Thanks Boudica.

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    Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
  • MIsterVercetti

    Whoa… just whoa.

    Makes you think twice about inviting strange girls into your house.

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    Rating: +6 (from 6 votes)
  • Mr. Meow

    How cute!
    Oh god…
    OH GOD!
    *vomits*
    I lieked this one very much.

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    Rating: +4 (from 8 votes)
    • THE PRISONER’S GONE!

      Mr. Meow, I watched all the saw movies and didn’t get disgusted.
      and you get upset about THIS?

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      Rating: +3 (from 7 votes)
  • Anon E Mouse

    I very much liked it,
    However, I do not think someone in her mindset would refer to his face as a bloody MESS.
    It seems she would say something more like it was a gorgeous mass of ruin, or something to that caliber?
    (I’m no writer, it just seems that’s more her person.)

    Otherwise, awesome pasta!

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  • JVP

    F@#$ing madness.

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    Rating: +5 (from 5 votes)
  • kisu

    OMYGODZILOVEDIT!!! -spazzez-

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    Rating: 0 (from 6 votes)
  • Analytic Whoreface

    I do love a good dip into the realms of madness.

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    Rating: +7 (from 9 votes)
  • Ma Cherie

    Oh God, read this in the forums.

    Amazing :D

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    • The Killer Known As Jeff

      I don’t understand how this comment got one negative vote…

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      Rating: +1 (from 3 votes)

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