Most people sleep to rest.
I don’t.
I sleep to communicate.
The person I visit knows things.
It knows things about you.
It knows things about them.
It knows things about everything.
When I sleep, I sleep to know.
I sleep to know more about everything.
I sleep to know about the plan.
I sleep to know about the motives.
It has motives.
They are unimaginable motives.
They are unjustifiable motives.
When I sleep, I sleep to know.
I must know so I can warn.
I need to warn everyone.
I need to warn you.
But no one believes.
I wake to communicate.
But no one listens.
You do not listen.
These are not visions.
These are conversations.
These are tactical conversations.
Conversations made in a room.
The same room, every time. When I sleep, I sleep to know.
I sleep to know more about the room.
I sleep to know more about the computer room.
This room is where it eats.
I have seen it eat.
I do not like to watch it eat.
Eating is its motive.
It is an unimaginable motive.
I wake to communicate.
I need to warn.
But no one will listen.
You will not listen.
I need to warn of its motives.
It is not alone.
It is not alone because it is many.
They are too many.
They are too many with unimaginable motives.
Their motive is to eat.
Their motive is to eat you.
When I sleep, I sleep to know.
I need to know when.
I need to know when they want to eat.
I need to know the plan.
I wake to communicate.
I need to warn.
I need to warn about the plan.
I need to warn you that the plan is in place.
The plan was technology.
The plan has been ripened.
The plan was to ripen.
The plan was to ripen you.
When I sleep, I sleep to know.
I sleep to know more about the ripening.
I sleep to know their plan.
I sleep to know how they manipulate.
I communicate to know how to manipulate.
I communicate to manipulate.
I communicate to manipulate you.
Manipulate you to warn you.
But you will not listen.
But you have read.
I wake to communicate.
I wake to communicate so I can manipulate.
It needs to feed.
They need to feed.
I need to feed.
I need to feed on your eyes.
I need to feed on your minds.
We need to feed on your minds.
It is why we write.
We write to feed on your time.
We write to feed on your eyes.
We write to feed on your minds.
We write so you will not notice.
I sleep to know how to manipulate.
I sleep to dream of ways to feed.
I wake to communicate so I can manipulate.
I manipulate so I can feed.
I feed on your time, your eyes and your mind.
When we feed, you do not notice.
When we feed, you all do not notice…
We feed until there is nothing left.
We feed until there is nothing left in your mind.
And
you
are
making
us
all
fat.
Credit To – StupidDialUp
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uuuuuh what?
That ending tho. I’m fat so does that means i eat people too?
really awesome story poem. I would like to use it for my Youtube channel with your permission. may I have your permission?
Not cool, dude. My brother and sister have autism. Don’t go around saying things like that. Don’t go around talking about autistic people like their not people
I can’t say objectively for everyone that that comment is or is not offensive, but personally I was amused. I have high functioning autism and I do speak like that sometimes. :)
I liked it a lot! It scared me quite a bit.
Hmm 7.5/10
Dear god that was amazing. I simply loved this poem pasta. Although the tone is nothing at all like this, it made me think of the poem ‘we real cool’ by Gwendolyn brooks. I don’t know why, as it is nothing like it. Anyway I thought this was a revelational entry. Thank you
BUT WHO WAS ROOM???????
I didn’t like it…..at all. Stupiddialup get your shit together!! I liked the more interesting or I guess artistic style of writing. But, the twist was something more for a kid. Like a little kid. Who ever didn’t see it coming should get some help. Also the twist felt like it should be in a goosebumps. It was weak and could only scare a kid. “Ough they going make us fat so dey can eat us. Isn’t dat shocking!?”
If it would have built up to something more I would have kissed stupiddialup’s ass to no end! But, it was so bad of an ending and didn’t feel like his type of ending. I’m sorry! Get your shit together! 3/10
Maybe I’m weird or paranoid…or both, but this pasta gave me the willies. We’ll done!
MWAHAHAHAHA GET FAT WITH HEARTBURN FOOLS!! MWAHAHAHA, ok, i’m sorry, but this is NOT scary, funny, yes. Scary, no.
In the eternal words of Homer Simpson: “Boar-ring!” This is a short pasta (I hesitate to call it a story), that I couldn’t even finish because of the redundancy. By the time I got a third of the way through it, I felt like I was reading the same nonsense over and over. Very interesting style, but its just not my bag. The writing and idea aren’t bad, just not a fan of the execution. 3/10
Confusing. Not creepy.. -_-“
“We write to feed on your time”, yes, I definitely feel like someone fed on my time (and I feel like go to sleep too).
I have no idea why this is considered a story, but anyway, since you know about everything, I’d be grateful if you told me the number for next lotto extraction. I’ll listen, I swear.
23 38 22 18 8 17 9
I expect 30%.
Guess I should have told you it’s 6 numbers here :D
I felt this was kind of half-assed and redundant. I know it was written repetitively for impact, but it had the opposite effect on me. It felt like it dragged on even though from the way it was written I knew it would be short. Nothing against the premise or author, I just think this was a fairly ineffective way of writing. I thought it was actually a really cool idea by the time I finished reading, but again, the delivery needs work. It was obviously intentionally vague, but I think in this case it didn’t work in the author’s favor… Same goes with the repetition. It just waters down what little story there is, making it difficult to take seriously; meaning, I wanted to enjoy it, but
Being that it was written
Like this
Made it strangely difficult
To enjoy.
Of course, I’m exaggerating, but only slightly. I try to explain why I don’t like pastas when I comment on them, rather than just saying it sucked or something like that, because it didn’t. It just wasn’t great. This really, to me, read more like a sample of a story than an actual story. I think the idea could be unique and interesting, but it was poorly executed. Thankfully, this is the first time StupidDialUp has written anything I didn’t like, which is also why I’m sort of walking on thin ice with how I’ve explained my opinions on this pasta, because I have tremendous respect for the author and I don’t want to come across as disrespectful. So, in short…
TL;DR? Meh story from a promising author who can, has, and (I have no doubt) will do better. If this were written by someone else I probably would go a little easier, but I also probably wouldn’t bother with as long an explanation as this for my thoughts on the pasta.
Always open for criticism and appreciate all feedback Anon! It can only make me better. Thanks for the feedback.
Mind=blown
This pasta is hardly creepy at all because this is basically what the government of any country is doing via Internet, TV, press. And since few people notice it, the funds spent on mass media to make the population brain-weak and obedient are pretty much worth every penny.
That is exactly right. ^
But actually, it IS creepy because it’s true.
So autistic people feed off of us?XD
IT’S SO BEAUTIFUL!!!
what?
really tasty pasta