The Man In The Snow
You are home alone, and you hear on the news about the profile of a murderer who is on the loose.
You look out the sliding glass doors to your backyard, and you notice a man standing out in the snow. He fits the profile of the murderer exactly, and he is smiling at you.
You gulp, picking up the phone to your right and dialing 911. You look back out the glass as you press the phone to your ear, and notice he is much closer to you now.
You then drop the phone in shock.
There are no footprints in the snow.
It’s his reflection.
title ruins ending
that is why I always have curtians/blinds closed at night!
sheesh, I love this one alot.
I originally read this with the title
“Glass Murderer” though.
This one actually made my blood go cold.
WELL DONE!
I’ve hated this one for years and years and years since I read it in like… Teen when I was a teenager. Gah! *yanks blinds down and hides under the blanket with a baseball bat*
The title ruins the surprise, and it could be better done. Good concept, though.
Is it really that hard to tell the difference between someone on the other side of sliding glass doors and someone’s reflection on the glass from your side…?
It’s a good story, but I think I’d be able to figure it out and at least get hacked to bits knowing that it didn’t take me any time to do it.
That’d totally freak me out. Thinking I’m protected by a window then, oops no. He’s right next to me, goodbye world
Good job fixing the title.
Nice story. I don’t see the problem with the title though.
The reflection title dosent ruin it, becuase reflections are used all the time in creepypasta (usually involving mirrors and the occult).
anyway good story, quite creepy first time i read it.
does not work. reflection is ghostly character and he would have seen him floating. he would have gotten it on the first look, exept if he’s from somalia
I think the last line lets it go.
Would be better to let us come to our own conclusion methinketh.
This One Actually Caused Me To Feel A Chill.
Then Again, I’m Only 14, So That’s Not Saying Much….
Totally freaked me out. Really well done.
D:
Very nice, wasn’t expecting that at all
for some reason i think the murderer should look like hannibal lector
I am sneaky, no?
goddamn, i always get a chill when i “get” the good ones.
i love this one.
Bricks were shat, tears were dropped, story was forever lodged in my memory.
Amazing creepypasta.
wow…must be some amazing windex
Batman pulled this trick on me once before
@ djlo0Na
lol
this is my favorite
something like this actually happened to me before, i was sitting in starbucks reading a novel and i noticed a car stopped in front of me behind the glass door with this dude sitting in it. He was there for quite a while, about 3 hours when i realised the guy was actually the reflection of this man sitting behind me
Oh shit. For a while I thought this one meant that nigga was crazy and HE was the killer seeing HIS OWN reflection.
Welll shit.
What’s scarier, a crazed murderer standing outside your door smiling at you, or realizing that you’re the murderer? Personally I’d rather be a crazy murderer than confront one through a glass door.
cripes! didn’t expect that
@ 14
L2 use caps correctly. Damn.
cleveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer
that’s when you kick them in the nuts like..with a mule kick? idk just kick him in the nuts and run.
BUT THEN WHO WAS MIRROR?!
i know i already commented but i have had nightmares about this and i always get scared when i’m home alone now!
This is why you should never trust shiny glass screen doors and windows. In the day you walk into the glass door thinking it’s open and at night you think the people are outside when they are really in :\
Mindfuck really ……anyway awsome pasta
I’m glad I live in a place that doesn’t get snow. Cx
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fuck
very good !!!
OH MY GOD.
I had to reread it before I got that he was INSIDE the house.
At first, I thought that the murderer was the person about to call 911.
Second favorite pasta.
Thanks.
I totally agree with Meg (2)!
Creeeeeepy!!!!
That’s stupid. D.
Ive herd some ting smiler to this, but it is still creepy
This one in theory should be total shit, but I’unno it gave me chills tbh.
Insanely creepy pasta. I already do not like mirrors as it is.
all I want is a glass of water.
THEN WHO WAS WINDOW?
This one was pretty good. Short and sweet.
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Windex fucked us all again. Damn window cleaning products.
This scared the crap outta me. I am SO GLAD It’s still daytime.
Nicely done <3
wow…last line just kills it…and for the looks, I’m getting sort of a homeless guy / jesus feel for the killer…but yeah, I liked it until the last line