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The Murder Of Innocence

You awake at a crossroads. You have no idea how you got there or how long you have slept. There are five signposted directions to take: Life, Death, Fortune, Fate and Destiny. As counter-intuitive as it may seem, you must, MUST, take the road to Death first. When you arrive at your destination after hours of walking (which was strangely untaxing on your legs) you find a house with boarded-up windows and a large, black portal with an ornate ivory door-knocker. Using the knocker will cause a wooden hand to form out of the wordwork of the door, and into this hand you must place the Ivory Key you found earlier.

Wait, I did mention the key, right? It’s sort of vital to continue.

Oh hell, wait a minute, I skipped ahead in the walkthrough. I must’ve tapped PgDwn or something. Hang on..

Okay, did you get past the minotaur yet? By tricking it into walking into the fire pits using the red scarf? Did I tell you to take the Death path first? Okay, wait, no.. no, this is.. ah, right, no, go down the “Fate” path first. There’s a gemstone down there that opens a portcullis in the Destiny path. Man, I’ve been going about this all backwards. Let’s start over:

You awake at a crossroads. Since you’ve read the Magician’s Journal, you already know that the Teleportation Ritual has deposited you here as a test to claim your rightful place as King of Etheria. Wait, this is for the second playthrough, oh goddammit. Here, just bring up the console and type “isuckatcreepypastamakemeaspellmaster” to unlock all the spells. Then just fireball everything until you win. You win when everything is on fire. Hooray!

And then you die. Of, uh, I don’t know, SIDS. That’ll teach you to get trapped in one of these stories.

Posted in Rites & Rituals 2 years, 10 months ago at 2:05 pm.

74 comments

74 Replies

  1. *SHRUGS* I just wanna shoot the writer for this carrot top-esque pasta.

  2. Anonymous Apr 3rd 2009

    Another joke pasta? this one’s less funny though.

  3. Awesome.

  4. It's a Secret Apr 3rd 2009

    I thought only babies died of Sudden Infant Death Syndrome..
    Ohwell…

  5. adfsdf Apr 3rd 2009

    lollin.

  6. This story reads like a total asshole/douchebag wrote it.

    Game walkthroughs can never be funny in any context, ever…plz note and then kill yourself

  7. WhoWasPhoney? Apr 3rd 2009

    I thought april’s fools was over.

  8. Comment Leaver Apr 3rd 2009

    AWESOME!

  9. Cthulhu Apr 3rd 2009

    lol this is great

  10. Spunk Apr 3rd 2009

    Joke pasta wasn’t funny.

  11. Shuleeps Apr 3rd 2009

    Meh

  12. Diddler Apr 3rd 2009

    This joke pasta fails at life. It gave me a head ache. I’m going to mope now. Thank you.

  13. April’s Fools was over.

  14. I lol’d

  15. Harvest Apr 3rd 2009

    HHAHAHAHAH I lol’d

  16. Highlordmugfug Apr 3rd 2009

    Hahahahahahaha. Funny pasta is funny.

  17. Kat-chan Apr 3rd 2009

    LOL WTF?

  18. HackerOnHacker Apr 3rd 2009

    I’ll admit, I thought it was cute.

  19. NISIOISIN Apr 3rd 2009

    ….What….?

  20. Joke pasta is a joke.
    It’s not April Fools, so I have no time for worthless, unfunny jokes.

  21. The Person Formerly known as 'Noneya' Apr 3rd 2009

    EPIC.
    I absolutley LOVED this one.

  22. Naris Apr 3rd 2009

    Mildly amusing.

  23. Claire Apr 3rd 2009

    Lame as hell.

  24. 99% human Apr 3rd 2009

    ha ha. It sounds like most of the ritual pasters exept gone wrong.

  25. Anonymous Apr 4th 2009

    BUT WHO WAS FOURTH WALL???

  26. An Hero Apr 4th 2009

    XD I lol’d a bit.

  27. Anonymous Apr 4th 2009

    This reminds me of when I didn’t like a pasta, and I commented anyways.

  28. Anonymous Apr 4th 2009

    Sounds like a twelve year old relaying their “awesome” GTA run, when they died 47 times.

  29. Blinded by Tears Apr 4th 2009

    This is probably the dumbest pasta on the site. Sheesh, I could write better. Now I wish I had the time *shrugs*
    FAIL.

  30. Darth Skeletor Apr 4th 2009

    THEN WHO WAS HORDAK?

  31. Shan. Apr 4th 2009

    I’m sorry, but this sucked.

  32. Midnightgirl Apr 4th 2009

    oh i love that game, i didn’t get to that part yet though :(

  33. Yotan Apr 4th 2009

    better than the holder’s series, for sure

  34. Sigma Apr 4th 2009

    Uh…what?

  35. Pffft, this was an awesome parody, I don’t care what anyone says.

  36. adfsdf Apr 5th 2009

    awful lotta QQ goin on up in here from some very humorless children

  37. WHARRGARBL Apr 5th 2009

    I laughed.

  38. Dirjel Apr 5th 2009

    It was meh, except for the line about fireballs, and winning. That made me smile.

    …I’ve been playing Sonic’s Ultimate Genesis Collection too much >.<

  39. Candlejack Apr 5th 2009

    The stork one was better

  40. Well, I lol’d.

  41. hmm.. nah.

  42. Marie Apr 6th 2009

    I chuckled. :]

  43. Anonymous Apr 7th 2009

    I feel like whoever wrote this just read the first joke pasta and figured they were clever enough to write on too.

    They weren’t.

  44. Schmoople Apr 8th 2009

    LOL!

  45. lol Funny.

  46. Amused Apr 9th 2009

    This made me actually laugh out loud, now my co-workers are wondering what’s up.

  47. Door/Scream Apr 10th 2009

    I lol’d.

    Hell of a lot better than that Caps Lock blood shit.

  48. Anonymous Apr 10th 2009

    Severe Immune Deficiency Syndrome?

    new strand of AIDS i presume?

  49. Oh Rin Apr 10th 2009

    Wait wut?

  50. A good attempt, but a failed joke.

  51. Anonymous Apr 13th 2009

    Win. Not as good as Day of All the Blood or what the fuck ever it’s called.

  52. DJLoONa Apr 16th 2009

    R U KIDDING ME?!
    ive been gone for so long, this is the first pasta i decide to read and it’s THIS???!!!
    -headdesk-
    boooooo!
    it wasn’t even a joke pasta…its just garbage!

  53. Azriel Apr 16th 2009

    A good idea, but it just wasn’t funny. It could have been great, but it… just didn’t quite reach lol status for me.

  54. Lord McBain Apr 17th 2009

    ahhh… I’m an idiot. It took me a while to get it but I just looked at it again and finally realized what this pasta was trying to do. I can’t stand those stupid ritual pastas. They are extremely repetitive, pointless and aren’t in the least bit creepy. So, for making fun of them, I applaud the author. Well done sir.

  55. “Okay, did you get past the minotaur yet? By tricking it into walking into the fire pits using the red scarf?”

    EPIC REFERENCE TO KING’S QUEST VIII. <3

  56. i smirked, kinda stupid pasta here but it’s worthy enough.

  57. I thought it was amusing at first, but then it just pissed me off that the narrator couldn’t get his shit straight. This so makes me not want to do this ritual.

  58. Schteve May 7th 2009

    oh lol

  59. Ell oh ell… lots of fags without a sense of humor. I laughed quite heartily at this. The idea of ritual-pastas being ‘walkthroughs’ was delicious, and the fact that all the writers always know EXACTLY what you need to do: When to breathe, what to say when, and where and how hard to take a shit (or else you will be KILL BY DEMONS)

    The thought of a ritualfag trying to pass on this ritual, but not remembering it all, strikes me as more human, and humans are inherently lulzy

    Then, the ‘second playthrough’ made me literally laugh out loud, as if someone would want to do a ritual twice (and run the risk of YOU ARE THE DEMONS again)

    ‘You win when everything is on fire!’

    Greatest ritual pasta line EVAR

  60. Nookie Jun 7th 2009

    Lame as hell… but I LOLed

  61. Now see, this is perfect because it’s a brilliant satire of most ritual pastas.

  62. retarded smurf under your bed Jul 22nd 2009

    lol

  63. Anonymous Oct 20th 2009

    Sudden infant death syndrome? But I’m older than 1 year already.

  64. jimmy dean Nov 2nd 2009

    SHUT THE FUCK UP.

  65. Nezumi Nov 28th 2009

    Awesome name wasted on an unfunny ritual pasta parody. The Only Sensible Ritual Pasta is funnier and better-written.

  66. ASEANYMOUS Dec 29th 2009

    BUT WHO WAS RITUAL PASTA?

  67. Farseli Jan 2nd 2010

    Ooooh hahah. Yeah I lold. As soon as the key was mentioned I was thinking, “What key?” Will bring a friend next time I eat this.

  68. Jay Autumn Mar 5th 2010

    that’s 2 minutes of my life i cant get back….would have been better spent watching paint dry

  69. Amusing, but boring. Joke stories are only good when they are either incredibly funny or have a decent storyline. This had a bit of both. To the author, work out the storyline before you start writing.

    Fear the Darkness

    -Nex

  70. that guy...yeah,him Jun 24th 2010

    this story was a good break from reading creepy pasta all day. i understand the frustration and anger of haters of the story because this was probably the first pasta they read today and they were probably looking to be scared. but if youve had a creepy pasta marathon like me enjoying your friday night then this story would prepare you for more so thank you. the story would honestly make a great video game and if i ever get the money for it i will make this game,edited and actually good however. it will have the same name and will be for ps3. play it in a few years when it comes out!

  71. SIDS?! OH NO!

  72. Anonymous Aug 12th 2010

    potential to be funny but didn’t quite get there…the whole walkthrough idea was clever though

  73. Someone Aug 13th 2010

    uhh? what? forget you im going down the path labeled destiny.

  74. Rikyori May 24th 2011

    OK, wait a minute…I die of Sudden Infant Death Syndrome?


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