Her Name
It wasn’t a big deal at first, you know? It was just another story online, one you’d read in the comments of a YouTube video, designed to scaring you into posting it on eight other videos. You know the kind, where you die a horrible death or your crush will reject you if you don’t spread the word? I didn’t think anything of it at the time, but now it’s the only thing I can think about.
The comment started by saying that “she hasn’t left [the poster] alone in days” and “by reading this, she’ll come for you.” I don’t even remember the exact wording because it was late and I was tired and I’d seen a hundred other comments like it before.
I forgot all about it.
Until she started coming after me.
It started with little things. A flash in the corner of my vision, a strange shadow on the hallway floor. Then it got worse. I started to hear whispering when I was alone in the house, giggling, the sound of footsteps. I now know that she was teasing me. Sort of like how a cat will clamp its paw over a mouse’s tail and bat at it before it kills it.
Mirrors were the worst. She liked to stand just out of frame when I was brushing my hair, so when I shifted my head to get the other side, she would be there, standing next to the bookshelf, with her long, tangled hair, matted with blood, falling down her shoulders. And that grin.
Oh, God, that grin.
Her teeth were always bloody. I was never sure if it was her blood, or… I don’t even know.
Every night it seemed to get worse. I would see her on my way to class, in the rear view mirror of my car, dragging her talon-like fingernails across her own, rotting flesh as I stared in abject terror.
For a while I put it off to sleep deprivation. Finals, you know?
And then she came to me.
It was late, so late it was technically early. I couldn’t sleep because all I could hear was her giggling. I covered my face with the pillow and shut my eyes tight, when I felt something cold on my hand.
I was paralyzed with fear. It was sharp and it was cold and it was moving down my arm towards my elbow.
“Come out to play,” she said in that lilting, upsetting voice I’d heard one too many times before.
I screamed and sat up but she was gone. For the moment.
My biggest mistake was when I talked to her. I’d just stepped out of the shower and she was right there when I opened the curtains. I shrieked and stumbled back and she leaned down to me.
“Why?” I asked. “Why are you doing this?”
She told me why. It was because I knew something about her. That altercation ended with a serious head injury that landed me in the hospital.
That’s where I am now.
I can’t take this anymore. I’m just one person, it’s too much. I know what I have to do. I think I always knew.
God, I’m sorry. I’m so, so sorry.
Her name is Nora. She should be there soon.
Nora, you say? That’s not a very scary name
Haha, I love ones like these. I’m always FUCK NOW I KNOW even though it’s not real. I mean. It’s NOT real. Right?
…guys?
That was sort of well written, but not really scary.
Okay pasta is okay.
:/
Not exactly original, but the writing was good.
My aunt’s name is Norah. We get along well.
Other than that, it was nice. The idea isn’t all that original, and it didn’t exactly scare me, but it was well-written.
Ahh~ I totally agree with #2 >.<
It was a tasty pasta, though =D
Crazy guy is hallucinating, then falls in shower. SCARY!!!
Enter the biggest cliche in scary story history:
The “OMG you read it now you’re next!”
Lame.
I thought it was yummy.
I haven’t read many like this, though. So I guess it’s sort of new to me.
BUT THEN WHO WAS YOUTUBE?
Okay pasta, I’ll probably have late-night hallucinations…
Also, I wanna wait for the first “Nora” commenter. XD
I know, right?
I have this problem about reading the end first sometimes. I already knew her name before I started reading it =/
oh, i love that one..not a new idea but very well-written
that was the name of my grandma’s dog : I
BUT THEN WHO WAS NORA?
(Nora is the name of an acquaintance of mine. Not the sort who’d be convincing as a Samara lookalike)
Really? The “reader is screwed for reading story” story plus the “scary dead girl with long black hair” story? Both stories have been done so many times that you can’t distinguish between them anymore. What ever happened to original thought? Did it just vanish?
Aside from being grammatically correct, this was compeltely terrible.
Cliches aren’t bad when used right, and this story was well written.
Enjoyed, and will enjoy again soon.
Can’t wait til’ this pops into the back of my mind, come bedtime.
The apology at the end gave me a slight shiver.
I’m reading this at 3:00 AM in a dark room by myself. FUUU
See guys, this is what happens when you don’t forward your chain mail.
jeez, i’m the cleaner. This is why you whould never eat cheese before going to bed. tsk.
I ONLY WANT SOME LOOOOOOVEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
somewhat predictable. Not a bad story but the ending was pretty obvious… 6 skulls =P
Fairly decent. Standard “now you know something about me i must kill you” story, but good twist on the actual piece of info.
Pretty nice, but not too nice.
Meh.
YOU KNOW SOMETHING ABOUT ME
WHO WAS– Oh wait, It was Nora.
It’s a little hackneyed, the whole concept. It was a decent pasta, but still stale.
Looks like I have lots of new friends to play with.
You should’ve seen him in the shower. :3
I see you in that mirror, you know, that one you keep on the wall in front of you?
Standing behind the victim is the best way to scare him.
And then kill him.
Very overdone type of ending, but the pasta was so well-written that it doesn’t detract from it. A successful pasta!
I’m just glad I didn’t read this last night when I saw the link in a Twitter update…
Hey, I just need to know where the bathroom is. can someone help me out?
Wow, totally didn’t see the ending coming.
Originality is lost.
oh mann..am I the only one who thought it was creepy…
I think it was the last sentence that made it creepy..
very very nice
Hehehehehe.
Hee. Heeehehehe. Hee.
Wait, you’re passing it onto me? You fucking jackass, what did I ever do to you. You know, sometimes sorry just doesn’t cut it buster. Apology not accepted. You don’t you just go jump of
Is there a site where people just get half blank posts, fill in some adjectives, and then post this boring bullshit here? Honestly, try actually thinking about a good story instead of using the same cliches over and over and over.
The exceptional grammar didn’t even keep me from giving this story a 0/10. Hopefully you can return some day with some better pasta.
Good pasta. Pretty well-written and scary enough. Wait a sec… What the hell is that noise? I better go chekjaofjdahof;ihrf,ek8[kl;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
WITNESS
Man, maybe I’m in a warp bubble or something, because I swear I’ve seen this pasta on this site before.
uh, no. It falls just as flat as the copy-paste chainletter curses it makes fun of.
If you fall into the same traps as what you’re trying to mock, you will fail. This story is a prime example.
Me liked this pasta…yummy
This is one of the most boring creepypastas I’ve ever read. It was written well, but that doesn’t make it a good story. It wasn’t scary at all.
My sister and I read it on our seperate laptops at slightly different time.
Is Nora supposed to bring her twin or something. lol
Ur in the hospital because you are a crack head.
Nora sounds prettty hot in a sick way. I would love to have some kinky masochist sex with her. MMMmmm
Nora, huh? Is it that one mong girl who posted like, 20 minute videos of her entire day documented? If so, it is very much terrifying.
BUT THEN WHO WAS SHOWER CURTAIN?
man, i was just trying to be sexy for you.
i have daddy issues.
Unoriginal, but still well written. I don’t think I’ll be able to sleep tonight.
That’s freaky, just before I read this I had called my friend Nora over D=
Makes me think of smile.dog.
Spread the word, guys.
Hai guise what”s going on in this thread?
this was good. But similair to la muerta blanca
hmmm, i like this one. Not great, but still likeable.
It was alright but I found the comments far more amusing.
omg! dont give her to me! lol jk i loved it! its great and scary! keep giving us good stuff like that
Wonderful. Thanks to reading this site, I now have at least 10 otherworldly stalkers. Thanks, creepypasta… thanks.
HAI GUISE! I’ll be there shortly! Just need to find my way to your place. ^_^
Nora clearly wants me. And my dick.
What the fuck man. It wasn’t anything close to that. Fuck you man I was just trying to be a good person you know?
Oh, look. Another “scary story now it’s gonna get you” pasta.
YAWN.
I feel the same as PK. The Comments > The Pasta.
WITNESS PHONEHOLDER OF SAINT PAUL LOOKING FOR VENGEFUL BRIDE POLTERGEIST FOR LOVING, COMMITTED RELATIONSHIP NO WISPS NEED APPLY.
Meh. It was alright. Would have been better if I hadn’t seen a hundred pasta’s like it before…
Another witness freakout eh? What is it about little girls with long black hair and sharp fingernails? Would we not be afraid of some grown, sexy blond wit a manicure and a pretty smile? Well… I guess not.
*head explodes*
Long-black-haired chain-letter ghosts? Hum.
Hello.
Goodbye.
hey nora we have been waiting for you the last one they sent us ran away maybe we will have some fun with you but we dont really like your name
I like this one! It seems kind of lame and cliché with the whole “it’s just like all the others except this one’s REAL OMG” thing, but that’s also part of what makes it freaky. idk.
I think this was a tasty pasta, actually. I like this kind :p gives me a jump at the end. WITNESSpasta did it.
I give it a 10/10 for originality.
So is the new obession now elaborating on spam chains? Boringpasta is boring.
Was anyone elses first thought was of Norah Jones? I knew there was something odd about her.
Old pasta is old. This is just a rehash of stories where the girl follows you and kills you unless you tell someone else about her.
We could call that Witness Pasta, right? Unfortunately, there’s only ONE story for witness pasta, and the name of the girl just changes, as do the circumstances of the person learning the name. But it all works the same. “Hah, this is bunk” “Oh fuck it’s happening” “Here, you take her.” Boring, done before, no interest, no creepiness.
5/10. I still like the way it was written. If only it hadn’t been written before!
Nora is actually my name.
So, lol?
Pfft… So, apparently all that we have to do to get rid of her is tell somebody else, and then they tell someone else.
HERP DURP SHE COMIN FER U NOW ROFL
This twist is completely new and original!
OH MY GOD, I WILL NOT BE ABLE TO SLEEP TONIGHT!
Hah, no this was pretty bad.
Sorry.
Unoriginal concept, but very well-written.
I see you. :U
Can we see some new stories soon, please?
I GOTS MAH SCARRIESES.
IM ONS MAH WAI.
Decently creepy.
You freakin asshole, what did i ever do to you. Pretty good pasta.
Scary? Well fuck you too, who do you think called the ambulance when your stupid ass fell and cracked your head open in the bath tub?
Old concept is old.
She’s harassing you because her name is Nora.
hey nora, when you come for me will you give me a blowjob? I need some love isnt enough anymore..
by the way i have an xbox 360, wanna play it with me? I dont think monsters like you and the tails doll are scarey, i think you are potential friends, and if you dont wanna be friends i can always use my soul gems to trap you.
and if i cant do that, ill forward the curse to so many people that you wont know who to haunt and youll head will exploode
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OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD YOU GUISE
I agree with cocoa. according to these stories, I should have died about 4 times and also be being stalked by, lets see, let me list them.
tails doll,
about 4 ripoffs of samara & the grudge girl(including nora)
alma wade
sam fishers ghost
An angry monky
maybe 20 different monsters.
There are too many to list.
Why would you do that ;-;
I will see you soon Nora
It wasn’t scary worth a dick, but man, it was creepy. Well done.
Anonymous just made a very creepily jumbled post about the Hive Mind from Dead Space. Kudos, Anon.
Why didn’t you come play with me!
I just wanted a friend
and now i have to go and hunt every idiot who read this, good job jackass…
That is all.
SON OF A- *groan*
I agree with #2 as well. Because Fuck, now I know.
OMG! Nora! I told you not to make fun of them!
I’m sorry, guys. I’m the mother of Nora… Please forgive my daughter for being “too friendly”.
Nora! You won’t get away with this, young lady… You’re grounded!
It started off as a good idea and the intro wasn’t bad but it was written crapply. Sorry had to say it.
good idea though.
So all this time, it was Nora who was phone?
Well I’m glad that’s finally settled.
damn it got me at the end
NORA,YOU COME AROUND MY HOUSE AND I’LL WHACK YOU WITH THE TELEPHONE D:<
It was me…. all along….
I love this one<33
Yummy.
Cocoa, luv the comment. ^^
BUT THEN WHO WAS COMMENT POSTER?
Oh no,I’m not sleeping ever again.I thoroughly enjoyed this one,good job! I saw someone like this in a nightmare once. She said,”Wake up…” Kind of like how you described her voice. Strange,isn’t it? But I enjoyed this because of the similarity to my nightmare,and it was very well written as well. Kudos to the author.
THEN WHO WAS SHOWER
But, wow, not sleeping….ever….again
fuck i just want to fuck
The worst part there is a Nora at my school who looks like obese chipmunk now I get those awful images in my head D:<
Her name is Nora. She should be there soon.
Her name is Nora. She should be there soon.
Her name is Nora. She should be there soon.
Her name is Nora. She should be there soon.
Her name is Nora. She should be there soon.
Her name is Nora. She should be there soon.
Her name is Nora. She should be there soon.
Her name is Nora. She should be there soon.
I think I’m good.
Very unoriginal concept, but extremely well-written, which made it a decent, creepy read. Unfortunately for me, a co-worker sneaked up behind me and scared the daylights out of me the instant I finished reading the last sentence. Amazingly frightening timing! Enhanced the pasta experience 10000x!
I’ll start off by saying this was not an original concept. Curse stories are ridiculously common.
But I loved yours. I can’t even place why. It built nicely and the images were terrifying; things that always slip across my mind when I pass a mirror or am driving.
So no, not the most innovative, but truly one of the creepiest pastas I’ve read in a long time.
Also as soon as I finished the last sentence I heard a knock on a door. Intensified the experience a thousand tomes over, and I will definitely be thinking about it come bed time.
I knew a Nora once. She was kind of a bitch.
But she had a great ass. Delicious, delicious ass…
Gotta say. It’s a cozy 10:08 AM here and I’m STILL kinda freaked out. No, this isn’t the most original idea, but I liked the execution. Thanks for the thrills ‘n’ chills!
Oh God dammit now I gotta go visit all you goons.
I haven’t the time for this…
Very creepy. I really liked it. Way to take something everyone can relate to and turn it into something creeeeeepy.
Yes, a cliche idea, but very well done. Eep!
God damn it. I don’t spread rumors about you, asshole.
Mmhmm, I think you got it wrong. My name is actually, “THE GAME”
So… She knocks her down in the shower… and says that she knows something about her… But it’s too vague to actually be any help…. But she still knows what her name is despite never having met this person, monster, thing…. Wait, What?
“You know something about me.” she says. To which I reply ” Yeah… I know that YOU ARE A SCARY BITCH NOW GTFO of my bathroom.. I’m taking a shit…”
see, my problem with these lie in the story itself. It’s just another ‘read this and pass it on or you’ll die’, just with more detail, and saying ‘oh the rest are fake, but not this one’
0/10.
I REALLY LIKED THIS..LOL.. GOOD JOB!
You cannot possibly contest a good ol’ fashion insomniac.
Is there any actual discernible difference between this story and “Witness” aside from a few specific details?
that part where the grin thing goes on…. reminds of that smile.jpg I had nightmares for a week after seeing it
BUT THEN WHO WAS SHOWER?
Funny end, Idk why, “she will be there soon” part just made me laugh a little. Guess it didnt really fit the story. lol
BUT WHO WAS CURTAIN!
Oh, sorry about the teeth thing I was eating fruitrollups. <3
But who was ohshi-
lol i read da last sentence… then I read it again… then I simultaneously shat brix and had my head went ker-boom/splat…
BUT THEN WHO WAS UNDEAD COMMENTER?
ok im freacking sorry but this thing scared the shit out of me
im really sorry….
Her name is Nora. She should be there soon.
Her name is Nora…She should be there soon…
Her name is Nora…She should be there soon…
Her name is Nora…She should be there soon…
Her name is Nora…She should be there soon…
Her name is Nora…She should be there soon…
Her name is Nora…She should be there soon…
Her name is Nora…She should be there soon…
Her name is Nora…She should be there soon…
In Silent Hill that is…
im not showering or going to bed anymore : )
really liked this story! COOL!
WHAT THE HELL, MAN?! Us dark haired girls need love too, asshole! What did I ever do to you?!
Poor Nora, now she has go around and kill people because of you. I hope your happy.
Damnit. I always read the last part first.
i’m in yer bathroom mirror, watchin’ you pee!
fuck you nora come here ill fuck you in the eye socket fucking bitch
My grandma’s name was nora
Predictable ending, but otherwise, very good pasta. Seconds are welcomed x]
Please that’s ridiculous.
Oh, brb, someone at the door.
No-no-no-no Nora! No-no-no Nora! No-no-no Nora! No-no-no Nora!
Nora Nora Nora is a stalker!
You and extra-creepy stalker Nora
Grab Your Backpack!
Let’s flee!
Run away!
Fucking curse!
You can’t flee from her!
Hey! Hey!
No-no Nora, No-no Nora
Victims, no escaping! Victims, no escaping!
“OH SHI-”
Nora is a stalker!
Sorry. It was a good pasta, but that was the first thing that popped into my head when I read the ending
): no, no. you got it wrong! my name is DORA.
short for doraemon but the last couple times i tried to get you people to pronounce it you screwed it up.
but at least they didn’t confuse me for nora back then, jeeze.
her name is nora. she should be ther soon.
I’ll be waiting for her…. She hot? doesnt matter…
AND THEN THEY FUCKED
God damn it guys, are you kidding me!? I get so many of these ‘creepy little girl’ meme bullshits! DO YOU KNOW HOW MANY UNDEAD LITTLE GIRL BODIES I HAVE!? ENOUGH TO FILL A FUCKING HUMMER LEMME TELL YOU.
Actually, I was naked when he got out of the shower, ready to fuck. He just fell because he was surprised by the fact that my penis was bigger than his.