A Mother’s Love
One afternoon, a couple was traveling on by car when at a far distance they saw a woman in the middle of the road, waving frantically.
The wife told her husband to keep on driving because it might be too dangerous, but the husband decided to pass by slowly so he wouldn’t stay with the doubt on his mind of what might have happened and the chances of anyone being hurt. As they got closer, they noticed a woman with cuts and bruises on her face as well as on her arms. They then decide to stop and see if they could be of any help.
The cut and bruised woman was begging for help telling them that she had been in a car accident and that her husband and son, a new born baby, were still inside the car which was in a deep ditch. She told them that the husband was already dead but that her baby seemed to still be alive.
The husband that was traveling decided to get down and try to rescue the baby and he asked the hurt woman to stay with his wife inside the their car. When he got down he noticed two people in the front seats of the car but he didn’t pay any importance to it and took out the baby quickly and got up to take the baby to it’s mother. When he got up, he didn’t see the mother anywhere so he asked his wife where she had gone. She told him that the woman followed him back to the crashed car.
When the husband went back to look for her, he noticed that clearly the couple in the front seats were dead, one of whom was unmistakeably the woman who had flagged them down.
Baby saved thanks to ghost mother. More touching than creepy, really.
Old pasta is old.
She deserves a ”#1 Mom” mug.
But WHO WAS HARRY POTTER BABY?!
What is this, snopes urban legend bullshit? Sucked
Generic.
seriously, that was fucking awful. the writing made me want to punch babies.
So if both parents were dead, where the hell was ghost dad?
that was more sweet than scary good pasta though
8/10
Wording was bad, too many run-on sentences. Not a good read, non-original concept.
3/10
Bland pasta is bland.
I printed this story off to read before bed every night; it puts me right to sleep.
0/10
allow me to paraphrase this pasta in a shorter, more accurate form.
“so theres this guy an his wife and they were driving and they see a lady waving for help. so the guy says holy shit and pulls over. he asks the w oman if she needs help and she says she had a wreck and her husband is ded but her baby is still alive. so the guy’s like fuck yea ima save baby and git laid so he goes and HOLY FUCKING SHIT BOTH PARENTS ARE STUCK IN THE CAR IT WAS A FUCKING GHOST OH MY FUCKING GOD.
an he never got laid”
Bland and generic.
No.
1/10.
Short, sweet, and tasty. An old concept, but still quite good.
That made me d’aww, more than anything. <3
It was generic, but not in an all-bad kind of way. It was sweet, but not scary in the slightest. 6/10
I agree, this pasta is old and boring, I for one want to see some original posts on here, rather than old stuff that’s already plastered all over the net before someone decides to send it here. Use your imagination people, copy-paste is not cool anymore. I an not criticizing WHO WAS PHONE, just the people that should take a creative writing class or two before posting stuff here.
More sad and touching rather than creepy. Still good though.
Not scary. Protagonists should have names. “the husband” and “the wife” gets repetative quickly.
pretty sure i’ve read this before. if not, it was completely predictable.
Talk about a shitty father.
he made the woman do the walking.
It’s not unoriginal, douchebags. It’s one of THE originals. This story is probably older than most of you combined.
BUT WHO WAS WORST PASTA EVER?
meh….
Ghost dad was off at the ghost bar having a ghost beer before driving his ghost wife and ghost baby home and driving into a ghost ditch turning them into ghost ghosts.
This pasta gave me food poisoning.
Oh, wow. Old pasta indeed.
Ancient Pasta, has been sitting in the back of the fridge. Deserves a place on the site, but anyone who is a fan of creepypasta has likely come across this again and again for the past few years. But, like I said, it should stil be here.
Heard it before. Nothing new
I’m a sucker for the classics.
fucking shit this is as ancient as my mom’s athletes foot
Wow! That is so cute!
Sounds more like a glurge than a creepypasta.
I give it 5/10 because it reinforces the stereotype that men does not help with chores. WHERE’S the ghost dad?!
Ugh. So terrible …. not even one ounce of original plotline here. This is like an R.L. Stine pasta or something….
But WHO WAS WOMAN?
more heartwarming than creepy but whatever
Really? This story has been around as long as cars.
That wasn’t creepy, it made me d’aww
The fact it made me d’aww staves off its criticism though
meh
Very unoriginal plot.
I’ll admit, I teared up a little.
Awh. I liked it. Cute, nice story.
“So if both parents were dead, where the hell was ghost dad?”
The story is called “a MOTHER’S love”, weren’t you paying attention?
… Nah, but seriously, it’s a sweet story idea, but not terribly insomnia-inducing.
I think people will hate this and while I find it’s obviously an old and tired pasta, it’s nice to see something that isn’t as “edgy” and masturbatory posted on the sight. It’s just an old-fashioned piece of short ghost fiction.
That episode from Supernatural comes to mind…
This is absolutely terrible. No doubt. This looks like it was copy and pasted from one of those “Scary Stories For Kids” websites. This pasta was a complete failure. You know what, i dont even think its worthy to even be CALLEd a pasta. Screw it, crappy story is crappy.
Cute little creepypasta, but I agree on the writing. Prose and word choice screamed Junior High writing assignment.
I totally agree with MisterVercetti. This was such a sweet story~ C: Made me ‘aww’ at the end. xD
that was just sad
obv ghost dad didnt care
But who was abortion?
Read this before. :/
Aw. :3
@Hoothoot
Too busy watching ghost football
Now this is more the sort of calibre of story I like to see. Nothing cheap or pretentious.
Good story, if a little unoriginal.
Underdone, though. In these super-short pastas you need a little more description.
Sentences run on a bit too much.
Potentially very good, if you like this type of pasta.
That’s moronic. Hurrhurr two dead people, just ignore them.
I AM A DEAD SKULL!!!
how cute. Not very scary though.
:,)
eh.
this one’s very old, more like a folk tale than pasta. but still a good one anway.
Wording was horrible, sounds like a 12 year old wrote it. Cute story, although not creepy at all.
This pasta was enjoyable, but rather tame in comparison to some of the other pastas. Perhaps that’s good or perhaps that’s bad.
Decide for yourselves, Creepypasta viewers.
–Char Mander
Poorly written, and an old idea. Nice try, but I suggest a little more practice and some better ideas before posting again.
Been there, done that.
Candy-buying ghost, anyone?
Anyway, a cute old story, but gawd, this writing was terribad.
the writing made me wish everyone involved with the story…all characters in it, the writer, the poster, and everyone who’s read it…would die a horrible death so that this story ends right here and now.
now they’ll be a creepy pasta about how this story murders people so that no one can share it.
So the dad wouldnt have at least checked the people in the front of the car before taking the baby? Yeah HUR DUR I dont think so, what a badly written pasta
ghost dad is with ghost mistress. damn ghost dads…
touching, fucking touching.
THEN WHERE WAS WIFE?
Lolwut’s comment made me lol. “Harry Potter” indeed!
meh. just… meh. Not creepy at all, and not exactly well written either. I didn’t find the concept touching either, too clichè and overused, but it does have some potential.
this is a classic spook…shabby,short and predictable
Horribly written, unless it was written by a 10-year-old. If that’s the case, it’s passable.
I saw the ending coming. Give me a break. I like the idea, but it’s really far too cliche.
This pasta left much more to be desired. I’m hungry for something keyed by a skilled hand.
the story was more sweet not scary the mother wanted someone to help her baby
Blegh. Bland pasta.
This is a lot better than most of the pastas around here. I don’t know what you guys are bashing it for.
Generic Urban Legend. Heard things terribly similar too many times to count.
I heard a similar story on a documentary, Maybe unsolved mysteries only in the version I heard the woman was naked and someone called the police to come out and there was no woman anywhere to be found, Just the dead mother and the little kid still alive in the car. The little boy said he saw the woman too.
lmfao this is so poorly written
THEN WHO WAS ROAD….not even good
Saw it coming a mile off.
THEN WHO WAS BABBY!???
God, this legend`s older than my grandparents.
I’m sorry but i have 2 agree with most of the other readers, generic and bland…horrible pasta. I could tell from the beginning that she was a ghost i mean she JUST HAPPENED 2 escape while the others r stuck. U epically failed
cute
SO TOUCHING, I SHED TEARS. title sounds like an incest porn tho
Aw shit, I read this exact story when I was like FIVE.
The woman shouldn’t have been a ghost but the murderer of the passengers in the 1st car, when the dude finds out that they are cut up and returns to his car, his wife should have been cut up and dead with the “ghost” woman no where to be seen until he hears something in the corner of his ear…
That was sweet
that was retardeed
veeerrryy old pasta. think R.L Stine also did his one version of this…
but eh, still kind of sweet I guess. also, if your going to spread this around…..you might as well fix the horrible handwriting before you post it XD
Not a creepy pasta, in my opinion. Actually quite touching and sad.
Not a creepy pasta, in my opinion. Actually quite touching and sad.
“So if both parents were dead, where the hell was ghost dad?”
the dad was a nigger
thats a really creepy thing to think about. but i like how the baby was saved because of the mothers creativity.
“If both of the parents were dead, where was the ghost father”
ghost dad-watching the game, now go make me a sammich
I liked it
See, we can copy-paste from yourghoststories, too.
There is nothing more powerful than a mother’s love <3
Come on, mothers aren’t all that great. Usually they just go berserk and eat things.
This wasn’t scary. More just comforting, lol. And sort of an old idea.
Creepypasta is more like creepystarter. Surprisingly satisfying. A new rendition of a traditional dish.
8/10
Wooooow, this is actually very cute. :}
iHope if me & my mom ever qet into a accient this happens. ^_^
I knew this was old. A quick scroll of the comments proved my point. Still good though.
GLUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURGE
i\’ve never seen this one before, it made me smile. now i wanna go hug my mom. ha
people take shit too seriously on here holy
Not the most original story, but I liked it.