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Who’s That?



Estimated reading time — 3 minutes

My basement has never exactly been a welcoming place. It’s unfurnished; there’s no carpet and the walls consist of boring, exposed bricks. There’s a set of old wooden stairs on one end that creaks whenever anyone uses them. Behind the stairs is a storage area that begins about four or five feet off the ground and goes maybe fifteen feet further back underneath the garage. The place is a dump, as my brother NEVER cleans it, and toys and tools and random things are sprawled out across the entire basement floor—and that’s an accomplishment considering how huge it is. It’s not very wide but from one end to the other it’s at least eighty feet in length, including the storage space. However it is not easy to see from one end to the other since the water heater, furnace, and other appliances sit conveniently at the bottom of the stairs to make it impossible to carry large objects like the Christmas tree up and down stairs.

Anyways, one night we had some friends over. By “we,” I mean me and my parents. They had a little girl with them, maybe four or five years old, and since my brother was elsewhere—as usual—I wound up sort of babysitting this girl while the parents chatted over desserts or something. Since the basement had so many toys, I thought it was a good idea to take her downstairs to play. Upstairs was kind of boring for a kid her age. The first thing she did when she got down there was find a large box. We had just replaced our washing machine, so its ginormous box was just sitting in the middle of the basement floor.

It was as if I had completely vanished as soon as she crawled into the box. She had entered her own little world, playing house or something. I tuned out for a while to check emails on my iPod while she entertained herself. And then she caught my attention:
“Who’s that?” She asked. I blinked.
“Who’s who?” I responded, confused.
“That man over there—the man in black,” she responded, completely straight-faced.
“There’s no one there,” I told her.
“That’s because he went upstairs,” she told me.
At this point I took the girl upstairs and sat with my parents for the rest of the evening, not saying a word about what she said.

Two years later, I had some friends over in mid-February. In Wisconsin, this means that if you were to go outside at night, you would be frozen solid in under ten minutes. So me and my friends were stuck inside and went downstairs to investigate the “haunted basement” I told them about—the above story, in fact. There were five of us, including me and my cousin. I had a tape recorder to collect audio, my cousin had a digital camera, and the others were armed with flashlights—because they wanted to turn off the lights… reluctantly.

So we pulled the strings to turn off the lights and we sat there in the pitch black basement, but only for a few seconds. A halogen light bulb began to flicker above my head almost immediately. I reach up to find that it was halfway plugged in, but still a coincidence. I hadn’t even turned on the recorder yet. So, I unplug the light and turn on my recorder and tell my cousin to do the same to his camera.

It was past eleven o’clock at night, so it was silent. Absolutely silent. Several minutes passed. We even did that thing they do on TV where you just ask questions to whoever or whatever… there wasn’t a single response. So, it turned into a bit of a joke. We started making fun of the situation and felt pretty stupid; we laughed for a while. Finally, my cousin’s camera gives a low battery warning, so we decide to take the last few minutes seriously.

“Okay, I’m going to count down from three and then let’s have it quiet again,” my cousin says, “three… two… one.” A few silent moments passed. My cousin’s camera beeps and shuts off. I turn off my recorder. We go upstairs to listen to the footage, and that was that.

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Of course, the footage was rather uneventful. We listened to the entire tape, and for the longest time we heard nothing but the sounds of our own voices. Until the end:

“Okay, I’m going to count down from three and then let’s have it quiet again,” my cousin says, “three… two… one.” A few silent moments passed. My cousin’s camera beeps and shuts off. But then in the half second between the camera turning off and the end of the footage is a whisper:

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“Don’t leave.”

We all stared at each other, petrified.

“Who’s that?” one of my friends asked.
“The man in black,” I told him.

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16 thoughts on “Who’s That?”

  1. Sounds to me like he was enjoying the company, not all “occurrences” have to be malign, just as all stories don’t have to be bone-chilling. True or not, still a good story, imo.

  2. All i could think of was someones basement being haunted by johnny cash.
    Not gonna lie, I’d be okay with that.

  3. I wish it would have ended less casually and there was actually more than *two* occurrences with the creature. Not good. Had me saying “oh, come on” at the end
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  4. This had so much potential. Who’s That? Really the title alone drew me in. I love mysterious, unknown and seeking titles. I figured a mysterious figure, haunting the main character but this was very lackluster. The Man In Black shouldn’t have, in my opinion, gone up stairs. He could have moved toward them but then be sent away when someone from upstairs called down for them to come up. That would have given a bit of fear to the story, again in my opinion. Secondly, this pasta made it here I think due to it’s untapped potential because this is clearly an appetizer, not a meal. SO MUCH POTENTIAL

  5. This had so much potential. Who’s That? Really the title alone drew me in. I love mysterious, unknown and seeking titles. I figured a mysterious figure, haunting the main character but this was very lackluster. The Man In Black shouldn’t have, in my opinion, gone up stairs. He could have moved toward them but then be sent away when someone from upstairs called down for them to come up. That would have given a bit of fear to the story, again in my opinion. Secondly, this pasta made it here I think due to it’s untapped potential because this is clearly an appetizer, not a meal. SO MUCH POTENTIAL

  6. Well, I personally do like this pasta due to the fact I read another one about a young girl who wanted a friend and summoned Jezebel, who was a pure black entity who caused so much havoc and shit in her home. The fact it was all black makes me remember that and think of all the potential this story could hold if
    More happened 5/10 I rate this. It needs more detail, more information, and what happens after they listen to the tape? What do they do now that they know someone is down there

  7. I think I would have liked it better if there was anything to follow through after that. Even if he’s completely casual about it, I would have liked some sort of resolve.

  8. The story is not bad, but the ending sounds very casual. It’s as if you’ve welcomed the black man in your home. Also, there’s not really a moment that this Creepypasta gives me goosebumps.

  9. I’d like to know why 2 years passed before he decided to tell his friends about his basement. In my opinion, this pasta wasn’t in the least bit creepy. But interesting in it’s own right, I suppose. 5/10

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