Anna Hamilton didn’t see herself as a suspicious person but when someone’s been following her for quite awhile she gets a queasy feeling in her stomach. Guaranteed she was out late but she was strong and from taking the new karate classes she knew she couldn’t (and wouldn’t) be defeated. Anna picked up the pace, her legs and arms pumping as she turned her walk into a brisk one, looking back to see that the dark silhouette was still following her.
Anna had the strongest urge to spin around and smack the strangers face and demand them to answer why the hell they are following her at this time of night. But her mind argued with her, saying how just maybe it was a coincidence. Maybe the stranger was just going the same way as her. A few more minutes and she had came to the entrance of her cookie-cutter home. She hated it but she wanted to humor her mother and to make it seem as if she actually cared about the presence of the house so she had put flower pots randomly. This neighborhood had no history of crimes but Anna has seen th news and people seem to get crazier by the second. She turned at a ninety degree angle up her drive way and what now seemed to look like a man, slowed his step, making Anna grow even more concerned.
“Look, can I help you with something? Are you lost or did you just want to follow me for the hell of it?” Anna finally confronted the man but all the man did was look up at her with haunted eyes and moved his head forward once again. It was almost robotic, “Well, I’m going inside now,” Anna unlocked the door and with suspicions she locked it up quickly behind her, watching as the man walked into the foggy night.
The next day and Anna had almost forgotten about the whole ordeal. But looking out her bedroom window she could see the shape of a man standing right outside her property, toes barely touching the curb of her yard. Turning around, she turned on the light and to make sure she wasn’t crazy she turned back to her window, only to see the mysterious man had gone.
Walking with her purse across of her shoulder she headed to her place of work, which so happened to be the library. If someone would ask she would say she loved her job, the smell of books and the hushed laughter of the school kids. Everyone loved Anna too, she was known to be the ‘cool librarian’, as she let the kids sneak in food and drinks or let them be a little too rambunctious.
As always her fellow librarian and friend, Katy, sat on one of the desks behind the tall counter. But instead of the latest Cosmo issue, she had a newspaper in hand, “My dear Katy! Is that actually a newspaper in your hands? I never knew I would be alive the day that Katy Pryce would read it,” Anna joked and Katy stuck her tongue out in response. Anna put her bag in the crew room and went to sit next to her friend. Peeking over her shoulder, Anna’s eyes furrowed and she pointed to a picture of a man that looked very similar, “Hey, I know him!”
Katy looked interested and set the newspaper down an inch, “You do? How?”
Anna shrugged, “He’s weird, he followed me home yesterday and I think I saw him outside my lawn this morning.”
“Are you sure Anna?”
Anna looked at her friend in confusion, “Yes of course, why?”
“He was murdered two weeks ago.”
Credit To – Kiah Johnson
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Meh, it wasn’t bad, just been done to death already. You’re read one, you’re read them all, you know? Nice attempt though.
Try a re-post with more details and maybe another murder.
was the guy like guarding her or something? this was such a cliche i never got the point of such pastas
Maybe he’s following her because he’s pissed off that she’s an awful librarian.
Like the idea. I’ve read worse
this was OK i do like how they had that shadow man type deal..
Its okay, the main character is a bit of a Mary-Sue though. (Urban dictionary it if you dont know what it means) I’d say like a 4/10 imo.
And then a skeleton popped out!!:D
lol
But who was BOOK?!
Felt rushed. Bad grammar. SUPER DUPER cliche ending.
Alt ending:
“I know that guy”
“That’s impossible!”
“Why?”
“Because the call is coming from INSIDE THE HOUSE!” O_o
Couldn’t have said it better myself.
Urgh. This started with a cliche and ended with a cliche, and the grammar was cringeworthy. However, I kind of liked it. Kind of…a plain butter pasta that is too al dente for my taste and lacks salt. But satisfying. 4/10.
I’ve never been on this site before in my life…and this is the first story I read. This does not bode well…this story is a cliche.
Crappypasta
wow this is definitely going to sound mean
but i feel like a six-year old wrote this…
What if she does have a time limit? o_O
Not bad. It was a nice lite pasta. Only problem I have with it is the grammar.
I’m sorry, but this is a pretty terrible story by creepypasta standards. The plot and “monster” were both generic and not creepy at all. Half of the story was completely lacking in necessary commas. The whole story felt rushed, like you were on a strict time limit while writing this. If the story was more detailed, with actual descriptions of characters, and maybe a different ending, than this could be an alright story. However, I didn’t notice any typos, which is a feature that most stories on this site lack. But, that’s one of the positive features of the story, and overall, it doesn’t fit in on creepy pasta.
You should keep practicing your writing, and maybe you could become a great horror writer some day.
This story would get a 3/10 from me, but I’m writing this on an iPad, so I can’t actually rate it.
You had a decent concept going here until the very cliché ending. Grammatical and punctuation errors made this almost unbearable to read, I suggest more proof reading and all around effort put into future posts.