Elsie stood on the front steps of the mall, her brunette hair waving in the wind as she gazed at the fading storm, the clouds illuminated by the sunset. The air still smelled of petrichor and wet concrete, a nostalgic, earthy scent that brought her back to the first time she ever came here. Elsie was only four years old when she first visited the Dana Mall. Back then, the mall was bustling with life. Countless shops lined the walls, selling indescribable assortments of clothing, books, toys; anything a little girl her age could’ve asked for. She vividly remembered the soft pitter-patter of rain on the roof as it hit the glass windows above her. It had been 23 years since that day.
The mall is empty now. The windows and doors are boarded up with rotting planks of wood, buckling under their own weight. Security gave up on patrolling the mall years ago. The grass outside has grown wild and unkempt, full of life in a stark contrast to the towering complex beside it. The mall is a husk of what it once was, like decomposing roadkill, molding and withering on the side of a desolate roadway.
Elsie softly smiled under her respirator and turned around, looking at the boarded-up doors in front of her. âI haven’t been to this place in years,â she muttered to the camera mounted on her head. She took off her backpack and set it down onto the dry, shaded concrete beneath her before pulling out a crowbar. The planks on the doors tore away with ease after rotting from the inside out for many, many years. Elsie slid the crowbar into her backpack, glancing down at the broken, wooden planks now lying on the floor, where they would continue to lie until someone interfered. She grabbed her backpack and hitched it over her shoulders before making her way into the mall. She carefully stepped into the darkness, clicking her flashlight on to illuminate her path.
The mall had been desecrated by time. The air smelled of mildew and old grease as she stepped into the empty food court. Vaguely readable decals lined the walls, ripped and torn from years of leaks and weathering. Abandoned center-aisle carts sat covered in debris, their remnants left exactly as they were the day the mall closed. Elsie’s careful footsteps echoed across the vacant mall like gunshots, mocking the bustling crowds of the once-filled corridors. The heat inside pressed down on her like a physical weight, making her sweat in her long-sleeved waterproof jacket. Two escalators sat frozen like static staircases, their rubber handrails cracked and covered in grime. Mannequins stood in the darkened windows of storefronts, coated in dust from decades of stillness.
Elsie wandered deeper into the mall, letting memory guide her more than the faded directory signs. She passed the skeletal remains of clothing stores she had once begged her parents to stop at, their shelves collapsed beneath water-damaged ceilings. A toy store still displayed sun-bleached boxes in its front window, while a bookstore smelled of swollen paper and mold, its scattered pages rustling whenever a breeze slipped through a broken skylight overhead. She narrated quietly into the camera mounted on her head, commenting on collapsed storefronts, strange patches of moss climbing polished tile, and the occasional trail of animal tracks disappearing into the darkness.
The further she traveled from the food court, the stranger the mall became. She made her way through the complex before stumbling across an employee corridor hidden behind a pair of heavy service doors. This hallway showed less decay compared to the rest of the mall, but its hard walls still showed signs of cracking and instability. The fluorescent light fixtures overhead were dead, but the ceiling was mostly intact, and the floor held slightly less debris than the public corridors behind her.
Her flashlight finally settled on a wooden door at the end of the corridor, and she stopped mid-step.
Everything about it felt wrong.
The surrounding walls were stained with decades of water damage, their paint peeling away in brittle curls, yet the door itself wore a smooth coat of dark-oak woodstain that reflected her flashlight with a dull sheen. The hinges gleamed with fresh oil instead of rust. There were no marks on the floor to suggest someone had been using it. It was just clean.
She hesitantly stepped toward the door, her steps echoing across the dead mall. Every instinct told her to turn around. The silence seemed to deepen with each pace until even the faint creak of her backpack straps sounded intrusive. Her flashlight beam trembled slightly across the polished wood, revealing a brass doorknob free of tarnish, as though someone had wiped it clean only hours before. She reached out, her gloved hand hovering just above the handle. For a long moment, she simply stared at it.
“This… definitely shouldn’t be here,” she whispered to the camera, her voice sounding unnaturally loud inside the narrow hallway.
She wrapped her fingers around the knob.
It turned effortlessly.
The latch clicked with a crisp metallic snap that echoed down the corridor.
Elsie swallowed and slowly pulled the door inward.
The hinges moved in complete silence.
It was a small, cubic concrete room. A single incandescent pendant light hung from the ceiling, its yellow light illuminating a very small portion of the room. Very faintly, in the back left of the room, something is sitting on a freshly made bed. Itâs a mannequin. Completely white, faceless, and unmoving. Its ball-socket joints are visible from across the room, like a poseable doll.
It does not speak. It does not move.
Elsie glares at the mannequin, her body unmoving. Eventually, she walks into the room, stopping right in front of the mannequin, gazing at its features.
It does not speak. It does not move.
âWhat the fuckâŚâ she mutters to herself. Something is wrong with it. She canât pinpoint what, but something is wrong with it. Deeply wrong.
âWhat⌠are you?â she asks. She doesn’t expect a response, of course. It’s a mannequin.
Something happened. It responded. Not verbally, not mentally, not physically; it just does. It just is. She knows that.
âanything you want me to be.â
The mannequin did not speak. The mannequin did not move.
Elsie’s breath catches in her throat. The response⌠she didnât hear them. Didnât feel them. Didnât think them. But they were there. As clear as day. The words settle into her mind, not spoken, but known.
âAnything?â she apprehensively questioned.
Nothing happens. The mannequin is still there, sitting on the bed.
It does not speak. It does not move.
The words âanything you want me to beâ race in her mind. How can that be the case? It’s just a mannequin. Tears well up in her eyes from fear. She clenches her fist tightly until her knuckles turn white.
âIf you can literally be âanything I want,â then how about you start by growing a goddamn face.â She says shakily.
The mannequin is still there, sitting on the bed. Thereâs a face. A womanâs. She canât see it, but itâs there.
It does not speak. It does not move.
Elsie blinks. She stares. The mannequin is a blank white slab, yet somehow⌠a face. A woman’s face. She can sense it, feel it pressing against her consciousness, impossible features mapped behind that smooth plastic surface. No muscles twitch, no eyelids flutter, no lips part. Itâs just⌠there. She squeezes her eyes shut, presses her palms against them until she sees stars. When she opens them again, the mannequin is still just a mannequin. But the knowledge remainsâlike muscle memory of a face that wasn’t there.
Elsie took one slow step backward.
The mannequin remained seated on the bed, perfectly still beneath the warm pendant light. The impossible impression of its face lingered in her mind, refusing to fade. She couldn’t describe itânot its eyes, not its mouth, not the shape of its nose. The details dissolved the instant she reached for them, leaving only the certainty that a face existed where none should.
Her pulse hammered inside her ears.
“…No.”
She laughed once.
A brittle, uncertain sound.
“No. That’s not how this works.”
She raised her flashlight, sweeping its beam across the room. Bare concrete walls. Smooth floor. A single bed with crisp white sheets. No windows. No vents large enough for a person. No hidden doors.
Nothing.
Her breathing gradually slowed.
“I’m hallucinating.”
The words sounded reasonable enough.
“Mold. Carbon monoxide. Something.”
She repeated them until they almost felt true.
The mannequin did not speak.
The mannequin did not move.
Still, the room no longer felt as small as it had when she’d entered. Distances seemed uncertain. The corners sat farther away than they should have. The ceiling hung just a little too high. Every time her flashlight drifted away from the mannequin, she found herself unable to remember exactly where it had been sitting.
She kept looking back to reassure herself.
It was always exactly where she expected.
Exactly.
She swallowed.
“…I’m leaving.”
She backed toward the doorway without turning around.
One step.
Then another.
The hallway beyond remained exactly as she’d left it, swallowed in darkness.
She reached the threshold.
Stopped.
Something tugged at her.
Not physically.
It was subtler than that.
Like forgetting the final word of a sentence.
She frowned.
“What…”
The camera atop her helmet emitted a quiet electronic chirp.
Its recording light blinked red.
Battery low.
She instinctively reached up to tap it.
When her hand lowered again, she realized she couldn’t quite remember why she’d come here.
Not just the room.
The mall.
The city.
She remembered driving.
Rain.
The smell of wet pavement.
Then…
Nothing fit together anymore.
She looked down at her backpack.
It felt unfamiliar.
As though someone else had packed it.
Her own gloves seemed oddly oversized.
Her breathing echoed inside the respirator.
Or maybe someone else’s breathing.
“…Hello?”
The word sounded strange.
She wasn’t sure whose voice it had been.
Silence answered.
The mannequin did not speak.
The mannequin did not move.
The recording continued.
Later, investigators would recover the camera just outside the doorway.
The footage would be perfectly intact.
It showed Elsie entering the room.
Examining the mannequin.
Standing completely motionless for hours in complete silence.
Thenâ
Without warningâ
The camera fell to the ground.
When the picture stabilized, the camera lay sideways on the concrete floor.
Its lens pointed toward the bed.
The backpack rested where it had fallen.
The flashlight rolled once before coming to a stop, illuminating the lower half of the mannequin in pale white light.
There were no footsteps.
No scream.
No interruption in the recording.
Elsie was gone.
Search teams combed every inch of the abandoned mall.
Police dogs found no trail.
No footprints were leaving the room besides the ones leading in.
No hidden exits.
No collapsed tunnels.
No evidence of her ever being there.
Nothing.
Months later, the footage found its way onto obscure corners of the internet.
Some viewers insisted the mannequin had turned its head.
Others claimed its posture had shifted between frames.
Video analysts demonstrated that neither was true.
Frame by frame.
Pixel by pixel.
Nothing moved.
No explanation was ever accepted because no explanation ever fit.
The room was never found.
The mall was still dead.
Rain leaked through broken skylights.
Trees forced their roots beneath cracked foundations.
The world moved on.
Deep inside the abandoned building, behind a dark-oak door that never seemed to age, a single incandescent light continued to burn.
The room is empty now.
The mannequin did not speak.
The mannequin did not move.
Credit: BirdInAWell
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