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The Advent Calendar

Estimated reading time — 20 minutes

It was the Christmas of 1965, before man had landed on the moon, before the wall had fallen, before many things good and bad. For me it was the last time that I knew innocence, before the creeping shadow which engulfed my family, before the madness, before death; before. It was the advent calendar, that damned thing which I had to have. Each door a promise of Christmas, and each window a misted reminder of the warmth and kindness of the festive season.

I was nine years old, and while the parents in my neighbourhood would have had no fears for their children in the past, allowing them to play freely in the icy December streets, those days were lost like breath on a mirror. If snow had fallen, there would have been no joy; no snowball fights in the darkened evenings, no sledges sliding carefree down the fields nearby – children could not be children. Though the young may have felt apprehension in the dark, it was the parents who were the most fearful; terrified of the ultimate loss, a pain they could never extinguish.

For the previous three Christmases, without fail, the worst had happened: a child had went missing. While I was very young, I remember it all as though it were yesterday. The suburb where we lived had become the most sombre of places. Such a tragedy can do that, slowly draining away any hope or happiness from a community like blood from an open wound. No Christmas tree nor carol sang could stem the flow.


The first to disappear was Tommy Graham. He was 11 years old and although I had seen him around, I didn’t really know him personally. I remember my mother crying about it. Just the thought of something terrible happening to a child distressed her greatly, and the pain that the parents must have been going through was often on her lips. That Christmas my dad held on to me tighter than he had ever done before, and I could tell that they were affected terribly by the disappearance just as the rest of the community had been. The following year, another Christmas came and another child was taken. Her name was Cheryl, and she was only four years old; tiny and fragile. Tears were shed, misplaced rage vented towards the police who were unable to find her, and by New Year it was the commonly held view that, like Tommy the year before, little Cheryl would never be found.

I, like many of my friends, had been scared by the vanishing children. It was the first time that I became aware that adults could do harm, even to the most vulnerable of us – that children were not always safe, and that those bigger and stronger than us could have unspeakable things on their minds. Yes, I had heard the fairy tales and frightening stories of the pied piper and the bogeyman, but what was going on in our suburb was far more gut wrenching, far more real, than any tall tale.

Despite this impact, it was not until the third child disappeared that I was truly heartbroken. His name was Fin, and he was one of my friends, a close one at that. We lived on the same street, playing football in a field by his house and walking to and from school together each day. My dad used to take us to the cinema most Sundays, buying us each a hotdog, and, when we got home, mum would serve us a beautiful Sunday roast. Fin was like part of the family, and I still think about him to this day. Where would he have been now? What would he have done with his life? How diminished have we been not knowing that boy or the adult he would have become. No laughs, no tears together, just an empty seat in the cinema, a vacant desk in the classroom. I remember his blue eyes and blond hair more than anything for some reason, that and his happy-go-lucky nature. I missed him then, and even now I wish that it were not true.

Like the others, Fin had been snatched from his bed as he slept on that most peaceful of nights – Christmas Eve. His parents had tucked him in, hanging his stocking over the fireplace, kissing his forehead, whispering a Merry Christmas as he fell asleep. They woke expecting to hear the excited scampering footsteps of their son rushing down the stairs to see what Santa had brought, what wrapped secret boxes he had left by the tree; and instead were confronted with an empty bed, the loss of their only child, and an open window sucking in the biting frost of Christmas day.

The parents of all three children would not let go – could not – nor would they assume the worst. Search parties were organised, flyers were continually posted through letterboxes, pasted onto bulletin boards and shop windows across the city, and the hope was always there that somehow, somewhere, the three children would be found, unharmed, and ready to come home. That year, on the 28th of November 1965, all hope was extinguished. In an old sewage pipe across town, the crumpled fragile bodies of Tommy, Cheryl, and dear Fin, were found stuffed unceremoniously into a corroded pipe in an old sewer, rotting in the waters below. The pain was palpable, the families inconsolable, and for all of us who new any of the victims, it was to be a bleak and shadow-ridden Christmas.

Three days later the month turned. Eyes moved towards Christmas and the shaking fear that something cruel and callous lived amongst us all. Three children in three years, now into the fourth. What would happen that Christmas Eve? Which family would be broken? Which child torn from its comfy warm bed, dreaming of Santa, only to be killed and discarded like a piece of fetid waste?


My parents were nervous, and who could blame them. I sensed the change in atmosphere around the streets where I usually played; families pulling their children in earlier and earlier before the dark came. At night, on more than one occasion, I heard hammering echoing out from an unseen source; no doubt windows being nailed shut to prevent any more children being snatched as they slept.

On the 1st of December my dad hung our Christmas lights outside along the gutter of our roof; little beads of glowing colour piercing through each cold winter night. We tried to continue on as normal and think of happier times. As always, he asked me to help.

‘You’re my wingman, kiddo’, he’d say from behind his bright red scarf, clambering up a set of wooden ladders to the roof above. He had flown for the air-force before I was born and still used the lexicon of those days in the military, but I didn’t mind, it made me feel special.

In previous years I had been too small, too young to be of any real use in decorating the outside of our home. But my dad always included me. I think he just liked to do things with me, to have some father son time. Standing at the bottom of the ladders looking up at him whistling Christmas songs out loud made me feel part of the accomplishment, part of the yearly celebrations. That December was different, however; it was the first time I was big enough to go up the ladders with him, to look out at the old street below and see the occasional blink from a weathered set of lights clinging to a neighbour’s fence or home.

My mum was terrified – she had visions of us both falling to our death – but my dad always seemed sure of himself. Not arrogant, just confident, and cheerfully reminding us all that things would be okay. Looking back, I think that’s what I loved about him the most when I was a kid, the fact that he had it all in hand, and did everything to reassure his family and friends. I never felt in danger up those ladders, always loved, always safe; always. Before we came down I remember looking at the rooftops poking out in regimented lines from the streets around. I noticed that the world seemed different from up there, and that to me, there appeared to be fewer Christmas lights than ever before.

That night, I knew what was coming. My mum tucked me into my bed, as my dad finished hanging some paper ring decorations from my bedroom ceiling. I always felt that those decorations protected me somehow. I’d stir in the night, scared of the dark, and yet at Christmas time I believed that somehow those pieces of coloured paper, that blinking Christmas tree in the other room; that those symbols, those pieces of good will would keep whatever monstrosities hid in the dark at bay. My mum kissed me on the forehead and left the room, and there was my dad, standing in the corner with his hands behind his back, smiling.

‘Well, wingman, you know what time it is?’ he said as we both began to chuckle.

‘Let me see, dad, please!’ I yelled, excited.

From behind his back he produced an advent calendar. I leapt for joy across the room and hugged him before snatching it from his hands and diving back under the covers. Sitting down on the bed, dad ruffled my hair with his fingers, watching me curiously. He knew I loved getting an advent calendar each Christmas, and I had worried that I wouldn’t get one that year as he’d told me that most of the shops were sold out of them. But, dad being dad, he’d spent hours driving around until he found one, and made sure that on the night of December the 1st, the first night of advent, there it was.

The calendar was beautiful, handmade with carefully crafted drawings on its front and back. The lines and sketched colours lovingly showed a Christmas street full of lights, with houses covered in snow, and the windows beaming with a warm yellow glow waiting for the night Santa would arrive. What I loved about each year’s advent calendar, the good ones at least, was that they told a story. They showed something wonderful happening. Each door or window would be opened night upon night revealing a picture, building until that magical climax of Christmas. I loved the anticipation of the holidays, and the advent calendar symbolised the hopes that Christmas held; not just presents, although as a child that was a big part of it, but spending time with my family, seeing my grandparents who usually lived in another part of the country, and getting to eat all the chocolates and turkey I could cram into my mouth. Getting to be away from the boredom of school, getting to play with new toys, getting to have fun with my friends…
It was the thought of friends which brought me down for a moment. There I was holding an advent calendar, each cardboard door numbered from 1-24; from the 1st of December until Christmas Eve. The same night that one year previous, my dear friend Fin had been taken, murdered, and left to rot down a sewer.

I began to cry, and almost instinctively my dad seemed to know what was upsetting me. He asked about Fin, and when he mentioned his name I sobbed deeper than I had since his death. My poor friend who would never again go on those carefree days out with me and dad, or walk alongside me to school laughing and playing. It was then that my father explained to me something about death, words which have always stayed with me:

‘You know something,kiddo? As long as you keep the memory of the people you’ve lost in your mind and in your heart, they’ll always be alive. They’ll always be with you; so Fin is right here’, he said, pointing to my chest gently.

With those words I felt a soothing comfort wash over me, and, all cried out, my dad tucked me into bed, kissed me on the head and said goodnight – knowing to leave my bedroom door open slightly, to let some light from the hall keep my room from the dark.

He had left the advent calendar sitting nearby, its closed windows facing me from my nightstand. And yet I was exhausted, and so my thoughts drifted from what lay behind those cardboard doors to sleep, and hopefully to a more rested state of mind; but that did not occur. I woke in the night from an horrendous dream about my friend Fin, little four year old Cheryl, and 11 year old Tommy Graham, crushed down a sewer pipe; the water running over their bodies into mouths which once spoke and laughed and smiled, only then to be rendered silent by an unseen brutal hand. In the darkness Fin’s voice cried out, garbled and drowned. A word came forth and clung to me like no other: ‘run’.
I leapt out from my bed, soaked in sweat, ready to cry out for my mum and dad, but then something strange caught my attention, shaking me to the core. I looked to the advent calendar, to the drawings of cosy houses covered in snow, their windows beaming out into the cold December night; sitting there waiting almost as I had left it. Yet something was amiss, something which I had no memory of – the first advent door had been opened, the cardboard left ajar like the one to my room. Stepping forward, the sweat dripped from my hand as I pulled the door back to reveal what secrets the calendar had in store for me.

In what little light there was, I squinted, my mind slowly piecing together the picture behind door number one. As my eyes adjusted, I recoiled in horror at the sight, and screamed for my family. Within seconds the light was on and my dad appeared, picking me up, consoling me as he put me back into bed. I pointed feverishly over to the calendar, telling him that something awful hid behind the door. Of course he looked, then smiled reassuringly: ‘It’s just a happy Christmas scene, kiddo’, he said handing it to me.

Looking closely I could see that the picture had changed slightly. It depicted an old stone bridge covered in snow. Children played on top of it happily. Yes, it appeared quite harmless, quite serene. My father left and soon I was drifting back to sleep. Yet my mind hazed over with two thoughts: of Fin screaming ‘run’ in my dream, and of what I could have sworn I’d seen in that first little calendar door. The bridge was there, but underneath in the dark, eyes looked out to the children playing gleefully above; eyes which seemed wracked with rage and hate.

The next day at school went quickly, but on my way home I dragged my feet over the bitter frozen concrete paths and pavements, thinking of Fin and how he had always walked with me. As my house came into view, I smiled for a moment at the lights dad and I had hung on the roof. They warmed my spirits, but when I entered my room, my soul was chilled stagnant once more – the next advent calendar door had been opened. This time I knew, I hadn’t been there to do such a thing in my sleep as I had assumed must have happened the night before. No, someone had opened it. I touched the yellow number 2 of the cardboard door, a number which should have promised a treat or a happy picture reminding me that Christmas was near. I hesitated and then looked behind it. Another street scene played out before me. This time a small boy pulled a red sledge behind him as other children threw snowballs at each other, grinning wide and happy. At first I sighed with relief that the picture had no hidden intruder, no eyes staring out of the darkness in contempt; but just as I sat the calendar back down onto my nightstand, I saw it. The faint outline of a person looking out towards me, almost invisible, yet hiding within that Christmas scene in plain view, sitting there on the boy’s red sledge.

I closed my eyes and rubbed them, fearful that they might reaffirm the figure’s presence once more when opened. But just as the darkened eyes had disappeared from under the bridge on the 1st of December, the faint outline of the unseen pretender had moved on from the picture. I knew that no one would believe me, and even worse I barely believed it myself. My nine year old mind could not comprehend such strange and ominous occurrences, yet I was not so removed from the idea of horrid things scuttling around in the dark; creatures which even parents could not protect you from. The figure had moved on, I was certain of it, and I knew that it must have travelled and hid behind the door for the 3rd of December.

The next morning, I told myself that I would not open any of the closed doors from the advent calendar. I promised myself. Yet someone, something, was doing it for me. That night I awoke in the darkness once more. The same dream playing out, poor Fin muffled and drowned by the putrid sewage water. Crying out in the dark. Crying out, and yet warning, pleading. ‘Run’, he said. ‘Run’. Again, I leapt from my bed, and once more the calendar door for that day had been opened by an unseen force. There in the dark I looked, compelled by the fear of not looking. The terror of not knowing what was to come. For in that 3rd picture it became clear to me, something was on its way. Something unspeakable was plotting and slowly but surely drawing closer. Behind that door lay another Christmas scene, families skating on a beautiful iced lake, and under that transparent barrier between the cold air and the icy water, there was a shape. Darkened, indefinite, but malevolent, a blurred form under the ice, eyes staring up in disgust at the families who happily skated above.

I screamed again, and yet the results were all too familiar. My mum and dad arrived tired, yet never annoyed at their child for waking them in the night. Mum put me into bed, and as she did so I explained frantically to them both that something was appearing in the advent calendar, that each door held proof of something which meant to do me harm. Yet there was no evidence of it, only three open doors showing happiness and fun at Christmas. Dad said I was having bad dreams, and that he and mum would sit with me for a while until I fell asleep. I heard them whispering about work in the morning, but they were more concerned about me than losing a few hours of rest.


The next day, again, I tried to ignore the advent calendar; tried desperately to avoid its doors. And again, I failed. In the night I awoke from the same hideous dream, and yet this time, the calendar was not open. The door with a yellow number four remained closed. I hoped that whatever strange thing was in those pictures had left, that I could forget the hateful haunting eyes, and that I could return to simply enjoying the anticipation of Christmas; but just as I nodded pack to sleep, happier than I had been since they had first found Fin’s body, I heard something – the sound of a thumb or finger pulling at cardboard. I opened my eyes and stared in utter disbelief as the fourth door was pulled open by an invisible hand in the dark.

It is strange that I did not scream, but since then I have heard people say that when you are as scared as you can possibly be, that you cannot move, nor can you cry out for help. I opened my mouth, and no noise came, a paralysis of fear which was overpowering. There I lay in the night, staring wide-eyed at the fourth door, wondering what disturbing depiction it would reveal, and even more so, terrified that whatever had opened it still lurked nearby.

I wish I could say that it stopped, that the horrid revelations ceased, but I cannot. Some nights the dreams of Fin yelling at me to run came, but on others they did not. The only constant was that at some point a calendar door would be opened, whether in the morning or at night. Each door would show a happy scene, and each time something hideous, which only I could see, would be momentarily present. One door showed a group of carolers cheerfully singing at night, warmed by the glow of an open window, and at the rear there stood an outline, something watching, something waiting, something moving on relentlessly to Christmas Eve – the last door. Another picture showed a small girl, no older than poor Cheryl who had been killed, placing presents into a stocking, and yet for a moment there was the faintest impression of a hand, reaching out from the stocking towards the girl.

By the 20th the horrific pictures had intensified, as too had the dreams. Fin now screamed my name, his voice echoing up through a drain, pleading with me to ‘get away’. And as those nightly terrors revealed themselves, the pictures had taken on more weight, more immediacy, for I was certain that they now showed the street where I lived. My dad found me crying that night and when asked what was wrong, I told him. I believed that there was something evil coming. Something horrendous which had snatched a child each of the previous three Christmas Eves. The same evil which had taken my friend. That hidden horror which on Christmas Eve would come for me.

Dad reassured me that this was not the case, that I was imagining things. When he looked at the pictures on the calendar he just saw nondescript streets, anonymous faces, nothing which suggested the place where we lived. But I saw differently; the drawings clearly showed house by house, inch-by-inch, that something was drawing nearer each day, fleeting glimpses of a faint figure waiting to gorge itself once more. My dad offered to throw the advent calendar away if it was upsetting me so much, but I pleaded with him not to. I needed to know. I had to see what was coming, what was on its way to snatch me from my family as it had done the other children.

The 21st, 22nd, and 23rd of December were torturous. While I should have been excited for Christmas day, I was not – I was terrified, for I knew that I would never live to see it. The calendar door on the 21st, opened by something unseen while I slept, showed a house come into view, one with glowing lights hung around the roof gutter, and the faint outline of something terrible approaching nearby. I was certain that the house was mine, and that the light which beamed outward onto the snowy landscape was from my family. Though as I peered out into the night from my window, there was no snow in reality, just a biting wind and a frost which covered everything like a shroud. I could not see a figure out there, but I felt it, somewhere close, just waiting for Christmas Eve.

On the 22nd, the figure drew closer to our home as the snow fell around it in the advent calendar, and on the 23rd the prowler had reached the gate to our garden. That night I had such a terrible vision. In my dream I found myself lying in the dark. I could not see, and all that surrounded me was the empty coldness of winter. Pain coursed through my body and the sound of running water pushed over it, forcing me deeper into an abandoned drain. Putting out my hand instinctively, my fingers touched the frozen mouth of another child. Slowly it moved against my hand, and its stagnant lips whispered as if weakened. ‘Run. Get away.’

I did not wake screaming, nor did I leap from my bed as I had the other nights like an animal fleeing from a predator. There I lay in the silence of the night, and in that stillness, I cried. The paper chains and decorations my family had hung from my room’s ceiling proved no protection from the pain or from the thoughts of the three children, how they had been taken, and how I would be next.

And then the day had come: Christmas Eve. I was frightened, but a distance took me, one which slowed my words and left me dispassionate about the festive season, about my family. I wish I had not been that way and had savoured every moment I had left, but I was drained, numbed by the lurking fear which had haunted me for weeks. Tired of it all. A strain which no nine year old should have had to bear.

My dad knew that I wasn’t my usual self, as I normally relished Christmas Eve like most children, excited and completely enthused for what would come. But there I was outside in the cold, helping him fix part of the lights which had come unhooked in the wind. I watched my dad on the ladders once more, the wind rattling everything around – the slates on the roof, the trees, the gutter. I thought about how Fin’s family, or little Cheryl’s or even Tommy Graham’s, would have been preparing for Christmas day like we were, happily unaware of the loss they were about to undergo. At least I knew, I had foresight, each hideous picture hinting at that faint figure coming closer and closer to my home; to open my window as I slept waiting for Christmas morning. To snatch me from my bed, to slaughter me, discarding my body down a sewer pipe, used and forgotten. As the wind howled and the lights chinked and jingled together, I looked back at the gate to our garden, to where I had last seen my future attacker. I could see nothing, just an empty street on the quietest night of the year, but in that absence I could feel eyes bearing into me.

My dad climbed down the ladder whistling merrily to himself, and as I looked up at him I simply asked, matter-of-factly, if he would nail my window shut. He didn’t ask why, he knew many parents had done the same, and so we went inside as the evening rolled in, carried by the promise of frost from the outskirts of the city. Dad got his toolbox out and drove a large series of nails into the frame of the window. Once I was confident that there was no way to open it, I thanked him and asked if he would do one more thing for m; only one – to sit next to my bed all night and look over me until morning. Unlike the other nights, he did not tell me that there was no monstrosity out there, nor did he say that the world was a safe place, for that would have been a lie. He placed his hand gently on my shoulder and said: ‘If you need me, I’ll sit right here until it’s time to open the presents.’

And sit there he did. My mother came in to kiss me on the head before returning back to the kitchen where she was preparing things for the dinner next day. I so wanted to see it. Presents meant nothing to me by that night, all I cared about was being there at the family table, laughing with Gramps and Gran, and knowing that the nightmare of December, 1965, was over. I fell asleep as my dad sat by the bed, reading his book.

It must have been two or three in the morning when I woke. I was unsure of the precise time, but what I knew was that my dad was standing at my window, looking down, out to the street below. I whispered to him and asked what was wrong, but his reply was hesitant: ‘Nothing, kiddo. Go back to sleep’.

Then I heard it, certain and laboured. The sound of footsteps slowly walking up our garden path outside, shambling forward towards our home. The sound frightened me, and my thoughts immediately turned to the advent calendar, to the faint outlined figure which had haunted me. From what little light there was I could see that the door for Christmas Eve was sealed shut, yet to be opened.


The footsteps continued, one after the other, slowly, steadily. My dad stared intently outside as I asked if he could see anyone there, but he just shook his head in disbelief. The footsteps ceased and silence covered everything like the frost outside. Suddenly it was broken by three loud booming knocks. It was at our door. I cried out in terror and started sobbing.

‘It’s come to take me dad, like Fin and the others!’ I howled in utter despair as the tears slid down my cheek.

‘Nonsense. It must just be a neighbour or something’, my dad said unconvincingly.

‘No dad, it’s here to take me away!’ I screamed as I handed the calendar to him. ‘Open the last door, open it and you’ll see. Christmas Eve, each Christmas Eve it takes a child and if you open that you’ll see it, I promise, you’ll see it!’

Three more loud knocks echoed out, and for the first time in my life I saw fear flicker across my dad’s face as I could hear my mum stirring from her room, shouting through asking what was going on.
Three knocks once more, this time more pronounced.

‘Please dad, look at the door, open it and you’ll believe me. It’s here for me.’

My father’s hand trembled as it held the calendar tightly. Slowly, he opened the last door to see what was shown. ‘God no!’ he yelled out, and with that we heard the most hideous of sounds. One which was laced with dread. A click of a lock. The turning of a handle. And the front door opening to the cold. Then, footsteps climbing stairs, looking, seeking, and then slowly coming down the hall towards my room.
‘Dad please, help me!’ I pleaded as the nightmarish thing in our house drew closer.

He looked at me, trying his best to hide his fear, but I could see it etched into his face, into his soul.

‘Listen to me son, as soon as I go out there I need you to grab all your things, anything heavy, and barricade your door. Don’t let anyone in this room unless it’s me or your mother’.

I believe in that moment he saw the utter despair in my eyes, and before he left the room as the footsteps reached the room next to mine, he spoke gently, patting me on the head. ‘It’ll be okay’, he said. Then he was gone.

I did as he said, and as soon as he had left the room I moved my nightstand, my chair, my books, anything I could against the door, sobbing my eyes out, praying that my parents were safe. At first I heard nothing throughout our house. Then suddenly violent shouting erupted, a struggle quickly followed with what sounded like furniture being thrown and glass smashed, and then the worst of it – my mother screaming. She cried and yelled and agonised. And finally, I could not bear it anymore. I could not leave her alone. Clearing the things away from my door, I opened it, and wandered down the darkened hall. A cold icy air blew through the house. The front door lay open, decorations swung in the frozen breeze, and outside knelt my mother, alone, terrified, screaming into the night.

Losing a parent is hard for a child, and to do so on Christmas Eve harder still. Yet the torture of that night cuts deeper than most. Few can know my true pain. Over the years I have tried to understand it more clearly, understand what my life was before and what it is now, to little avail. I cannot give solid explanations, nor can I say that my anger will ever truly diminish. I’ve tried to live as best I can, putting the mystery out of my mind each year, each year that is, until Christmas. When the memories flood back like a comforting blanket, soon torn away by a silent hand from the dark. My own children, now grown up, have asked me why I become a little distant at this time of year, and to that I have given no real answer. All I can say is this: I do know two things, both of which haunt me to this day. The first is that no one ever saw or heard from my dad again, my mother remained tight-lipped until she died about what had come into our house that night – what took her husband – and who can blame her. I also know what the last door of the advent calendar contained, and what had frightened my dad so badly. It was a drawing like the others, a happy Christmas scene, with one horrid addition. It showed a boy sleeping soundly in his bed on Christmas Eve; a child who looked uncannily like my poor friend Fin, unaware that his life would soon be over, and that he was being watched through the frosted window by his killer – whose face looked remarkably like that of my father’s.

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44 thoughts on “The Advent Calendar”

  1. I’ve honestly spent the last 10 minutes reading comments and thinking, trying to figure out the ending
    I think that Fin was using the advent calender to show him that even though his dad just appeared as another normal parent he was a monster, a dark shadow amongst his neighbours and family and that the killer was closer to home then he could have ever thought. Tommy and Cheryl were never close to him so Fin,his best friend, being the last one to die would explain why he’s just being shown all this now. He was never in danger, but rather, he was being warned. His dad also never boarded his window down like the other parents as if he knew his son wasn’t going to be killed. It doesn’t make sense that he didn’t board down the windows because he was in the airforce, which potentially should have made him more paranoid then the other parents to keep his son safe because he wasn’t naive to seeing horrible things happening right in front of his eyes. Maybe something that happened while he was in the military messed him up or maybe he was always like that, but he probably only killed once a year on that day for a reason or maybe he waited as long as he could before he had to kill another child. The ladders at the beginning were foreshadowing too as this wasn’t noted as being a typical neighbourhood activity. I’m still slightly confused about the ending, but I have three theories. I don’t think it was anything demonic as it doesn’t point to any otherworldy wounds on any of the victims, no body discovery for the dad or any sense that something beyond the control of the families was doing this. I think that, as already mentioned below, the police came to arrest him and his mom never wanted him to know, the families found out and came to kill him secretly or when the dad looked at the christmas eve window and then outside, like in a telltale heart by edgar allan poe, he saw himself as a monster coming to windows to take children, but the fact that it was his own son this time that was traumatized and terrified, sobbing and begging for help hit him, regardless of the fact that his son was never in any danger and he either turned himself in, or told the mom what he did and left to commit suicide so no one else would die on account of him ever again. I think the fact that his son was little (therefore not being told, seen or knowing the full extent of what happened that year and probably finding it easier to believe it was a monster then his dad who he loved and who loved him which could be why fin never revealed the truth of who killed him until Christmas Eve) and never actually saw the black figure is a factor too as the mom’s account of the story would be the only reliable one. I think the neighbours were always secretly investigating or Fin or one of the other children showed their parents the truth too like the main character saw and on the simple intuition, as in how Susie’s dad felt in the lovely bones about Mr Harvey and his moment of sheer realization, came to kill his dad for what he did to Tommy, Cheryl and Fin, which is why it was never on the news and the thing his mom saw that she never talked about was her husband getting murdered by the other distraught families. M=I think he knew it was the neighbours, finally come to kill him for what he did to them and the 3 children, told his son to barricade his door because he was scared that the neighbours would come to kill his son too to truly get him back and make him feel the loss that he forced them to feel for so long, which would explain why he would say don’t open the door unless it’s me or your mom, the two people who would never hurt him, excluding the possibility of any and all neighbours, implying that they somehow meant to do him harm.

  2. I’m reading this at about 3am om my birthday and consider this to be a gift on its own. The tension that the story delivered was top notch. Not too sure if I care for the ending but everything else I enjoyed immensely

  3. I also think that the killer was the father, and since we read the story from the child’s point of view it makes sense that he doesn’t know more. I think the father disappeared because he knew his crimes will be revealed, so he escaped (maybe to another state).
    I think it would make no sense if it were the police or a mob, because that won’t go unnoticed by anyone, and at some point the kid would hear the truth. I think it was Fin’s ghost, who tried to warn the narrator, through the calendar, and since we know there was a hand that opened the windows, why could it not knock on the door too? The fighting sounds could be explained by the mother waking up and realizing that something was not right with the father.

  4. Yet another excellent piece from Michael.

    I loved the twist at the end, my own take being that the father was not consciously aware of his own crimes until the very end and that it was that realisation that caused his reaction. I loved the supernatural aspect of Fin trying to communicate through the calendar and dreams. Personally I don’t believe that the mother knew anything of her husband’s sub-conscious activities and that ultimately, confronted with what he was, he left of his own accord – to what fate, we will never know.

    Deserves it place in any collection of creepy christmas tales.

  5. But it says the kid never found out what happened to his dad. If he were arrested, wouldn’t it have been publicly announced & the dad would have been able to be tracked down? Even if Dad made a run for it, wouldn’t they have put out wanted posters or something?

  6. Interesting story. Good pace and build up climaxing with the ending. A good twist at the end with the switching of prospective from the boy to the father. The last scene from the Avent calendar resinates as well. It reveals who the actual killer was! Well written.

  7. Billy Winchester

    I believe that the police were coming after his father and that was the struggle, between the police and his dad. The police were the ones coming in. It explains almost the whole story.

  8. I have some questions though… why did he have his son barricade himself in his room? Why would the police coming for the father be a reason for his son to barricade himself in?
    And wouldn’t the kid eventually see news stories or hear from his friends/neighbors that his dad was the killer?
    I like to think a mob came and lynched him, instead of the police showing up. Which is why his father had him barricade the door (angry mob, don’t know what they’re going to do), his mother never told him what happened and maybe why the town never spoke of it again.
    And was the father planning on abducting someone that year? Was Finn warning him because his father was going to kill him?
    I liked it but kinda wish there was a little more there.

  9. this is a really great story, but one detail tripped me up throughout the read. since the parents know when children are being taken if not how I find it a bit baffling that we don’t see more signs of vigilance as the fourth Christmas eve approaches. How come no one is leaving town for the holiday, visiting with extended family or how about families staying together with the plan of sitting up on Christmas Eve night? You could take your family to Catholic Mass on Christmas Eve in an effort to avoid this situation. The fact that this is not addressed was very distracting through the entire read.

    Overall this is a good story and the ending seems to render my point moot, but not knowing that throughout the read I found myself annoyed and distracted.

    1. I was also baffled with this. Why weren’t the children sleeping with their parents? Making children come home before nightfall — That’s it, REALLY? Even if it was 1965, no one could have been that negligent.

  10. A.J. and J.J. Beauregard

    Mr. Whitehouse-

    My sister and I read this while procrastinating on homework. Seeing as Christmas had just past we figured we would read The Advent Calendar, hoping to see a “well-cooked pasta” so to speak.

    Our reaction? Wow.

    From the beginning you had us hooked. Everything flowed, and it was an edge-of-your-seat, mysterious story that had just enough of a creepy factor to raise hairs. The only part was the ending, but I surmised, like some others here, that the knocking and what not was a police officer or officers, come to take away the narrator’s father, who had killed the other children. The supernatural twist came from Fin trying to warn his friend about his father, hence the Advent Calendar and the mysterious dreams and occurrences.

    Well done. Both my sister and I loved your pasta, and are looking into purchasing some of your books :)

    ~A.J. and J.J. Beauregard

  11. Jennifer J. Beauregard

    Oh my Gorgonzola… No, to be quite serious that makes so much sense. I accept this.

    Thanks, the ending had me slightly confused, your comment makes the story’s end make sense. :)

  12. Terrible things happen everyday to children everywhere. In the real world when children disappear people don’t just move away. Children go missing all the time. I wish it didn’t happen but it does. My point is when tragedy befalls a certain area people don’t just up and leave. Maybe this family didn’t want to leave. The story revolves around this boy and his family. Mr. Whitehouse isn’t going to take a census of the town as to who left and who stayed. Then we would have people on here complaining about the fact that he told us a bunch of unnecessary facts. I guess you can’t please everybody.

    1. I have to disagree. its actually a rather glaring detail that should be addressed in some way in the story. our POV character could simply observe that some families started leaving town for holiday after the second disappearance or even simply attended midnight mass. this kind of consistency would make people feel as if the killer were easily avoided and its unbelieveable that supposedly loving parents would not take simple steps to keep their children safe.

      1. I think like I stated above it is an unnecessary addition to add to the story. When you have a scary entity sneaking up on you why worry about other families? What world do you live in where people have unlimited resources to move because I would love to live in it. Many families don’t have the money to up and move, if you ever watch the scary t.v shows like “A Haunting”, you will see most families put up with all kinds of abuse because of monetary reasons. Another real world example is when serial killers start abducting and murdering young women in college towns as it is a fertile hunting ground. Women don’t leave in droves. Why? Because they don’t think it will happen to them so they take precautions. There are tons of real world situations that constitute me feeling that way. While you may have seen examples of the latter. It doesn’t mean either one of us is wrong!

        1. I guess you didn’t read my post. I said leave town for the holiday which could simply mean go stay with a relative. I said attend Midnight Mass. Midnight mass takes place in every Catholic church on Christmas Eve and all are welcome. The killer is only taking children on Christmas Eve. For the parents to protect their children they need only be away on Christmas Eve. Hell they could just drive around all night for the cost of a few gallons of gas.

          Look if you knew there was going to be a killer in your home or apartment on the night of July 31st, but that the killer would be gone by the morning of August 1st would you really go home to get killed that night?

          Of course not. You’d find a 24hr diner and sit up and drink coffee all night or you’d at least think about it.

          Would everyone do it? Of course not. But the narrator does spend enough time observing the reactions of the townsfolk that it makes no sense that no one does any of these things. Hell the creep factor could be upped by the narrator asking the dad why don’t they run away and the dad could reply with confidence “don’t worry son, you’re perfectly safe.”

          I think its a great story tbh, but the fact that none of the parents did any of those things completely took me out of the story and distracted me the entire time.

  13. First things first, this is probably one of my favorite stories you wrote. I’ve read pretty much all of your books on wattpad and just recently started reading the ones I had missed as well as some creepypastas again, only to be greeted by another one of your masterpieces. You are probably one of the main reasons I submitted my first pasta yesterday.

    But to the story itself:
    Considering that I usually read creepypastas kind of half hearted, it takes a really good pasta to really get me and you managed to do that yet again. The way the tension builds up with the doors opening and especially the way it builds up to the end, with a really nice and mysterious twist at the end just made me sit up straight and my mind is still on the story even 15 minutes after finishing it.

    My interpretation:
    I think it’s relatively obvious that the father is the killer, the question that remains is what exactly happened and why.
    Having read the other comments, I agree that it’s most likely the police coming for the father. Considering the dreams and the last picture in the advent calendar, I think it was Fin’s soul that left hints or rather warnings for the main character through the calendar. When the father saw the last picture, he realized that there was more to the calendar and was obviously shocked at his crimes being exposed – potentially by a supernatural force. Staring out the window, he had also already realized that he had been found out, quietly awaiting his arrest. The noises, screaming and crying are definitely the parents fighting and the mother eventually acting out of shock and starting to yell in shock and despair. The reason she never spoke of what happened that night obviously being that she doesn’t want her son to know.

    In the end, I think the answer to the end is a lot simpler than it might first seem, but there’s still so much room for interpretation that the story definitely stays on your mind for a long time.
    A definite 10/10, as to be expected from you.

  14. I never thought I would finish reading this so I skipped to the ending, “whose face looked remarkably like that of my father’s” It immediately got me hooked since I thought it was a twist and I anticipated it to be the same ending I had in mind. Anyway, if you care, here’s what I had in mind–> (if you are too lazy to read what I’ve said above, this is my own version of the ending) The kid woke up again because of the nightmares, again, he ended up screaming because they were too terrifying. His father, hearing his son’s screams, rushed to his son’s room, unconsciously leaving his wife behind. When his father reached his son’s room, he immediately gave his sobbing son a huge hug. After several seconds of talking, they heard his mother’s scream, like she was in pain. The scream struck panic to both his father and to him, his father tried to console his son first, telling him everything will be alright and he will be back safe and sound after rushing towards where the scream came from. A several minutes have passed and still no sign from his father. He tried to open the last door for any hope to know what is coming for him, unfortunately for him, it was tightly shut. He started crying because of the unknown fear he was having. Because of his fear of what he might see, he closed his eyes instead. After closing his eyes, he saw Fin’s face, terrified and scared, Fin yelled to him to him ‘He’s near, no time to run’ then he opened his eyes, only to see his father staring at him. Only half portion of his father’s face can be seen. He was about to jump out of his bed and give his father a hug, suddenly, the advent calendar gave a huge thump sound. The kid ceased to jump out of bed as soon as he heard the familiar thump. He knew what it was, he was afraid but he had the feeling that he needs to check what the Calendar has for him. Slowly he took the calendar and gave a look at the last door, It was the same current point of view of his room, this time, the entity was no longer hiding, it was right in front of him, right next to the open door. Terrified and shocked, he dropped the calendar. Then there, smiling in front of him, a man whose face looked remarkably like that of my father’s. –I know my grammar sucks and there’s probably a lot more better words to use other than what I’ve used, but that’s the best I can give. Ow and I’m too lazy to proofread, it about 11:30 pm, lol I’m tired.

    1. But aren’t a” of his stories? From what I’ve read, Michael likes to leave parts of the stories to the readers’ interpretation.

  15. Jan Wesley Alipio

    Wow, this one really creeped tme out!
    Only if i was old enough to have a job and buy books id buy your book.
    (Sorry if my grammar is wrong im a Filipino)

    1. I get you man.

      Personally, I believe it means that his dad may have forgotten that he is the Killer every Christmas, after he has killed. And that’s why the main character’s friend, Fin tells him to run. And for this to make sense, the only way that the main character could run from the danger is via actually, literally running. This means the killer has a physical form and that he is close.

      To answer the frost at the door, I believe that is what possesses his dad – a demon, Santa’s nemesis, SantaN [had to make that joke]. It approaches, and it is actually tracked by the Calendar.

      Some loose ends of my explanation to tie up:

      1. Why would the mother not say anything?

      Explanation: Possibly to protect her child. If the threat is imminent, then it means that she could not really let it loose. So we deduce from this that the threat is not gonna appear again from what she believes. The critical point is that she will not tell anything to her son. This means it will possibly harm her son if he knows.

      Solution: She possibly saw her husband transform, and she could not let her son know.

      2. Why was his mother and him not harmed ultimately?

      Explanation: ‘God no’ is not something you say when you are in danger but not screwed. What I mean to say is – you only say it in a dangerous situation when you are praying. Or, in this case, the recognition of his alter self.

      Solution: He sees what he has become in the past, and refuse to let it happen again, so he does not kill his wife in the end, or harm his son. Rather, he just dissapears.

      OVERALL, this story is a 6/10, I gave it a 7/10 because it would have been MUCH better if Fin’s dad appeared instead of his dad. This would mean that the Fathers kill their OWN sons, rather than done by his own dad. I dunno, personally, when a creepypasta is more screwed up, the better it is.

      p.s. I read this on Christmas day, boo-yeah!

      1. or it could be that his dad was the killer. Fin’s spirit came for the father while the kid was seeing the events from the previous christmas in his calendar, mistaking it for the thing coming closer to him because the disappearances all happened in his neighborhood.

  16. This was definitely an edge of the seat read! The only thing I didn’t really understand was the very end. So the final door of the advent calendar shows a boy who looks like his friend, and the killer in the window looks like his dad…so does that mean whatever evil force was taking children on xmas eve was going to make him kill his own son?? I may just be confused because it is 3 am on xmas!!

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