Everyone loves a good scare. That’s why you’re browsing posts here, correct? You thought it would be fun just before you go to bed to scare yourself just a tad bit. Harmless fun of reading that, while getting your heart to race; never puts you in real danger.
So, what’s tonight’s topic for your nightmares?
Jeff the Killer with his Go to Sleep?
Slenderman silently stalking you wherever you venture?
A Candle Cove experience that hits home so nostalgically for you that it seem true?
Or, maybe.
Just maybe.
Something new and unique that haunts you in an unexpected way?
Whatever the case, you keep reading. Perhaps it’s all just a big joke to you. Something you laugh off rather than take seriously. No one’s holding a gun to your head, after all; you’re doing exactly what you’re doing of your own free will.
You need to stop now.
Stop reading this for your own sake.
S-T-O-P
You’re still here.
It’s your own fault, you know.
You’ve programmed it so deep in the back of brain that just being told to stop is completely ignored.
Optimistic about what’s next, aren’t you?
That’ll be your undoing. Just taking things as they happen; without a care in the world. Thinking your room is safe just because you have the only key to it. You have no idea how unsafe you are.
I know so much about you yet you know nothing about me. The last time you ever acknowledge my mere presence was when you were still pissing the bed. You called me the monster in your room or the boogieman.
You’ve just been blocking me out since then, really. You told yourself it was nothing but loose clothing or a misshapen shadow cast by one of your toys. I’ve never stopped watching, however. My dark red eyes stare at you even now just out of your peripheral vision.
Chills down your spine, I see.
Are you remembering the noose around my neck?
The tattered dark rags I wear?
The burlap sack over my face; which I have for your sake, so you’ll never know my true unfathomable horror that it hides?
My decaying, long nailed hands?
There’s that look.
The same look you had all those years ago.
One last request I see painted on your face.
Who am I?
Call me the Sunrise Killer.
All coming back to you, now; isn’t it?
Those unexplained murders you glanced by in the paper over the years.
I’m not bragging but I won’t deny them.
Nothing but practice.
For you.
Every single one.
Of you.
The brave ones who’ve prepared so long for something to happen at the apex of night.
It is darkest before dawn.
So, for you.
Just you.
The most hopeful of them all.
Look on the bright side.
You still have an hour before sunrise.
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So, an hour huh?
*Stares straight into red eyes in the corner*
*Unzips pants*
Just annoy the hell out of me.
these are only scary if youre half asleep at 2 in the morning. this one was kinda dumb
Let’s see. 60 minitutes *mumble mumble mumble* divide by driving speed *mumble mumble* carry the four *mumble mumble mumble mumble*.
Ha ha, just wait till I get back from the weapons store in 45 minutes with 2 ak-47s and an aa-12
I was bored, then scared, then i rolled my eyes. All in all, what im trying to say is the ending sucked
I’m reading this at 8:00p.m., the sun isn’t coming up for ten hours were i’m at.
It’s like eleven in the morning right now, so, jokes on you.
My dark red eyes stare at you even now just out of your peripheral vision.
Chills down your spine, I see.
Absolutely accurate. You have talent, I hope you make more pasta. :)
I better start preparing everything for his visit!I wonder if he likes cheesecake~? :3
“Stop reading”
“OK”
“No, wait, I cannot kill you if you stop reading (I guess cause you won’t remember me then)”
“So why did you tell me to stop?”
“…”
Meh.
The beginning was kinda interesting, but the execution was really disappointing.
First of all, like someone else already pointed out, the “Stop reading this for your own safety” line has been really overused.
Plus, the monster was too clichè and uncreative for me to take it seriously (red eyes and long nails are waaaay to boring and uninteresting for regular horror readers).
I think that the author wanted to write a story everyone could relate to, and, since we’re all here to read scary stories and we were all afraid of the monster under the bed at some point in our childhood, at the beginning it works. But then… Well, let’s just say that, if you read it on a sunny Sunday morning when your whole family is at home, the pasta loses most of its shock potential.
I suppose that reading it alone at home at 5:00 am would be scary, but I think that a horror story should be enjoyable no matter the time or the place you read it.
Like I said, the beginning was nice and relatable, and the idea of a “Sunrise Killer” is nice, so I would recommend you re-edit it a bit, maybe changing the killers character design to make him look more original and not trying to guess what the reader is doing while reading your story (because, like I explained before, if you don’t guess right it gets ridiculous pretty quickly).
Good luck! :D
(Sorry for any grammar mistakes; English isn’t my first language).
Dude guess what… I DONT HAVE A CLOSET
I stopped reading at “You need to stop now.”
but its midnight… SO THE SUNRISE IS EARLY TODAY :D
What if we are reading this at sunrise? I should do that.
But…it’s 11.25 am!
an hour til sunrise? K, I know the sun barely shines during the winter, but it’s 09:29. I think it’s bright enough. take that, Sunshine Killer.
JOKES ON YOU. There is no key to my room!
This reminded me an awful lot of CandleJack….
That moment where you think “Ah, none of this is true”…and then you look around just in case. I know you all did that! I was there!
huh… well look what time it is.
wtf sunrise killer. that’s a pretty shitty name.
Did this one end good, guys? I stopped when he told me to…..
it bright daylight where I am woohooo!
so we’re scaring ourselves before bed, but then its an hour to sunrise?
Some people take longer to read than others.
What if I’m reading this on the toilet….
One hour huh?
TO THE BAR!
*is not 9:18
Wtf it is 9:18, it’s 6:19. The website time is wrong
Awkward moment when I’m getting up for school in ten minutes and everyone in my house is awake
Not too bad, but I was kinda disappointed that there wasn’t more to it.
I like this. However, it sounds a lot like Candlejack. This may not have been intenti-
I bet Candlejack would beat his ass from here to timbuc
You got lucky, it’s 5am…
Is it just me, or does the Sunrise Killer sound an awful lot like Scarecrow from Batman?
hmm seems legit
*stops halfway through*
so you claim to have been “watching” every single one of us all at the same time.. seems legit
Maybe he’s Santa Claus :D
so something was watching me all those nights … i feel sorry for it
I would feel sorry for myself to if I had to watch you every night
then whatever it is knows what a pervert i am?
I should have stopped because now I’m just disappointed
Apply cold water to the area burned.
*giggles*
” You still have an hour before sunrise. ”
But… it’s only noon :(
What if I work nights?
Wow,that one actually kept me interested theough out,the story nice job.
Let me put it this way: stop asking me to stop reading for my own good. Just stop. Don’t do that. Please don’t.
It doesn’t add suspense, it just annoys and adds padding. It lessens the build-up and makes a mediocre payoff worse.