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Star Light



Estimated reading time — 11 minutes

I remember the first time I witnessed that gruesome sight, right in front of me. It had been all over the news for the past week but until that moment, I was still unable to take any of the stories seriously. I guess that’s what happens in a world where the media exaggerates every little story they encounter, to pull in more dull-minded viewers.

It first started in the icy wastelands of Russia, back in 2012, hikers passing through on their travels discovered bodies half-buried in the snow, their abdomens mutilated and the occasional limb removed, only to be found a few meters from the body. At first these finds were put down to wild animals desperately searching for food in the lifeless tundra, they barely even made news on Russian broadcasting networks, only the locals to the areas (of which there are few in such a desolate place) really heard the stories.

It’s strange, now that I think about it. The attacks had been happening all through late December and simply went unreported until February when things became more severe. Heck, maybe those Doomsday lunatics were onto something after all and no one noticed.

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As the days went on, after the initial attacks, panic in the Russian wilderness began to spread as more bodies were found in the wild, remains scattered in the snow and yet an even larger amount of people became reported as ‘missing’. It wasn’t until mid-January that the first body was discovered in a public area. In a small rural town, sitting on the edge of the wastes, two disfigured bodies were discovered by a few poor citizens on their way to work, their limbs scattered all over the streets. This was the first case that managed to work its way into the mainstream media outlets. Everybody just dismissed it as a murder case, the sort that you hear about in foreign countries all the time. What kept my attention was something the autopsy reports discovered: The murder hadn’t even happened at night. It seemed to have happened only an hour before the first poor soul discovered the freshly broken body. I mentally gagged at the thought of finding a body strewn across the floor, still bleeding.

As the days went on, more and more reports came in of bodies being found in small villages across Russia, completely destroyed and with no clue as to the cause and just like the original, all of them had happened in broad daylight but with no witnesses to recall how it happened.

It was February when the first ‘big incident’ occurred. I remember it distinctly because it happened to be my birthday. Breaking News all over the world, insane stories coming from Russia, it seemed impossible to believe at first. The anchorman on TV spoke quickly in an urgent voice, of barricades being erected in Moscow as people from outside ran screaming to its walls, begging to be let in. What he said next made my heart jump.

People in cities and towns all over Moscow were being eviscerated in plain daylight.

The attacker? Nothing.

People were being cut to ribbons, in their homes, in the streets, all over Russia, in plain daylight but there was no visible attacker.

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I couldn’t believe it when I heard it. It had to be a hoax, it didn’t make any sense. However, my curiosity overpowered me, I had to see it for myself. I loaded up my laptop and began my trawl of some of the ‘darker’ parts of the web, in search of videos of the insane claims. As it turned out, there were thousands of videos on the subject, so I clicked on a random one.

It was being filmed from a rooftop and involved frightened people of all ages, running through the streets in a panic with nothing noticeable chasing them. I remember moving to click another link after thinking nothing would happen, when suddenly a random man in the group seemed to scream and then…

Explode.

It just happened. There was no warning, no sign of attack, the man wasn’t even at the back of the group. It seemed as though fate had picked a random person and just decided he would die, there and then.

I sat in shock as the video ended abruptly. Moving the mouse up again I clicked on another video, this one was being filmed from behind a barricade to hold back fleeing citizens. I guess that was their idea of ‘controlling’ the population. Various men in military uniforms lined the barricade with large rifles, looking on at the crying, begging people with little emotion. Then out of nowhere, one of the women at the front of the crowd was ripped apart by the air and thrown across the military’s front line. I gagged a little at the sight, despite having been reinforced against this sort of thing. In a panicked response, the soldiers sprayed their guns at the point of the attack as if trying to hit the invisible assailant but their bullets went through the space and took out the civilians behind the remains. People scattered as the soldiers unloaded their rounds into the crowd and then spontaneously, one of the soldiers burst apart. The cameraman seemed to panic at this point and the feed went dead.

My mind was struggling to get to grips with itself. I honestly didn’t know what to think. I always imagined myself in these situations before, acting like I was in a movie, analyzing every mystery and saving the day by solving it but this… this just made no sense. I was scared.

The next day, Russia entered lockdown, as did many other countries, in hopes of keeping this ghostly threat out of their nations. News from Russia dropped as a result. It was completely cut off from the rest of the world and we could only hope they were okay. And then… life continued. Of course, people talked of it but everyone just seemed to stop fearing it. In reality, it seems, we were just trying to put it behind us because of our fear. Humans fear what they don’t understand so it seems ‘not thinking about it’ was a suitable way of combatting that fear.

It wouldn’t last.

The year moved on and days became longer and then that day came… the one I wish I could forget…

It was a bright day in the middle of May and I was out with a group of friends, celebrating the completion of another year at University. We were walking and laughing to the in-jokes we had created over the last year, trying to remember them all before we retreated to our home towns. At one point we stopped while a few of our party went to buy food from a shop and I began talking to my closest friend, Ryan. We were midway into a conversation about what game to play online next and then…

It was so abrupt. Just like in the videos. He was halfway through a word and his body just… burst into pieces.

Blood and entrails splattered across my body. I stumbled back in horror as my mind processed what had just happened. Around me, people ran away from the area, screaming for help but I barely noticed. Where my best friend once stood was now just a bloody mess and my mind was never given a chance to prepare itself. I dropped to my knees and vomited on the floor, crying. It was at least fifteen minutes before I was able to take control of myself again and actually get up. By that point, the police had arrived and were telling me to remain still, as if they thought I had done this unspeakable act.

I remember sitting in that gloomy room, barely being able to answer any questions the investigators had for me, simply replying with a nod or shake of the head. They told me that this wasn’t the only place it had happened. In fact, it had become a worldwide pandemic. The brief period of peace had just been the calm before the storm. What we thought was sealed in Russia was now everywhere and it wasn’t even spreading from a single point as it had been at the start. It was a full-scale attack… nowhere was safe.

We were evacuated to military bases and defense points in hopes of holding back this invisible invasion but we all knew it was no use. My family and I were taken to a military installation in the countryside where we stayed for a month. No contact with the outside world was permitted, in fear of giving our location away to the creatures.

A single analog TV was our only view of the outside world, it seemed a few rogue pirate news stations had popped up to keep those locked away, up to date with current events. The quality was terrible but in a time like that, it was better than nothing. We heard reports of strange lights being sighted, not in the sky but closer to the ground. We were told of countries falling one by one, their entire populations being wiped out. There was also one report of scientists discovering ‘something’ in the sky. The report said that they couldn’t ‘see’ it but whatever it was, it was giving out a lot of energy and it was big, the size of a small moon, in fact. Images of Russia came in from aerial photographs. Moscow was ablaze, towering buildings reduced to rubble and in their remains, shook large shimmering waves of fire. A close up of the streets showed roads bathed in red with human remains dotted around in several areas.

The video feed switched to another aerial clip of a gigantic crater. The host went on to describe the location as a former Nuclear Power Plant that had entered a meltdown two months ago due to no one controlling it. At the end of the clip, the camera quickly moved upwards, to focus on a second helicopter that was now spinning out of control. Against the window, flashes of that all too familiar red color could be seen as the video suddenly cut out.

The last broadcast on that channel was the most disturbing. We switched the TV on to find the man in tears with streaks of blood down his face. He looked extremely scared and spoke with a weak, trembling voice.

“Oh God, they’ve come! The angels have come for me, Lord! They’ve taken everyone here and now it’s my turn. Judgement Day is here, loyal viewers! There’s nothing left for me on this Earth anymore but… for those who might be left, I think I know how to survive against them.”

He let out a loud, sharp laugh.

“Just my luck, hey? To find out when it’s too late. All you have to do is stay out of the-”

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His sentence was cut off by a scream as his body was ripped in two, right before our eyes. The channel didn’t shut off though. It’s still there, in fact, but all you see now is the decaying corpse of an insane man, one of his eyes limply staring at you through the camera lens. Since then, there were no more accessible channels. Our last view of the outside world was gone.

It didn’t really matter anymore, to us. We were a small group of people left amongst what must have been less than a million humans on the Earth. The ‘what’ and ‘where’ was no longer our concern.

For a while, everything was quiet. The soldiers kept us in line, we fed off of what rations the base had, we stuck to strict curfews and attempted to socialize and keep ourselves entertained in our new little personal world. We were somehow quite content with our new lives, with no outside world to bother us, no responsibilities or concerns for anything but our little community. On top of that, the lack of news about outside events allowed us to almost forget what had been happening.

Until one night at the end of August, I woke up in the middle of the night to the sound of a scream. I was on the floor of a large room containing hundreds of other sleeping evacuees, the realization still startled me every time I woke up, even though I had been sleeping in these conditions for the past month. My vision was blurred somewhat as I attempted to focus on my surroundings and my body appeared to be mildly damp and slightly sticky. I didn’t think much of it, I had had many restless nights here and we were in a cramped humid bunker. On the far side of the room, there were two dim lights creeping in through the doorways.

Someone must have left the light on in the corridor I thought to myself.

It was rather puzzling, the thoroughness of the soldiers here would have never allowed something like this. All lights had to be switched off at 8 pm and they checked every night. Surely by now, a guard would have found this and switched it off again. Maybe it was one of them doing a midnight check on us all?

That’s when I noticed something odd. One of the lights was… moving. Not moving behind the doorway but it seemed as if the doorway itself was moving. It drifted silently across, closing in on the other door, at first I thought it must be a soldier with a torch. I winced and rubbed my eyes, attempting to focus on the object then, just as it merged with the light of the door, I managed to focus on what seemed impossible.

It had the shape of a tall, disturbingly thin humanoid but where the body should be, there was nothing. No abdomen, no limbs, no head. The outline of the mysterious being seemed to just drift across the wall in an area of light. The first thought that entered my mind was ‘inverted shadow’. I know it sounds crazy but it was as if, instead of creating a shadowy outline in a lit room, something was creating a bright outline in a dark room. Unfortunately, this was the best view I could get of the entity as it seemed to literally merge with the light from the doorway and disappear.

My body was frozen at the sight and out of fear, I chose to lay down and try to get to sleep again, hoping that whatever it was, it wouldn’t notice me. It was another long, restless night.

I woke up at 8 am, light peered through the small slits in the top of the bunker and kept the room bright enough to see wall to wall in the giant reinforced mass of cement.

I wish I hadn’t seen it though.

Blood covered the walls. Where once had been sleeping bodies, now laid the remains of a silent massacre. What I thought had been my own sweat from the night before turned out to be the remains of my parents who had once slept beside me. I screamed. Not a single person was spared that night. Well, save for myself.

Walking through the base, it seemed these things had made short work of every human on site and yet, the gates still remained firmly shut, guards posted on the watch points had their destroyed bodies hanging over the rails.

It was quiet.

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I sat in the middle of that compound, alone, sobbing to myself. I was alone in the world. These things had killed everyone I knew and loved and I was lost. I didn’t know what to do. I slept in that compound for 3 days until I saw him again. That man of light, eerily and slowly drifting through the darkness and merging with the light once again. This time, I could’ve sworn he noticed me. He stopped and turned, till he was head-on with me and just stared at me. I couldn’t move, my body just refused to listen… and then the being left.

I don’t know why they keep sparing me. Is it for amusement? Because they pity me? Or something more? I just can’t get my head around any of it…

After that night, I took as many supplies from the base as I could and journeyed towards the nearest village which is where I now reside. I managed to find a house with a basement and locked myself in there with the supplies… but I never turn the light on anymore. For three weeks I have been living in total darkness. Not because I think they’ll find me but… I think I know what these things are now.

I once read a science fiction book that detailed a possible route a species may take in its evolutionary course. This species would evolve beyond the simple realm of the physical and became a being of pure energy. When a species would reach this point it would obtain near-omniscient knowledge and have no care for life or death anymore. What the intentions of such a hyper-powerful species would be are impossible to predict since their minds are so much more advanced than ours.

It seems in our Universe, a species has gotten there before us. They ARE the Light. Where we always feared an alien species abducting us in the middle of the night, it turns out that darkness is our only safety from the real threat.

The Beings of Light.

Two days ago the Second Star appeared. A Red Giant that now sits opposite our Sun, bathing both halves of the Earth in light. And now there is no longer night in this world. There is no place to hide on the outside. I don’t know what they want with our planet or why they chose to kill us all but I know this:

They have killed everyone here.

If you’re out there, don’t go into the light. Stick to the shadows if you want any chance of living. Darkness doesn’t kill them but it sure slows them down.

There is a light coming from beneath the basement door. I have to go now.

Good luck.

– Thomas Everick | 18/10/2013


Credit: Ben Cook

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65 thoughts on “Star Light”

  1. An Unwitting Accomplice

    Oh my god I love this so much! This is crazy interesting! Normally stories like this don’t explain what’s happening, they just leave it cause ‘mystery,oooooh’, so this was super refreshing to read!

  2. I hate when people talk about that omniscience shit.

    What does having your body convert to spiritual energy have to do with you gaining shit tons of knowledge? thats just some childish moronic I know everything when I die crap.

    Knowledge is an abstract concept what could be knowledge to you may be false knowledge, incorrect and its merely you collecting information and turning it into facts, you gain knowledge the same way as always, by LEARNING.

    Why in fuck would your physical body becoming energy suddenly draw all knowledge into you like its some kind of physical, electrical or spectral thing to be absorbed into your mind.

    They don’t have omniscience, they are just light energy people, end of.

    Besides that it was a brilliant story, fantastical, truly.

  3. Quick question I haven’t seen asked- if everyone in the bunker was also sleeping in the dark why was he the only left living? And when he was seen by the being later?

  4. I greatly enjoyed this pasta. Personally, I wasn’t really creeped out by it. It was spectacular, but not creepy. One thing I didn’t like though, was the safety cliche. I don’t mean that nowhere was safe, but that they came so close to finding out how to save themselves, and the jackass who figured it out just started ranting that he figured it out too late to save himself. And also I kind of figured out that the answer was to stay out of the light. Other than those two things, I really enjoyed this story. But someone, please tell me, was he referencing a real book, or did he make it up? It’s driving me crazy not knowing!

  5. I .Hate. Aliens.
    Your story scared me krapless…I hope they never find us-I just know they will be very blood-thirsty…you get a 10!

  6. Gravitational force is infinite it can protect us all…. without it our gadgets would be floating thus 50% we might float to the sun and even through aliens are true they dont kill just comr think of it how could be the antlantis get builded? Human on history are not quite smart to make such as a building what im saying is a fiction that humans and aliens worked together -Cloud

  7. BEST CREEPY PASTA EVER! Also a little note to all the morons saying its bad because it’s unrealistic, IT’S A CREEPY PASTA! How many creepy pastas have you read that are realistic? So yeah, brilliant story, nothing wrong with it, 10/10 for Ben:)

  8. My first thought is about Dyatlov Pass incident. you should read about it, sketchy stuff man. 9 experienced hikers/skivers found dead on Dyatlov pass, near “dead Mountain”. They were driven from their tent in subarctic temperatures in their undies and barefoot. Russian officials closed the pass down after the discovery for about 3 years, and “Soviet investigators simply determined that ‘a compelling natural force’ had caused the deaths”

  9. holy hell, this was one of the BETTER Creepypastas i’ve read. one of the scariest, probably in my top 10 scariest. good lord, i look forward to more of your works!
    rating: 10/10, shit’s scary, yo.

  10. I knew the conclusion of the man’s sentence would be to stay out of the light… I don’t know why but it struck me quickly. Lovely story.

  11. Marry me! So creative! I don’t know why but the image of the news anchor exploding made me giggle. o.O Talk about morbid.
    Anyhoodle, write more. That was such a good read. Consider me terrified.

  12. great story ben. just outta curiosity did u get the idea of hyper-powerful energy beings from the star-gate series. either way it was brilliant. well done

    1. Chaos Lord (Ben)

      Ha, thank you. And nah, I’ve never really watched Star Gate. The idea was inspired by a combination of another Creepypasta known as “Faces in the Storm” (I don’t think it’s on this site) in which the characters were in a similar ‘end of the world survival’ situation, and from something which I can’t remember the origin of, that mentioned that Einstein once claimed if a civilization lived long enough, it would reach a point at which it turned itself in to a being of pure energy (however I don’t think Einstein actually said anything like this. It was made up for the purposes of whatever story I read it in).

  13. Delicious.
    It wasn’t scary, but it sure was interesting.
    Could have made the ending a little bit more subtle.
    10/10 would read again.

  14. Fist off: STOP GAGGING. Holy shit.
    Second, this reminded me vagule of Resistance: Fall of Man
    and Evangelion (ANGEL ATTACK!!!)

    All in all, awesome and delicious.
    8/10

    1. Chaos Lord (Ben)

      Ha, you’re right, I just looked through and I do say it twice. Sorry! I didn’t really pick up on it when I read over it. I’ve never properly watched Evangelion but I get the reference, ha!

      Thank you!

  15. I just wanted to add more praise to the sea of positive comments. I love this story. It was extremely interesting! Kept me till the very end. It is well written, as well!

  16. HAVE YOU HEARD THE MOVIE “DARKEST HOUR”? IT REALLY HAS THE SAME PLOT WITH THIS PASTA. BUT I FIND THIS MORE DELICIOUS KEEP IT UP!!!

  17. Fun story, really cool idea. The red giant was a little ridiculous. Thank goodness it was right at the end. Im no astrophysicist but I don’t believe the configuration you’ve conjured could happen and still support life on earth, or anywhere in the milky way for that matter. I remember learning something when I was a kid about when our sun becomes a red giant, it will become 3 times larger than the milky way and will obliterate all planets and celestial bodies in our solar system. Pretty cool. Oh yeah. Good story sir. I enjoyed it. 8/10 Keep reading and writing

    1. Just to spread some knowledge,our sun is estimated to “red dwarf” in a billion years from now,so the sun is emitting more rays and heat each year.So when the sun gets older over time the Earth will heat up.If we ever make a break through in health and we find out how to artificially make immortality we could see this.Which would be awesome to see how we evade or the succumbtion to eradication.FYI,Immortality isn’t the same as invulnerability,so if you became immortal you could still die.Look up about lobsters immortality folks,neat stuff.

    2. Chaos Lord (Ben)

      It won’t become larger than the milky way, I assure you! Our galaxy (the milky way) has plenty of Red Giants larger than what the sun will produce and they’re tiny compared to our galaxy! However, you are correct that it would mess with the physics of the solar system. At the time I was going with “They’re super intelligent beings, they have a way of sustaining it” but the lack of explanation for this did kind of ruin it, so sorry about that!
      Thanks for your comment!

  18. Not too sure about this.
    If these beings are made of light, how does darkness affect them? Darkness is merely absence of light, it cannot hinder light in any way. Now, if they were/lived “in the light”, obviously they would not be wherever there was darkness, but they “are of light”, so wherever they go, darkness just moves aside, so to speak.

    1. They could move faster in well lit areas,so using the light as a transport.But in the dark,lack of light,they have to illumninate the dark with their own natural light,which could hinder them.Dimensional shit probably would explain “energy” based beings.

    2. Chaos Lord (Ben)

      The idea was that they are energy beings and rely on the surrounding energy to pass on their existence. Don’t think of them as ‘moving’ light, but more of an entity that moves by passing itself THROUGH the light in the form of energy. Thus when met with darkness and an absence of light, the lack of immediate energy makes it harder for them to move (but not impossible). I didn’t really intend for this to be super realistic though, but thanks for your criticism! I’ll take it in to account in the future!

      1. My only problem was that you said they are made of light, and even that “they ARE the light”. The explanation you gave in this comment is sound, but cannot be guessed from the story.

  19. Trenderman (Slenderman's Cool Brother)

    i love this pasta! thumbs up! add to fav.! haha! please make more..more like this but make it in another dimension..another place..another world..another galaxy..another time..another universe..but..AWESOME!! 10 ratings for me

  20. Lovely science fiction story! I really enjoyed the idea and the background of beginning in Russia and spreading across the world. I also really enjoyed your writing style and the hints towards the light. As soon as the TV announcer began to say he had figured it out I was like “Holy crap! It’s light! They are light!” I was very pleased with this story and the ending (which is rare) and I would love to read more from you.

  21. Absolutely delicious pasta, I was hooked the whole time! Some parts were a tad confusing, but thumbs up for the interesting idea.

    1. Since you seem to be grandly gifted with the ability to make riveting pasta, maybe you could make a creepy pasta based off of SS13,Ben. I doubt there is any at all, so you’d be making the first ever SS13 creepy pasta. If you done that I’d love the shit out of it since I’m quite the fanatic when it comes to SS13. Here’s somewhere to get great knowledge on SS13 too: http://baystation12.net/wiki/ .

      1. Chaos Lord (Ben)

        I have seen SS13 before but I’ve never really tried it. I’ll play around and see what I can come up with! Thanks!

  22. Endoplasmic Reticulum

    This was so good up to the point where it told of a second sun (A red giant no less!) that was on the opposite side of the sun relative to the earth. Gravity would simply not let that configuration remain that way.

    1. Chaos Lord (Ben)

      Ah yes, sorry, I did consider taking that out at one point. Basically, I wanted a way to create a permanent daylight scenario. The concept that humanity would eternally wish for night and never get it seemed cool. Seems I pulled it off poorly!

    2. Rectoplasmic Enditulum

      Gravitational forces aren’t infinite. The light creatures could pull it off if they could apply sufficient counterforces to the stars and planets. And if they’re strong enough to move a star over here in the first place, then yeah, grow an imagination why don’t ya.

      1. It wasn’t the gravity that bothered me most. The heat alone would incinerate everything on the Earth as well as most likely blind it. It’d be more realistic if it weren’t a red giant of all things.

        1. Red Giants aren’t any hotter than main sequence stars–in fact, red Giants are actually cooler. Since they no longer fuse hydrogen into helium and have a shrunken collapsed core, they actually produce much less heat. The gravity issue is definitely a problem, but the earth itself would only feel a marginal increase in heat due to the green house effect and the extra light from the star, it’s not as if it would burst into flame (especially if the star were far enough away).

          Again, Gravity WOULD be the issue.

          And oh yeah, kick ass story–physics aside ;)

    1. Chaos Lord (Ben)

      Ha! I just Googled it and you’re right, it does have a very similar concept. Damn! Beaten to the idea again…

    1. Have some faith dude. It was good! Write a second one please? it wasnt super scary, but it was incredibly interesting. I loved this pasta, but at the same time felt the ending was a tad off. Felt more science fictiony then scary. (dont worry I have the same problem with some of my pastas) Maybe have had the light thing stalk him at the end or in a second one, then I would give it a 9/10 instead of an 8/10. Loved the concept bro, keep writing.

        1. When the Light beings ignored him, I really thought he was like the “Chosen One” crap or something. Turns out, he has just been hiding in the darkness! He soon is gonna die anyways. Humans can’t live without the light. At least that’s what I think.

        2. What I would do? Have the light beings stalk him as he tries to scavange for food at night, only for him to screw up and end up with like a limb in daylight, and end it with his final thoughts as he gets pulled into the daylight by his leg by the beings. Something like that would be cool! Or rewrite and expand this idea with humanity trying to sheild the Earth from the sun and those beings creating a second sun to make perpetual light. Either way, I liked it. Congrats man!

    2. In the story the main character guy mentions a scifi book about a species evolving to become energy. Is that a real book that you got that from?

    3. Is this based off of “See You Later” by Christopher Pike? I read it in middle school and the whole “beings evolved beyond physical existence” thing was a major point, although those creatures were more benevolent than yours.

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