• lollipop_gestapo

    This was incredibly frightening and my heart is breaking for this couple. I really hope the next few stories provide a resolution. I’m just terribly sorry this all happened. No one should be taunted and made afraid like this.

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    • Josh

      It’s just a story.

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      • Professor

        A story about a “big technology geek” who wanted to buy an iPhone 5, but was too dumb to buy a video camera or a voice recorder to collect evidence for the cops.
        I don’t know what details we will get from the next parts of the story, but as far as this part goes, the protagonist seems to be dealing with a professional ventriloquist who found herself a nice target for trolling. Serves him well for not figuring to make a photo of her with all the chances he had. “Big technology geek”, yeah right.

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        • Username or no username, there is no nameuser

          You do realize fear makes people forget the most obvious solutions? its a simple fact

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        • Raine

          When you panic or you’re very afraid you don’t think straight. Try being scared stupid, it happens.

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        • Ish Cierra

          No way! You’re picture is Sae! I’m surprised people (besides me) have actually heard of Fatal Frame.

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        • http://reddit.com Gear Death

          Well when ever they say technology they always dont know anything about it but yeah He was scared AT THE TIME.

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        • Advick

          What if he tried? It’s obvious that the woman would just act normal… I mean seriously… Not that I entirely believe everything I read… But be more critical instead of being so quick to insult something you barely know anything about….

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        • http://y8.com XXXXXXXXXXX

          you too

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      • Death23

        Nope it’s a real story

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        • Someone

          Sure it is.

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        • SaveTheLastFist

          You realize he has posted other story’s after he supposedly “took the orange”.

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      • Pepper

        BASED OFF OF A TRUE STORY

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        • President PineTree

          That’s just propaganda. C’mon dude

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      • ryan favre

        yeah watch rose come after you

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      • Elijah

        no its not

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      • Anonymous

        NO ATT DET TOP ITS SAYS ITS A REAL STORY

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      • The UnKnown

        dude “its just a story” until it happens to u or some1 u know

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    • http://IDK IDK

      Dude this Story was so freaking scary i think i may just may have craped my pants a little. :D Dude love the creepy storys you r doing a great job.

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      • http://yahoo.com rainbow moustache

        dude, he’s not trying to be scary, he’s trying to be serious!

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      • Anonymous

        dude this was extremely creepy keep up the amaizing work

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    • http://y8.com XXXXXXXXXXX

      you too

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    • Anonymous

      I actually looked up some information about this and heres what I found orange is symbolic by the cathloc church as a sighn of supernatural manifestation so this makes me think that the Catholic church has seen signs of this before. The lady could be just a person you know such as rose who is representing either a your subconcious or b you have not had 10 hours of sleep within a 36 hour period this makes me believe its your friend rose but your hallucinating. Although u may not have know what orange represented maybe your previous ancestors did and like regular actions we learn on our own such as breathing you were aware without being told. This could have jhst been a coincidence with ur girlfriend but this is just logic u might want to talk to a doctor or a priest only if it comes to that. Bothr not allowed to release any Iinfo given to them by you so u should be sAFE

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      • xXxXx

        I’m scared as hell, I’m never going to eat an orange again.

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  • http://blogofrages.blogspot.com madafaka

    Buy a gun. If that thing is real, it’ll help

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    • Anonymous

      I’m pretty sure a gun is real

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      • lalz

        no shit xD

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      • Anonymous

        Anon was talking about the girl.

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      • Luka

        lmao

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    • Anonymouse

      I will help you take out that crazy bitch all ya need is a shotty and some cameras around your house prefferable wireless and hide them and review footage

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      • Advick

        It’s illegal to hide cameras in the United States….

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        • I have a small dick

          no it’s not.

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        • Richard

          should be legal so long as it’s your property. and even if there are local restrictions, just make sure you hide them well enough and it won’t be an issue.

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    • Anon

      If it’s paranormal, it probably won’t help.

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    • cant think of a name

      It is real I have a guy chasing after me trying to give me an apple.

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      • http://www.deweydeweydewbah.deviantart.com deweydeweydewbah

        Edward? Yeah..fucking sparkly vampires.

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      • scaredofan_owl09

        Could you post some experiences? I’d live to hear

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        • Anonymous

          i’d die to hear it..

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        • sharon needles

          i’d come back to life to hear it…

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        • http://creepypasta Greenskull

          u liar thats all fake i bet

          FAKE!

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      • Anonymous

        Is it a mexicanonthe corner of broadwayand 16th? Yathat guyspersistant in what hesells

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      • Dweller of the Sea of Tears

        I’ve got a blue haired chick with a leek.

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        • Len Kagamine

          You mean Miku? She’s always stalking me

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    • Professor

      Guns are meant for self-defense. I don’t think the cops would qualify the orange as a weapon threatening his life. Shoot her – go to jail. And this would indeed be a great story to tell cellmates.

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      • Anonymous

        Shoot her then steal hydrochloride acid from a school / collage and buy in large blue plastic container with a recycle sign at the button put the body in drench it in the acid in the process of waiting for the bitch to dissolve dig a deep hole and pour her liquid ass down it and seal it

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        • Anonymous

          You do realize that hydrochloric acid would eat through the plastic, right?

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        • Anonymous

          i think youve been watching too much breaking bad

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        • Richard

          Whoa, so a stalker with an orange is a high enough threat level to justify murdering someone, stealing restricted chemicals, and destroying evidence? If you could get away with doing all that and pull it off, you may be better a qualified serial killer than orange lady.

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    • Raine

      Problem is you can only use a gun in a situation where your life is in danger. You or someone else would have to be under attack or the other person would need to have a weapon and threatening your life. Otherwise, you’re the one who’s in deep shit. If he shot Rose and she had nothing but some rotten orange, she’d walk free and he’d be the one in trouble. Stupid I know, but that’s how it works in stalker situations.

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      • Anonymous

        Actually, she would be dead, not walking free.

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  • Purple Frog

    Damn, this is either a very freaky occurrence or one hella an author O_O’ It really digs into that sensitive childish side that we all have leftover from our youth, really effective. Ouch.

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  • Kilty

    I am throwing all my oranges out…

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    • Koolz

      But who was orange?!?!?

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  • Adze

    (Comment posted before the rest of the chapters were submitted)

    Total cliffhanger and an addictive storyline, can’t wait for more pasta!

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  • Sharvi

    oh gosh! this is one hell of a scary incident..I really want to know what happens next.

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    • http://Tbnjdbxudbd Why do I need a name

      The woman probably just wants a friend just ask her it might turn out the situation wasn’t bad at all lol

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  • https://www.facebook.com/GhastlyTalesPresents Michael Whitehouse

    Really happy that Milos submitted to the site, Derpbutt. I spoke to him a while ago and said that I thought his stories would be a great success here. They are all incredibly frightening and this one is the story which really kicked things off for him.

    He has a number of stand alone tales and a few series, all of which will give you sleepless nights. I can’t recommend them highly enough.

    The ‘Orange’ series works because like the most effective horror stories it takes a fairly mundane image, layers it with a sinister undertone, and then brings it into the world of a child (in this case the main character starts off as a teenager, a time which can be confusing enough without the uncanny manipulating you). A world which should be safe and cosy, but is invaded by something unearthly, unusual, and unthinkable.

    Anyway, I’m blabbering. The site will only benefit from having his stories here, and I envy those who are reading them for the first time.

    One last thing, there were a few posts where people seemed angry about my stories being posted regularly over a few weeks, even to the point where any positive comments were being voted down. As Milos’ stories are about to be posted in a similar way, I’d like to ask whoever was doing that to not do so here. As a fan of the site I love to read the great pieces of work which people contribute here, and when we have writers like Milos and Stephan D. Harris submitting regularly, it only helps add to the already wonderful collection of horrific tales which are here. I would hate to see anyone put off from adding their stories because a small group of rate down everything they post.

    There’s no such thing as a ‘blocker’. What makes Creepypasta.com such a wonderful place for a horror fan is that it has such a strong editorial process, one which is in very good hands. Most similar sites end up with great stories often getting buried under a plethora of submissions which get lost in the noise.

    That doesn’t happen here. We should just be happy as readers that there are great writers like Milos submitting their work for us to enjoy.

    Anyway, I have to go, dying of the man flu. Hope everyone is good and I hope you all vote up Milos’ stories as they are wonderful :)

    ~ Mike

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    • Anoonymoose

      tl;dr

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      • Raine

        ts;dr

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  • CJ

    So your stealing stories from /nosleep now. its disappointing.

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    • http://www.creepypasta.com derpbutt

      You really couldn’t be bothered to read the note, huh?

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      • Len Kagamine

        nice picture of the clown from takakanonuma greenland

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  • Gabriela

    I’m never trusting any woman with bright red lipstick again.

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    • Purple Frog

      You never do anyway… they’re always the DANGEROUS ones… xD

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      • ApocalypseArisen

        Rude!

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        • crimson smile

          before you judge a red lips, let me explain you a thing.

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    • The PerformingDetective

      Hey! I wear red lipstick. The creepy smile on the other hand… that is a good reason not to trust someone.

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      • Amber

        Lol, obviously wearing whatever color of lipstick doesn’t matter. It’s kind of a joke because red is considered a “stand-out”, “rebellious” or “sexy” color.

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  • http://www.facebook.com/inaaace inaaace

    Hey everyone, just wanted to say it is my honor to be featured on Creepypasta. Thank you all,

    inaaace

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    • Janelians

      Hey, is this REALLY, REALLY, REALLY true? Or just a clever way to get lots of readers? If this IS true then.. Wow. I don’t know what I’d do with my life. Haha

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  • http://crappypasta.com the cake

    i don’t believe short stories posted on short story web sites should have multiple parts. especially when the admin randomly posts a single story every day. its a good story, but if you want to write a book, write a book. I’m not here to read a book, I’m here to read short stories of monetary interest.

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  • http://crappypasta.com the cake

    *momentary

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  • Anonymous

    Meh. Could’ve been proofread at least once to fix countless typos and verb tense changes. As is, regardless of future parts, 4/10 at best.

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    • PAPUCHA

      I think that the typos and bad grammar add to the story. he’s made it clear that he’s foreign- he even said that he’s leaving his country to study in America. My guess is that he’s Serbian, because he swears a lot and plays basketball. I can just imagine him with the accent :D
      Seeing the author’s name at the end almost confirms that he’s Serbian!! (please don’t take this as an insult, I’m talking from experience, I’m serbian too!)

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  • Anonymous

    Seriously creepy as fuck.. I started to cry a bit after explaining whey you saw and read off that picture

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    • Anonymous

      Shiiit, I honestly started tearing up a bit too… Not really sure why. No story has done that to me before. I sympathize with the main character in a big way. Loving this series already

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  • Ann

    Some creepy stuff! I can’t wait to read the rest of them! Hopefully they both find a resolution to their problem….

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  • thatgirl

    Damn, two really good pastas in one day. Excellent, addictive story line. I feel so sorry for this couple. I really hope they find some answers.

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  • Tyr

    Good one. But “Rose” reminds me to Rose from Two and a half men. ^^

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    • Len Kagamine

      there’s a girl named Rose who used to live where I live now. She was killed in a bus accident and she still haunts my house XP

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    • Anonymous

      I think of Rose from Doctor Who when I hear “Rose” mentioned.

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    • The PerformingDetective

      I watch Doctor Who too, and I love Rose, but when reading these stories, I still think of Rose from Two and a Half Men, probably because both are creepy stalkers with long, dark hair.

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  • tee

    I’d heard of this story from a friend, so glad I can read it finally. Milos is an amazing story teller <3

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  • Charlie

    I see this is a reference to Two and a Half Men

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  • Kristin

    This is very interesting! I hope you guys find the help you need! Where can I find part two?

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  • Anonymous

    wow just wow

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  • alana

    My diet is going to be orange free for a while now.

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  • THEN WHO WAS….nevermind o.O

    Seriously real shit..i have one orange sitting on my kitchen counter (from Walmart..so I’m not terribly worried) but this is good creepy stuff and can’t wait to read further!

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  • reddevil

    WOW….really freaked the shit out of me.Awesome pasta & never gonna buy oranges from a lady :-P

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    • xXxXx

      BUY an orange? I’m never gonna eat one ..

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  • KaosMaster

    even after burning out my mind devouring pasta after pasta, this story proves that there is always room for much more.

    i especialy like the realistic tone. not many authors can achieve such a sense of reality as this one can.

    of course, if this is a real occurance (im a little bit naive), then i would like to express my sympathies to those under siege.

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