Now, What Was I Just Doing?
July 31st, 2008 by WHO WAS PHONE?
You don’t know it, but someone has been removed from your life. They haven’t died, they haven’t moved, they have simply ceased to be from present future and history. However you still know they were there, you faintly recall broken memories of someone else there, someone who should have been there but you think you’re crazy. You go to do something, but you can’t remember what …
It was them, they wanted to talk to you.
Posted in Strange & Unknown
July 31st, 2008 at 4:28 pm
Sounds like part of John Dies At The End, which is like a million creepypasta rolled into one hueg novel.
July 31st, 2008 at 4:31 pm
Or the movie The Forgotten, which is a crap premise IMO.
July 31st, 2008 at 5:38 pm
sorry guys, i’m really sick so i just grabbed the first one i found that was half decent =P
going back to bed now
July 31st, 2008 at 6:20 pm
I like it as a general piece of writing, but don’t see the creepy value.
So should consider having a category for things that aren’t creepy but just interesting.
July 31st, 2008 at 8:21 pm
Hope you feel better soon, PHONE.
July 31st, 2008 at 8:51 pm
So *that’s* why I never have a girlfriend.
July 31st, 2008 at 10:02 pm
feel better WWP.
oh and also, this one makes me a bit sad.
August 1st, 2008 at 2:30 am
To tell the truth, I don’t really like this one. Not creepy at all, ‘coz NOTHING HAPPENS. Ah, well.
Also: Sorry to hear that, WWP. Get well soon.
August 1st, 2008 at 2:26 pm
This one is ok..
hope you get better soon
August 2nd, 2008 at 2:44 am
This has happened to me kinda. Kids from elementary school I used to chill with and one day I never see them again. Weird shit.
August 2nd, 2008 at 9:20 pm
Get well now, WWP.
I like this one… I think its kind of creepy beacause its one of those real life occurences.
August 4th, 2008 at 10:50 am
Wow, I mustve had a million people vanish on me. I forget what Im doing all the time.
Hehe, maybe whats what happened to atlantis.
August 6th, 2008 at 7:59 pm
I liked this one
August 8th, 2008 at 11:00 pm
Change the end to “they wanted to warn you”
Adds to the creepy factor, I believe.
August 28th, 2008 at 4:34 pm
Yeah, but if u change it to ¨they wanted to warn you¨ it changes the meaning of it. what would they wanna warn you about?o.O if anything it could lika ¨they wanted to tell you¨ or ¨they wanted you to know¨
short and sweet
like it. happens to me sometimes….except that later on in the day i rememebr what i was supposed to do XD lol.
August 31st, 2008 at 8:00 pm
Wow this one makes me a little sad because i always have those “what was i doing?” moments. No wonder I can’t seem to find my friends.
September 10th, 2008 at 12:47 am
*shudder* I all ways seem to have those moments. I wonder how many friends I’ve lost? Hm…
September 16th, 2008 at 10:57 am
i can’t remember who i’ve lost oh crap i guess i’ve lost a lot of friends
September 24th, 2008 at 11:15 pm
Nice idea, executed poorly.
October 19th, 2008 at 5:23 pm
Should have ended “Now, what was I just doing?
November 11th, 2008 at 12:13 pm
This one gets me because I really do have fragmented “memories” of things that didn’t happen and people that didn’t exist. They’re just ultra-realistic dreams, but still creepy. But if that was a dream…
THEN WHO WAS MEMORY??