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The Girl

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Estimated reading time โ€” 8 minutes

This is the story of a girl. She is no ordinary female, however. She is, at first glance, the most beautiful and attractive girl you will have ever met in your life. She has every trait a man could want. She has a magnificent body, a wonderful personality, an unbeatable sense of humor, a kind heart, and she is extremely intelligent.

There is but one way to make this girl yours, and you must follow these instructions exactly. It may seem a simple task, but it is far more treacherous than any tall, anorexic man with a complexion condition you may ever come to face in the woods or any pale faced, 17 year old Joker fanatic you could ever have the privilege of seeing at the foot of your bed. No this girl is much different. There are 8 steps you must follow precisely to make this girl yours, so precisely in fact that I would advise you to take this with you when attempting the trial.

1. Make sure its her. You don’t want to be performing some mystical trials you found on the internet to some random chick you thought was hot. She often roams outside flower shops, jewelry stores, and beauty salons, mocking those earthly and mortal possessions that will never be as valuable or fair as she. This girl will appear as I stated before. She changes with every man (or woman). To whomever she meets, she will be the most attractive person that individual could ever dream of. Upon approaching said woman, even her age will change to match the exact date, hour, and second of your own. Aphrodite herself wields no chance of competition. She will be wearing, regardless of the season, a light blue loose long sleeve shirt. She will have on black skinny jeans. The clothing does not have a brand. She is wearing two diamond earrings and a bracelet with several colored, pearl cubes on the loop. Every cube is a different color.

2. Approach her confidently. This is crucial, and I don’t mean that as in YOU’LL FRICKIN DIE IF YOU DON’T, but she may wave you off. All women like a confident man, especially the perfect one. When you get to her, provided that you look confident (not douche bag confident but enough), she will simply look at you and await your first words. You must utter this sentence exactly. “I have come to earn the perfect partner. Does she accept my trial?” If she does she will simply state “The trial has been accepted. It shall begin at [local restaurant name] at 8:00 PM.” If she does not she’ll just reject you. If you are rejected, you will never see this girl waiting outside any store ever again. She will leave your life completely, because although you thought you had chosen to interact with her, it was really she who had chosen you. You will, in turn, spend the rest of your life seeing every other girl as nowhere in comparison. You will live an existence of regret, depression, and self-destruction.

3. First date. You must arrive at the restaurant by 8:00 PM or you will never see her again. Don’t worry about reservations or anything. They are already placed. When you see her, be casual, confident, and friendly. It wouldn’t hurt to look good either. Don’t worry about the mystical talk anymore. Everything from now on will be as if she was just a normal date aside from a few exceptions later on. Be casual, funny, considerate, happy, and charming. Have fun, but above all, DO NOT MAKE HER SAD. To know how to get around this ask her “What elements of this world bring your soul pain?” She will list you everything that makes her unhappy, angry, sad, depressed, and just plain not happy. For the next nine dates you will need to know these. Feel free to list them as she tells you. It is crucial you don’t make her upset. If you do AT ANY POINT skip to the end.

4. You will have set up a second date by the end of the first one. If you didn’t then you have the wrong mythical girl, because this one will have set a second date. Do the same as the first. Just have fun. You may have noticed by now that she never seems to smile. She may smirk, but she never smiles. She even seems to laugh without smiling. This comes into play later. After the date is when things are at a make or break spot. She will tell you this “The time is right. Commit me”. She will then walk away as if nothing happened. Do not follow her. You must get back to your living quarters (house, condo, apartment, mansion, box ‘o’ shit, whatever you live in) as quickly as possible. When you get inside you will find a book and a vial full of clear liquid. Take these to a window where the moon is visible. Open the book. It will be full of pictures of the girl. in every photo she will look sad and depressed. if you look closely you should see small pearl trinkets, much like the ones on her bracelet, sitting next to her in the pictures. At the back of the book will be a photograph of the girl wearing what she was on the day you first talked to her. She will look neutral. Not sad nor happy, but neutral. Open the vial of the clear liquid. On that picture, drop one drop of the liquid from your fingertip onto where the girl’s heart is. Then take another drop and place it on your chest where your heart is. You must then douse the window with the rest of the liquid while the moon shines trough. Make a circle with the liquid with the moon at the center and stand in front of it. You must then say “I commit myself to the perfection and the perfection to me. Let the bond commence.” A single beam of moonlight will shoot through your window and hit you in the chest. As you fall backwards you may feel a slight sting as the liquid drop literally absorbs into your heart. The liquid on the picture will also absorb. If you go back to the picture now, you will notice that you are standing beside her in some generic cute couple pose. She will still seem neutral, but as long as you complete Step 5, that will not stay for long.

5. You will receive a call on your cell phone some time in the next week (if you don’t own a cell phone you’ll be shocked to notice that you do now). It will be her. Her contact will be listed as whatever name you find most desirable. The number she calls you from will be “1”. That’s it. She will ask if she can come over and watch a movie. Obviously you say yes. When she arrives, you will be greeted upon opening your door with a smile. A smile that could stop time, level mountains, extinguish the sun, set Antarctica on fire, end civilizations, and create world peace all in the same day. it will be the most beautiful smile you will have ever seen. Your soul will be filled with so much happiness that you will feel faint or intoxicated. You yourself will not be able to stop smiling in return. You will, to put in simple terms, absolutely love her. Eventually this will be interrupted by four simple words. “Can I come in?” You then go about watching the movie. Maybe make some snacks. At the end of the movie, she will get up and go for the door. Before she leaves, ask her “Was the bond accepted?” She will turn around, wrap her arms around your neck, and give you the biggest, deepest, and longest kiss you have ever experienced and will ever experience. When she lets go, she will leave. Feel free to pass out now from ecstasy.

6. Continue dating. That is the only objective right now. Remember to NOT MAKE HER SAD. This includes even insinuating sex. Until you have completed Step 8 you must always watch what you say or do. If you have EVEN ONCE skip to the end. She will begin to look different every time you see her. Her clothes will never wear as well the next day. Her hair will also fall different every time you see her. She will also never run out of things to tell you or discuss. Just go along with this step until the 30th day you’ve been together.

7. It is day 30. Upon arriving to your set date, you will notice something. The girl you once loved is now wretched and ugly, almost like a corpse. Her eyes are sunk back in her protruding forehead. Her skin sags from every inch of her body. She is grey. Her skin flakes off. Her hair is white wherever there isn’t a bald spot. Her frame is bony and hideous. You must complete this date as though nothing has changed. Love her as if she looked the same. If you upset her or have upset her skip to the end. It is the “True Love” trial. Get passed the looks and find her beautiful anyway by the end of the date, and you will be fine. When you take her outside after the date, you must kiss her once for at least 3 seconds on the lips. Her skin will then fall away revealing the girl you saw on the first day, beautiful as ever and beaming at you as she stares into your eyes. Feel free to the kiss her as passionately and as long as you want under the full moon (it will be full).

8. The final day in your test has arrived. You will know because you will awake and your heart will be glowing. Literally glowing through your chest (you’re not Iron Man don’t get excited). She will call you on your cell and say “Now is the time of reckoning. Are you prepared?” At this point, if you answer “Yes” things will proceed. If you say “No” then you will never see her or hear from her again. She will arrive at your house on the beginning of the next hour. She will enter and head straight to the bedroom (before you ask, yes this is exactly what it sounds like). Follow her. She will undress. You should follow. Then get down to business. When you both are done, the glow in your chests will become extreme, knocking you both out. When you awake, you will be infatuated with the girl, and she with you. This will wear off slightly after about a month, but you will always remain in the “honeymoon phase”. You can now say whatever you like. She is yours and you hers. Enjoy your life.

IF YOU MADE HER SAD BEFORE STEP 8:

Get to your home as quickly as possible. If you haven’t put the liquid in your chest yet then you need only burn the book that is laying on the table. if you have then this is where it gets tricky. You have to stab yourself in the heart. Literally breaking your heart will disable the bond. You must also burn the book with the pictures in it. Keep the blade in the wound to keep from bleeding to death and call 911. If you fail to burn the book (and break your heart if needed) within one hour, the girl will break down your door. Her hair will be jet black, along with her eyes and finger nails. She will be wearing nothing. She will begin to weep at your door frame. As the tears hit the ground they will engorge, transforming into streams of water, filling your house. The stream will burst into a river, sweeping you off your feet and bursting your lungs and stomach as the water floods your esophagus. As the waters consume you, your body will dissolve into them. When you are completely gone, the waters will recede back to the being at your door and slowly center at one spot next to her foot. When all of the water is finally gone, a small pearl trinket of unique color will be lying on the ground next to the girl. The next time a man sees this girl, she will have a new set to her collection, and the next time he goes in the book to seal the bond, there will be another picture of the sad girl standing next to the trinket.

Credit To – Mahonedog

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93 thoughts on “The Girl”

  1. #6’s “Absolutely (story of a girl)” song reference: brilliant. I don’t think a lot of people noticed that but it had me laughing. 10/10 great pasta

  2. Pretty good. My only real problem is calling 911, since that is only the emergency in the USA. Other contries have other numbers. It always annoys me when pastas just assume the reader lives in the US.

  3. The_Amazing SAF

    So basically, if you upset her and don’t break the bond in time, she becomes the Overly Attached Girlfriend?

  4. great story i have the feeling this happend to me i never did see her again “sigh” and i never was the same ever again.

  5. #6 had the lyrics to the song “Absolutely” in a different way. You changed it from “her clothes were never worn right the next day. Her hair never fell quiet the same way. But she would never run out of things to say,” to whatever you put. Ithink I was theonly one who caught this XD

  6. I swear to god this whole pasta is based off the song Absolutely(Story of a Girl) by Nine Days
    Just look at the lyrics and compare the pasta

    This is the story of a girl
    Who cried a river and drowned the whole world
    And while she looked so sad in photographs
    I absolutely love her
    When she smiles
    Now how many days in a year
    She woke up with hope
    But she only found tears
    And I can be so insincere
    Making her promises never for real
    As long as she stands there waiting
    Wearing the holes in the soles of her shoes
    Now how many days disappear
    When you look in the mirror
    So how do you choose
    Your clothes never wear as well the next day
    And your hair never falls in quite the same way
    You never seem to run out of things to say
    This is the story of a girl
    Who cried a river and drowned the whole world
    And while she looked so sad in photographs
    I absolutely love her
    When she smiles
    Now how many lovers would stay
    Just to put up with this shit day after day
    Now how did we wind up this way
    Watching our mouths for the words that we say
    As long as we stand here waiting
    Wearing the clothes or the soles that we choose
    Now how do we get there today
    When we’re walking too far for the price of our shoes
    Your clothes never wear as well the next day
    And your hair never falls in quite the same way
    But you never seem to run out of things to say
    This is the story of a girl
    Who cried a river and drowned the whole world
    And while she looks so sad and lonely there
    I absolutely love her
    When she smiles
    Well your clothes never wear as well the next day
    And your hair never falls in quite the same way
    You never seem to run out of things to say
    This is the story of a girl
    Who cried a river and drowned the whole world
    And while she looks so sad in photographs
    I absolutely love her
    This is the story of a girl
    Whose pretty face she hid from the world
    And while she looks so sad and lonely there
    I absolutely love her

    This is the story of a girl
    Who cried a river and drowned the whole world
    And while she looked so sad in photographs
    I absolutely love her
    When she smiles
    When she smiles!

  7. Does anyone else look for comments that have an overall rating that ends in 4 or 6 or 9 or 1 and click thumbs up or thumbs down so that the rating ends in 0 or 5?

  8. Whoa hold up a second. So, I was reading this right and then when I geton chapter 8 this girl turns into fu***ng Poseidon and will flood your house with her tears while she is buck a** naked? Nope, leave me out of that ive dated crazy girls before but not a mixture of a Greek God eyeless jack! Good pasta though 7/10 :)

  9. Didn’t even read half. Very dull and, to be blunt, stupid, and sexist. Oh yeah, a “perfect partner”. Stop. Unoriginal and uninteresting. 0/10.

  10. i got to like step 5 and i was like ‘this is the story of a girl, who cried a river and drowned the whole world’

  11. Kind of seems like a troll? Wasn’t creepy at all, and a few paragraphs in I was already bored. Though the part with the dramatic heart-glowing did make me laugh.

  12. But what if yo already found that perfect girl in your life?it was a good story overall,I find it wasn’t lacking in much.

  13. Wait. You lost me at ‘black skinny jeans’. Why couldn’t you use something a little more ambiguous. What if the person doing this ritual is like seventy years old? How old is the ritual? Did the girl just recently start doing this? It just unwraveled from my first prod.

  14. This is the story of a girl
    Who cried a river and drowned the whole world
    And while she looks so sad in photographs
    I absolutely love her
    When she smiles

    Was thinking of this song earlier

  15. 10 year old girl

    How did you know all that would happen… lol you never know what to believe (not saying that I don’t believe you, cause I do)

  16. Did you get any sort of inspiration from the song Absolutely (Story of a Girl) by Nine Days? Because I see hidden lyrics c:

  17. THIS IS THE STORY OF A GIRL WHO CRIED A RIVER AND DROWNED TGE WORLD AND WHILE SHE LOOKS SO SAD IN PHOTOGRAPHS I ABSOLUTELY LOVE HER WHEN SHE SMILES!! ..HER CLOTHES NEVER WEAR AS WELL THE NEXT DAY HER HAIR NEVER FALLS IN QUITE THE SAME WAY SHE NEVER SEEMS TO RUN OUTTA THINGS TO SAY
    you have no idea how much I was looking firward to having the end match up with this…. But it didn’t D,; you wuddave made my life

  18. I couldn’t get past the first step… I did exactly as told, but all I got was a slap to the face. Oh well, she wasn’t even that hot anyways.

  19. i was hoping i wasn’t the only person who made the connection with the Nine Days song. I started to realize it at “Her clothes will never wear as well the next day. Her hair will also fall different every time you see her. She will also never run out of things to tell you or discuss.”

  20. This story really reminded me of the song story of a girl. If you listened to the song, you would know. I mean, it talks about how he loves her smile, how her pictures all look sad, and so on. I’m just saying though..

  21. She’s real you know. I met her once luckily she blew me off and while some facts are strewn the part about making her mad isn’t. I ticked her off, but instead of dying I found myself in a whirlwind of hate and misery. Sometimes I think dying may have been an easier path.

  22. Didn’t like at all. Not original except could be parody or troll due to the song but in that case it doesn’t belong here…not creepy or interesting, very monotonous and pointless…not even a ritual. Just instructions…on how to date?

  23. This is a pasta that simply made me laugh, solely for the reason that has been stated already: this is “Story of a Girl” turned into a ritual. After you figure that out, the story becomes rather predictable. I was just sad that she didn’t literally drown the entire world…

  24. This issss the story of a girl, who cried a river and drowned the whole world! And while she looks so sad in phoootographs, I absolutely lover her…when she smiiiiles. LOL. LOVED THIS ONE!!

  25. Did anyone else think of the song, “This is a story about a girl, who cried a river and drowned the whole world. And while she looked s sad in phtographs I absolutely loved her when she smiled”?


  26. “And her clothes never wear as well the next day
    And her hair never falls in quite the same way
    And she never seems to run out of things to saaaay…
    This is the story of a girl Who cried a river and drowned the whole world, and while she looks so sad in photographs,
    I absolutely love it…
    When she smiles”

  27. Hey. This is the writer just giving a comment if you haven’t figured it out yet. Hopesworth is correct. This was my first pasta and I decided to take the “Call me maybe” of the 90s and create a pasta. I can however promise tonthosenthat were disappointed that I have upcoming ideas that will be much more on the creepy and mysterious side.

  28. Well that was titular :P
    I really enjoyed it
    Although whew, any love that involves that kind of effort isn’t really meant to be methinks

    Also, what’s this obsession with sex, get married first dammit!, that’s much more of a declaration of love.

  29. I hate ritual pastas…. they are never creepy, and never a good story. The only part that was redeeming were the descriptions and imagery.

  30. This was…interesting to say the least. Honestly, this pasta was riddled with grammatical errors that just made it a little difficult to praise fully – but that really shouldn’t upset you too much.

    This was nice, I don’t read many Ritual Pastas because I find them very repetitive and predictable. This was extremely predictable, but it wasn’t as cliche’ as I thought it was going to be. You did a good job of fleshing this out with imagery and a overall creepy vibe, but it is just lacking something so crucial to these stories.

    It wasn’t really anything all that original, I feel as though I have read this pasta a million times before except from different perspectives. You write nicely and there weren’t MANY mechanic problems – it just wasn’t anything that stood out to me.

    I suppose that might sound a little harsh, but it really isn’t. I liked this a lot, I just have to stress that I think you are missing something here. Some earth-shattering premise that destroys the conventions of attraction.

    Anyways, I think this was nice. Good luck on further submissions.

  31. This is essentially a Creepypastification of Nine Days’ “Story of a Girl.” Interesting premise, but the 90s song is much better than this.

  32. Very good story, but I couldn’t help but think of that old song about midway through:

    This is the story of a girl
    Who cried a river and drowned the whole world
    But while she looks so sad in photographs
    I absolutely love her
    When she smiles

    1. Yes I was about to post that if I didn’t see it on here. :) he was obviously listening to this song during writing this story :)

    2. Your clothes never wear as well the next day
      And your hair never falls in quite the same way
      You never seem to run out of things to say

      ^ what I thought of before the photographs, when it was talking about how her clothes will never wear the same etc.
      I’m so glad I wasn’t alone in thinking this.

      1. Don’t forget, “and while she looks so sad in photographs, I absolutely love her when she smiles”. I am glad I’m not the only one who picked up on the lyrics.

    3. And her clothes never wear as well the next day and her hair never falls in quite the same way but she never seems to run out of things to say
      Lol yeah it was based on that song not many caught that I think

    4. I dont know wut song ur talkin aboat but i think he thought nobudy knew dat song so he dsided 2 ripoff like a jackoff. 0.0 guyz. I think i just ryhmed! =3 butt it good story and i hop didnt offend u sowi 0.0 =3

      1. ringdingdingdingdingdingding

        *don’t *what *you’re *talking *about *nobody *that *decided *rip off *guys *rhymed *but *hope *I didn’t *you *sorry

        I apologize if I come off as a tad rude. but the lack of proper English in this sentence truly disturbs me.

  33. Woah, this is really good. This is honestly the first one I’ve ever wanted to try because it seems completely plausible. Great job!

  34. Miss Misanthrope

    I’ve never been a big fan of ritual pastas, but this is amazing. Amazing. I love the descriptions in it, you detailed it without boring me, and you kept me hooked until the end. Brilliant.

  35. 4/10

    Not creepy at all. It wasn’t offensively bad, but really… “To win a soulless female to whom you will be mystically (and suspiciously) attracted, do everything you normally would if you were a confident, normal man except say and do some mumbo-jumbo” doesn’t make for a convincingly creepy story.

    Also: BUT WHO WAS SUCCUBUS

  36. THEN WHO WAS....nevermind o.O

    WOW! I liked this. and I did scroll down this pasta with caution in fear there’d be a big picture of the ghastly version of the girl…thank God there wasn’t!

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