I gave her the doll on her birthday.
She loved it at first, told me it was so beautiful. That it’s hair was so soft and the dress was so pretty. She wouldn’t let it out of her sight for days. During the day she set it on the table, so she could see it while cleaning the house. During the night it sat next to the bed, looking at us sleep with big blue unmoving eyes.
But my wife’s love for the doll soon changed. Soon I noticed something was bothering here. I asked of course, but she wouldn’t tell me at first, said she was just being silly. But day after day she closed herself more and more for me. Until I couldn’t take it anymore. I pressed her, told her she would tell me what was going on right now or I would drag her to a doctor.
She finally broke and crying words came spilling out.
She then told me it was the doll. It scared her. She told me she had the feeling it was constantly watching her. Sometimes it even seemed like it moved.
This worried me and I went to take a look at the doll.
It sat motionless on the little table in the bedroom. The big blue eyes unchanged. I couldn’t help but sigh from relief a bit. Of course she’s not moving, she couldn’t have been.
I went to turn away, but then saw a tiny movement from the corner of my eye.
I turned back to the doll, picking it up from the table. I held my face close to the doll’s, staring into the eyes.
Something was moving.
I tried to concentrate, tried to look closer.
Yes, there it definately was, movement. But not from the eye itself, it was behind the eye.
Before I could register this the eye burst and out of it spilled at least ten wriggling maggots.
I dropped the doll in shock, backing away instinctively.
My wife yelled from the other room, asking me what was going on. I yelled back at her not to worry. I picked up the doll again, using a tissue to wipe away the maggots. Inside I saw more, pressing against the skin and the plastic outer layer.
So soon already. I had hoped she would have lasted longer.
I will have to get a new one for her, maybe keep it alive at first. That way it’ll last longer for sure.
While I throw away the old doll, I think about how my wife always says she loves the thick blonde curls of little Katie down the block.
Doesn’t she also have blue eyes?
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Credited to Boudica.
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Good story, but the writing bothered me. Gave me the impression that English isnt your first language, perhaps? The sentences were really short, and not as descriptive as I personally like. I rate soft 6 out of 10.
Love, love, love! <3
oh.
I didn’t see that coming.. I thought it was like.. a porcelein doll
I LOVE DOLL PASTS THEY ARE SO GOOD
cool
I haven’t read very many of these stories, this was only my third ever creepy pasta, but I have to tell you I re-read it three times not because it was bad but because I was so utterly creeped out by the twist. Huge horror fan, you got me! good job!
BUT WHO WAS MAGGOTS
I am soooo boosss
Holy shit that was great
He made the doll… out of people..omfg, cool but creepy. Nice story!
this story was great! it kinda reminds me of a game called mad father ( the father makes dolls out of people in the game)
This reminds me of the House Of Wax movies, both original and remake.
This reminds me of a video I made when two girls find a doll on the street and decide to leave it there. Then when they go to the backyard and see the dolls. They just go inside. The youngest one sees the doll on the tabs and runs away. At first the older one doesn’t believe her. They see one of the dolls and lock themselves in a bedroom. They have to make a run for it. The older locks herself in a pantry but the other is locked outside. The girl is dragged away by the dolls and the last thing you see is a doll with her hair and cloths in a box for selling. The video is called how your dolls were made. Its not on youtube or anything. Really creepy Althea the maggots btw. Yummy!!!
Sent chills down my spine. I freakin hate dolls D:
Pretty fucking good
This scared the crap out of me! It’s awesome!
‘Alien’ reference spotted
katie is the next victim…. then maybe your child…..
There was some awesome sauce on that pasta. Loved it
8.5/10
I love these doll stories! My face was Polly the staring dolly
Katie was the doll!
Uh…. AH! My name is Katie… and I have blue eyes and blonde curly hair… and that dude at the end of the street has been eyeing me creepily lately. That is a scary coincidence… it had better be a coincidence.
I take that back. I read the ending. Pretty good story.
Boring
wow this story is good
This one is definitely my favorite, if not one of my favorites.
Ooooh chilling!
Very very good pasta. Excellent twist. I truly didn’t expect it.
I like!
I had blue eyes once, but I changed it after it popped out.
Ooh the doll is a dead body? That is kinda creepy… 5/5 I wonder who the husband got the doll from, or if he killed the “doll”.
like some hoodoo thing where you turn ppl into lil dolls or something. very very apealing.
Okay, my friend showed this to me and i didn’t get it for a while, then it dawned on me. I freaked out completely, and i couldn’t stop thinking about it. But i still don’t get a part of it, if his wife was creeped out my the maggots, why would he be oh so retarded and get (ahem, “make”) her a new one? Why not go to a doll store? I mean, there’s one in my town that makes the prettiest porcelain dolls ever – they’re world renowned. But i guess that’s the twist, the brain-teasing, gut-twisting, shutter-making, twisted ending.
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–Some——-Girl——-You’ll——-Never———-Know…—-
lol 2 the comment above
How cute. A five year old got on this site and submitted a story.
My name is Talky Tina.
And I’m not sure I like you.
AHEM, NOW THAT THAT IS OVER.
I was expecting a ‘Walk-away-doll-speaks-turn-around-same-position’ thing. Seeing as there was none, I became very happy =)
10/10
Excellent! * applause*
Perhaps the greatest doll story ever! I absolutly loved it :))))
Stunning. Written very well, and what a twist.
I love the insane antics of fictional madmen.
Fear the Darkness
-Nex
So they Husband is a crazy fuck who kills little girls and makes them into dolls. The next doll will be the little girl Katie. Sick :D
i think i would notice a doll that’s fucking decomposing.
This is the best doll pasta I’ve read in a long time. Good job! :D
Wow, her husband’s a sick creep.
Fairly good pasta. At first I was expecting one of those pastas like Polly the Staring Dolly. But it wasn’t, and that’s good. Pretty well done, the writing and all. Not my favorite, but very tasty…
Oh holy crap.
My mouth fell.
Wow, that’s fucked up…Nice work.
I enjoyed this, I didn’t see the twist coming and thought it was just another generic “creepy-ass doll” story – I was pleasantly surprised.
I thought this pasta was great. I really enjoyed it. I always enjoy pasta where the narrator is the bad guy and is very nonchalant and blissfully unaware of how creepy/evil they really are. But I thought it was stupid as shit that when his wife said she thought the doll was moving, he was worried so he checked the doll… he wasn’t worried that his wife was insane or something, lol.
This one was onlt good for people with doll phobias.
Other than that, an epic fail.
that was crap.
@61 I don’t think he was acting like he didn’t know that doll was kid/kid was doll, I think he was acting like he didn’t know that the ‘doll’ had decomposed so quickly.
I’d kill to have a good ‘demon doll’ story…
Good pasta though. *Waves waiter over* There’s a MAGGOT in my ‘pasta! >_>
Unoriginal premise, but competently written. As far as pasta goes this is strictly Olive Garden.
Damn, I wasn’t expecting that
BUT WHO WAS THE FIRST DOLL?!?
still good, no matter how many times i read it.
whoa o_o i didn’t see that one coming, very tasty pasta ^_^
but. he acts like he doesn’t know.
author should fix that.
Very predictable.. actually. I guessed what the ending would be before even getting there. XD
Ooooh, good twist.
this is a good one! also Maggots!! i like creepypasta’s with maggots :D
@Azriel
I remember that one with the scarecrow.
It was nice tho.
Ugh.. I agree Azriel. The dolls are always dead people.
….Am I the only one who remembers all the other creepy pastas on here where the twist is that the dolls are dead human children? The idea was done too many times, and the last one I read was written better. I would have thought it much better if I hadn’t already read the same twist fifteen times.
I like this one! Really short, but very powerful. And it creeps me out that MY name is Katie, and I have curly blonde hair and blue eyes. D:
Very good!!! 5 stars. It’s simple, but it worked. After all, a pasta doesn’t have to be some flowery shakespearean bullshit compo. It did not betray the ending, unlike so many others. Congratulations.
Daddy’s Little Angel.
Didn’t see that coming.
A bit choppy but I digress.
Dolls scare the hell out of me. 5/5
Not very well-written, though. Still 5/5.
Look, the whole doll-thing is just plain boring by now and–
wait… what?
It was…? Ooooooohhhhhhhhh………
Awesome! Did not see that coming! 5/5 for you, sir.
Ehh.
I wasn’t expecting that ending at all. Nice twist. :]
ps – Who Was Phone – why are the “previous posts” not actually the previous posts?
Oh, and Allie; no.
UNSATISFACTORY PRESERVATION TECHNIQUES.
Hey asshole, I don’t want to be a doll.
ok idea. Turned bad at the end, WAY too obvious.
haha i thought it was an evil doll. But that was a good twist.
his wife didn’t notice the smell huh?
ewww… anything with maggots is always gross
I can never enjoy the story when they are involved.
Nice..
That bitch kid can take it.
Another one that’s a decent idea, but poorly executed. The length was fine for a pasta, but kind of hurt the story; if a bit more time had been spent on building the narrator’s insanity, and building on the nature of the doll(s), the whole thing probably would’ve been easier to digest.
Still, it’s okay.
Wasn’t creepy, but I honestly didn’t see the ending coming.
Eh….I feel like the ending was unexpected, but not very good. I kinda would have preferred the typical doll story.
Ooh, chills up the spine.
This was a better pasta than the last few. I was expecting another “OMG. DEMON DOLL EATEZ UR SOUL WHILE U SLEEP.” Having it be an acutal child was a nice change of pace.
This is one of many reasons why dolls freak me out. I wasn’t like this before I started reading creepypasta, I tell ya!
It seems like dolls are the new clowns.
Excellent pasta is excellent.
Haha. It’s a cool outcome, but the introduction of Katie feels too abrupt.
Oh well, the concept works.
HE BETTER NOT MAKE KATIE A DOLL, SHE’S DADDY’S LITTLE ANGEL! xD
A doll story that I didn’t see coming! Hooooraaaaaayyy…
Wow. This was terribly written, but had a good ending. I was surprised.
This is freaky considering that my name is Katie and I have curly hair. Thank god it’s not blonde.
I love the twisted ending!
I can forgive the screw-ups in the first few paragraphs thanks to the ending. Very nice.
This gives me the feeling of road rash.
+15
Crap another fo thsoe boring doll stories, you always knwo how they end. Either the doll itself is evil or tryign to kill the owner, or the owner of the doll goes insane. I mea… OH SH-
That was much, much better than I expected. Still prefer The Lilies Are Bleeding, but it was extremely well executed.
It’s been done too many times.
I’m with Midnightgirl and Comment Leaver on this one. Gotta love a good doll pasta. Those are the creepiest. Also, they remind me of a doll I once had named Julia…
NO….more…dolls…
I already hate those kind of dolls. Now I can’t stand them. Great…At least I like fire….
Oh my god.
I like this one! It’s full of love and maggots :3
Very creepy *shudder*
Hmm, intriguing.
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Yes, Daddy’s Little Angel, Katie, has bright blue eyes.
nice twist! i thought it would be a stupidly long ‘oh the doll is evil’ story, and i’m glad it wasn’t!
horribly written.
or maybe it’s just me.
but i had to read the first few paragraphs over again to understand them.
I saw this coming (don’t ask me how) but still good pasta.
I am very relieved. At first I thought it was going to be another one of those darn dried up evil doll stories.. You know, like Chucky. Thank you, I really enjoyed this one.
Awesome.
So the doll was Katie? xD Eww…
I liked it though. When I read the title, I was like “Oh, great…another dumb doll story. Everyone’s going to be complaining now.”
But it turned out better than I expected ^_^ Great work.
That was very well written and executed.
I hate dolls….
{shudder}
They forgot to make it creepy again.
This was great. I loved it.
Love it, this kind of pasta is always my favorite!
ooh love it! i always love a doll pasta ;) this one is pretty good in my opinion!
KATIE, rather.
but WHO WAS KATE?
A girl down the street readers are to assume the narrator is planning on making a new doll out of.
Yes… and actually, the ‘doll’ was not a doll in the first place…It was made out of a real girl. Now the narrator is planning to make ‘Katie’ her wife’s new doll.
You guys are so literal it’s great.
idk