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Slenderwoman



Estimated reading time — 2 minutes

Darkness, though not complete darkness, surrounds you. A full moon shines through the treetops and slightly illuminates the fog  surrounding you. The flashlight you were holding has flickered out. You look around frantically, fear swarming your insides.  Surely someone would have noticed you missing from the campsite. All the bravery that had convinced you to try and see what you had caught a glimpse of earlier has vanished and you are all alone. Your imagination starts to wander as your heart rate rises. You hear a twig snap somewhere near you, and all the stories that had been told  around the campfire rush to your mind all at once. Especially the one your brother had told… What was the name of that creature? … He has no face. Another twig snaps in the distance. No eyes, no mouth, no nose. You madly search your surroundings, but it is impossible to see anything in this fog. He supposedly lives in these woods, but that is only a story, right?

Your thoughts escape you when you see the outline of a figure, but this is no man. This person is quite obviously a female. She is wearing a black dress that seems to hug her, yet flow around her all at once. You see her eyes glistening in the moonlight. Gorgeous shining eyes. You are unable to look away. Why had you been so scared? Comfort fills you as you walk towards her. There is something off about her, but you can’t quite put your finger on it. There is calmness filling your body like a drug. When you are within feet of her, you notice what it was that was peculiar about her. Those beautiful eyes are a dark, midnight, soulless black, yet you still are captivated by them, unable to look away. Fear starts to burn again in the pit of your stomach, but it is instantly put out, like a fire doused by water. You try fighting this calmness, but your will power escapes you as you drown in this amenity. Why would you ever want to leave this gaze?

What you do not notice is her mouth.. or lack thereof, rather. You are so far gone that you do not even realize that she is completely bald. Her entire body except for her inky black eyes is a smooth, alabaster white. You have stopped walking, yet you still seem to be moving towards her, or floating better yet. Towards her, towards her eyes, until all at once everything is black, just as black as those eyes that had lured you. Then there is  nothingness. In an instant, you cease to exist.

“Who is this woman of the night?”, one might query.
She is everything, yet she is nothing. She has no soul, yet she owns millions. She is comfort, yet she is fear. She was created by a creature of death, so that he could have something to love. So again, she is death, yet life, and hate, yet love.

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She is Slenderwoman.

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Credit To: Lyn

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107 thoughts on “Slenderwoman”

  1. As Nute Gunray* would say:
    This is getting out of hand! Now there are TWO of them.

    (*registered trademark of Lucasfilm Limited)

  2. I really loved this story, it really drew my in. Almost like I could almost feel the terror and the lure of The Slender Woman’s eyes. I really like what you did; with how the Slender woman came about. It’s a powerful story and it could really go far, if you wrote more on this, it could definitely become a novel. It’s really good, you should keep writing :)

  3. Chaos:
    What the hell are you doing… I guess it screwed all slender stories, just like when someone wrote “Jane the killer”. Who’s the next? The Rake? Sorry, I guess it will be the Rika right? -.-

    Seriously you do realize that Jane is a good girl and only tries to kill Jeff

  4. This one was pretty interesting. Its nice to see more then just the generic, boring slenderman stories that you find all over the place. Just wish it could have been a bit longer

  5. It…… was ok… i guess. but please don’t fuk with slendy by making a girl version you just fuked his name hes still bad ass though…

  6. Well, that was… interesting I must say. Although it’s not the same as “Slenderman”, I do suppose it belongs here as well.

    -10/10

  7. little miss black cat

    SLENDERWOMAN VS SLENDERMAN CMON MAKE A JEFF VS JANE PARODY WITH SLENDERWOMAN AND SLENDERMAN!!!!!

  8. Head of the Slender Family

    AGH!
    Why did you have to reveal out daughter like that?
    It was supposed to be a surprise…

  9. hmmm the reason why slendy hates you is because your not immortal like me I know him myself and since you can die this happens

  10. Female creatures are already scary enough. But no.. You know what, why not let’s make a another creature that instils impending paranoia?! Let’s make her female! ~__~

  11. …Comfort fills you as you walk towards her. There is something off about her, but you can’t quite put your finger on it. There is calmness filling your body like a drug…Fear starts to burn again in the pit of your stomach, but it is instantly put out, like a fire doused by water. You try fighting this calmness, but your will power escapes you as you drown in this amenity.’ –I really LIKE THIS part as a CONCEPT.

  12. ‘…Comfort fills you as you walk towards her. There is something off about her, but you can’t quite put your finger on it. There is calmness filling your body like a drug…Fear starts to burn again in the pit of your stomach, but it is instantly put out, like a fire doused by water. You try fighting this calmness, but your will power escapes you as you drown in this amenity.’ –I really this part as a concept.

  13. Why does there ALWAYS have to be a female version of these creepypasta monsters? Sorry, but it takes away from the monster being unique. Jill the Killer, Slenderwoman- what’s next- “The Hoe?” (Female Rake.)

    I know what it is. The writers of these pastas with female monster counterparts don’t have the brain capacity to invent their own monster, so they simply choose to take an existing one, and just change it’s gender.

    Wow.

  14. Wwll I thought it was prety good giving the setting wass just the sam as the slender man how do we know that it was not Slendy ina dress?

  15. Not very creepy, but beautiful at least.

    That’s a problem.

    Also, really? Slenderwoman? Sorry, but um… no. It just doesn’t feel right at all. And eyes. No. If you’re gonna write anything where you have any sort of Slenderbeing at all, NO EYES. That’s the point. It has no face. That’s part of what makes it scary.

  16. THEN WHO WAS....nevermind...

    Lol….noooo…..not catchy enough! Its got to be absolutely horrifying and disgusting. I’ll give ya some time to think about it ;)

  17. THEN WHO WAS....nevermind...

    Good point YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE USERNAME…I guess that WOULD be the case. Was hoping for something a lil drastic though :)

  18. My moms nemisis…that ass jeff my mom skinned him her white dress is
    Red now…from that bastards blood…my brother I never met him jeff
    Took custody of him I heard his name is john.john the killer.I will
    Kill that fucking disgrace…grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.that sick fuck jeff raped
    My mom I will kill them 2 disgraces!!!!!!

        1. YOU CAN'T HANDLE THE USERNAME!

          Well its not YOUR story, its a totally different and ‘fresh’ take on slenderman, I MIGHT call it Slenderchildren…
          …I might not submit it.
          Or mention it.
          Or reemember it.
          Or speak of it ever again.

  19. Now that is mean. What people are saying about her. Mama was beutiful. Before she left. Now im all alone with daddy. And people probably think Im a fake anyway. But its okay. As long as I know im not fake. And I have daddy with me. Im Slendermans daughter. I dont even see why everybody is so afraid of him…. or Mama. But I wont try to diminish others opinions. So…in closure, have a nice day.

    Wow, that was pointless….

  20. An interesting take on slenderwoman. I did find the soothing and calming eyes to be a nice motherly touch which just seemed to go hand in hand with her. Dearly enjoyed this.

  21. This part was actually well written: "You hear a twig snap somewhere near you, and all the stories that had been told around the campfire rush to your mind all at once. Especially the one your brother had told… What was the name of that creature? … He has no face. Another twig snaps in the distance. No eyes, no mouth, no nose. You madly search your surroundings, but it is impossible to see anything in this fog." Otherwise it was shit. Especially the title, you shouldn’t have given the monster away at the very beginning.

  22. It was very cheesy and ruined the image of slenderman. Why give it eyes and call it slenderwoman? "She is everything and she is nothing" What, is she Buddhist? You could have made it somewhat distinctive, like saying her dress is actually a mass of her victim’s shadows or her face was actually reflecting your own eyes and smile.

    1. Read one or two older Slender stories. Slenderman was described as everything and nothing before this one was posted. The stories are all listed in order from newest to oldest, so you have to start at the last page of any category or archive to read the first one ever posted on this site.

    1. You no what!!??
      I dont get it how come slenda (nickname for slenderwoman) gets to have eyes and slendoy (nickname for slenderMAN) doesnt
      FUK DIS!!!!!
      Follow me on twitter! @johanny_Ventura

  23. Slenderman then Slenderwoman?!?!?!?!?!??!?!? LOL
    ——————————————Mr. Unknown————————————————–

  24. What the hell are you doing… I guess it screwed all slender stories, just like when someone wrote "Jane the killer". Who’s the next? The Rake? Sorry, I guess it will be the Rika right? -.-

      1. Hi babe!! ;D wait. . ? WAT?!? JEFF IS AWSOME BUT FUK JANE!!!! U BELONG W/ ME OR SLENDY!! DARE 2 SLEEP U UNHOLY ( censoring words) . I luv u. :3

    1. K so this is a masterpiece and unless your against the soulmate principle then you must understand that every being has an equal even if there the same sex or different or if there not even remotely interested in each other it dosnt mean they cant have an other half so it does make sense if u dont like it then maybe u should talk to the owner of creepy pasta

    2. Jane the killer isn’t the girl version of Jeff, she a girl who wants her revenge on Jeff and her skin used to be white but now is brown wearing a white mask!

      1. wtf u wierd noob

        What u saying slender woman u expect us to belive u slender woman monsters cant use the internet. Fuk u

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