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Roadwork



Estimated reading time — 14 minutes

When Conner arrived at the gas station, he exited the car with a speed that surprised even him. He took a few quick steps, almost at a run, before turning back towards the car. Under the garish sodium lights of the service station, the little blue sedan looked a sickly greenish gray. It looked squat and malign in its stillness. The little throbbing headache at the base of his skull seemed to diminish with every step and he began to catch his breath.

He took the phone from his pocket and raised it high into the night sky, waving it from side to side like a signal flag. Nothing. The signal meter defied him by remaining empty. Not even a flashing roaming message. Conner scowled at the little phone and thrust it back into his pocket.

He glanced around at the station, two solitary pumps and a closed convenience market. An isolated island of pale yellow light in the dark of the North Carolina forest, the silhouettes of the trees bit sharply into the starry night sky, surrounding him like a ring of teeth. The grating hum of electricity mingled with the crackling of insects from the woods beyond, drifting in the warm summer night air.

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Jutting from the side of the shuttered market was a scraped and listing pay phone, its metal stalk visibly bent from some long ago impact. Conner approached it, digging a quarter from his pocket, and gripping the scarred plastic handset. For a moment, nothing happened, and the sense of isolation deepened, like the ground being pulled out from under him, and the panic returned. A series of quick clicks bit into his ear and the dial tone chimed. His fingers felt numb as he dialed.

Even at a few hours past midnight, Reynolds answered on the first ring.

“Yes?” Reynolds’ rolling baritone was silky, and unmarred by the late hour. “Who is this?”

“S’me. Conner.” He was unable to keep the quaver out of his voice, and he had a sudden urge to look back towards the car, suddenly afraid that it might have moved, or left him there all together.

“This isn’t the phone I gave you.” Reynolds liquid voice darkened, almost imperceptibly.

“It’s a payphone. Ain’t got signal out here. Middle of fucking nowhere. Listen Ren, I-”

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“Is something the matter, Conner?” Conner bristled at the mild, calculated condescension in the older man’s tone, and inhaled slowly, measuring his next words with caution.

“Well… Shit. I don’t rightly know, Ren, but I got a real bad feeling about this.”

“Where are you?”

“Service station. Just got off the freeway. Bout to head south through Natahala.”

“And what is the matter, Conner?”

“Like I said, there’s something fucked up about this one. Didn’t like the guy I picked the car up from, don’t like whatever it is that’s in the fucking trunk. I know this sounds fucking stupid, but it’s giving me a headache. I feel like I can smell it, but I know I can’t. Something just feels rotten about it. I mean rotten, rotten.”
There was a long silence on the other end, and Conner knew that Reynolds was unmoved. Even as Conner said the words, he knew how stupid it sounded.

“Conner,” the old man said at last, “We’ve worked together for a long time. I like you. But you’ve never given a shit about what you deliver. What’s the strangest thing I’ve had you carry?”

“The heart.” Conner answers without hesitation, seeing the white styrofoam cooler steaming with ice, strapped in the front seat like a babies car seat.

“Yes. You also once delivered several pounds of heroin. Did you know that at the time?”

“Not ‘till after the fact.”

“Because it’s better that way, isn’t it, Conner.” Reynolds paused, the smooth rhythms of his voice already calming the younger man. “It’s better if you don’t know. The man you picked the car up, in his own way, is as trustworthy and reliable as you are. I understand why you might bristle at him, given his unfortunate looking visage, but he is like you. A trusted contractor, and discrete. I employ you both, for your discretion. Do you understand Conner?”

“Yessir.”

“Good. I think you understand why I’m offering so much more for this delivery, and why it has to be late at night, and on the backroads. Our client this time has specific instructions, and we’re not getting paid to wonder why. We’re not getting paid to pry.”

“I understand.” It galled Conner, how stupid he’d sounded, how stupid he’d been, panicking, and calling Reynolds late in the night.

“I know you do. And I know this one is odd, son. I do. I hope you believe me when I say that it makes me as uncomfortable as it makes you. I’d do it myself, but no one is as good as you. I’m smart enough to know when to trust the best.”

“Thank you, Ren.”

“No, Conner, thank you. Now, get back on the road. When you drop off the car, the client will have his own men to take care of the package. And then you can sleep, and you won’t have to work for a year. All for one nights drive.”

“Okay. I gotcha.”

“Conner. I trust you wouldn’t, and forgive me if this is insulting, but, don’t open the trunk okay? It wouldn’t help, the package is locked up anyway. And it needs to stay locked because the client wants it locked.”

“Of course, Ren. Look I’m awful sorry for calling, I guess I just got spooked something fierce.”
“Not at all. That’s what I’m here for. Now, get on the road Conner. And call me when it’s done.”

Reynolds hung up before Conner could reply, and he returned the handset to the cradle.

Keys in hand, Conner returned to the car, driving himself forward even as his newfound confidence waned as he approached. The phantom odor, more like a memory of a scent than an actual smell returned, something sweet and corrupt. As he turned the key to start the engine, the gentle pain in the back of his head returned, rising slowly. He gritted his teeth, and pulled out of the service station.

The Natahala national forest closed around the two lane road, and the darkness swallowed the service station behind him. Conner tried to focus on the destination, the route laid out, the starry sky outside. Anything but the trunk. It worked, for a few minutes.

Conner’s blood coursed with caffeine, and a tiny dose of some high grade speed, just enough to keep him awake, but still, after a half hour on the dark road, his eyes began to flutter. At first, they simply felt dry, and he batted his eyes to wet them. But they began to stay closed longer, seeming to stick at the zenith of each blink. The tires hit the yellow reflectors of the center line, and with a sick jolt of adrenaline, he realized he’d been drifting.

Ahead, the headlights illuminated a hundred yards of road, and picked out reflectors for another hundred. The glowing dots chased out in front of him like tracer bullets, outpacing the lit road, and marking his path into the darkness. They curved upward ahead, signaling a rise in the road before it could be seen.

Conner focused on the reflectors, letting them swim by him like the gentle dripping of water. He watched the phantom line of glowing points dip and rise with the road, and then, with numb disbelief, watched it whip upwards, above his line of sight, twisting skyward. Conner thought absurdly of a sharp upward rise, wondering if the car could take such a steep ascent.
Then the line whipped like a snake, striking across the night sky, and his foot struck the brake with all the force that his terror could muster. The car slid to the right, and he corrected, pulling back onto the road, and jerking to a halt. From the trunk there was a hollow and dull thumping noise, and Conner’s heart surged.

Ahead, the road was perfectly flat, the yellow reflecting lights fixed back in reality. With the car no longer in motion, Conner’s guts sang to him to leave, to flee into the relative safety of the dark woods. His hands clutched the steering wheel, bloodless in their intensity. From the trunk, came another small thud, and Conner’s heart seemed to stop.

Conner was out of the car before he knew it, the keys rattling in his grip. The fear had become something like a manic curiosity now. If he could simply see the thing in the trunk, he could move on, could start driving, could do another line and stay awake long enough to dump the fucking thing and just sleep.

The trunk opened with greased efficiency. The smell caught him first. It was the phantom smell from before, but now it felt cloyingly real, clinging to his nostrils. Putrid meat. Dead dog in the hot summer road, burst belly and cloudy eyed rot. He gagged, choking on the intensity.

When he blinked the tears from his eyes, he could see what was inside, but could not understand at first. Shiny emergency blankets, silvery on one side and gold on the other, reflecting the trunks meager light, were wrapped loosely around a large, man sized bundle.

Conner’s hands were peeling back the metallic sheets before he had time to think, the drive to know almost painful, even as his mind screamed what he already knew: he was carrying a fucking corpse.

Beneath the first shining layer was an woolen army blanket, sodden in black and oily fluids. The smell was even stronger now. Conner debated, briefly, stopping there, but he reached out, and peeled back the blackened sheet, feeling the wet fluids adhere to his slender fingers.

The corpse was naked to the waist, and horridly disfigured. One arm ended in a shredded stump; an unmistakable bruised and pierced field, a buckshot wound, patterned the grey and sunken chest. The head was cracked open, one hand sized chunk of skull, clotted and matted with thinning gray hair, lying next to it. Black and rotten teeth grimaced through a frozen rictus of pain. One dull, dark eye stared up it him.

Around the neck, was a black leather collar, cinched tight against the mottled grey skin. What looked like metallic wires in delicate filagree curved across the leather, tracing a circuit board like design. At the clasp was a small metal box, where the wires met and joined, encircling a small green LED light that winked rhythmically.

Conner stared, disbelieving for some time. The silent forest surround him, and his eyes held fixed on the corpse, the dead hobo with an electric collar in the trunk. He wanted to be angry, he knew he should be terrified, but it simply didn’t make sense, and he could muster no single emotion, despite the hundreds vying for release. The headache pulsed sharply, and it pushed him out of his trance, where he found himself staring off into the woods.

He shut the trunk, after wrapping up the body and wiping off his hands. He found himself back in the drivers seat, staring ahead at the flat road, his breathing oddly calm. He was tired again, and the nameless dancing fear was far at the periphery.

It was simple now. He had to deliver the car. That was all there was to it.

He sped now, against his own rules and instincts, taking the forested roads with reckless velocity, music cranked loud to hammer him awake. It didn’t work. The drowsy fog seemed to tug harder at him now, and the ticking regularity of tall trees, and the rhythm of the white reflective paint on the road beat out a tattoo of hypnotic regularity.

It was a while before he came to realize that the radio was no longer on. There was only the steady lulling white noise of the engine, the hiss of the tires peeling away from the asphalt. And the knocking from the trunk.

A steady beat of impacts. Sharp raps. Fists on metal.

Conner closed his eyes tight, grinding his teeth together. The headache took on a new pitch, a sudden sharpening, and a chill spread across his body. He pressed the accelerator as if he could speed himself bodily away from the trunk and it’s cargo, but he felt it speeding with him, pursuing him with a matched intensity.

When he opened his eyes, his heart leapt into his throat. The forest was gone. He was on a four lane highway, but the terrain was foreign to him. He resisted the urge to stop sharp again, tried to quell the hammering in his chest, but he could settle the panicked animal desperation.

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Everything was wrong. Despite the massive road, he was the only driver in either direction. There were no road signs. No mile markers. He’d lost time on long drive before, but he always stayed on course, coming out of the trance precisely where he wanted to be. And he’d never been lost. Conner knew every thoroughfare and backwoods trail for 100 miles in every direction.

But he could not tell where he was. The clock on the dashboard proclaimed that he’d lost mere minutes. He’d been a dozen miles from any road of this size.

It’s not fair, he thought, and then repeated it again, aloud. His voice was pinched and thin. A child’s protest.

“That’s not possible.”

The unbroken field of blacktop and reflective plastic and paint rolled away beneath him and behind. The trunk was now silent, but still lingered malignant behind him. He grabbed the telephone beside him, and flipped it open. Nothing.

Conner only had one course of action that he could see. Take the first exit, find another service station, reorient, deliver the fucking car. The little thread of hope, woven by as solid a plan as he could muster tugged at him, and he pushed the little blue sedan even harder. Together, driver and passenger hurtled down the road.

He felt a surge of elation, as up ahead, an orange sign broke the monotony of the phantom freeway. It resolved from the gloom as he approached, tall black letters reading ROADWORK AHEAD.

It wasn’t what he’d hoped for, but it was a change, and something to break the impossible blankness of the unknown road.

Ahead, the left lane was blocked off by a sloping line of bright orange traffic cones, pushing Conner one lane over. The line continued, disappearing into the dark. Conner strained to see the lights and hear the sound of construction vehicles, the late night shift adding a fresh layer of tar. Nothing.

The line of cones veered again, blocking of the next lane. Conner merged with it, feeling his hopes seep away into the dark. The line moved again, forcing him into the far right lane.

Finally, as he understood it would be before he even saw it, the plastic traffic cones blocked of the last lane, and then the shoulder, one bright orange line, bisecting and blocking any further progress.

Conner slowed, ingrained instincts to obey all rules of the road screaming as they tried to process this logical contradiction. It didn’t take long for him to decide. He knew he didn’t want to be out here, alone, and unmoving, with the thing in the back. The thing that might not be dead. If he was rolling, he was at least getting closer to being done with it all. He gunned the engine, brought the car back up to speed and plowed through the line of cones.

They folded beneath his wheels, tossed high into the air, and illuminated by the red of his brake lights as they bounced off the road into the night.
Everything in Conner’s career had been focused on not drawing attention. He’d not been pulled over since he was caught joyriding at age 13 with a phone book beneath his seat, and a tin can tied to his foot to reach the pedals. He’d made a career of escaping notice, but now he found himself wishing to see flashing blue and reds lights behind him.

He didn’t know how he’d explain driving into a roadwork zone, speeding, or the hideous wreck of flesh in the trunk. He didn’t care. He’d give anything to see another person. If he could just reach Reynolds, hear that calming voice…

Ahead, the four dotted lines of reflective paint vanished. The four lanes evaporated into a featureless plain of smooth black tar. Conner felt empty, beyond shock. Hot tears welled up in his eyes. Without the lines of the road, he suddenly felt he was drifting, veering of the road. Impulsively, he turned sharp to the right. The smooth field of blacktop spread away into the distance of his headlights.

“Fuck this.”

The sound of his own voice shocked him, causing him to leap slightly, and he let his foot of the pedal. The car drifted to a stop. He opened the door, and stepped out, onto the black plain. The brittle pain in his head flared as he did, but he knew that if he could just get away from the car, he could think straight.

He picked a direction and began to walk. The night sky was starless, the horizon featureless. He looked behind him, once, seeing the pool of bright light where the car still sat. His head throbbed, and he picked up his pace, jogging now.

The night air was clean and sweet, and although the throbbing in his head still continued, he felt refreshed by the freedom of being on his own two feet.

After what felt like several miles, walking blind across the asphalt field, he began to worry if Reynolds would ever hire him again. Such a relatively mundane concern, absurd in his current situation, hooked him like an anchor.

He was hallucinating, he realized. Although he couldn’t tell where his senses became unreliable, he knew that was the only possible answer. And sooner or later, he would stop. And he’d likely never work as a courier again, would likely have ruined Reynolds business with his strange, wealthy client that paid to have the corpses of transients shipped across backwoods roads, but so fucking what? With a dry chuckle he realized that Reynolds would be better off without that sort of client even if the old man didn’t see it that way at first, because who knows what the client would ask of him next? And hell, he’d find work again, even if he had to uproot and find a new backyard to get familiar with, because he was the best goddamn driver there was.

Up ahead, he saw a light, a tiny deviation in the darkness, and he began to run, a smile spreading across his face. As he approached, the skin on the back of his neck seemed prickle, and the icy point of the headache pushed deeper. He knew what he was looking at, but he still couldn’t accept it.

It was the sound that made it real. The engine he heard first, then the other sounds, the chirping ring of his cellphone on the front seat, the bleating of the car’s open door alarm, and then at last, the steady tapping from the trunk.

He didn’t want to look at it, wanted to turn away and run off into the dark forever, rather than confront the car and its evil fucking cargo just a few feet in front of him when it should be miles away.

He picked one errant thought out of the confused and desperate whirlwind of his mind: The phone. It was still ringing. He pressed in closer to the car, feeling its presence like a thick fog, blacker than the darkness around it. It seemed to yield to his incursion, allowing him in to shut off the engine and grab the phone.

He clicked the phone open and pressed it to his ear, trying to ignore the noises from the trunk.

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“Hello?” he whispered into the receiver.

“Conner.” It was Reynolds’s voice, but something was wrong. The sharp precise diction, the smooth tone, some indefinable quality was gone. “Conner, listen to me.”

“Oh Jesus, Ren, I think I’m in a lot of trouble.”

“Did you unlock the package?”

“Fuck no, sir, but I don’t think that matters.”

“You have to check. As long it’s still locked, nothing else matters.”

“I don’t think I can look in there. I think it’s still alive.”

“Conner. You must.”

Conner felt the heat rising in him again, the paralyzing anger at the absolute bullshit unfairness of it all, and he yowled wordlessly at the sky, before shakily approaching the rear of the car.

He slid the key in, fingers trembling uncontrollably, and swung the trunk open. The smell hit him, but it had changed, the rot had gave way to some predator musk that put Conner’s hair on end.

The silver blankets were shredded and pushed aside. The thing inside was almost unrecognizable. The shredded arm was now a thin and reedy limb, pink and newborn with too many jointed elbows. The buckshot wound was almost invisible, and Conner watched in horror as one of the few remaining holes disgorged a small lead ball before closing up around it.

Both eyes stared out at Conner, one shrunken and glistening, but filled with malevolent light. It grinned, revealing not the black and rotted teeth he’d remembered, but a shark’s grin.

Conner found himself on his back, not remembering falling, scuttling feebly away from the car. The headache was suddenly gone, and a confusing flood of stimuli crashed against the beachhead of his senses.

He was still in the woods.

The car was pulled off to the side of the road. In the sudden painless clarity, the broken parts of the last hours fell into place. He remembered opening the trunk that first time seeing the body. He remembered stripping the collar from the corpse, tossing it into the woods. He remembered wondering why he’d done it even as his fingers closed around it.

He remembered forgetting. He remembered wondering why he’d found himself staring off into the woods.

He still couldn’t find his footing, could only crawl away from the open trunk, the thing now rearing upward, silhouetted by the wan light of the trunk’s single bulb. One of the too long limbs, with the impossible joints slid out, a spider emerging from a drain.

The phone was still in his hand, and he saw, without any real surprise, that it was still searching fruitlessly for a connection. He tossed it away, using his hands to pull himself upright.

It was out now, crouched and waiting. Its dark eyes flickered in the moonlight.

Conner raised himself slowly to unsteady feet. The thing mirrored him, extending to its full and horrid hight, the bloody scraps of pants clinging to it’s pale and now unmarked frame.

Disgorged of its hideous cargo, the little car now looked like sanctuary, like hope, like freedom. But the thing stood between him, and any chance of escape. It leaned forward toward him, the shark teeth glistening with spit.

Conner began to laugh, a hopeless and mournful sound, his limbs locking in fear as it reached out for him, its spider legged hands curling around his arms. Its touch was cold, and the knobby fingers felt like the tightening of vices.

The thing laughed with him.


CREDIT: Josef K. / Cameron Suey

This is a follow-up to the story Exit.

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108 thoughts on “Roadwork”

  1. Nicola Marie Jackson

    Bugger. I wish it had said it was part two at the he start, now I’ve got to read it in the wrong order. Great story though! 10/10

  2. Well then.. it was a good pasta-ish ive read better, But it could have had a better variety of choices and it would have benifited with a better plot. But who am i to judge.

  3. PSA: If you’re not sure what happens next, the story is finished. You should have stopped with the spider emerging from the drain. Leave the rest to our imaginations, which can produce scarier things than you can ever write.

  4. omegax123:
    The creature is CopMonster from Exit. Cal is the client, may have taken out a contract on the thing’s head rather than go anywhere near it again. Or maybe you folks should read more carefully: it says “follow-up”, not “sequel”. There is a difference.

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  5. Really frustrated story to read in my opinion. Too many “did exactly what I shouldn’t have but don’t know why” cop outs. Was just waiting for it to be over toward the end.

  6. I liked this one. As Always with Josef, he kept me interested till the end. I would have liked to see it tie in with the other story “Exit” though. As this is supposed to be a follow up.

  7. I’m on mobile creepy pasta. every misclick opens Amazon. com. please fix this very annoying thing. or i will. have my minions skull fuck the admins. much love

  8. Pretty creepy. At least for me. The setting was the main source of the creepyness for me. The desolate highway late at night. Yeah, I’ve had nightmares like that before.

    And I will never trust my friend Connor to drive at night now.

  9. Ya ^^^
    The ending was real creepy and original, best part. Whens the last time a tall, half-naked, man-spider hugged his victim. AND LAUGHED. freaky as tits

  10. you guys are total dumbasses if you can’t understand the fucking ending. its obvious that the collar kept the corpse from coming back to life/regenerating, so when connor took it off (dumbass…) the corpse was able to regenerate its limbs and come back to life, and then it killed the dipshit. hurrr.

  11. My god, why do so many of the people who read this site seem to have severe reading comprehension issues?

    The ending basically amounts to:
    -After being lost on a presumably endless highway and finding himself unable to escape his car, Connor goes to check the body in the trunk
    -Finds the collar on the body’s neck has been removed.
    -Revealed that the entire business with the endless highway hadn’t really happened but had rather been some form of hallucination, in reality Connor had removed the collar on the corpse the first time he checked the trunk
    -The implication is that the thing in the trunk had been somehow mentally manipulating Connor the entire time in order to be freed from captivity. This would explain the constant headache and feeling of unease Connor had been suffering the entire time as well as the afore-mentioned hallucinations and Connor’s inability to recall why he removed the collar
    -Corpse comes to life, turns into monster, rapes Conner to death.

    It’s not that hard to follow

  12. I quite enjoyed it. As a crazy time-continuum mindfuck, I find myself thinking of the Terminator movies…. I actually thought the “corpse” was an android of some kind.

    Prolly helped lubricate the parallel that the main character’s name was Conner. XD

  13. Too long, but the writing was captivating enough to keep me going. The ending wasn’t confusing at all… so what the fuck to the people who were confused by it.

  14. So… Connor was delivering a dead body… who was him… wait a second… How did the dead connor get a buck shot wound then? does zombie Connor carry around a gun? in the trunk? what?

  15. @omegax123

    That’s certainly how I intended it. But just because I wrote it doesn’t make my interpretation any more valid than the others, I just like it the most.

    @Konrad

    Although, I kind of love this interpretation too…

  16. The creature is CopMonster from Exit. Cal is the client, may have taken out a contract on the thing’s head rather than go anywhere near it again. Or maybe you folks should read more carefully: it says “follow-up”, not “sequel”. There is a difference.

  17. You guys are all wrong

    -spoiler-

    This story was about this Connor guy was dilivering his own dead body, thats why the author used words like “mirroring” and so on. It’s a paradox, it was his own body, how did he die? Well, he opened the trunk and he killed himself and put himself in trunk until another Connor…..comes…along to drive….it……Yeah my head hurts.

  18. Really liked it. Haven’t read Exit yet though, but from the comments it should be pretty good.

    This pasta actually gave me a few chills, especially during his psycho-hallucination in the middle of asphalt-nowhere.

  19. Man I was reading this at college and just when it was getting really fucking suspency someone knocked my chair, I shat brix.

  20. not terrible. didn’t scare me or anything, but the concept was good. i didn’t really like the flashback of him taking off the collar, it is just too clichè, and the final was too fast. overall, decent.

  21. Connor is a pussy, I could drive with a corpse in the trunk saying the whole way: WHAT COULD POSSIBLY GO WRONG?

  22. The ending makes sense to me =p

    Conner opens the trunk and finds that the corpse is actually food for something else, the dark figure with the shark-like grin.

    Conner stumbles back and the creature follows him. Soon, the creature grabs Conner, Conner laughs, the creature laughs as well, and the rest is left to the readers imagination.

    Personally, i think the creature could either be a cannibalistic human, or just some crazy animal. Either way, i understood it… at least i think i did…

  23. I expected this to be a joke pasta when he picked up the phone. A completely serious and genuinely scary story and then he picks up the phone. “CONNOR, DO YOU KNOW WHO TEH FONE IS?”

  24. I think that this is supposed to be a prequel in a way. Even though it’s a follow-up, it could still be a prequel, and the car that Bobbie and Cal saw could’ve been Connor’s.

    Either way, I enjoyed this one.

  25. exceptionally well written, obviously there are a lot of simple minded people on this site who like the cheesy 5 paragraph stories and can’t appreciate or comprehend the ones that take time and finesse

  26. Think about it this way: if this story was meant to be the sequel to Exit, then the hobo-creature being in the trunk would mean Cal (the main character from Exit) managed to kill/capture the creature himself, which ties into the whole “I-will-never-stop-looking” ending in Exit. Why isn’t Cal transporting the monster himself, you ask? Well maybe he’s dead or something._. So, enter Conner, the new delivery man…

    Personally I think this story would work better as a prequel, though.

  27. This is by far the best story I have ever read. The reason I liked it was because it made you think, and to get a few things straight.
    – Conner took the thing’s collar off
    – that made the thing come back to life
    – he was in a roadwork exit so there was no exit there yet
    – in “Exit” Cal found a rusted car squished by trees up ahead
    – he also saw and exit where there was no exit
    – hence the creature needs humans and lives in some closed out exit
    I also want to say that Josef K, you are my idol

  28. Im quite pleased with this story,a little scary,few typos,and descriptive…..however the ending is a tad bit confusing and the story is overly long.

  29. @mr uno

    Better yet, why don’t you write an intelligible, grammatically correct, useful review before critiquing someone else’s? Stop being a whiny idiot and go cry somewhere else.

  30. This was a brilliantly written story marred only by a couple of things. Obviously, the ending as if he had a great idea for a story but no idea where he’d go with it at it’s end. It builds up so steadily then leaves you with so many loose ends that it’s actually frustrating. Second, and this is what really gets me, is how any rotting corpse can smell at all cloyingly. I know it’s a small thing, but c’mon.

    Great delivery, but the ending was a real let down.

  31. I didn’t get the part wherein the LED colalr was ripped out, but I agree that it’d be more sensible if this was the first story and Bobbie’s story was the sequel. :)
    I’ll look at it that way now. :P

  32. First story I read on this site…found it repetitive and boring. Maybe I’m being too harsh, but I wasn’t scared at all, and I couldn’t get involved in the story. It was okay. Also, I’m weird about typos, so that was annoying.

  33. First story I read on this site…found it repetitive and boring. Maybe I’m being too harsh, but I wasn’t scared at all, and I couldn’t get involved in the story. It was okay. Also, I’m weird about typos, so that was annoying.

  34. Heh, funny you say this is a sequel to Exit, since it felt more to me like a prequel, you know, explaining how the cop monster came to be, what the car in the woods was all about, and all that jazz.

    Now we DO need a true sequel to Exit. I don’t like stuff without closure.

  35. Like alot of other people, i didn’t get the ending, but everything else was extremely well written and compelling, although it was freakishly long.

  36. Don’t see how it fits in with the last story except with being about driving down backroads. Pretty predictable plotline too, the OH GOD IT WAS A DREAM AND YOU GOT TRICKED INTO LETTING THE MONSTER/GHOST/DEMON GET FREE idea has been done a fair bit.

    Better than some of the recent ones though.

  37. I was at work when I first read this one. And since I hadn’t read “Exit” yet I was reading both at the same time (the joys of a slow internet connection…) and I found them to have similar styles. When I finished the first one on the page (aka Road Work) I realized they were by both Josef K. That clicked. I wondered about the sequel sequence though. I think Road Work should’ve come first. Then Exit was the follow-up. That would make sense because now scary hobo re-generating creepy thing is loose in the woods (because of Connor) luring people (Bobbie and Cal) into its “spider-web exits” because it’s gained power. It would also explain why its taken on a new appearance but is still really similar beings.

    All in all, good stories again. Typos though, but beautiful descriptions.

    And for people who don’t get this pasta, here’s the story in short:

    – Connor is a courier and he carries stuff for his boss, Reynold.
    – Sometimes he carries drugs, and even hearts. So we can safely assume Reynold is in the illegal business.
    – Connor gets paid but he doesn’t ask questions. And this is how a courier typically works. You drive the package to a destination and you get paid.
    – But this time, Connor is freaked out by the thing he is carrying.
    – So en route, he stops and checks out the ‘package’ even though Reynold told him not to “unlock it”.
    – Connor opens it up, finds a creepy corpse with this LED collar yada yada. Gets lost in this long descriptive road/highway and goes through a bunch of psychological things.
    – He decides to abandon his car to think but turns out he still lands up in front of the car even though he ran away from it.
    – He picks up his cell and Reynold tells him to check if the package is “unlocked”.
    – He checks and this time the corpse is coming alive.
    – At this point, Connor realizes that the first time he checked the corpse, for some reason, he had ripped away the LED collar. We can assume that the LED collar is what kept this corpse “locked down”. But now since it’s obviously free, it jumps out of the trunk and kills Connor.
    – Why did Connor forget what he did? Because the corpse made him and messed with his brain. The end. :]

  38. Good descriptions, but honestly, it just wasn’t written well. Coupled with a not so hot plot, makes for a lukewarm snack of a pasta.

  39. to all of you who said ‘typo’ fuck you, especially you SAGE. only if any of you ever write a pasta half as good as oneof josef k’s you have room to talk. but until that day comes keep your fucktarded comments to yourself!

    oh and i loved the description of the corpse as bein a hobo tthough…made me laugh. bravo again josef k, you make creepypasta worth coming to

  40. Just wanted to make sure everyone knew, this story is a “sequel” to Exit. Josef K. on his website said that this much, and that is the reason for the similarities between Road Work and Exit.

  41. This story was a little uncharacteristic of Josef K. Filled with typos, repetitive to an unnecessary degree, and predictable. I still enjoyed reading it, but I can’t list it as one of my favorite stories.

  42. ok, explained: connor is a driver, his job is to pick up a car with cargo and drop it off at snother spot without being noticed. This time tho it was some wierd sci-fi corpse frankenstien thing. the collar was keeping it from regenerating. or coming to life or something. but it still fucked with his head. hence the hallucinations and headache and stuff. when he took off the collar it came back to life as some crazy killer hobo corpe freaky spider thing. Connor dies. THE END

  43. This was a great story!!!!
    Loved it!!!
    Though the ending was a bit hard to understand, it kind of left it to your imagination.

  44. It was a nice read, it would’ve been better if it made sense. Considering the fact that it was from Josef K., I’m dissappointed.

  45. Typical Josef K. story, but marred with typos. Pretty sad that after a slew of shit pastas we get smacked with two of basically the same story by the same author. Fail, Creepypasta, fail.

  46. It’s alright, not one of his best. Well-written, but the plot itself doesn’t really do it for me. I’d still rather read anything he writes over 90% of the other stories though.

  47. I jizzed in my pants.

    That aside, I’d like to congratulate Josef K. for being the only author worth reading on this site.

  48. Creepy as hell. I liked the way that what Conner was – a deliverer of illicit cargo – was established fast, and that this would be no ordinary delivery.

    1. Earlier, he abruptly was looking into the woods when he was looking at the corpse before. The ending revealed that during that time he “unlocked” the creature, allowing it to regenerate itself and mess with his brain. And then it gets up and he’s in a hopeless situation.

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