Movie Night
| Published on Creepypasta.com | June 2012 |
|---|---|
| Length | 189 words · about 1 minute to read |
| Story level | Micro |
| Reader rating | 6.7/10 from 446 votes |
| Category | Beings and Entities |
You were excited for this day. You should be after all, you’ve been working hard. You deserve to have some fun. For tonight, you planned a movie night with a couple of old friends. Horror movies, as was customary since your younger days. You all watched with wide eyes and shaking hands, while cracking jokes and denying feeling any fear. Nobody wants to be the wimp, right?
It was around 4 AM when the last movie stopped, and everyone headed home, leaving you all alone. You jumped at the creaks and moans which seemed much more noticeable after the night of ghosts and gore. Eventually, you decided to go to bed, but not before one last trip to the bathroom.
The walk seemed long and daunting, as it always does after a night of scares. You kept looking back, checking for something lurking in the shadows. You knew you were acting ridiculous, but the feelings seemed to linger. Not even sleep would calm your mind. You tossed, turned, and mumbled all throughout the night. No sense in denying it, I know you did.
I saw you.
Credit To: Derek
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Short but sweet
Its short, creepy, and I really enjoy it!!!!
Chills. :)
Creepy as hell
As simple as that was, I was not expecting that. Touché. Short and sweet. You have to love a stalker story. It is the realistic ones that really get to you.
Put on a good show for your watcher! ;)
I like it! :) I wish it was longer though. This sounds like a begining of a long sleepless night story! :D
Note that all bad comments r hated and all good comments r liked or at least most of them
Yeah, it is creepy knowing that someone saw you going to the bathroom.
T-T
I’m sorry could you explain please? :/
I guess it’s just lacking “Signed: your father” at the end to become even less creepy than it already is. ^_^;
STALKER
I know you saw me dad. And its bad enough when you tell me about it at the breakfast table the next morning. When you start making up a “creepy” pasta about it, it just looks lame. I know youve had some spare time since mom died, but seriously, get a fucking hobby, and stop spying on me
nice!
4/10 good but now good enough
Wow that was awful, you give creePypasta a bad name. Don’t quit your day job.
I actually liked it. I didn’t think it was memorable enough to get such strong responses though. It’s simple. It’s classic.
THIS.
Horrible
i think this should be on the crappypasta
I actually thoroughly enjoyed this story. I expected it to be a long, murderous creepy gore filled story… it sort of catches you off guard and it’s pretty cool. Definitely not what I expected to happen, and my eyes widened when I realized that was the end.
Chenmo –
People, if you’re going to call plagiarism, please supply proof. Otherwise, you will be written off as a troll/QQer.