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Maisie Went Missing Last Year

Estimated reading time — 22 minutes

Last summer, I flew back to my hometown for a school reunion. It had been almost three years since I had graduated from school, and aside from close friends, I had heard nothing from the rest of my classmates.

The reunion took place at the school itself, lasting till midnight. I arrived home early that day, giving me time to catch up with my family before I headed down.

At the reunion, almost everybody had turned up. There was food, drink and plenty of time to get up to date with what had been going on in everybody’s life. Boys I hadn’t seen in ages gave me aggressive hugs and said things like ‘long time no see.’ Girls I hadn’t seen in ages fussed over me in a motherly way, saying things like, ‘Oh, my goodness!’ and ‘You’re so grown up!’ Then everybody went round talking to nearly everybody else, asking and answering all manner of questions. For the first two hours or so, some of our former teachers who still taught at the school were there, which was nice. They left before sundown.

As the night drew to a close, and most people began to head home, I and a few others hung around outside the school hall. I leaned against a railing and sipped lemonade while listening to the conversation. One of the girls asked about a certain boy who hadn’t turned up.

“He said he couldn’t be bothered,” explained another. “He says he’s going on vacation with his college friends or something.”

“Typical,” someone commented, and they all began to reminisce about how antisocial that particular classmate of ours had been. As they talked, my mind drifted off elsewhere. I tried to think of who else hadn’t turned up. Among a few other absentees, one person stood out – Maisie, a tall quiet girl who had been in many of my classes.

“Hey did any of you see Maisie Heathen?” I posed the question out of the blue.

The others quietened down, registered the name, thought about it, and shook their heads.

“Nah,” said one boy, “but let’s be honest – she was probably the least likely to turn up. I mean, she hardly turned up at school, some weeks.”

“Yeah,” said one girl sarcastically, “says the guy who skipped school to play video games. At least she still got respectable grades.”

“Whoa, no need to get personal,” the boy grinned. “Her attendance didn’t really make a difference, anyway – she was naturally smart.”

“Unlike you, right?” The girl teased him. The others continued bantering, while I thought about Maisie. It struck me that she hadn’t entered my thoughts for so long. Three years at university many miles away with another set of friends in another town had taken their toll. It felt like all the excitement of student life had made me move on from this small world which was my old school, and in moving on, I’d forgotten so much.

“Didn’t she go to Oxford or something?” I heard someone ask. I tuned back into the conversation, as they were talking about Maisie.

“Wouldn’t be surprised.”

“I’m pretty sure she applied there.”

“Yeah, and she got in. I remember seeing Mr. Thompson congratulating her on it.”

“She was odd,” remarked a boy named Joe. “Nice, but sort of in her own world, if you know what I mean.”

“Hmm,” I nodded. I knew what Joe meant.

“So, anybody know what she’s up to now? Anybody in touch?” asked Joe. We all shrugged.

“Maisie went missing last year,” said a low voice from a few yards away. We looked to see a man’s outline standing in the darkness. He stepped into the light. It was a former classmate, David, who had been eavesdropping from the shadows.

“Huh?” I looked at him stupidly, feeling suddenly cold.

“She went missing last year,” he repeated. “They still haven’t found her.”

We all exchanged uncomfortable glances.

“Oh, come off it, David,” I heard a girl say. “Stop trying to frighten us.”

David came and leaned against the railing beside me.

“I’m really not trying to be funny,” he said. “You know I’m not known for my sense of humor.”

It was true. David, a lanky kid with glasses, had always been rather serious.

“Honestly. That’s what I heard, at least. My parents told me about it around when it happened, last autumn. People were talking about it in church. Her family was stressed. Everybody was trying to console them.”

Nobody said anything for a while. The party had become noticeably quiet, and people were leaving by the minute.

“That’s… weird,” a girl said. “Do you know what happened? How did it happen? Where?”

“I don’t know the little details, but I do know that she had gone on a trip alone. Apparently she had wanted to get away from everything for a while. So she had booked some cottage in the middle of nowhere, gone to live there by herself, and after a few days, vanished.”

“That’s terrible,” someone remarked. I don’t remember who, as I was too caught up in my own thoughts.

Vanished? I wondered. What on earth could have happened?

Shortly, the gathering dispersed and we all went home. Joe offered me a lift, which I accepted. We hardly spoke, and when he dropped me off, we exchanged short, sincere goodbyes. Something was seriously wrong. Maisie had disappeared and not been found. That in itself was inherently a frightening thing. But I had a nagging feeling that there was something greater behind her disappearance – something that had been building up over the years. I felt like I knew something about what might have happened, but, for some strange reason, couldn’t quite put my finger on what it was.

I lay awake that night, trying to think back into the past. Slowly, it all came back to me, and when it did, I shivered.

Maisie had joined my secondary school in year thirteen – the final school year. From her first day onwards, she kept to herself.

She was a tall, delicately made girl with refined features. With her prominent gray eyes, dainty nose, and flaxen hair neatly bound in a single braid, most agreed that she was pretty. She usually sat alone in class and spent more time gazing out the window than paying attention to the teacher. In spite of this, she got high marks in most exams. And although she hardly took part in athletics, when she did turn up, she could outrun even most boys.

Over time, her reclusiveness earned her disdain from some members of the class. Her high achievement only made them resent her more. I, on the other hand, felt bad whenever I saw her, and more than a little curious to know what was up with her. She never seemed to be all there. It was as if she were constantly engrossed in another, faraway dimension. At the time, I saw it as enigmatic. Now, having thought about it a bit more, I’ve come to realize that her behavior was troubling, a sign that something was troubling her and wouldn’t leave her alone. But as a simple seventeen-year-old boy, I didn’t understand these things.

I sometimes told my mother about Maisie’s behavior, and she told me to ‘be nice’ to her and ‘be a gentleman.’ I remember one particular conversation we had – my father was at work, so it was just me and my mother in the kitchen.

“Mom?” I began, tentatively.


“You know that girl Maisie?”

“Of course, I know her. You’re always talking about her.”

“Well, she still hasn’t made any friends. She literally doesn’t talk.”

My mother smiled.


“Well… I don’t understand girls, and I just find it strange. Do you have any idea what could be the matter with her?”

“Really, Daniel, there’s no need to pry into people’s lives like that. It’s nosy.”

“But I’m sort of concerned, mom,” I said plaintively.

“That’s sweet of you, but I’m sure you don’t need to worry about her. Everyone has their own problems, and I think she’d prefer to keep them to herself.”

I thought about what my mother said, and wondered what kind of problems Maisie might have had.

“Do you mean, like, family problems? Are her parents getting divorced or something?”

“Could be, but I doubt it. I’ve met her parents, and they don’t look like they’re splitting anytime soon. And they seem to be really nice people.”

I realized that I had seen them once, too. They had seemed like nice people. They were the sort of gentle, charitable church-goers who cared a lot about community and never skipped Sunday Mass.

Their daughter was different. I figured that whatever was on her mind was something very personal that she hid even from her family.

But whatever could that be?

My simple masculine brain couldn’t get over her mysterious sullenness.

“You know,” my mother suggested one day, “if you’re concerned, you could go talk to her. Perhaps she just feels isolated at this new school. You never know, it might make her feel welcome here.”

I considered it.

“I might do that,” I said. “Yeah, I might do that, mom.”

I first spoke to Maisie Heathen on the way home from school. I wasn’t expecting to cross paths with her, as I had just had after-school detention. I was likely the only one at school apart from the caretaker. It was a chilly, blue-skied evening in October, and the sun had sunk enough to slightly darken one half of the sky.

The homeward path cut through farmland at the back of the school, where a path had been demarcated with low wire fences on either side to keep students out of the fields. I noticed Maisie on the path, about two hundred yards ahead of me. I realized this was my chance, and tried to walk faster to catch up with her, then ran. I noticed she looked downwards slightly when she walked. But she moved quickly, and I was a little out of breath when I caught up.

That’s when something weird happened. When I was about five yards behind her, panting like a dog, she heard me and turned around with such a look of fear upon her face I’ll never forget. It scared the heck out of me, seeing her face tightened into that silent, wide-eyed scream.

When she saw who I was, she looked with embarrassment at her feet.

“I’m sorry,” I said. “I didn’t mean to startle you.”

“No,” she said, shaking her head. “I’m sorry. I thought… I’m sorry.”

“Don’t worry. I should learn to make better first impressions. I was running to catch up with you.”

“Why?” She turned fully around.

“Because…” I tried to think of a reason. Eventually, I just told her the truth. “Because I wanted to talk to you.”

We continued down the path through the fields, then exited onto a lane that led down to town, where I lived, and where she presumably lived.

Maisie was surprisingly easy to talk to. Her manners were a little odd, but she responded to questions and even asked some about school-related stuff.

I asked her what she thought of her new school. She shrugged and said, “It’s okay, I suppose.”

“You mean you don’t actually like it,” I remarked.

“No. I’m indifferent,” she said, and we walked on quietly for a while before she explained, “We move around a lot. I’ve been to so many schools that it makes no difference to me anymore.”

“So… why do you move around? Is it because of your parents’ work?”

She completely ignored that question, and said something to change the subject. I can’t remember what – I just remember it took me aback how abruptly she changed the subject.

We eventually parted ways at a crossroads. I told her that if she should feel lonely at school, she should feel welcome to approach me. She responded with a quiet smile. It was a sweet, genuine gesture of gratitude, but something about it sent a chill through me. I could see through those eyes of hers that she knew something I didn’t, and that she had been through things I couldn’t fathom. It was a quietly haunting, fragile smile.

I walked home feeling glad that I had broken the ice between us. I felt like I had been a ‘gentleman,’ whatever that meant. But somehow, something still didn’t feel right.

The first occurrence that struck me as genuinely odd took place later that year. I took a job cleaning the school on Fridays after school. It was a warm day in early summer, and I had the task of cleaning the theater hall. It had been built sometime in the 1950s, and was rather grand. The seats would be full and lively whenever there were performances. On that day, I thought I was the only one there.

I was carrying the vacuum cleaner to a backstage room, when suddenly the door to that room opened and a girl, white as a sheet, came out. I nearly screamed. It was Maisie Heathen. She had been in the room all along, and she looked terrified, as if she’d seen a ghost.

“Whoa, everything alright?” I asked, laughing.

She looked ready to burst into tears, then ran out of the hall, leaving me utterly confused.

Suddenly, I felt afraid to enter the backstage room. What on earth was in there? What had scared her so badly? Against my instincts, I went in. There was no one there. I checked all of the potential hiding spaces and turned on every light, and found nothing. Perplexed, I retrieved the vacuum on and started cleaning. All the while I was in there, I had this sinking feeling in my stomach – the impression that something terrible would happen at any moment, causing me to hightail it out of there white as a sheet. But nothing happened. I vacuumed the place and got out of there quickly.

I never raised the topic with Maisie. The year wore on and nothing of that level of weirdness happened.

Many weeks later, however, something did happen. Not something weird. Something disturbing.

Believe it or not, Maisie was actually beginning to fit in. She made some friends.

Occasionally, she would engage verbally in lessons. This turned heads, as it was strange to see someone so silent suddenly so vocal. Not that she was particularly outgoing– she was still quiet and understated, but it seemed as though some mysterious shadow had shifted away from her.

There was a summer concert in which she played a piano solo in front of the whole school. I applauded heartily.

I gradually came to the conclusion that she had simply had some form of anxiety earlier.

Then, on the last day of term, school finished early. It was a sunny day, and I had been planning on going to the movies with some friends. It turned out they were all going to a nearby nightclub that evening. I had no intention of joining them, as I can’t stand drinking or anything to do with it, so I settled on having a quiet evening at home. But as I set off along the homeward path through the fields, I noticed Maisie Heathen ahead of me – just as it had been the first time we had spoken. But it was high summer now, not fall, and the day was cloudless, and she was at ease.

“Maisie!” I called as I caught up. “Do you have a moment?”

She turned and nodded. We hadn’t spoken in a while.

As we walked, the sound of crickets in the grass filled the air.

“So,” I said, after much anticipation, “do you like films?”


“I said, do you like films? You know, movies?”

“I don’t mind them.”

“Would you like to see one? Tonight? At the cinema?”

She seemed to be considering my offer, because she smiled quietly to herself. Then she said yes.

I expressed my gladness, and, when she asked why I was asking her, told her about my friends ditching me for a nightclub. That seemed to amuse her. Then I told her which movies were showing. She settled on a horror film, which surprised me. Horror? Really? She didn’t seem the type.

“It starts at eleven-thirty, though,” I warned her. “Are you going to be able to come that late?”

“Sure, I can.”

“Then that’s settled, I suppose. Shall I pick you up?” I offered.


“Where should I pick you up from?”

“My house.”

“I don’t know where you live.”

On the way home, she told me where she lived. It was close to my own home. I went home and killed time till night fell.

At eleven, I drove my parents’ car to her house. She didn’t own a mobile phone, so I waited outside. All the while I waited, I felt, for no apparent reason whatsoever, a touch of dread. I had the radio on and was sitting comfortably in a car parked in a pleasant suburban neighborhood. But something outside seemed to be stirring. I kept looking out of the windows, expecting to see – well, not knowing what to expect to see. But there was definitely something about the place that night which was making me uneasy.

I jumped when somebody opened the passenger-side door and climbed in on the seat beside me. It was just Maisie. I hadn’t seen the front door of her house open.

“Where’d you come from?” I asked. “I could swear I never saw the front door open.”

“I came through the back door,” she explained. “It’s quieter, and I don’t want to let my parents know that I’m going out.”

“Oh… right.” I realized I was doing something against her parents’ will. I didn’t want them to worry if they found her gone, and I didn’t want to be the one responsible. But I guess I had no choice. Calling things off was out of the question at that point.

The drive took twenty minutes or so, and aside from ours, there were only about five other cars in the lot. This cinema was, bizarrely, a standalone building a few hundred yards off the side of a lengthy 50 MPH road. Usually, theaters are downtown or a part of shopping malls, but this one was large, with its own parking area and nothing else around for miles. It was quite nice, really – away from everything else. The only noise usually came from the road – but at eleven-thirty, long after dark, even that lay silent. Beyond the cinema, woods seemed to stretch on endlessly.

We bought our tickets and joined about a dozen other viewers in the theater. The film itself was about some demonic possession, and it was fairly cliché, but it gave me the cheap thrill I’d paid for, and the audience screamed at least three times. Every now and then I glanced at Maisie. Something about the way she watched the film was strange. Rather than looking excited or bored or afraid (how people usually look when watching horror), she seemed intense and… angry? Maybe not quite angry. It was more a look of hatred – not obvious, but subtle and cold. I found it disconcerting, but shrugged it off, and told her I was going to the bathroom. Her expression relaxed into a pleasant smile as she nodded.

Alone in the men’s room, it was perfectly silent and relaxing. That is, until I noticed footsteps moving about in the hall outside. I assumed somebody was coming to use the bathroom, but whoever they were didn’t enter. Their feet slapped against the floor as if they were barefoot, and there was a lot of time between each step, suggesting that whoever it was either had unusually long legs, or was taking immense strides.

I washed my hands and left the bathroom. Strangely enough, there was no one out there. Again I shrugged it off and returned to my seat.


When the movie was over, Maisie and I waited until the end of the credits, by which time everybody had left. Then we made our way out to the car.

“Wait, I left my pullover inside,” she remembered just as we reached the car.

“Should I get it for you? It’s empty in there now.”

“No, I’ll go.”

“You sure?”


So I slouched in the driver’s seat and watched her hurry back inside, in search of her pullover. She was pretty brave, going in there alone. The place tended to get a bit spooky at this time. Creepily enough, mine was the only car left. I wondered if there was anyone else at all in the building with her.

Anyway, I flicked the radio on and waited. When several minutes had gone by and she hadn’t returned, I began to get nervous. I turned to open the door – and I froze. In the woods behind the cinema, there was a man standing, facing me. He was far away, but I saw clearly that there was something wrong with him. First of all, he was stark naked. His pale body, wiry and lean, was on full display. This began to sound alarm bells. The only rational explanation for his state of undress was that he might be an escaped mental patient. Or perhaps he was a pervert. He could be dangerous, I realized. I got out of the car, and the man disappeared into the trees at once. I was getting increasingly uneasy.

I decided to go find Maisie. A lone eighteen-year-old girl in an empty building at night just seemed like something bad waiting to happen.

But to my relief she came out right then, wearing the pullover.

We got into the car and shut the doors. I switched the radio on, and, when the silence between us lasted too long, asked her what kind of music she liked.

“I don’t listen to music,” she said.

I half-expected that answer, and shook my head with a laugh.

“But you play it quite well.”

She shook her head with a smile. I switched the radio off, remembering the man I had seen. I reckoned this would be more a more interesting topic.

I told her what I had seen and began to regret it. She became suddenly on edge, asking me where I had seen him. I pointed at the trees. He was no longer there.

“I need to get home now,” she said, looking me squarely in the face. “Please.”

“Okay,” I acquiesced. I didn’t ask any questions.

I started up the car and we drove out of there in a hurry. We didn’t talk until we had left the theater far behind.

I stole glances and saw that she was biting her nails. Something was bothering her – something about the man’s description, perhaps? I had no idea. I just kept driving.

Several minutes later, I stopped midway along a country road and got out.

“Why are you stopping?” she asked, clearly agitated.

“I need some fresh air,” I said. It was the truth.

“Here?” she asked. Even though we were alone, she continued looking around cautiously.

“It’s nice here,” I explained. “Really, you should come out with me. I cycle along here with friends sometimes.”

With some hesitation, she joined me. We leaned against the car while looking at the fields, which lay as far as the eye could see on one side of the road. On the other side were thick woods. On that quiet, warm night, it was nice to stand out and simply gaze at the fields.

In spite of her earlier unease, Maisie seemed to feel more and more comfortable where we were. Perhaps it was the pleasant view before us, or the fresh air, or perhaps it was the excitement of being out at night – whatever it was, something made her forget about whatever had frightened her. I told her about how I had once been roughly at this same spot with some friends at sunrise, and how beautiful it had been. Then she opened up and tell me about how she was honestly finding living in this town and going to this school. We laughed a little about the antics of our French teacher, and even discussed poetry we were studying.

Occasionally we would say nothing and simply take in the cool night air.

During one such silence, I felt a sudden inexplicable pang of dread. Unsure why, I turned to look back at the road. What I saw flooded me first with confusion, then utter disbelief, and then with relentless creeping fear. The naked man from the cinema was there, standing less than a hundred yards away.

How? I wondered. How was he there already? More chilling, however, was the question of why. What did he want?

When I had first seen him, I hadn’t thought much of him besides that he might be a potentially dangerous pervert. But where he stood in the moonlight, other odd details became clear. He appeared to be very tall – perhaps somewhere between six and seven feet. He was clearly emaciated, apparently suffering from starvation, and yet his thighs and shoulders appeared bulky, and disproportionately muscular. There was something disturbing about his face as well. It looked blotchy and deformed – like a melted plastic clown mask. Perhaps it was a mask. From my vantage point, I couldn’t tell for certain.

“Uh, I think we should get in the car,” I said.

“Huh? Why?” she said, turning to me. Then she stiffened, and I knew she had seen him too.

“Hey, come on! Get in the car, quick!” I began to breathe heavily. She didn’t seem to hear me. She looked as though she were in another dimension. I opened the door and tried to usher her inside, but she was alarmingly firm.

The stalker stood still. The more I watched him, the less I thought of him as a person and the more I thought of him as… something else. There was something disturbing and inhuman about his face. His presence stank of raw, otherworldly menace.

He moved. He began to sprint. Towards us.

Maisie took off. I knew she was fast, but I’d never seen her run like she ran then. It was as though she had been maddened by pure terror and lost control.

“Shoot!” I cried, fumbling with the car door. My hands were sweaty and felt weak, as if enfeebled by fear of the stalker. Looking back, I was shocked by waves of cold panic. He was quick. Demonically quick. There was no way she could escape him on foot, let alone me.

I overtook her in the car and called repeatedly from the window. Hearing me eventually, she got in. Then I put my foot on the gas and drove like there was no tomorrow. I expected to see the stalker in the rear-view mirror. Instead, I saw nothing but an empty road. It was as if he had never been there in the first place.

I didn’t dare say a thing throughout the drive home. My thoughts ran wild and my arms shook on the wheel. We reached our hometown in silence, and it wasn’t until I stopped outside her house that she spoke.

“No,” she whispered. “Take me to your house. I don’t want to go home.”

“Sure, sure,” I was baffled, but didn’t want to fluster her by asking why. “Not a problem.”

So we drove a few more streets to my house, entered through a back-door, climbed the stairs to my room and closed the door firmly. I drew the curtains and turned on a reading lamp.

“Feel free to take the bed. Don’t worry, I’ll sleep on the armchair.” I smiled, and felt ridiculous for acting as though nothing had happened. She got under the covers without a word, and hid her face in her hair.

I settled down, still shaking, on my chair.

“Don’t leave,” she said. It was more of a plea, and it made something within me go soft.

“Trust me, I won’t,” I said. That’s the last thing she said before, somehow, falling asleep.

I sat there for hours trying to make sense of what had happened. Something about that strange man had really shaken Maisie up, so much so that she couldn’t sleep in her own home. Why not? Did she think he’d follow her there? I realized that my mother would be most dismayed if she found me with a girl in my room at night. But I was her friend, and hated to see her so afraid. I couldn’t have said no.

She slept a few feet before me, breathing calmly, apparently in peace. But I knew that something was troubling her. I got the terrible feeling that the weird distorted-clown-faced man was somehow connected with her strange behavior.

No, absolutely not. This was a random, one-off incident, I told myself.

But then why was she so afraid of him? Why did the mere description of the man arouse such immediate and disproportionate fear?

Could she know him? How?

Who is he, anyway?

There were too many questions and my head was too tired to contemplate them.

Eventually, from the exhaustion of sitting upright, I began to doze off. I was lulled to sleep by the hum of the night breeze, the quiet whir of the fridge downstairs, and the soothing sound of footsteps. Of bare skin slapping slowly against concrete outside, as if whoever was out there had unnaturally long legs.

After the incident at the movie theater, Maisie more or less stopped talking to me. I didn’t hold it against her. I assumed she just needed time. But weeks passed and she kept silent. During the last week of school, I passed her in a hallway and we made eye contact. She forced a wry, short-lived smile.

“Daniel,” she spoke at last, “I…”


She sighed and hurried away without finishing what she wanted to say.

We finished school without ever speaking again.

On the last day, I slipped my number into her locker, in case she ever wanted to get in touch.

She never did.

The summer months dragged by. Another semester at the University began. Years passed. Before I knew it, I forgot much of what had happened. You’d think someone would remember things like that. But no. It was almost as if my brain was deliberately trying to erase the memories.

After what David said at the reunion, things came flooding back. I revisited the archives of my memory, and was frightened by what I found. I spent the following days strolling around town, thinking nonstop about the whole frightening affair, and trying desperately to understand.

About a week later, I was going for a run in my hometown and crossed paths with someone I hadn’t seen in years. Maisie’s father. He had lost weight – not to mention quite a bit of his hair – but I knew him at once. He didn’t notice me until I said hello, and seemed to only vaguely remember me, which was upsetting.

We stood talking about what I had been up to, college and stuff. Then there was a pregnant pause, and I dared to mention the topic of his daughter’s disappearance.

“Look, Mr. Heathen, I heard very recently about… Maisie. I’m devastated.”

He looked up at me through his old-fashioned glasses with a tragic, defeated look in his eyes.

“Young man,” he said softly, “this world has things in store for some people that seem so unjust, so cruel, that they test our faith in the Almighty. But we must keep the faith. It’s all I have now. That, and Mrs. Heathen.”

I waited for him to carry on. Instead, he tenderly took one of my hands in his. It chilled me how frail he seemed for his age.

“What’s troubling you, boy?” he asked. “You seem to have something on your mind.”

“I – I do,” I admitted.

“If you wish, you may tell me. Let us go to the house of God.” I didn’t know what he meant until he gestured to the church. “Evil things won’t follow us there.”

Shortly, we were seated beside one another in the old town church. It was always open and always empty, apart from Sundays when a few regulars would attend.

I described to Maisie’s father how I had often felt concerned about his daughter. I told him a lot. But I didn’t mention the night at the cinema.

He listened intently, sighed, and then spoke.

“Mrs. Heathen can’t bring herself to accept it, but deep down, I know that Maisie was afraid of something. I think you will have noticed that she could sometimes be withdrawn – perhaps a bit unresponsive, as if she were not quite fully present.”

I nodded.

“Well,” he continued, “she wasn’t always like that.” He reached into his breast pocket and handed me a photo. I knew at once that it was his daughter – only she was several years younger than when I had known her. It was a school photo, and she was smiling. It was a carefree, sincere expression, untouched by any underlying anxiety.

“I’m not sure what it was, but something in her changed when she was thirteen. I think I know when it happened. You see, we lived for a short time in another part of the country. In a small, rural town up north. There were woods near the village that had a reputation for being… unwholesome. Haunted, even. The place had a dark history, according to the locals. Work had brought me there, and we were new in town. Maisie didn’t fear the superstitions. One night at a sleepover, she and a few friends she had made at the local school thought it would be exciting to go walking through those woods.”

“What happened?” I asked.

“Nothing happened,” he replied, then hesitated. “Not at first, that is. But things began to happen soon after.”

“I don’t understand.”

“I fear that something followed her home that night. Something from those woods latched onto her, and never let go.”

“Some… thing?”

“Something,” he explained. “An evil being. A demon, if you will. Whatever it was, it haunted her, and when we left that town, it followed.”

He paused a moment, reflecting, then went on.

“It was nothing much at first – just nightmares. Then she complained about a presence in the corner of her bedroom. Naturally, that was unsettling, but nothing came of it. We put it down, at first, to her watching too many horror films. Then she stopped eating. Then she had trouble sleeping. She demanded that we take down the mirrors in our house. We didn’t know what to think. I got the first feelings that something… unnatural… was happening. But I wasn’t sure. I never once saw anything unusual with my own eyes. But sometimes, I admit I would go into her room at night and feel the hairs stand up on my neck, inexplicably. She would go through phases of extreme paranoia, followed by extended periods of normalcy. But whatever it was kept coming back.”

“Mr. Heathen,” I said, my voice shaking, to my surprise, “did she ever describe what this thing looked like?”

“Never. Maisie avoided talking about it. I don’t know if it even had a visible form.”
I couldn’t help but think of the man outside the cinema – his elongated body, his hideous deformity, his strange, threatening aura. I tried to remove the image from my mind.

Her father carried on.

“Before she vanished, Maisie rented a waterfront cottage in a remote area. She told nobody about this apart from a university professor whom she trusted. It was a strange thing for her to do. Our family has no affiliation with the area, nor had she been there before, to my knowledge. The cottage was totally isolated, miles from civilization. It was as if she wanted to escape everything. It didn’t make sense. Then she didn’t return. Police searched the area thoroughly, but there was no trace or clue to be found. No signs of foul play. But they did find one clue.”


“Her clothes. They were left in the cottage. The odd thing is that they were not strewn all over the place as you might expect. Rather, they had been neatly folded and laid on the bed.”

I had hoped the conversation would help me to better understand the mystery. But the more Maisie’s father told me, the more questions I had.

“What do you make of it all?” I asked.

He replied in a hushed voice. “I think, young man, that this was something from beyond our world. Grief has toughened me, but it pains me when I say this. I think that something evil lured her to that cottage, cut her off from society, and left her vulnerable. Then one day, as she was stranded in that obscure part of the world, it came for her.”

I saw the old man’s eyes watering. He wept at my side for a while. I couldn’t do anything. No words of consolation could have helped.

He dried his eyes and smiled weakly.

“I’m afraid I’ve got to cut this conversation short,” he said remorsefully. “My wife will be waiting, and she’s not feeling well.”

I thanked him and apologized profusely. As he turned to leave, I called out to him, saying I still had his photograph.

“Keep it,” he said.

“What? No,” I protested. “I couldn’t take this.”

“You seem like a good man,” he said, coming back and putting a hand on my shoulder. “You were kind to my daughter, and behaved like a gentleman. It would make me glad for you to have that photograph.”

“Mr. Heathen –”

“Please. It’s nothing. Take care, young man. Never abandon your faith in the Lord.” And with that, he turned and was gone.

I was left standing in the church alone. Evening was approaching, and shafts of moody, golden sunlight shone through the stained-glass windows, its rays illuminating the pews and carpets. I peered at the photo in my hand.

“What happened to you, Maisie?” I asked aloud. “Where did you go?”

For an unnerving moment, I half-expected the photograph to answer me. I hurried out of there and ran home.

I don’t think I’ll ever know what happened to Maisie Heathen. As uncomfortable as it makes me, I sometimes believe it really was a demon that was making her life so miserable. I can only hope that someday I’ll receive a more rational, logical explanation.

Until recently, I had a habit of keeping my dorm room door unlocked, believing (ridiculously) that someday she might come looking for me.

I used to sleep with her photograph in a silver frame on my bedside table. As strange as it may sound, it helped to put me at ease.

Then, one morning, I woke up to find that someone had entered my room during the night and stolen the photo.

What I found most unnerving is that they took nothing else. Not even the frame.

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38 thoughts on “Maisie Went Missing Last Year”

  1. This is just amazing. So well written and I love the understated yet vastly creepy undertones. Well done to the author.

  2. Capitan Obvious

    All this talk of how it’d be creepier if the demon came after him or something. Honestly i think it was perfect as is, because the demon deciding to go after him would be the predictable thing, while the actual ending…. You still have no idea what it is or what it wants or what all even happened, only that it’s out there, it’s creepy as f_ck and it’s watching. You have no idea what might set it off if anything, or if it’s simply biding its time to get him too.
    The essence of fear is uncertainty, and i think this story delivered perfectly on that front.

  3. Loved this pasta, it was especially weird for me to read the further it went on. I have a friend named Maisie, whom I went on a solo camping trip with back in the fall. We shared fears of seeing someone (thing) in the woods, and both described our nightmares like this. However, she was approached someone in late afternoon, who stayed about 100 yards from her tent and called to her. Overall, a great story – keep up the great work!

  4. Benjamin Crofts

    I really enjoyed this pasta. It held my attention and I really wanted to get to the end to know what happened. A little disappointed there were no answers but I’m holding out for part 2! Overall a great read.

  5. Alot of these jaded readers are ridiculous. The story was fantastic. Will admit some parts were kind lf adrogynous to the plot and seemed to carry on a bit but really it added to the build up. I didnt think slenderman when you described the creature (people just fanboy/girl too much)
    Seems to me like this naked lanky creature passes itself to its victims? Perhaps why her clothes were neatly placed and not thrown astrew or missing as well. Very good on inducing that thought. (Though between you and I i think that some of the commenters might be a little slow to realize that perhaps haha) 9/10 strong story from start to finish

    1. Yes, it wasn’t Slenderman!
      It was something else. I think I emphasised the thing’s height and thinness so much that everybody ended up imagining Slenderman. But yeah, you’ve got the idea.
      Imagine a lean, pale-skinned 6 foot man wearing nothing but a weird clown-like mask, and with disproportionally long legs for his height. That’s roughly what I pictured it to be when I wrote this…

  6. This is very good. I love how real the story feels. Just a normal guy who has had a brush with something horrific and will never really know. No heroics or uncanny obsessions or convenient diaries which give you all the info you need. You may have a 10 from me.

  7. Awesome story. Loved the detail in the storytelling. Only sad part is we dont get to know what acctually happened to her.

  8. The twist at the end with her folded clothes blew me away, and the creature was unique and terrifying. I get where people are coming from with comments about plot holes (like the reunion being too soon), but I didn’t care because I enjoyed it so much. l really hope this stays popular because it’s such a perfect example of how a story can be scary on a basic level (scary monster), a psychological level (scary adolescence metaphor) and a thrilling level (scary plot twist).

  9. I confess to not reading many of the longer pastas, but this one was definitely worth it! However I, like lollappaloosa, found the entity to be a bit too reminiscent of Slenderman. Aside from that there are a few moments that seem a bit untrue. For example, when they are parked, Maisie runs instead of diving into the car. Nobody would run in that situation, they would take the car. There are a few things like that, but they are too minor to detract from the overall impression.
    Keep writing!

    1. In that situation I don’t believe it would occur to jump into the car, Most likely if that naked hooligan had been haunting you for 4 years and it suddenly starts sprinting at you you’re mind would blank, With only the desire to run on your mind, That’s most likely why while he’s driving he called out to her a few times, To bring her back to her senses

  10. It was a nice story, very well written, I couldn’t wait for the end – and then, there was nothing. Do you plan on writing a second part? That would be pretty nice – find out about this entity, find out what happened to her… I’d like to read that.

  11. This was an amazing story. I can’t tell if this was a slender man thing or not tho. The slim frame might imply as much. Idk…

  12. hollygolightlee

    Your pasta held me captive from beginning to end. It was an enjoyable, easy read. I especially admire your development of Maisie and the mysterious aura you created surrounding her. Do you have other stories on this site? I have failed to make the grade with two of my stories being schlepped over to Crappypasta.

    1. Nothing wrong with being on Crappypasta! I’ve read a few things there that I liked quite a bit better than some of the work that makes it onto Creepypasta.

      I’ve been placed on Crappypasta also, and frankly I regard it as only slightly less an honor than being on the main site.

      What’s important is that you’re writing and that people are reading and commenting on your work.

  13. I was pretty disappointed by this story, i was expecting it to end with Maisie being one of the tall creatures now since she left her clothes and everything. i was expecting her to start following the main character but the conclusion was a big let down. it has so much potential to be awesome but the ending was a dud.

  14. I feel like it needs to be elaborated on. There’s not enough information to really make this a creepy creepypasta. Maybe you could have talked more about what had happened that night with Maisie and her friends in the wood, I’m not sure. I just feel like it is lacking something that would make it go from good to great

  15. I’m kinda confused, I usually don’t read pasta this long, I kinda got an “It follows.” vibe from it, just one question, huh? I don’t get it.

  16. Really liked it and wished it would be longer! Could imagine everything in the story well and I liked the characters. ?

  17. Have to get this out of the way, but most high schools start having reunions after ten years; the shortest interval I’ve ever known of is five years. I’ve never heard of an “almost three year reunion”; and they aren’t usually held at the school (which is reserved for usage by current students), but maybe things are different outside the US.

    This story is sort of a letdown, there’s a little bit of creepiness in being chased by Slenderman (?) (sorry but that’s what I pictured, and it’s been overdone to death) but after that, there’s no conclusion. They were chased and got away, she disappeared after she moved away, the end. Oh yeah, a picture disappeared, too.

    1. Not your cup of tea, eh? Nevermind. Have you been scared by any creepypasta? If so, which ones? I would be interested to know what kind of stories frighten you. Judging by your activity on this site, you seem hard to impress. Anyhow, glad ya read it anyway!

  18. Wow! This was a great story! One thing I’d like to add though: I feel that, while it was creepy the way it was written, it would have been even more scary if he had gone to the cottage in Scotland looking for answers. But instead, found the being waiting for him since he seemed to be the only one beside Maisie that saw it. Just a thought! Keep up the good writing!

    1. i was more thinking that the demon would start haunting him in some way,idk i kinda expected for it X3 it was a fantastic story tho

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