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  1. Anonymous
    February 24, 2010 • 8:34 PM

    1ST YES! WOOOOOO!

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  2. Man Book
    February 24, 2010 • 8:49 PM

    First!

    BUT WHO WAS THING?

    etc. etc.

    Not bad, though I generally don’t like creature pastas.

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  3. anon
    February 24, 2010 • 9:03 PM

    FIRST PHONE

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  4. Samhain
    February 24, 2010 • 9:16 PM

    I think this may be my new favorite….
    I loved it.

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    Rating: +22 (from 24 votes)
  5. so basically raep?
    February 24, 2010 • 9:18 PM

    Good story, but the climax/ending came a little too fast, and how the protagonist figured out the motives of the creature is fuzzy.

    7/10

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    Rating: +9 (from 19 votes)
  6. Someone is here now
    February 24, 2010 • 9:42 PM

    My god finally, a great pasta

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    Rating: +11 (from 13 votes)
    • derp
      March 2, 2013 • 10:25 AM

      id have to agree.

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  7. Deathbecomesme
    February 24, 2010 • 9:42 PM

    very good pasta…loved the twist at the end….

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  8. Violent Harvest
    February 24, 2010 • 9:49 PM

    Nice.

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  9. Comment Leaver
    February 24, 2010 • 9:52 PM

    Very good. The ending was good, but they always get rushed.

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    Rating: +6 (from 6 votes)
  10. Dusk
    February 24, 2010 • 10:01 PM

    THEN WHO WAS MAN IN CAR?

    He got screwed up pretty bad

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    Rating: +23 (from 25 votes)
    • derp
      March 2, 2013 • 10:25 AM

      eeeeeyup

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  11. Mary Hatchet
    February 24, 2010 • 10:37 PM

    Om nom nom nom!

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  12. Eevee
    February 24, 2010 • 10:49 PM

    Deliciously boring, I’d call it.
    6/10

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    Rating: 0 (from 18 votes)
  13. Mmmm
    February 25, 2010 • 12:21 AM

    True fact; you can’t wake up from smelling something.

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  14. lol
    February 25, 2010 • 12:35 AM

    TAAAANK!!

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  15. Tram
    February 25, 2010 • 1:34 AM

    …What?? I don’t get the “twist” at the end. It had so much potential with the beautiful imagery and skilled detailing, but then it just picked me up by the shirt collar, and tossed me into a river. It was like the author all of a sudden remembered he needed to knit his mom a sweater and made up a quick ending to get it done and over with. A pasta like this deserves a more decent ending.

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    • Jhe
      January 22, 2013 • 8:19 PM

      The twist is that he let himself be killed by the thing. Which means that “it” is now wondering around, looking for his next “canary”.

      Your comment made me LOL so hard though :D

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      • Anon
        February 2, 2013 • 2:36 AM

        Are you that terrible at comprehension? He didn’t die. He said if he tries to go out it’d kill him.

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        • luis
          March 1, 2013 • 4:05 PM

          it does not say he dies yes, but the author implies that he tries to escape at the end.”I’ve been thinking hard for the last few days, and I might just make a run for it.”

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        • UnforseenEvent
          March 1, 2013 • 10:42 PM

          Read the last sentence.

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        • ...
          May 12, 2013 • 6:14 AM

          Dumbass…

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    • CallMeAdmiral
      February 24, 2013 • 8:27 PM

      True, it does deserve a better ending but its definitely on the top of my list! I love the “twist” and the fact its not some bull crap, unbelievable story. And to leave the farm: TANK. Excellent.
      #360noscopes11thprestige

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  16. Dirjel
    February 25, 2010 • 2:38 AM

    Hmmmmmm.

    This pasta entertained me very well, and I feel I should leave a comment.

    …I’m just not entirely certain WHAT I should say about it, though >.>

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  17. Kelly Ann
    February 25, 2010 • 3:20 AM

    @Mmmm Not a true fact; In the summer my dad and I leave our windows open to let in fresh at night while we sleep, and one night a skunk sprayed right beneath his window, so the smell came in. It was so bad, it woke him up and he choked and gagged until it left.

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  18. Anon
    February 25, 2010 • 3:44 AM

    True fact; you can indeed wake up from smelling something.

    http://www.bbcfocusmagazine.com/qa/can-smell-wake-you

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  19. Heywood Jablome
    February 25, 2010 • 7:12 AM

    Great pasta, but what kind of stupid asshole lives alone on a farm with no car and no phone?

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    • Anonymous
      March 2, 2013 • 9:36 PM

      he wasn’t alone, he had horses… Oh wait.

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      • inrgii
        April 19, 2013 • 12:20 AM

        “Had”

        You were actually right the first time.

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  20. Awesome-O
    February 25, 2010 • 8:35 AM

    @Mmmm: It’s totally possible to wake up from a smell. Also, true fact is redundent.

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  21. japsa
    February 25, 2010 • 8:38 AM

    I like.

    Wish there were moar.

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  22. perixe
    February 25, 2010 • 10:23 AM

    um, I took it as as the thing was protecting the farmer

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    • Jhe
      January 22, 2013 • 8:20 PM

      …from what?

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      • UnforseenEvent
        March 1, 2013 • 10:44 PM

        Maybe it’s all one big twist, and the outside world is a giant rouse, surrounding this one man that is really just the breeding ground for a meal of epic proportions, and the man in the truck was the one sent to check on the first hatched egg. So, the thing was himself, or his mind, stopping them from turning him into such. What?

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  23. Shelleh
    February 25, 2010 • 10:31 AM

    This one was actually rather good, but it would have been better if the thing had killed someone else before he knew what it was trying to kill him, and it would have been better if the thing had a better description of it

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  24. Anonymous
    February 25, 2010 • 10:46 AM

    true fact: yes, you can wake up from smelling something.

    retard who listens and abheres to all “scientific facts”

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  25. Anonywut
    February 25, 2010 • 12:36 PM

    Not even smelling salts?

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