Scary Paranormal Stories & Short Horror Microfiction

Creepypasta

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I noticed her walking home from school one day. Her long hair was as dark as a raven’s feathers, and flowed out behind her as she walked. She was about ten feet in front of me as I was making my way to my house.

She seemed horribly bent, and walked with a limp. I looked around, and seeing no one else around, I watched as she continued to hobble ahead in her slow, painful gait. It seemed almost as though she was barefoot, walking on broken glass.

Though she walked slowly enough for me to pass her easily, all of my instincts were yelling at me to run in the opposite direction.

We continued for a while, and I wasn’t sure if she had noticed me yet. I was now only four blocks away from my home, and I was beginning to feel like I could make it. I picked up my pace slightly, getting closer to the woman. She was about five feet away now.

Without warning, the woman stopped, realizing there was someone behind her. Slightly disturbed, I halted my pace, waiting to see what she would do.

A horrid grating noise, filled the air, and I found myself looking into a horribly disfigured face.
Where the eyes would have been were merely dark sockets, and her alabaster skin was stained with blood, and purpled with bruising. Her once-white clothes and dark hair were stained with blood, grass, and grime.
Gnarled arms that looked like they had never been used were twisted against Her body, and Her malnourished-looking legs were barely visible beneath her pale, flowing skirt.

The horrible woman’s mouth opened, and an utterly inhuman screech came from it. The thin lips parted into a round, unnaturally large ellipse.

With a continued screech, the woman’s hand reached out to touch my face. Paralyzed as I was, I could not stop it. The cold, twisted fingers brushed against my cheek, and, moving downwards, tightened around my throat. Gasping for air, I was lifted up, and held in the air.

With a cry that I could not hear, I fell backwards, and my head hit the ground. My vision filled with stars, and that’s all I remember from then until I woke up in my bed, and being told that my neighbors had found me, passed out, and brought me to my parents. They found the bruises on my neck, and assumed someone had attempted to assault me.

Though I have not seen that woman since that encounter, The Screaming Woman has haunted my dreams, bringing me nightmares for weeks now. I have not slept well for ages, and all I can think of is the horrible scream she gave.

If there is one piece of advice I can give to anyone reading this, is that if you see a woman with black hair, a failing gait, and a dress that used to be white, you should run as fast as you can, in the opposite direction.

Credit To: arcaneGlissando

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The Screaming Woman, 5.3 out of 10 based on 276 ratings
  • RedBeans

    clichéd shit, grudge/ring rip off

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    • http://daenikaloweryblogs.blogspot.com/ Jane the Killer

      Actually it’s a rip off of this Japanese ghost story, like chong bong dong or something of that matter..

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      Rating: +7 (from 11 votes)
      • Anonymous

        It is. I remember this from Pewdiepie.

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      • Anonymous

        pewd fan:
        i think pewdiepie read a comic like this one…

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      • Anonymous

        its korean lolol

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    • http://facebook.com Rosa sanchez

      Sounds like a rip off of the bong cheong dong ghost

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      Rating: +6 (from 6 votes)
      • anonymous

        cry did it to

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  • Danielle

    Booooo

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  • Janniex

    How is this even scary????????

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    Rating: +3 (from 9 votes)
  • Nolan

    That was bad and you should feel bad.

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    Rating: +24 (from 36 votes)
  • Anonymous

    Boring pasta is boring.

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    Rating: +7 (from 15 votes)
  • KatKatastrophe

    The description of the woman sounds like a rip off of the bongcheon dong ghost.

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    Rating: +19 (from 21 votes)
  • Oreally???

    Guess crappypasta ran outa room! Lol…jj…i couldn’t resist saying that….

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    Rating: +3 (from 9 votes)
  • lol

    This is like a rip off of that scary Korean comic.

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  • http://Creepypasta.com UNKNOWN

    Good story my man

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  • Anonymous

    sounded like that comic bongcheong ghost? or whatever LOL

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    Rating: +10 (from 12 votes)
  • Reader

    This pasta gave me food poisoning

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    Rating: +8 (from 12 votes)
  • pewd fan

    i think pewdiepie read a comic like this one…

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    • Alicat

      yeah, the Bongchong Dong Ghost or something like that :P

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    • Piediepew

      Brofist :D

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  • http://members.webs.com/s/sitebuilder/pages/278729852/ bloodandgore24

    This is from the comic Bongcheon dong ghost :))

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  • larxene

    Bongchong Dong Ghost o.o

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  • jeff fan

    come on that was s*** i mean mega WTF my rating negative 1000000

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    • Anonymous

      But that’s OVER 9000!

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  • batman

    Okish

    :-)

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  • heheeheheheh…….

    bong chong dong ghost parody alert lol but if i see a thing like that, i will run like a motherfucker or put out a knife and kill that bitch

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  • Crazy girl

    Hey stop haters I think this person put some thought into it. If you don’t believe me you try imagining it in your brain. Be that person and see how it feels. I did that and I freaked myself out.

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  • anon

    I read the comments first when I saw the low rating this pasta has. I hadn’t heard of the Bongcheon-Dong ghost (sorry if I mixed that up) before, so I looked it up and watched the video on YouTube. It was actually pretty freaky. The music and animation brought a fairly short and simple story to life. I feel like this pasta is obviously a more drawn-out version of that story, and since I despise plagiarism, I rated it poorly; however, the writing was not bad. It would be good for someone who for whatever reason would rather read and imagine this story than watch a quick video. That being said, it’s still not cool that this was copied. It’s cool to have inspiration, but it’s lame to steal. The author could produce good original pastas in the future if they tried, I believe. But as it stands now, as a diner I would be offended by the ripped-off recipe.

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  • Anonymous

    it was not scary

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