Scary Paranormal Stories & Short Horror Microfiction

Creepypasta

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One school day, a boy named Tom was sitting in class and doing math. It was six more minutes until after school. As he was doing his homework, something caught his eye.

His desk was next to the window, and he turned and stared outside. It looked liked a picture. When it was home time at the school, he ran to the spot where he saw it. He ran fast so that no one else could grab it.

He picked it up and smiled. It had a picture of the most beautiful girl he had ever seen. She had a dress with tights on and red shoes, and her hand was formed into a peace sign.

She was so beautiful he wanted to meet her, so he ran all over the school and asked everyone if they knew her or have ever seen her before. But everyone he asked said “no.” He was devastated.

When he was home, he asked his older sister if she knew the girl, but unfortunately she also said “no.” It was very late, so Tom walked up the stairs, placed the picture on his bedside table and went to sleep.

In the middle of the night Tom was awakened by a tap on his window. It was like a nail tapping. He got scared. After the tapping he heard a giggle. He saw a shadow near his window, so he got out of his bed, walked toward his window, opened it up and followed the giggling. By the time he reached it,
it was gone.

The next day again he asked his neighbors if they knew her. Everybody said, “Sorry, no.” When his mother came home he even asked her if she knew her. She said “no.” He went to his room, placed the picture on his desk and fell asleep.

Once again he was awakened by a tapping. He took the picture and followed the giggling. He walked across the road, when suddenly he got hit by a car. He was dead with the picture in his hand.

The driver got out of the car and tried to help him, but it was too late. Suddenly he saw the picture and picked it up. He smiled. He saw a cute girl holding up three fingers…

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  • Anonymous

    haha, that was a really good one

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  • Anonymous

    good idea, not especially well-written.

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    Rating: +44 (from 46 votes)
  • ufm

    Slightly confusing beginning, but great ending.

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    Rating: +22 (from 22 votes)
  • http://www.meatspin.com Pete Wentz

    ZOMG WUT AN OSSUM STORYYYY!

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    • Jordan

      Bro, do you even English?

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      • uh

        Do either of you know English?

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        • kayree

          Bro, its a joke. A well known joke at that.

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          Rating: +9 (from 13 votes)
  • asdfgh

    We need to rewrite this :/ The idea isn’t too bad.

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  • Z

    Nice concept, but some of the stuff in the middle isn’t really necessary. (someone was on /x/!)

    LAWLZ HAY PETE WENTZ WAZZUP?!?!

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  • lol

    That was a great one.

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  • Flea

    Hehh… reminds me of a joke my father used to tell me:

    A man, while wandering by an insane asylum, hears the inmates inside the yard–on the other side of a large, obscuring, stone wall–chanting, “Thirteen! Thirteen! Thirteen!”

    Curious, he pauses and tries to strain to make sure he’s hearing it right. As he’s listening, he notices a chink in the stones that make up the wall, and decides to see what could have made them all so excited.

    He looks into the hole, which just so happens to be at eye level, and suddenly recieves a poke to the eye from a dirty finger.

    As he’s reeling back in shock and mild pain, blinking it away, he hears the crazies take up a new chant, “Fourteen! Fourteen! Fourteen!”

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  • Hippie

    I loved this story It was very interesting ;-)

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  • http://www.myspace.com/rukia_loves_ichigo Suicide7Days

    that was really interesting so the truck driver’s gonna die

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  • Tewweh

    I loved the story :DD

    The bunch in the middle was quite unnecessary though. But still the idea rocked.

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  • deschain

    I’ve seen a variation involving a toy doll that kills kids.

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    • Herobrine

      Chucky? Or am I thinking of the wrong diabolical doll?

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  • http://misterwelldone.wordpress.com/ Mr. Welldone

    Hello.

    Perhaps what would frighten most more is that such pictures and other relics of this kind are numerous and much slower to take effect.

    I daresay many carry such a relic with them even now. Especially those reading such things as this.

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    • HeroBrine

      The only relic I have is the morphic cube.

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      • Anonymous

        Nice Username!

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      • Herobrine

        You are not me, stop stealing my name!!!

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        Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
  • Poster

    I really like this one.

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  • Anon

    Only problems I can see are fairly bad writing and the obvious question of what would happen after her eleventh victim. Either that one or #21.

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    • Anonymous

      She could always start from 1 again, this boy could’ve been #33 *shudders*

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  • icarus

    That was cool/creepy

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  • ShortGirl

    I really like this creepypasta.
    And I like flea’s story.

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  • http://misterwelldone.wordpress.com/ Mr. Welldone

    Hello, Anon.

    With this particular occurrance, there is no eleven, no twelve, no thirteen, no fourteen, no fifteen, no sixteen, no seventeen, no eighteen, no nineteen, no twenty, and no twenty-one.

    There is only freedom.

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    • HeroBrine

      Lol.

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    • Anonymous

      I believe he was referring to the number of fingers,not freedom.

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  • MooMOo

    shes like mermaid

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  • meowmixkid

    this is cool! I’ve heard diffrent versions of jokes like this.

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  • Gerard

    Wow. Very nice one.

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  • The HIVE

    Greetings, Mr. Welldone.

    I emphasize ‘freedom.’

    You fall to another punishment.

    Become a different kind of victim.

    Heed the siren’s call, reader.

    A fantasy creature?

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  • Zombie

    Very good tale!

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  • http://4chan.org /b/

    good shit.

    and who is Pete Wentz?

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  • http://hell.com Popeyewinkler

    Yep! Chicks are devious bitches, the whole lot of them are a bunch of malevolent scheming harlots.

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    • HEY HEY HEY IT’S SLENDY!

      -_______- I may be devious, malevolent, and I do tend to come up with some pretty evil plans but… I AM DEFINITELY NOT A “HARLOT”!

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