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  1. COCK
    March 21, 2010 • 9:01 PM

    FIRST BITCHES

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    • Tesla
      December 3, 2012 • 2:28 AM

      OH GOD, WHAT HAVE I DONE

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      Rating: +76 (from 88 votes)
      • Bob
        March 19, 2013 • 4:27 PM

        I really enjoyed this from a philosophical standpoint. Being ‘tied’ to your daily rituals and blocking out everything else. Refreshing and different from other creepypastas.

        Storywise, it was decent. Some things didn’t get explained and I was able to figure out were the story was going early on. Enjoyed the overall theme, though.

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      • Teh Moosen is NEAR
        March 28, 2013 • 6:57 PM

        You’re Nikola? Well. Nice to meet a famous inventor.

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        Rating: +2 (from 8 votes)
      • WonkyTARDIS
        May 13, 2013 • 5:17 PM

        YOU’RE MY FAVOURITE INVENTOR, TESLA!
        I never knew you wrote CreepyPastas. It’s fantastic!

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  2. JCMichaels
    March 21, 2010 • 9:04 PM

    Excellent. A rare and refreshing return to form.

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    Rating: +67 (from 77 votes)
  3. Katie Bug =D
    March 21, 2010 • 9:08 PM

    OOH! Really good pasta! I Loved it! Very truly creepy! I like it! I kept imagining where I live and I don’t think I got the full effect because I’m sure you didn’t write it from the point of view of my room but it was a very good past! OMNOMNOM!! More please!

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    Rating: +39 (from 53 votes)
  4. naim
    March 21, 2010 • 9:09 PM

    omg exelent

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    • Doona
      February 12, 2013 • 10:00 AM

      *excellent

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      Rating: +14 (from 18 votes)
  5. Anonymous
    March 21, 2010 • 9:27 PM

    Not too bad. Could have been a little less detailed. Not very creepy, but a decent read.

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    • Anonymous
      January 24, 2013 • 4:55 PM

      A little LESS detailed? Why do you want a story that lacks detail? It’s brilliant the way it is!

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      Rating: +42 (from 54 votes)
    • Smiles
      March 13, 2013 • 2:09 AM

      detail is one of the most important parts of a story. Without detail you cant accuratly visualise the story

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      Rating: +16 (from 18 votes)
  6. Dylan A.
    March 21, 2010 • 9:31 PM

    Finally, a decent pasta. At first I thought that whoever the strings were not attached were people who had died. I guess that I was wrong.

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    Rating: +70 (from 76 votes)
    • Giambalvo
      April 12, 2013 • 1:16 PM

      I never even thought of a broken string meaning death. Thats really creepy

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      Rating: +2 (from 4 votes)
  7. Lolwut
    March 21, 2010 • 9:42 PM

    This is the first recent creepypasta that I’ve liked.
    8/10.

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    Rating: +14 (from 24 votes)
  8. Eevee
    March 21, 2010 • 9:58 PM

    Good. Not too, too scary, but enough creepy. The ending was a bit anticlimatic, though…

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    Rating: +23 (from 43 votes)
  9. Will Robinson
    March 21, 2010 • 10:13 PM

    Hey very well done, nicely undpredictable.

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  10. Anon
    March 21, 2010 • 10:16 PM

    Delicious pasta with Italian quality pesto sauce, would order again.

    9.5/10

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    Rating: +64 (from 72 votes)
  11. lolwut
    March 21, 2010 • 10:33 PM

    Way decent =]

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  12. Deathbecomesme
    March 21, 2010 • 10:44 PM

    I really liked this one….nom nom nom…very different and good……congrats 9/10

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    Rating: +13 (from 17 votes)
  13. nikki
    March 21, 2010 • 10:52 PM

    it was good, but it didnt make my hart race or anything

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  14. obama
    March 21, 2010 • 10:57 PM

    wow tht was quite amazing.

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    • Anonymous
      February 5, 2013 • 12:59 AM

      whoa nice job bro

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  15. Trashbag
    March 21, 2010 • 11:10 PM

    That was the best pasta i’ve read in quite some time. I actually grabbed at my wrists afterwards to see if there were strings or sommat.

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    Rating: +19 (from 25 votes)
  16. Naris
    March 21, 2010 • 11:32 PM

    THEN WHO WAS DETERMINIST IMP?

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    • artty
      December 30, 2012 • 11:48 AM

      it was destiny

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      • Hetaliaholic
        March 20, 2013 • 7:59 PM

        I knew it…

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  17. 22/7
    March 21, 2010 • 11:44 PM

    Would eat a million times again

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    Rating: +6 (from 14 votes)
  18. aCJohnson
    March 22, 2010 • 12:50 AM

    There was little to no thrill factor here. That being said, and all negativity aside, I though it was an excellent short. It was the most original pasta that I’ve seen. I wasn’t too pleased with the story development, but (unlike some of the others here) I did enjoy the ending.

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    Rating: +4 (from 26 votes)
  19. battybrain
    March 22, 2010 • 12:54 AM

    That wasn’t very scary, but it’s definitely better than what’s been showing up recently.
    I don’t know: I would be interested in seeing this as a comic or something, but not really as a story in the horror genre.
    I’d say the only surprising thing about this is the string origins. I believed they were attached to dead people…the strings controlling “free will” was a very unique surprise.

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  20. Addish
    March 22, 2010 • 1:00 AM

    that was so damn creepy. I would have untied loads of fucking people though. Who cares if they’re scared at first.

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    Rating: +14 (from 16 votes)
  21. Hurpadadurpa
    March 22, 2010 • 1:00 AM

    This is one of the first creepypastas ive read that actually had a semi-satisfying ending.

    VERY VERY DELICIOUS.

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  22. Joe Smith
    March 22, 2010 • 1:13 AM

    Brilliant, even profound. 10/10

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    Rating: +8 (from 10 votes)
  23. Nex
    March 22, 2010 • 1:35 AM

    Interesting concept. The people were completely oblivious to the strings controling their lives. This is especially creepy because of the following statement:
    How do we know whether or not we are attached to strings?

    Fear the Darkness

    -Nex

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    Rating: +17 (from 19 votes)
  24. Krepta
    March 22, 2010 • 1:40 AM

    I like this a lot! My only complaint was that the line “Do we even have free will” kind of came out of nowhere, almost like a spoiler with no leadup. It might have been better with a more gradual sense of seeing the strings being tugged this way and that.

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  25. The Duke
    March 22, 2010 • 2:20 AM

    Wow, GREAT pasta! Night and day from that last one. More from Tesla, please! I love their work!

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    Rating: +1 (from 5 votes)

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