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Creepypasta

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My sister always screams in the middle of the night. Horrible, blood-curdling screams. And I cannot get her to stop.

I lie in my bed, away from the earth, dreaming in mist, and her screams penetrate them. She cries for me, she cries for someone.

I cannot help her, nothing I do will make her stop.

I bring her some fresh lavender, one day. I hope the scent can calm her.

My eyes shut and I drift away.

But she screams.

What can I do, Sister? Why do you scream? What scares you? You will not tell me, I can’t help.

One night, when the screams are too much, I get up. I will stop her screams.

I make my way to her bed, and kneel down right on top of her.

Stop screaming. STOP SCREAMING.

I look down at her, but I cannot see her. It is dark, and there’s distance between us.

STOP SCREAMING.

She stops, but only because she knows someone is there.

She is quiet, she doesn’t want them to know she’s there.

My mother, telling me to go back to my bed. I need to stop coming to see my sister at night.

But don’t you hear the screams, Mother?

But she doesn’t. It is only me.

My sister pretends to be asleep.

I get up.

I am dirty from the ground where I knelt over my sister’s grave.

She rests in her coffin. Dead but she still screams.

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  • CakeFace

    i wanna know wut happens to his/her sister :O does she get outta her grave?

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    • chelle

      she’s dead, why would she?

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      Rating: +3 (from 7 votes)
    • Alex

      The scariest thing about this is your comment. Your grammar is absolutely terrifying.

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      Rating: +15 (from 17 votes)
      • ThisIsANameForAComment

        Oh my god, I laughed so hard I had tears running down my face.

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  • Phoenix

    This wasn’t a bad pasta, but I could guess almost the exact ending from when the screaming was mentioned.

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  • inxtcy

    :,( Well written and sad.

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    Rating: +6 (from 8 votes)
  • Lightwatch

    It took me a little while to get it, but I think I understand it now. He murdered his sister, and her screams still haunt him? Is the way it is written supposed to be a poetic format, or supposed to just add effect? All in all though, I think this was decent, and not bad.

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    • http://website name

      jesus f*ck what is wrong with you, why do you assume he murdered his sister? I mean this creepypasta is creepy, but this comment downright disturbs me.

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      • Somebody

        Bro, your profile picture is dog’s ass, what’s wrong with YOU, I ask.

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        Rating: +26 (from 26 votes)
        • Anonymous

          … 1) Keep in mind, this is creepy pasta and they do have screwed up stories like that on here. The person who typed the suggestion may have been correct.
          2) Dog asses are a comedic joke, which people find funny. There is nothing wrong with that. :/

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  • CL

    Very similar to #8. I like the expanded story.

    http://www.buzzfeed.com/daves4/12-absolutely-terrifying-two-sentence-horror-stories

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    • http://www.creepypasta.com derpbutt

      That reminds me, I meant to make a post about that reddit topic – similar to what we did with the “creepy things kids say” thread.

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    • http://penis penis monster

      The last story on that site was the scariest. It gave me nightmares and had me looking over my shoulder a lot to check if anything was there. ;__;

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  • Daniel Lopez-Hollingworth

    Wasn’t expecting that. Nice one. The 1 sentence per paragraph structure was a little distracting, but I understand that you probably used it to highlight the narrator’s unhinged state of mind (or maybe I’m just overthinking again).

    Anyway, good job overall.

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    • chelle

      i think that was meant to give it a poetic feel.

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  • nadine

    it’s pretty good but reminds me of a pasta where 2 brothers had a bunk bed and the one on top always taunts the brother on the bottom, then at the end they give away that the brother on the top bunk is actually dead.

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  • Herobrine

    interesting twist at the end, wasn’t expecting that. Good story, I hope to see more from you.

    -Herobrine

    Always watching…

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  • 126378lhErObRinE99

    I was really confused over all

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  • Yvonne

    OMG! That is so sad! Is he trying to comfort his sister… even in death? That’s how I figured it… which is why it’s so SAD for me. Bravo… Bravo….

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  • lol.me

    GREAT! spooky, and I like the shortness of the sentences to add an apprehensive feeling effect. Gave me goosebumps at the end.

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  • Faith

    I really liked this, I didn’t expect the ending at all.

    That was extremely creepy…

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  • http://website name

    holy crap this story would make an alcoholic out of a jehova’s witness. keep going and thank you

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  • Kimby

    I really liked this. Different.
    I like the way it’s written, in a poetic format.

    Goodjob. 7/10.

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  • bruchi

    This is more of a psychological terror in order to complete such a work you need more description you need to pierce with your story in your readers mind it was good though I give it a 7

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  • Grim Gamer

    You seem this reminds me of the screaming box off of Dragon Age. XD I’m sorry, the game just popped into my head.

    Anyway, nice story. X) It was a nice little CreepyPasta. I mean, who would want to be near a grave that constantly screams at you?…..pretty creepy.

    I rate this 6/10 and will favourite.

    Sincerely,
    Grim Gamer

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  • Sarah

    Ok. The sister is dead. Did not see that coming, it was like a smack to the face only instead of left being hurt and furious I was discobobulated O_o
    Anyhoo, what is the screaming suppossed to mean? How does it possess eloquence ?
    And, did he/she actually dig her grave and yell to her corpse?
    So many questions .. So little answers ..

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  • Orchidhearrt

    Didn’t see that ending coming. Those last couple lines gave me chills all over :/

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  • Sicko Story Time

    This was really good! I did a narration of it on my YouTube channel if anyone wants to check it out: http://youtu.be/-ypUACXcVu8

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