Please Come
A 15-year old boy in a small town in Maryland sat down at his computer after getting home from school one day. He turned it on and logged into an instant messaging program, and was then surprised to receive a message from a classmate of his, who had been absent that day.
It consisted of two words; “please come”. Confused, the boy sent a reply, asking why he’d been absent that day. After two more messages and fifteen minutes with no response, he decided to get on his bike and head over to his classmate’s house. It was a short ride, only about five minutes away.
When he got to the house, he found the door was unlocked. Inside, partially dried blood was splattered over the walls and floors, and an unrecognizable figure was crumpled against the far wall. It was missing an arm and a leg, and bloody streaks on the floor lead away from the body and into the kitchen. The boy slammed the door closed, and immediately called 911 on his cell phone.
When the police arrived, they found three corpses, as well as tracks leading away from the house from the back door. The forensics report concluded that the entire family, the boy’s classmate and his parents, had been killed sometime the previous night.
Major deja-vu. I’ve read this one before, definitely. But I can’t remember if it was here, or somewhere else.
But it’d be impossible if it was here, now wouldn’t it?
Hmmm, i’m feeling the same as King Progdor. Nonetheless this is one is good!
I remembered where I saw it, it was on the Encyclopedia Dramatica’s creepypasta collection list.
And yes, this one is a good one.
This one always makes me a little sad, if only because I imagine the ‘please come’ as less of a “Come and see how scary this is and then maybe you’ll die too!” than a “please come see what’s happened to me”.
I agree with 4. And i think of it as the classmate saying “come help me be put to rest”
THEN WHO WAS INTERNET???
And he came.
-is confused-
BUT THEN WHO WAS IM?
I believe that the point to the story is that the absent boy and his family was murdered then the killer IM the boy saying “come please” and when the boy got there the killer murdered him. Story should’ve went into more detailed like instead of the boy closing the door a figure closed it behind him.
@EnjoyTheRide
Um. No, perhaps not. The overall impression is that the ghost/spriit/whathaveyou of the classmate sent a message seeking someone to find his body.
How the hell would the killer know who the kid was, anyway?
Dayyyymmmm..
I wish it would had gone into more detail, how they died etc
Well, I would guess their deaths have SOMETHING to do with the fact that the body is missing an arm and leg.
it is a bit sad, what happened to the family and such…but there’s one thing that gets in the way of this being really good…the dumbass kid actually went to the guys house!!!
i would never! he had no idea what to expect.
@DJLoONa
You have to realize not everyone thinks about reality as if they were in a horror story all the time. Most people don’t expect a weird scratching sound at their door to be a guy with a hook for a hand, etc.
Clearly they’re all fools and we’re better off.
Oh fuck you all i live in maryland.
:’C
;~;
Most of my friends are fifteen year old maryland boys.
So this scares me so badly.
He came.
But then…
WHO WAS COME?!
howmany time are you fuckers going to joke abut “and then he came”? itt was funy oncew, stop trying
btw i like the pasta, please pass some more
Reminds me of a story in which the ghost of a dead mom gets help for her child who’s in danger.
Stories like these always sadden me.
i think i read this once before but i can’t remember. I find it really sad beside the fact the creepy part is who messaged him to come.
Actually, I think the horror here is that the boy got the IM from the murderer, and now the murderer knows who the boy is, and can follow him to his house.
I’ve received text messages as much as 24 hours after they were sent, so this doesn’t strike me as particularly supernatural. Now, /talking/ on the phone is something else – then you have a guarantee of synchronicity, which is important if the weirdness is in the timing.
I agree, I always read this creepypasta as if the kid were simply receiving an offline IM as many IM services do save your IM until the recipient logs on.
I’m not sure whether or not I like this one. It’s certainly not bad. But it’s really not that exciting. I give it a solid B.
Ohhh major creepy pasta D:
great yummy pasta! I know who the killer was! the politicians! they say healthcare costs a arm and a leg!!! lol
“Most of my friends are fifteen year old maryland boys.”
Why don’t you take a seat?
“please come” i’m sorry dude…i’m chafing.it’ll take sum time
some*
So little boy’s friend found it necessary to “please come” to his classmate rather than the police? This is assuming murderer is just a normal human, which seems to be the case here.
Again, this story is
-build up suspense, build up and then… nothing- which is disappointing to read :[
The murder happened the night before the day he got the IM, so WHO WAS INTERNET GHOST?
This is fucking scary
Especially considering I’m a 15 year old boy from Maryland D:
This is sadder than it is scary
SUMMARY.
CHILD LIVES IN MARY LAND.
HE HAS FRIEND, HE TOO LIVES IN MARY LAND.
CHILD’S FRIEND GETS MURDERED AT MIDNIGHT.
CHILD GETS MESSAGE FROM HIS DEAD FRIEND THAT TELLS THE CHILD TO COME TO HIS HOUSE.
CHILD SENDS HIM A MESSAGE DUE TO CONFUSION.
CHILD BEGINS WORRYING.
CHILD GOES ON BIKE TO GO TO HIS FRIEND’S HOUSE.
CHILD SEES A CRIME SCENE.
CHILD CALLS THE POLICE.
There, simple as day.
If any of you people think this is complicated, you are stupid.
i for one think the arm and leg went to the computer to send the im which explains
- the missing arm and leg
- the blood trail
- why the im only said “please come” (no eyes cant read the replies)
- why he didn’t call the police (no mouth)
This one really freaked me out. Not because of any spectacular writing or gripping climax, but because I’m a 15 year old boy in a small town in Maryland, logging on the computer after school, and my friend just sent me a text message. Huge coincidence.
This is one of the first creepypasta’s I’ve heard of; thanks to a cousin who also sent me “The Railroad” and “The Statue”.