Please Come
A 15-year old boy in a small town in Maryland sat down at his computer after getting home from school one day. He turned it on and logged into an instant messaging program, and was then surprised to receive a message from a classmate of his, who had been absent that day.
It consisted of two words; “please come”. Confused, the boy sent a reply, asking why he’d been absent that day. After two more messages and fifteen minutes with no response, he decided to get on his bike and head over to his classmate’s house. It was a short ride, only about five minutes away.
When he got to the house, he found the door was unlocked. Inside, partially dried blood was splattered over the walls and floors, and an unrecognizable figure was crumpled against the far wall. It was missing an arm and a leg, and bloody streaks on the floor lead away from the body and into the kitchen. The boy slammed the door closed, and immediately called 911 on his cell phone.
When the police arrived, they found three corpses, as well as tracks leading away from the house from the back door. The forensics report concluded that the entire family, the boy’s classmate and his parents, had been killed sometime the previous night.
Posted in Murders & Deaths
June 28th, 2008 at 7:52 pm
Major deja-vu. I’ve read this one before, definitely. But I can’t remember if it was here, or somewhere else.
But it’d be impossible if it was here, now wouldn’t it?
June 28th, 2008 at 11:14 pm
Hmmm, i’m feeling the same as King Progdor. Nonetheless this is one is good!
June 29th, 2008 at 8:49 pm
I remembered where I saw it, it was on the Encyclopedia Dramatica’s creepypasta collection list.
And yes, this one is a good one.
June 29th, 2008 at 10:20 pm
This one always makes me a little sad, if only because I imagine the ‘please come’ as less of a “Come and see how scary this is and then maybe you’ll die too!” than a “please come see what’s happened to me”.
July 12th, 2008 at 1:33 am
I agree with 4. And i think of it as the classmate saying “come help me be put to rest”
July 21st, 2008 at 10:24 am
THEN WHO WAS INTERNET???
July 23rd, 2008 at 11:47 am
And he came.
August 2nd, 2008 at 7:46 pm
-is confused-
August 4th, 2008 at 8:27 pm
BUT THEN WHO WAS IM?
August 9th, 2008 at 4:51 am
I believe that the point to the story is that the absent boy and his family was murdered then the killer IM the boy saying “come please” and when the boy got there the killer murdered him. Story should’ve went into more detailed like instead of the boy closing the door a figure closed it behind him.
August 21st, 2008 at 4:07 pm
@EnjoyTheRide
Um. No, perhaps not. The overall impression is that the ghost/spriit/whathaveyou of the classmate sent a message seeking someone to find his body.
How the hell would the killer know who the kid was, anyway?
August 29th, 2008 at 3:25 pm
Dayyyymmmm..
September 5th, 2008 at 11:52 pm
I wish it would had gone into more detail, how they died etc
September 9th, 2008 at 12:16 am
Well, I would guess their deaths have SOMETHING to do with the fact that the body is missing an arm and leg.
September 13th, 2008 at 12:39 am
it is a bit sad, what happened to the family and such…but there’s one thing that gets in the way of this being really good…the dumbass kid actually went to the guys house!!!
i would never! he had no idea what to expect.
September 29th, 2008 at 7:37 am
@DJLoONa
You have to realize not everyone thinks about reality as if they were in a horror story all the time. Most people don’t expect a weird scratching sound at their door to be a guy with a hook for a hand, etc.
Clearly they’re all fools and we’re better off.