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Negative Gate



Estimated reading time — 2 minutes

Look behind you. What do you see?
Invariably, there will be a wall somewhere in your view. Now stare deeply into the space on the wall that lines up best with your eyes. Nothing will happen, but makes sure you are clear on where this particular spot is.
That spot contains all the negativity in your mind. Whenever you are on your computer, reading scary stories or whatever you do, sometimes you will get spooked.
What do you do when this happens? You check behind you, that’s what you do. As you read this now, a feeling of dread will come over you.

Check the spot.

Nothing again, huh?

That’s because right now, all the evil is locked safely in your mind. Some people, upon learning of this “negative spot” resolve to remove the spot in an attempt to remove the negative energy. This is a grave mistake.
You must never let harm come to this spot. If you do, you will have released the energy. Now when you sit at your computer at night, you will feel chills even in the summer time. The feeling of dread that only presented itself when you were genuinely scared will now hang in the air constantly. Within a week you and your loved ones will have a string of bad luck.

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Within a month your computer will begin to act erratic and eventually break down. On the anniversary of the spot’s destruction, you will dream of your most horrible fears. The dream will seem to go on forever, and when you wake up you will notice your vision has darkened. Every year on the same day, the dream will repeat itself, and your vision will grow darker and darker.

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After you go completely blind, don’t ever turn your back on that spot again. That is, if you can still tell where it is.

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43 thoughts on “Negative Gate”

  1. Is reading this story in a field where there are no walls anything like dividing by zero? Or does this just transfer automatically to the next wall one happens to see?

  2. My negative spot is… on curtains? On the window? On a tree 100+ meters from my house?

    Or is it in the floor, since I often read while lying in the bed?
    Or is it the mirror, since I look into it whenever I have a “WTF?” moment?

    But honestly, I enjoy reading these pastas, but I’m not scared or even creeped out by them.

  3. hatersgonnahate

    DIDNT LOOK BACK! TROLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOOLOLOLLOLOLOLOLOLLO.OOOOOOLOLOOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!

  4. This would be awesome! Because then I\’d get a new laptop because my old laptop is shit but is still on the warranty! =D

  5. …Why not set up a temporary wall, then cut out the spot (with maybe an extra inch around it, to be safe) and put it in a fireproof safe? It never said we couldn\’t harm the wall around it, after all…

  6. Wait…So my negative spot is a Wolverine poster? Or is it the door behind the poster? Or the wall behind the door?

  7. The wall behind me is wall mirror that takes up almost the whole wall. Which is why I never turn around when I’m scared because I end up looking right back at me. Even though I have a frighting look on my face, the mirror says i’m smiling…

    1. I adore this comment. Here, have some of the internet I have collected over the years. Well, whatever internet I haven’t given to “who was phone” earlier. :D

  8. Lol, I read the first line and I was like, “*sigh* trying to scare me…the look behind me stuff doesn’t work, I’m on a laptop on the couch, directly up against a wall!”
    And then I was like…’Oh…crap.’ And then it mentioned the ‘laptop breaking down stuff’, the ‘you look at it and nothing happens’, the summer…
    Creepy.
    A very good pasta. A wonderful psychic sauce, with just enough of an aftertaste. 4/5

  9. What if I told you….

    I’m outside with my back to a hill on a laptop stealing starbucks wifi? all lies of course but w/e still scar T_T

  10. The first time I ever read this, I turned around and a creepy-ass painting of eyeless cherubs was on the wall behind me.

    Then all the lights went out. ;_;

  11. Is that a Tales Of The Abyss reference in the title?

    “O twisted door of distortion open wide! Negative Gate!”

    Anise FTW.

  12. Oh my god. My hermit crab tank is right in front of that wall, blocking it. Am I going to become vision-impaired?

    1. The hermit crab must be well-fed at all times or you will spontaneously explode into thousands of miniature Jeff the Killers.

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