Scary Paranormal Stories & Short Horror Microfiction

Creepypasta

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Laura looks at the clock on her dashboard which reads “5:43”. She curses herself for staying late at work, but there was just too much to do to justify leaving early. Being Valentines Day, she knows she should have made an effort to get home on time to be with her husband. They managed to somehow get the kids out of the house for the weekend and the thought of missing out on this opportunity for some alone time is nearly frightening.

Rolling into her driveway, she notices something posted on the door. The stack of papers on the passenger seat is stuffed into her bag as she exits her minivan and walks up to the door. Her eyes squint the whole way, trying to make something of this disconformity. It’s a note. She reads it and her heart sails.

“Meet me inside for some fun…”

Part of her feels her level of guilt double, being that he has put some real effort into this special day, but the other part can’t wait to see what her husband has cooked up. She turns around to see if anyone is watching, slightly embarrassed that perhaps someone has seen this sultry example of foreplay. No one. She tears off the note and dances inside, giddy with excitement.

The lights throughout the house are all turned down while candles burn, their dim ambiance casting soft rays of amber against the beige walls. She tosses her bag to the floor and starts searching. The second note is found in the kitchen, stuck to the side of a can of whipped cream.

“You’re almost there. Come to the bedroom and bring this with you.”

Her heart is pumping with anticipation as she grabs it and makes her way to the staircase. She grasps the banister with her free hand, arms shaking. Each step has a rose petal placed delicately on it and rich vanilla cascades from a candle perched somewhere in the dark abyss of the hallway. Reaching the top floor she sees another note on the door to the bedroom.

“Welcome.”

She quickly fluffs and fixes her hair before flinging the door open, standing in the threshold in her sexiest stance. The bed is made up with heart shaped pillows. A bottle of champagne is chilling in a bucket of ice. More candles fill the room with light and scent but something is wrong. Her husband is nowhere to be found. Confused, she looks around finding one final note across the room, stuck to her dresser.

“Your husband is dead. Perhaps you would like to join him in the closet?”

Credit To – DtheJG

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  • Miss Laura

    The only thing I really found creepy about this was the fact that the main character had the same name as me.
    Saying that, I knew there was a reason I never liked V-Day…:P

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    • Laura’s co-worker

      My condolences Miss Laura, perhaps your husband’s death shocked you to the point of Amnesia. Happy Valentines day.

      P.S. I killed your husband.

      DUN DUN DUNNNNN~~~

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      • Aranta

        xD perfect just perfect

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        • http://www.trip.com DERP

          The end was dumb too general.

          But still i wonder what the whipped cream was for… O.o

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      • RedBloodRedNeck

        i like your ‘username’ better than the pasta lawl

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  • poelover

    Fantastic twist!

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    • Aranta

      one it read the first note i knew it would be something like a killer there or her husband dead

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  • Rage_Quitter

    MERRY CHRISTMAS! :)

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  • Couchus

    Laura you saucy bugger! ;D

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    • DurpCakez

      I choked on my cereal after reading your comment. xD

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      Rating: +9 (from 9 votes)
  • WhatisthisWinter

    Meh.

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  • THEN WHO WAS….nevermind…

    I thought the story was alright but the situation is f’kd up! Damn Laura.. ;(

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  • BUT WHO WAS KILLER?

    BUT WHO WAS KILLER??

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    • Meg

      My cat’s name is Killer…maybe she did it.

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      • Aranta

        wow… that is one awesome cat

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  • Haley Nicole

    Omg this is amazing

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  • RedBeans

    LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

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    Rating: +7 (from 15 votes)
  • Eye

    Right…..

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  • ANONANONANON!!

    But the note said “meet me inside for some fun”, the note was a lie!!

    Good story though, me liked it.

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  • Deloesian

    Sooo, she doesn’t know her husband’s writing from some psycho killer?
    Otherwise good little story :)

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    • Alex

      You have a good point there

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    • Ziaheart

      Could be that every single note except for the last one was her husband’s.

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      • http://www.dthejg.blogspot.ca/ DtheJG

        Thanks for covering up that plot hole for me haha. I honestly didn’t think of that. Thanks again for the feedback!

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  • Chick across the street

    This is really good, love the twist ^.^

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  • Craver

    Aw man. At first when I was reading this I thought it was just going to be a kinky erotica story. But then I realized that this is a story posted on creepy pasta, and then BAM the ending showed up.
    It’s a great story :3 Short and sweet.

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  • Ashlee

    It could’ve been better, I think. I thought it lead up to something more exciting then, “Your husband is dead.”
    I don’t know. I was just disappointed.

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    • http://seemslegit.ca Seems Legit Slenderman

      True, true, but pretty good twist.

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  • M. Night Shyamalan

    Waht a twist!

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  • http://www.youtube/cockneypasta cockney pasta

    f##k mate. nice one. f##king mental but good.

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  • DtheJG

    Thanks for all the feedback, guys! I had been ruminating about this one for a while.

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  • IWillPoopInYourBedSheets

    Meh. It was okay I guess. The ending disappointed me. I would have wanted it to be scarier than “your husband is dead”. Yeah, I guess it was a bit of a twist but I mean, c’mon it IS creepy pasta we’re talking about here. It’s not gonna be some erotica 50 shades of gray or something. I just wish the ending was better.

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  • BOSS_REVOLUTION

    “bring this with you”… and the point of bringing a can of whipped cream was…?? other than that it was very good. :D

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    • LHSS

      Everything up until the last note was her husband’s plan for them.

      If you seriously don’t know what whipped cream has to do with sex well… I won’t go into it.

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  • Autumn

    Well that escalated quickly.

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  • Anonymous

    I think her husband did do all the other stuff and the notes but somehow someone killed him and wanted to keep with the theme? Idk that’s thenonly sense I could make of it

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  • Hash-Slinging Slasher

    I think the ending ruined it for me. It’s not very creepy. I think for a creepier effect, instead of finding her husband in the bedroom, some random guy is there with duct tape and a camera. That would have sent chills up my spine.

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  • http://http raping sponge bob

    Good story, but it was short

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  • Privyet

    Haha what an asshole

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