In the Kitchen
A young girl is playing in her bedroom when she hears her mother call to her from the kitchen, so she runs downstairs to meet her mother.
As she’s running through the hallway, the door to the cupboard under the stairs opens, and a hand reaches out and pulls her in. It’s her mother. She whispers to her child, “Don’t go into the kitchen. I heard it too.”
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In the Kitchen,
was not expecting that……o.o’
i’ve heard this story a lot.. but this is the first time where the real mother actually shows her self.. in the other version, as she’s going down the stairs, she hears her mother call from upstairs saying “Don’t go into the kitchen. I heard it too.”
that was very short you should elaborate on what the thing is in the kitchen
I think it’s much scaried NOT to know what is in the kitchen. Leaves room for imagination.
I like the version that goes like this
You wake up in your bedroom because you hear your mother call to you from the kitchen, so you run downstairs to meet her mother.
As you’re running through the hallway, the door to your mother’s room opens a crack. Someone (presumably your mother)whispers, “Don’t go into the kitchen. I heard it too.” What would you do?
Hmm…different thats for sure. I liked it
Short but effective.
Thats what she said.
But seriously, good work.
but who was kitchen?!?!
YOUR NOT SUPPOSED TO KNOW……
This is kinda creepy, but not greatly written. Maybe if you work on it for a little bit longer it’ll turn out great…but you’re on to something.
… not bad. but one question, why would the mother hide instead of meet her child on the stairs and get her the hell out of the house?
In my opinion that adds a lot to the creepiness factor. Because you don’t really know which one is the fake one, or if it is the real mother, why she’s hiding.
Oh this is one of my favorites
THEN WHO WAS FAKE MOM?
Shit’s been done one million times. 0/10, get some originality.
WHO WAS KITCHEN
*insert woman in the kitchen joke here*
‘Pilgrim183′ if you figure out what this username is for ill accept your request xD
THEN WHO WAS UNKNOWN CHARACTER WITH FEMALE HUMANOID VOICE CALLING FROM A ROOM DESIGNATED FOR CULINARY PURPOSES
Doesn’t need to be worked on, or added too. Its creepy AF as it is already. Leaves you to create your own solution as to find out whats in the kitchen, making you use your twisted and disturbing side of your imagination. I love this pasta, very filling
no gore/blood etc to give me chills.
A small but fulfilling portion of pasta. Plus, I approve of Bobbie’s comment.
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@Monique: Agreed. Whether it’s been done before or not, good pasta gets around the table a few times.
The fact that the mother is under the stairs leads the reader to believe that its safer than running for the door. I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing seconds, or was it thirds?
What if the mom in the closet is the fake mom, and the real mom was calling to her kid to get her out of the house?
Awkward moment when you tell this to your 10 year old cousins and their mother calls them into the kitchen…
I liked this. 9/10. Short and sweet – very nearly perfect.
WHO WAS VOICE?
Short and sweet.
Short and sweet.
Wow! I like this a lot! I am so telling this to my brother!