• Anonymous

    Anytime I see a story credited to Josef K., I know it is going to be both a long pasta, and incredibly good.

    I am glad to see neither has deviated.

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    • http://loughboroughtattoo.com/content/view/16/31/ OjamaYellow

      is actually KONY.

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  • Kdz

    I don’t know about this being a good creepy pasta, but it sure as fuck is a good story. Not even the typo or two I saw could take away.

    I enjoyed it immensely, even if I’m not gonna lose any sleep over it.

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  • me…

    that was long…but it was good
    i cant really say anymore…i picked up one mistake tho…
    “By noon, I could only watch as the it reached up and blotted out the sun”
    one little mistake other than that, great work!

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  • That Guy

    Cool story bro

    Seriously though I enjoyed it to the end, could use a bit more drama and that bri/x/ kinda tone though.

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  • Leroy

    Reminiscent of Fallen and none the worse for it. Nice one.

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  • MrSkary

    Somehow, in some weird twisted way, I think the dude’s final move worked out pretty well :D

    But who was – ah forget it ._.

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  • Anonymous

    WHO WAS CLIFFHANGER?

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  • Happy Birthday

    Oh wow. I really liked this pasta. Well written and descriptive. Kinda drawn out a bit, though. I really liked the last six paragraphs or so. Very nicely executed.

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  • Sigma

    Dusty brix were shat upon the ground. I liked the bittersweet ending!

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  • Kitster

    Long, but well worth it.

    One of the best pasta’s I have ever read. Well done!

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  • MisterVercetti

    I concur. Usually these long pastas are basically shaggy dog stories, building tension constantly but ending on a weak or completely stupid note. Yet everything about this one just felt right. It was almost like a Stephen King short story.

    Well done, Josef K.

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  • Chimera

    Nicely written!

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  • pastamuncher,

    Oh my god. that was intense,i think i may need to use it for my student film thing im making ,if thats alright with josef.shall post his site asking,unless he r reply to me here.seizuresequalwin@hotmail.com.add me if u want,i dont care.

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  • HAWT

    Very well written, however insanely long but worth the read

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  • Darkgamr

    Wow, that one was damn good

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  • Spunk

    That was pretty rad. I mean, the whole dust-storm being a cover-up is very nice. It was a tad obvious that something was possessing the missing people and making them kill others so it could take over someone else, but it was still spectacularly delivered.

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  • Spunk

    I wouldn’t say that “it was obvious that something was possessing the missing people and making them kill others” It was fairly obvious that the missing people were killing the next household, but that’s a good thing. It’s exposition without explanatory narrative. Whoever wrote this actually knows how to write.

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  • S

    Too long for my taste but it was okay.

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  • Midnightgirl

    I think i read this on the site before, i love Josef K stories. awsome ^^

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  • Mookster

    I always enjoy Losef K’s stories, and this had me hooked from beginning to end

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  • Mookster

    *Josef K I mean….I’m such a bad typer XD

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  • Anon.

    I’ve read this before, but I didn’t realize it till the last paragraph or so.

    Still a VERY good Pasta.

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  • Comment Leaver

    I love all of the works of Josef K, amazing like all the others.

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  • Terra Obscurum

    THEN WHO WAS THING?

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    • Brute

      Seriously… do you know nothing of the fear mythos? -_-”’

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      • (=^.^=)

        ignoance i know…

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      • some dude with creepy personality

        whats “the fear mythos”?

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  • http://www.cafepress.com/cutelyevilinc Addish

    I think it would be neat if this was made into a short movie or whatnot.

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