• http://www.creepypasta.com derpbutt

    I made this comment and edited the timestamp just so I can say no, you are not first. STAHP.

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    • Mr. Dafuq

      haha lol

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    • Vadim

      Nice pic

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    • POWER LEVELS!!!

      FIRST(not really)

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  • Tattletalestangler

    First!

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    • http://www.creepypasta.com derpbutt

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      • An Indian

        LOL

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  • DerpDeDerp

    I thought i had the story all figured out. Then the ending threw me off. Nice story!

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  • @UmbrellaTrain

    Pretty great but the ending needs help.

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    • Anonymous

      I agree, it ended much too abruptly with hardly any explanation.

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      • Anonymous

        That is the point of creepypasta

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  • THEN WHO WAS….nevermind…

    I mean….i liked it. my guess is that Bryan and the rest are a bunch of homicidal ding dongs!

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  • Tardigrade

    Nice, creepy story. Though it doesn’t make much sense. What about the other 62 missing kids, and why were they apparently oblivious to the disappearances?

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    • https://www.facebook.com/betonunesneto Alberto N.

      they were all part of the plan, including bryan. only one new kid is there every year…

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    • Anonymous

      It’s simply what we writers refer to as personal induction. It is up to the reader to decide what had occurred. And normally the majority agrees on it.

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  • Anonymous

    From the title I thought slender man would have made an appearance.

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  • don’t look behind you.

    I don’t get it what?

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    • Tessa The Killer

      It’s just an endless loop of people in the camp I think maybe it’s like.one kid comes and all then other kids are just part of the camp and only one new kid every time and they start adding up >:) haha I think it should be like that but it’s just an endless loop

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  • Degenerator

    I see, the kid was going mad, if not dead from the beginning, maybe it was Slenderman superpowers that made him think that there were people missing, but in reality he was the only one that was missing since day 1? It’s the only explanation for that ending

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  • C

    Hoping to clear up the ending a bit: Bryan is in on it, he is with the camp staff. He is always the only other person there before the last person dies in the camp’s cycle. At least, that’s how I interpret it.

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    • Cynnical Person

      That can’t be it, even the other campers (like his room mate) denied having other campers. I guess the moral of the story is to trust no one. But I liked the coffee twist. I expected no less that they would have drugged it. It was pretty nicely written and presented.

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  • https://www.facebook.com/betonunesneto Alberto N.

    in my POV, there are 63 camp members plus staff in on this, and only one new guy every year. They always leave him for last, then abduct him. The next year, it starts all over again…

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  • Tehepicface101

    Are the spirts or something but other than that good story

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  • Dan

    Actually, I got the sense that 63 “survive” and only 1 is killed/whatever. They weren’t thinning the herd, they were eliminating the kids they didn’t want to kill.

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  • A Fat person

    Cool but kinda a bummer off an ending

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  • Powder

    Maybe the parents were in it to… Maybe they wanted to get rid of him in the first place soo they found a camp that would do the job??

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    • Vadim

      you mean they hated him so he was a mistake

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  • An Indian

    Hmm… One kid every year. Good one.

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    • MeDuh

      It says great turn out this week, so its every week

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  • Eric

    Pretty good but the end needs help.

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  • Lolwat?

    When I read the title, I feared that this would be another Slenderman-based tale. But it was so much better than that. 8/10

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  • anonymans

    Rule #1 of summer camp: if your camp has the word “slender” in it, don’t go.

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    • Vadim

      lol lol lol

      :)

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  • Jhe

    SLENDERwood? *OMG RAPE face*

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  • Potatossss

    What a twist!!! I apload this story!!!!

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  • http://lol.com Pastanator

    SO IT WAS BRYAN ALL ALONG… And the Camp supervisors but still…

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  • http://donthaveone hunter

    that wasted a lot of my life and I thot it would have had an interesting ending lolz but u tried

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  • Anonymous

    Nice story but the ending didn’t make sense

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  • Tessa The Killer

    I likes the story it was really good but some parts were confusing did the main character go missing in the end and it was a new main character at the end to create an endless loop

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